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第十讲 读后续写之情感描写——害怕
专项提能 循序写作
◆ 积累素材 ◆
必备
单词 fear n.& v.害怕
scare v.使害怕 n.惊恐
scary adj.恐怖的
panic v.(使)恐慌 n.恐慌
shake v.发抖 n.哆嗦
afraid adj.害怕
terrified adj.恐惧;很害怕
frightened adj.害怕的
terrible adj.可怕的
horrible adj.恐怖的
必备
单词 thunderstruck/'θʌndəstrʌk/adj. 吓坏了的;大吃一惊
startle/'stɑːt(ə)l/vt.使吓一跳
tremble/'tremb(ə)l/v.& n.颤抖
shiver/'ʃIvə(r)/n.& v.颤抖;哆嗦
shudder/'ʃʌdə(r)/n.& vi.战栗;发抖
nightmare/'naItmeə(r)/n.噩梦;梦魇
dread/dred/n.& v.担心;畏惧
高级
词块 be filled with/full of fear 充满恐惧
be shaking with fear/fright 吓得发抖
have a horror of...特别害怕……
cry out in fright 吓得大声叫喊
in fear/horror/fright/panic/terror 惊恐地
fill sb.with horror 使某人感到恐惧
shiver with fright 吓得发抖
be rigid/frozen with fear 吓得浑身僵直
be terrified out of one's wits 把某人吓得魂不附体
句子赏析 1.I jumped to my feet,completely thunderstruck.I blinked my eyes hard.I looked carefully all around me.我被吓坏了,一下子站起来。我使劲地眨了眨眼睛,仔细地看了看四周。
2.Mr. Dursley stopped dead.Fear flooded him.德思利先生僵住了,恐惧涌上他的心头。
句子赏析 3.Jonathan was filled with deadly fear,but he could not move。乔纳森的心中充满极度的恐惧,但他动弹不得。
4.Wilbur was in a panic.He raced round and round the pen.威尔伯惊恐万分。他绕着围栏一圈又一圈地跑。
5.In the landing,he pulled himself together a little,but even so, he shivered with fright. 他站在楼梯平台上, 努力让自己振作一点,尽管如此,还是吓得浑身发抖。
精彩片段 In one of the boxes,Jonathan saw something which filled him with horror.The Count was lying there.Dropping the shovel in terror,Jonathan rushed from the crypt,away from the monster...在其中一只箱子里, 乔纳森看到了一个让他毛骨悚然的东西。伯爵就躺在里面。惊吓中,乔纳森丢下手中的铁锹,逃出地下室,远离那个怪物……
◆ 运用素材 ◆
一、完成句子
运用表格中的必备单词/高级词块,把下面的句子补充完整。
1.大多数人都十分害怕当众讲话。
Most people __________________ speaking in public.
2.奥利弗站在那儿一动不动,给吓呆了。
Oliver stood still,________________________.
have a horror of
rigid/frozen with fear
3.她吓得浑身发抖,一跃而起,大声喊道:“救命啊!救命啊!”
She sprang to her feet,__________________________,and cried out,“Help!Help!”
4.恐惧涌上他的心头。他扯着嗓子叫他妈妈,但是没有得到任何回应。
____________________.He called his mother at the top of his lungs,but there was no response.
shaking with fright
Fear flooded him
5.他吓得发抖,用颤抖的手打开门后,如释重负地紧紧拥抱着母亲。
He_____________________________,opened the door with his trembling hand,and hugged his mother tightly in relief.
shivered/shaked with fright
二、篇章练习
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was dark and freezing cold outside though it was four o'clock in the afternoon.The wind kept blowing.At that time,the bell rang loudly,and everybody packed their schoolbags and got ready to go home.The teacher dismissed the students,and they walked orderly to the school gate.
David was in Class One,Grade Seven.His mother would come and pick him up from school but today she was absent.David wondered what had happened,but he was not worried at all. It usually took only ten minutes for his mother to get to school by riding an electric bike. David saw his best companion,Tommy,who was his deskmate.Tommy was waiting patiently for his mother as well.They began to talk freely and happily.David congratulated Tommy on his excellent performance in the last math exam.At the same time,Tommy thanked David,without whose help he couldn't have made such rapid progress.Five minutes later,Tommy's mother picked up Tommy and they said goodbye to each other.
David had to put up with his moments of solitude (独处).He had no choice but to wait until his mother came into his sight. However,half an hour passed,and there was no sign that his mother would come. David was determined to walk home.
On his way home,David could hardly see any passers-by.The trees shook with the wind and the leaves fell from them without making any noise.David was lost in thinking what was wrong with his mother.Some terrible thoughts jumped out of his mind.“Maybe an accident happened to her. Maybe she got hurt by some robbers.Maybe she was seriously ill.” Little David burst into tears and quickened his step. He did not dare to think over the results. What he could do was pray for the safety of his mother and wish everything was all right.
Time slipped away like an arrow. In the short distance,it was his beautiful house with a garden. “This must be the worst experience in my life,” David thought to himself and felt scared.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly.________
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Suddenly,there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly.His forehead damped with sweat, David rushed into the house.In the darkness,he tried to pull himself together and then turned on the lights. What he could see was nothing but an empty scary room.Fear flooded him.He called his mother at the top of his lungs,but there was no response. The uneasy feeling sharpened into panic.He jumped to his feet and ran to make a phone call to his mother.
Suddenly,there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice.It was his mother.He shivered with fright,opened the door with his trembling hand,and hugged her tightly in relief.His mother explained that she had been following him all the way,adding that his rushing home filled her with horror.But to make him independent of her,it was worth trying. What she said lighted up the whole world and David's feeling of scare faded away. He hugged his mother tightly again,making a promise that he would become brave and spare no effort to maintain independence.
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