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第三讲 慰问信和咨询信
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◆ 慰问信 ◆
[谋篇布局]
[常用词汇]
difficulty n.困难 hardship n.艰苦,困苦
regret n.& v.遗憾,懊悔 sorrow n.悲伤,痛苦
recovery n.康复 courage n.勇气
overcome v.克服,战胜 confidence n.信心
concerned adj.担忧的,关切的 sympathy n.同情(心)
be shocked at对……感到震惊
pray for企盼;祈望
[万能句式]
(1)开头常用句式
①I feel very sorry to know that there was...
获知……我感到非常难过。
②I just can't tell you how sorry I was to learn of...
当我听说……的时候,我感到极其难过。
③I was deeply shocked at the news that...
获知……我感到很震惊。
④I read about the recent events in the newspaper and I am writing to express my deepest condolences.
我从报纸上获悉了最近的事情,我写信表达我深切的慰问。
(2)主体部分常用句式
①Still you have many more chances to try.
你依然还有很多机会去尝试。
②So I hope that you will not take this to heart,and will get ready to try again.
因此我希望你不要把这件事放心里,并且为下次尝试做好准备。
③I quite understand how you feel now.
我十分理解你现在的心情。
④I do hope that I can see you soon.
我特别希望不久之后能见到你。
(3)结尾常用句式
①If there is something I can do to help you,please let me know.
如果我能帮助你做些什么,请告诉我。
②Please convey our deep sympathy to your family.
请转达我们对你家人深切的同情。
③If you need any help,please do not hesitate to contact us.
如果你需要任何帮助,请务必联系我们。
假定你是李华,得知好朋友杰克在升入高三之际感到学习压力很大。请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。
1.表达同情;
2.提出改善建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Jack,
Recently,I'm sorry to hear that you feel stressed about your study.I would like to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all,you should learn in a relaxing way,which will ease your pressure and make your study become an easy job.One way to keep your spirits up,I believe,is to participate in sports regularly.Not only does exercise build up the body,but also it provides you with time to relax and refresh yourself.In this way we can memorize things increasingly fast and long.Listening to music,undoubtedly,is another effective means of refreshment for mind and body.
Last but not least,you are supposed to exchange ideas with your classmates and friends,by which you can find support and encouragement to overcome difficulties.So keep trying,and you will make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
◆ 咨询信 ◆
[谋篇布局]
[常用词汇]
wonder v.想知道,好奇
appreciate v.欣赏;感激
grateful adj.感激的;令人愉悦的
prompt adj.立即;及时的
inquire about询问,查问
plan to do sth.计划做某事
ask for information about咨询关于……的信息
be determined to do sth.决定做某事
be excited about对……感到兴奋;因……而激动
would like to do sth.想做某事
[万能句式]
(1)开头常用句式
①I am writing to ask for information about...
我写信的目的是询问关于……的信息。
②I'd like to know more information about...
我想获知关于……的更多信息。
③Would you mind giving me some detailed information?
你介意告知我一些具体的信息吗?
(2)主体部分常用句式
①I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide us with...
如果你能给我们提供一些……我将不胜感激。
②I have decided to join the program;could you tell me when it starts?
我已决定加入这个项目,你能告诉我它什么时候开始吗?
③It would be great if I could...
如果我能……那就太好了。
④I'd like to know if there's...
我想知道是否有……
(3)结尾常用句式
①I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply at your convenience.
如果你能在你方便的时候尽快回信,我将不胜感激。
②I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.
如果您能尽快答复,我将十分感激。
假定你是李华, 你将要参加“全国英语创新大赛(National English Innovation Contest)”夏令营。请你给该夏令营的外籍负责人写一封信,内容包括:
1.自我介绍;
2.咨询比赛的相关情况(时间、地点、流程等)。
注意:词数80左右。
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[参考范文]
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Senior Three student. I have been offered the opportunity to participate in the summer camp of “National English Innovation Contest”. So I'm writing to inquire about the details of it.
Firstly, I'd like to know the exact time and place of the contest. I'd be obliged if you could also let me know the procedure that I'll have to go through. Additionally, could you also tell me what I need to prepare?
Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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