写作第4部分 第9讲 读后续写之情感描写——震惊-【优化探究】2025年高考英语一轮复习高考总复习配套课件（人教版2019）

第九讲　读后续写之情感描写——震惊 专项提能 循序写作 ◆ 积累素材 ◆ 必备单词 surprise n．惊讶 vt.使惊讶 amaze vt.使大为惊奇 astonish vt.使惊讶 astonishment n．惊讶 shock n．震惊 v．(使)震惊 incredible adj.难以置信的 高级词块 to one's surprise/amazement/astonishment 让某人震惊的是 in/with surprise/amazement/astonishment/shock 惊奇地 be surprised/amazed/astonished/shocked at/by...对……感到惊讶 高级 词块 be surprised/amazed/astonished to learn/find/hear... 得知/发现/听到……感到惊讶/震惊 It amazes/astonishes me that...令我感到惊讶的是…… What amazes/astonishes me most is...最让我吃惊的是…… sb. could hardly/scarcely believe...某人几乎难以相信…… beyond one's expectation 出乎意料；超出某人的期望 be taken aback大为震惊 句子 赏析 1. I glanced at him with surprise. His cordial agreement with all I said cut the ground from under my feet.我惊讶地瞟了他一眼。他对我所说的一切表示的由衷的赞同让我措手不及。 2.I went over to look at it more carefully，and stopped in sudden surprise．我走过去仔细看了看，却在震惊中停了下来。 句子赏析 3.A short time ago，villagers were astonished to learn that the owner of Endley Farm had died.不久之前，村民们惊悉恩得利农场主死了。 4.Hartley could scarcely believe that her surrender was true；it was so swift and complete.哈特利简直不敢相信她真的屈服了；她屈服得那么迅速，那么彻底。 5.I was taken aback．I reflected that I had only seen him once. 我大为震惊，回想起来只见过他一面。 精彩片段 　　I was surprised by the effect of my action.Heathcliff dropped his candle and stood without moving，his face as white as the wall behind him.我这个动作的后果让我大吃一惊。希斯·克利夫手里的蜡烛掉了，呆呆地站在那儿，他的脸和他身后的墙一样白。 ◆ 运用素材 ◆ 一、完成句子 运用表格中的必备单词/高级词块，把下面的句子补充完整。 1．西湖春天的美景超出了我的预期。 The beauties of the West Lake in spring are _____________________． 2．令他们感到惊讶的是，我们在没有任何帮助的情况下完成了该项目。 _______________，we have completed the project without any help. beyond my expectation To their surprise 3．林巧稚是一位伟大的医生。最令我惊讶的是，她一生中接生了5万多名婴儿。 Lin Qiaozhi was a great doctor.___________________________________ she delivered more than 50，000 babies in her life. 4．听到他说的话，我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。 Hearing what he had said，I just _________________________my ears. 5．这个名字令我吃惊。 The name was ___________________________． What amazes/astonishes me most is that could hardly/scarcely believe an astonishment to me 二、篇章练习 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “You can get a kitten，” I promised my seven-year-old daughter，Cali.“As soon as we got settled in our new apartment.” Her life had been uprooted when her father and I divorced. So one morning，we headed to North Bay Animal Services to pick out her new pet. There were plenty of cats to choose from，but Cali had her heart set on two orange-and-white kittens.The attendant told us they were brothers called Caramel and Butter.They played like best friends.When they were tired out，they curled (蜷缩) around each other，their identical markings creating what looked like a heart. Cali wanted to take them both. But the landlord had made it clear that we could only have one pet in the apartment.Finally，we decided to bring Caramel home.Cali renamed him Ozzy.That night I watched Ozzy and Cali fall asleep together，telling myself they'd forget about the other kitten soon. How wrong I was! Ozzy did seem lonely without his twin. No matter how Cali and I tried to distract him over the next few days，he wandered around the apartment，crying，as if looking for his brother.After two weeks of being like this，I broke down. We drove back to the shelter，only to be told Butter was adopted four days ago. Cali was sad，and I was so desperate to calm her down that I said something foolish.“We'll find Butter and adopt him too，”I said.“What are you doing？”I asked myself.I knew I'd never be able to fulfill that promise.But it was the only thing that seemed to bring my daughter some peace. With time going on, Ozzy got used to being on his own. And Cali stopped asking about the other kitten. Our new life was working out just as I'd hoped. I even started dating again. Brian, who lost his wife four years ago，seemed promising.He had a daughter，Ruby，just a year older than Cali.I'd met him online and talked to him for months before we planned a dinner at his home. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 That day，after dinner，we were walking by Brian's house when I saw a flash of orange-and-white in the corner.______________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “That's my cat，” Brian said.____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] That day，after dinner, we were walking by Brian's house when I saw a flash of orange-and-white in the corner.Ozzy？I approached closer，only to find it looked so much like Ozzy.Feeling my steps，the cat shot into the nearby bush like lightning.Obviously，it's not my family member，for Ozzy wouldn't be in such horror when seeing his owner.“What a coincidence！” There were so many orange-and-white cats in the world. “That's my cat，” Brian said. “Butter! Come out！”he shouted.Hearing what he said，I just could hardly believe my ears.The name was an astonishment to me.“Is Butter from North Bay Animal Services? Is it a boy？”“Yeah，yeah！How do you know that？We adopted him one month ago.” Brian nodded in surprise.“Oh！Butter is Ozzy's twin！” I told him the whole story from soup to nuts in delight，looking into Brian's eyes，as if having met him before.Brian was so excited that he burst out laughing，opening the arms towards me.Today Ozzy and his brother are inseparable，just as my new family. $$