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2024-2025学年一线教师制作期中精品复习系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作期中精品复习系列资料，已编校！ 专题11 书面表达（期中真题，满分范文）16篇 1．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）学校英文报以“My favourite invention”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下表格内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心中最喜欢的发明。 My favourite invention 1. What is it? …… 2. What is special about it? 至少写两个特点 3. Why do you like it? 至少两个原因 注意： 1. 可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite invention Among all the modern inventions, … __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）深圳因科技和创新而闻名。为了培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举行了科技节。假设你是李华，你给校报投稿，介绍你们科技节的情况。 要点： 1.活动目的 2.活动项目： 上午：①邀请家长进校园讲科学家的故事 。②……（自行补充一点）; 下午：前往深圳会展中心观看科技产品展，观看了很多新的科技产品，如：洗碗机器人，外卖无人机。 3.活动感受 要求： 1. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可围绕要点适当发挥，使行文连贯； 3.分段合理，要点齐全，书写工整美观； 4. 文中不能出现和本人相关的信息。 参考词汇： 展览 exhibition               深圳会展中心 Shenzhen Convention and Exhibition Centre 洗碗机器人 dish-washing robot   外卖无人机 delivering drone The Science Festival in our School Shenzhen is famous for its technology and innovation. Last week__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科技改变世界，各种发明让我们的生活越来越便捷，假设你是校英语报社的编辑，报社以“你心中最伟大的发明”为主题面向全校学生做了调查，以下是获得票数最多的三项发明，请为校英语报写一篇稿件报道调查结果并发表你的观点。 发明 轮子 纸 电脑 投票比例 26% 20% 18% 简介 已有数千年历史；方便人们出行 中国古代四大发明之一；对人类文化传播有重要作用 …… 你的观点 …… 参考词汇：传播 spread 要求： 1．结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2．表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3．文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息； 4．词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Many inventions have greatly changed our life. Last week, we did a survey on “What’s the greatest invention?” in our school, and here is the result. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）近年来，人工智能的发展取得了巨大的突破，为我们的生活带来了许多新的可能性。人工智能可以执行各种任务，如自动驾驶、ChatGPT等。尽管这些技术有许多潜在的好处，但它们也引发了一些担忧和争议。请结合下列要点，以The advantages and disadvantages of artificial intelligence为题写一篇不少于80词的书面表达。 要点包括： 优点 1. 帮助我们解决问题，提供有价值的建议。 2. 人工智能可以长时间工作，不会疲劳或者出错。 缺点 1. 人工智能会取代重复性的工作，人们可能失业。 2. 使人懒惰，减少人们独立思考的机会。 你的观点（至少2点） 1. …… 2. …… 注意：1.词数80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥。 3.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范 参考词汇：人工智能artificial intelligence，解决solve，取代 replace，重复性的repetitive The advantages and disadvantages of artificial intelligence With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has exerted great influence on every aspect of our society. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Simon最近沉迷于电脑游戏，严重影响了他的学习。请你给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他玩电脑游戏的危害，并给他提一些建议。要点提示： 1. 浪费时间，影响学业； 2. 对健康有害； 3. 浪费金钱； 4. 你的建议……（如：发展其他的爱好） 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 词数：80左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假如你家有一台智能家用电器——扫地机器人，你的外国朋友对此很感兴趣，请你用英语写一篇短文，向朋友介绍你的机器人。短文需要包括以下提示内容： 1. 外形：圆形的，底部有三个轮子； 2. 特点：自动清洁地板；使用电能，环保；可用手机控制； 3. 评价：……（请补充两点）。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 参考词汇：smart appliance 智能家用电器；robot cleaner 扫地机器人 Many inventions have changed people’s life. My robot cleaner is one of them. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括下图中1—4项。 飞行单车 （1）外观：两个轮子，两只翅膀 （2）用途：行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、听音乐 （3）特点：速度快、使用太阳能、环保 （4）改进计划（1～2点）                  注意： （1）参考词汇：翅膀wing；太阳能solar power （2）词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）。 （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 My invention is a flying bike. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。因为各种各样的发明，我们的生活变得越来越舒适与便捷。假设你是李华，最近你和同学在校园里做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查，请你写一篇英语短文，报告此次调查的结果，并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的发明是什么及其原因，短文需包括以下要点： Invention computer smartphone car air conditioner Number of students 45% 32% 13% 10% Reasons do important jobs chat with friends travel anytime anywhere keep the air cool Your opinion （请补充） 要求： 1. 约80词左右, 开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。 2. 可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确。 3. 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）你们学校校报将出版一期以computer为主题的专刊，号召全体同学积极投稿。请你根据以下所给的内容提示，写一篇英语短文。 电脑的地位 最伟大的发明之一；在我们的日常生活中越来越重要。 电脑的用途 1. 搜索信息，获得更多新知识（knowledge），有助于我们学习; 2. 可以听歌、看电影等有利于我们放松心情； 3. 可以结交来自全世界的朋友，与他人保持联系。 你的观点或建议 （合理使用电脑） 不少于两点。 注意： ①不少于 80 词（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； ②不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Nowadays, the computer plays a very important role in our society. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）根据以下思维导图内容介绍一个你的发明 “Super glasses”，写一篇80词左右的文章。文中不能出现学校及学生的真实姓名。 My invention is a type of sunglasses. ____________ 11．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假如你是李华，你的朋友John到广州留学学习中文。 John很喜欢阅读和了解广州文化，所以他发邮件向你咨询他家附近书店的情况。请你写一封回信给他，根据图表提示，分别介绍两家书店，然后推荐这两者中更合适的书店给他并说明原因。 UN Book Store Xinhua Book Store Area (面积) 600m2 1000m2 Distance from John’s home 500m 800m Mainly Sell textbooks, novels (小说), notebooks, works of art, different kinds of books about stories and language learning…, postcards about Guangzhou Built 10 years ago 2 years ago Other Things toys, … some drinks, … 注意事项： 1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）; 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear John, I’m glad to hear that you’ve come to China to learn Chinese. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机(smart phone)、自动语音识别技术(ASR)等； 服务类产品也蓬勃发展， 如网上购物(online shopping)，移动支付(mobile payment)，共享单车(bike sharing)等。请你介绍一款你认为重要的发明，简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。 要求： 1.要点齐全， 可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺、书写规范； 3.词数： 90 词左右； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 参考词汇： benefit 益处 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）你校将新建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Smart School Library”智能学校图书馆为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计(design)的智能图书馆。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词以上，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词汇： 太阳能板 Solar energy panels 电子书 e-books My Smart School Library I want to design a smart school library... __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设你们学校上周就初二年级学生如何使用他们的零用钱做了一个调查，调查结果如下表所示，请结合下表内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍一下调查的结果，并就如何更有意义地使用零花钱阐明自己的看法，开头已经给出。 调查对象 学校初二年级学生 人数 600人 主要消费方式 买书（35%，210人） 买娱乐设备（35%，210人） 买衣服、零食、饮料（5%，30人） 为朋友买礼物（25%，150人） 你的看法（就如何更有意义地使用零花钱） 至少两点 1. …… 2. …… …… 参考词汇：survey调查；pocket money零用钱；result结果；entertainment娱乐 Last week, we did a survey about how students spend their pocket money among 600 students in Junior Two in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）根据有关部门调查，我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华，请根据表格的内容提示，说一说你平时参加劳动的情况。谈谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。 李华参加劳动的情况 养成良好劳动习惯的重要性 在校 打扫教室…… ※ 提高基本生活技能 ※ 学会照顾自己 ※ 拥有责任感 在家 洗碗、洗衣服、做饭…… 社区 做志愿者服务，如去养老院看望老人…… 要求： 1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 3. 内容完整、符合逻辑、书写整齐、标点正确； 4. 80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development. At school, _________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）校园是我们学习、成长的重要环境。请以“创建文明校园”为题，写一篇演讲稿。 要点提示： 1. 目的 给学生提供一个更好的学习环境 2. 不文明现象 1）乱丢垃圾 2）说脏话 3）…… 3. 如何创建 1）爱护环境 2）待人有礼 3）…… 4. 呼吁（愿望） …… 要求： 1. 语句通顺连贯，包含所有要点，适当发挥，意义连贯； 2. 词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：文明的 civilized；校园 campus；环境 environment； 不文明的 uncivilized；垃圾 rubbish；说脏话 speak rudely Let’s build a civilized campus! Dear teachers and fellow students, Today I’d like to talk about an important topic—building a civilized campus. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作期中精品复习系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作期中精品复习系列资料，已编校！ 专题11 书面表达（期中真题，满分范文）16篇 1．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）学校英文报以“My favourite invention”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下表格内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心中最喜欢的发明。 My favourite invention 1. What is it? …… 2. What is special about it? 至少写两个特点 3. Why do you like it? 至少两个原因 注意： 1. 可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite invention Among all the modern inventions, … __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite invention Among all the modern inventions, my favourite invention is the light bulb. It was invented by Thomas Edison, a great American inventor. And it was invented on October 22nd, 1879. The first light bulb was made of glass and metal. It was used for providing people with light and the invention made it possible for people to work and study at night. Now the invention has been improved a lot. People are making better lighting products. They can help to save energy and protect the environment. What’s more, they are cheaper. I hope it will become more and more useful in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免信息遗漏，介绍发明的物品、特点和喜爱的理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句，引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍发明的物品、特点和喜爱的理由； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待发明物对人类有更大的贡献。 [亮点词汇] ① be invented by 由某人发明 ② be made of 由……制成 ③ improve 提高 [高分句型] ① It was used for providing people with light and the invention made it possible for people to work and study at night. (“make it possible for sb. to do sth.”句型） ② I hope it will become more and more useful in the future. (宾语从句） 2．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）深圳因科技和创新而闻名。为了培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举行了科技节。假设你是李华，你给校报投稿，介绍你们科技节的情况。 要点： 1.活动目的 2.活动项目： 上午：①邀请家长进校园讲科学家的故事 。②……（自行补充一点）; 下午：前往深圳会展中心观看科技产品展，观看了很多新的科技产品，如：洗碗机器人，外卖无人机。 3.活动感受 要求： 1. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可围绕要点适当发挥，使行文连贯； 3.分段合理，要点齐全，书写工整美观； 4. 文中不能出现和本人相关的信息。 参考词汇： 展览 exhibition               深圳会展中心 Shenzhen Convention and Exhibition Centre 洗碗机器人 dish-washing robot   外卖无人机 delivering drone The Science Festival in our School Shenzhen is famous for its technology and innovation. Last week__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Shenzhen is famous for its technology and innovation. Last week, our school held a Science Festival to develop students’ interest in technology. There were different kinds of activities during the festival. In the morning, parents with science background were invited to school to tell us about the stories of famous scientists such as Thomas Edison. Then we had a free discussion with classmates about the scientists and their inventions. In the afternoon, we went to the Scientific Product Exhibition at Shenzhen Convention and Exhibition Center. There were many latest products that easily caught people’s eyes, such as dish-washing robots, delivering drones and etc. I had a great time and felt very happy to join in this festival. I started to grow interest in science and dreamt to be a scientist in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中这次“科技节”活动的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出活动目的； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“活动项目、活动感受”方面重点介绍该活动； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of 不同种类的 ②catch people’s eyes 吸引了人们的目光 ③in the future 在未来 [高分句型] ①Last week, our school held a Science Festival to develop students’ interest in technology.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②There were many latest products that easily caught people’s eyes, such as dish-washing robots, delivering drones and etc.（定语从句） 3．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科技改变世界，各种发明让我们的生活越来越便捷，假设你是校英语报社的编辑，报社以“你心中最伟大的发明”为主题面向全校学生做了调查，以下是获得票数最多的三项发明，请为校英语报写一篇稿件报道调查结果并发表你的观点。 发明 轮子 纸 电脑 投票比例 26% 20% 18% 简介 已有数千年历史；方便人们出行 中国古代四大发明之一；对人类文化传播有重要作用 …… 你的观点 …… 参考词汇：传播 spread 要求： 1．结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2．表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3．文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息； 4．词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Many inventions have greatly changed our life. Last week, we did a survey on “What’s the greatest invention?” in our school, and here is the result. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many inventions have greatly changed our life. Last week, we did a survey on “What’s the greatest invention?” in our school, and here is the result. 26% of the students chose “Wheel” as the greatest invention. A few thousand years ago, people started to use wheels on carriages. With the help of wheels, travelling became faster and more comfortable. “Paper” was the choice of one fifth of the students. As is known to all, paper-making was one of the four great inventions in ancient China. It plays an important role in spreading human culture. 18% of the students held a view that “computer” was the greatest one. Computers not only help us to calculate at a fast speed, but also do important jobs like operating railways. I think all these inventions are very useful and make our life more convenient. But I think the Internet is the greatest. The world becomes smaller and smaller with the Internet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍最伟大的发明，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出调查结果； 第二步，具体介绍调查结果； 第三步，介绍自己观点。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of在……帮助下 ②As is known to all众所周知 ③play an important role in在……发挥重要的作用 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①I think all these inventions are very useful and make our life more convenient.(宾语从句；并列句) 4．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）近年来，人工智能的发展取得了巨大的突破，为我们的生活带来了许多新的可能性。人工智能可以执行各种任务，如自动驾驶、ChatGPT等。尽管这些技术有许多潜在的好处，但它们也引发了一些担忧和争议。请结合下列要点，以The advantages and disadvantages of artificial intelligence为题写一篇不少于80词的书面表达。 要点包括： 优点 1. 帮助我们解决问题，提供有价值的建议。 2. 人工智能可以长时间工作，不会疲劳或者出错。 缺点 1. 人工智能会取代重复性的工作，人们可能失业。 2. 使人懒惰，减少人们独立思考的机会。 你的观点（至少2点） 1. …… 2. …… 注意：1.词数80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥。 3.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范 参考词汇：人工智能artificial intelligence，解决solve，取代 replace，重复性的repetitive The advantages and disadvantages of artificial intelligence With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has exerted great influence on every aspect of our society. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The advantages and disadvantages of artificial intelligence With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has exerted great influence on every aspect of our society. Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life. It helps us solve problems and provides valuable advice. Artificial intelligence can work for long periods of time without fatigue or errors. However, it also has many disadvantages. Artificial intelligence will replace repetitive work, and people may lose their jobs. It may also make people lazy and reduce their chances of independent thinking. I believe that if we make reasonable use of artificial intelligence, our lives will be better. It can also greatly improve our work efficiency and save time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写出人工智能的优缺点，根据所给提示具体说明。 第二步，写出自己对人工智能的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more popular越来越受欢迎 ②lose jobs 失去工作 ③independent thinking 独立思考 [高分句型] ①Artificial intelligence will replace repetitive work, and people may lose their jobs.（and连接并列结构） ②I believe that if we make reasonable use of artificial intelligence, our lives will be better.（宾语从句和条件状语从句） 5．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Simon最近沉迷于电脑游戏，严重影响了他的学习。请你给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他玩电脑游戏的危害，并给他提一些建议。要点提示： 1. 浪费时间，影响学业； 2. 对健康有害； 3. 浪费金钱； 4. 你的建议……（如：发展其他的爱好） 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 词数：80左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Simon, I felt very worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games. They will be harmful to you in many ways. To begin with, they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. What’s more, some computer games are not free, you will waste much money. In addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can stay away from them. The earlier, the better. In order to live a meaningful life, you can read more good books, take more exercise to build up your body or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons. Looking forward to your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；   ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；   ③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，表达对Simon沉迷于电脑游戏的担忧； 第二步，阐述玩电脑游戏的危害；   第三步，提一些建议。   [亮点词汇]   ①be addicted to对……上瘾；沉溺于 ②be harmful to对……有害 ③in addition另外，此外 [高分句型]   ①To begin with, they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things.（定语从句）   ②I strongly hope that you can stay away from them.（宾语从句） 6．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假如你家有一台智能家用电器——扫地机器人，你的外国朋友对此很感兴趣，请你用英语写一篇短文，向朋友介绍你的机器人。短文需要包括以下提示内容： 1. 外形：圆形的，底部有三个轮子； 2. 特点：自动清洁地板；使用电能，环保；可用手机控制； 3. 评价：……（请补充两点）。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 参考词汇：smart appliance 智能家用电器；robot cleaner 扫地机器人 Many inventions have changed people’s life. My robot cleaner is one of them. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many inventions have changed people’s life. My robot cleaner is one of them. It’s a round smart appliance, just like a big cake with three wheels at the bottom of it so that it can move freely. It’s as smart as a human being because it can clean the floor itself in a house. What’s more, it works with electricity, so it is better for the environment. Above all, it’s more convenient for us to use it because we can control it by using our mobile phones. In my opinion, the robot cleaner is a great invention and our good friend. It saves time and helps us live a better life. Why not have a try and buy one for yourself? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要写出两点关于扫地机机器人的评价，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍扫地机器人的外形； 第二步，介绍扫地机器人的特点； 第三步，说说自己对于扫地机器人的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more而且 ②above all最重要的是 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①Above all, it’s more convenient for us to use it because we can control it by using our mobile phones.（because引导的原因状语从句） 7．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括下图中1—4项。 飞行单车 （1）外观：两个轮子，两只翅膀 （2）用途：行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、听音乐 （3）特点：速度快、使用太阳能、环保 （4）改进计划（1～2点）                  注意： （1）参考词汇：翅膀wing；太阳能solar power （2）词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）。 （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 My invention is a flying bike. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My invention is a flying bike. It is fast, convenient and green! The flying bike has two wheels and two wings. It has a top speed of 300 km/h. You can go to farther places in a shorter time. It can run on land and fly in the air. If you shout “fly”, the bike will turn into a plane in 30 seconds. Then you can fly in the air. You will be as free as a bird. It can take photos, too. Instead of petrol, the bike uses solar power, so it will not pollute the air. I will add a seat behind it so that it can carry two persons. My invention will help people live a better life in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的发明——飞行单车，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍飞行单车的外观、用途、特点和改进计划； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①turn into变成 ②take photos拍照 ③instead of而不是 [高分句型] ①If you shout “fly”, the bike will turn into a plane in 30 seconds. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②I will add a seat behind it so that it can carry two persons. (so that引导的目的状语从句) 8．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。因为各种各样的发明，我们的生活变得越来越舒适与便捷。假设你是李华，最近你和同学在校园里做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查，请你写一篇英语短文，报告此次调查的结果，并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的发明是什么及其原因，短文需包括以下要点： Invention computer smartphone car air conditioner Number of students 45% 32% 13% 10% Reasons do important jobs chat with friends travel anytime anywhere keep the air cool Your opinion （请补充） 要求： 1. 约80词左右, 开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。 2. 可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确。 3. 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result. 45% of students’ favorite invention is the computer because they can use it to do many important jobs. 32% of students’ favorite invention is smartphones because they can use it to chat with friends. 13% of students’ favorite invention is the car because they can travel anytime or anywhere. 10% of students’ favorite invention is air conditioning because it can keep the air cool. I think the Internet is the most important invention. Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller. We can keep abreast of the latest events around the world anytime or anywhere. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍调查的主题是“我最喜爱的发明”； 第二步，根据表格，具体介绍调查结果及原因； 第三步，谈谈自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with friends 与朋友聊天 ②smaller and smaller 越来越小 ③keep abreast of 了解……的最新情况 [高分句型] ①45% of students’ favorite invention is the computer because they can use it to do many important jobs.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I think the Internet is the most important invention.（宾语从句） 9．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）你们学校校报将出版一期以computer为主题的专刊，号召全体同学积极投稿。请你根据以下所给的内容提示，写一篇英语短文。 电脑的地位 最伟大的发明之一；在我们的日常生活中越来越重要。 电脑的用途 1. 搜索信息，获得更多新知识（knowledge），有助于我们学习; 2. 可以听歌、看电影等有利于我们放松心情； 3. 可以结交来自全世界的朋友，与他人保持联系。 你的观点或建议 （合理使用电脑） 不少于两点。 注意： ①不少于 80 词（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； ②不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Nowadays, the computer plays a very important role in our society. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Nowadays, the computer plays a very important role in our society. As one of the greatest inventions, computer is becoming more and more important in our daily life. We can use them to search for information and get more new knowledge. They help us learn. The students think they can chat online, make friends and shop on the computer. They can play computer games and listen to music to relax. They can also make friends from all over the world and keep in touch with others.   We should not use it for too long every day and pay attention to protecting our eyes. Remember not to spend too much time playing computer games. I think using a computer is helpful. We can send and receive e-mails and see the films and so on. But we can’t always play computer games, or it will influence our study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明电脑的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍电脑的用处； 第三步，表达自己的观点和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in our daily life在我们日常生活中 ②search for查找 ③listen to music听音乐 ④all over the world全世界 ⑤keep in touch with与某人保持联系 [高分句型] ①As one of the greatest inventions, computer is becoming more and more important in our daily life.（比较级句型） ②The students think they can chat online, make friends and shop on the computer.（宾语从句） 10．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）根据以下思维导图内容介绍一个你的发明 “Super glasses”，写一篇80词左右的文章。文中不能出现学校及学生的真实姓名。 My invention is a type of sunglasses. ____________ 【答案】例文： My invention is a type of sunglasses. When you wear them, people can hardly see them because they fit perfectly with our face shape. They use our body heat to work. What makes them special is that they are myopia glasses and they help us block blue light. At night, they glow. When we don’t need them, they automatically fold up about the size of a finger cap. I think they bring convenience to our life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己发明的超级眼镜，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍眼镜的外观、工作原理以及特别之处； 第三步，介绍你认为你的发明怎么样。 [亮点词汇] ①use sth. to do sth.使用某物做某事 ②fold up 折叠 [高分句型] ①When you wear them, people can hardly see them because they fit perfectly with our face shape. (when引导的时间状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句) ②What makes them special is that they are myopia glasses and they help us block blue light. (what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句) 11．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假如你是李华，你的朋友John到广州留学学习中文。 John很喜欢阅读和了解广州文化，所以他发邮件向你咨询他家附近书店的情况。请你写一封回信给他，根据图表提示，分别介绍两家书店，然后推荐这两者中更合适的书店给他并说明原因。 UN Book Store Xinhua Book Store Area (面积) 600m2 1000m2 Distance from John’s home 500m 800m Mainly Sell textbooks, novels (小说), notebooks, works of art, different kinds of books about stories and language learning…, postcards about Guangzhou Built 10 years ago 2 years ago Other Things toys, … some drinks, … 注意事项： 1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）; 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear John, I’m glad to hear that you’ve come to China to learn Chinese. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m glad to hear that you’ve come to China to learn Chinese. In your letter, I know that you are interested in reading. Actually, there are two bookshops near your house in Guangzhou.They are UN Book Store and Xinhua Book Store. UN Book Store is near your home. It is 500 meters away from your home and Xinhua Book Store is 800 meters away from your home. But UN Book Store covers an area of 600m2, and it is smaller than Xinhua Book Store, which is 1000m2. There are only textbooks, novels, notebooks and works of art in UN Book Store. But there are more things in Xinhua Book Store. It sells many kinds of books, such as storybooks, encyclopedia, postcards about Guangzhou, and books on language learning and so on. Xinhua Book Store is newer than UN Book Store because it has been built only for two years. But UN Book Store was built 10 years ago. If you want to buy some toys, you should go to UN Book Store. If you want to buy some drinks, you should go to Xinhua Book Store. I think the Xinhua Book Store is a better place to shop because you can buy almost everything you want there. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，通过对面积，距离，卖的东西，新旧方面来对比两家书店； 第二步，推荐这两者中更合适的书店。 [亮点词汇] ①are interested in对……感兴趣 ②such as比如 ③away from远离 [高分句型] ①But UN Book Store covers an area of 600m2, and it is smaller than Xinhua Book Store, which is 1000m2.（比较级） ②I think the Xinhua Book Store is a better place to shop because you can buy almost everything you want there.（because引导的原因状语从句） 12．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机(smart phone)、自动语音识别技术(ASR)等； 服务类产品也蓬勃发展， 如网上购物(online shopping)，移动支付(mobile payment)，共享单车(bike sharing)等。请你介绍一款你认为重要的发明，简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。 要求： 1.要点齐全， 可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺、书写规范； 3.词数： 90 词左右； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 参考词汇： benefit 益处 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. Among them, I believe the smartphone is one of the most important inventions. The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. It also enables us to communicate with our family and friends through video calls and messages anytime, anywhere. Moreover, smartphones support various applications like online shopping, mobile payment, and bike sharing, making our lives more convenient. The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. 【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作时必须要描述这项发明，并说明它的益处。 【写作步骤】第一步，点明观点，认为智能手机是重要的发明； 第二步，描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，如上网、视频通话、信息存储、支持各种应用等； 第三步，总结智能手机的益处，强调其对生活质量的提升。 【亮点词汇】① rapidly快速地 ② invention发明 ③ essential基本的 ④ search for搜索 ⑤ store存储 ⑥ communicate交流 ⑦ convenient方便的 ⑧ benefit益处 【高分句型】①In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. (现在完成时) ②The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. (非谓语动词) ③Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. (宾语从句) 13．（23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）你校将新建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Smart School Library”智能学校图书馆为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计(design)的智能图书馆。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词以上，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词汇： 太阳能板 Solar energy panels 电子书 e-books My Smart School Library I want to design a smart school library... __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Smart School Library I want to design a smart school library. It will be greatly different from the present ones. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round and very big. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside. What a wonderful library it is! I can’t wait to experience it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍智能图书馆的样子； 第二步，具体阐述它是如何工作的以及我们可以在那里做什么； 第三步，最后总结。 [亮点词汇] ①be composed of由……组成 ②come from来自 ③all kind of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①When you sit inside, you will feel very warm.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②If you are tired, you can also rest inside.（if引导的条件状语从句） 14．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）假设你们学校上周就初二年级学生如何使用他们的零用钱做了一个调查，调查结果如下表所示，请结合下表内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍一下调查的结果，并就如何更有意义地使用零花钱阐明自己的看法，开头已经给出。 调查对象 学校初二年级学生 人数 600人 主要消费方式 买书（35%，210人） 买娱乐设备（35%，210人） 买衣服、零食、饮料（5%，30人） 为朋友买礼物（25%，150人） 你的看法（就如何更有意义地使用零花钱） 至少两点 1. …… 2. …… …… 参考词汇：survey调查；pocket money零用钱；result结果；entertainment娱乐 Last week, we did a survey about how students spend their pocket money among 600 students in Junior Two in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last week, we did a survey about how students spend their pocket money among 600 students in Junior Two in our school. We found that 35% of the students spend money on books and 35% on entertainment equipment, 25% of the students prefer to spend money on gifts for their friends and 5% use money to buy clothes, snacks and drinks. So how to spend pocket money more meaningfully? I think it is not right for students to spend too much money on snacks. Snacks are not good for their health. Instead, students should spend more money on books. Besides, students should learn to save money and spend it properly. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态有一般过去时和一般现在时等； ③提示：根据表格提示写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍调查的结果； 第二步，阐明自己就如何更有意义地使用零花钱的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer更喜欢 ②meaningfully有意义地 ③properly正确地 [高分句型] ①So how to spend pocket money more meaningfully?（疑问词+不定式） ②I think it is not right for students to spend too much money on snacks.（宾语从句） 15．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）根据有关部门调查，我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华，请根据表格的内容提示，说一说你平时参加劳动的情况。谈谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。 李华参加劳动的情况 养成良好劳动习惯的重要性 在校 打扫教室…… ※ 提高基本生活技能 ※ 学会照顾自己 ※ 拥有责任感 在家 洗碗、洗衣服、做饭…… 社区 做志愿者服务，如去养老院看望老人…… 要求： 1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 3. 内容完整、符合逻辑、书写整齐、标点正确； 4. 80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development. At school, _________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development. At school, I often clean the classroom and clean the window. At home, I often help my parents do the dishes, wash clothes, cook and water the flowers. I also do community services on weekends, such as visiting the elderly in an old people’s home. I think forming good working habits can improve our basic life skills. We can also learn to take care of ourselves and have a sense of responsibility. So, let’s take action aright now and be more active in laboring, which will be good for us. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍自己，开门见山：应该养成劳动习惯； 第二步，介绍自己在学校、在家以及在社区参加劳动情况； 第三步，陈述养成劳动习惯的重要性； 第四步，呼吁大家行动起来：积极劳动。 ［亮点词汇］ ① be good for 对……有好处 ② take care of 照顾 ③ have a sense of responsibility  有责任感 ［高分句型］ ① I think forming good working habits can improve our basic life skills. (宾语从句) ② So, let’s take action aright now and be more active in laboring, which will be good for us. (which引导非限制性定语从句) 16．（23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）校园是我们学习、成长的重要环境。请以“创建文明校园”为题，写一篇演讲稿。 要点提示： 1. 目的 给学生提供一个更好的学习环境 2. 不文明现象 1）乱丢垃圾 2）说脏话 3）…… 3. 如何创建 1）爱护环境 2）待人有礼 3）…… 4. 呼吁（愿望） …… 要求： 1. 语句通顺连贯，包含所有要点，适当发挥，意义连贯； 2. 词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：文明的 civilized；校园 campus；环境 environment； 不文明的 uncivilized；垃圾 rubbish；说脏话 speak rudely Let’s build a civilized campus! Dear teachers and fellow students, Today I’d like to talk about an important topic—building a civilized campus. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Let’s build a civilized campus! Dear teachers and fellow students, Today I’d like to talk about an important topic—building a civilized campus. As we all know, school is our second home. It’s our duty to build a civilized campus so that we can have a better learning environment. Some bad habits and uncivilized phenomena do exist in our school. For example, some students often throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some students often speak rudely. Some don’t turn off the tap after washing hands. What should we do? First of all, we ought to protect the environment. We are supposed to use both sides of paper. Don’t waste water or spit in public. We shouldn’t pick flowers or step on grass. Second, we should be polite to others and behave ourselves. We should respect our teachers and help our classmates in need. Finally, we should obey the school rules, such as wearing school uniforms, keeping our classrooms tidy, and so on. Let’s join hands together to build a civilized and harmonious campus. As long as everybody makes a contribution, we can make it. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开门见山：介绍演讲主题； 第二步，陈述创建文明校园的目的； 第三步，列举校园存在的不文明现象； 第四步，就创建文明校园提供几点建议； 第五步，呼吁，表达愿望。 ［亮点词汇］ ①be polite to对……有礼貌 ②be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 ［高分句型］ ①As long as everybody makes a contribution, we can make it. (as long as引导条件状语从句) ②It’s our duty to build a civilized campus so that we can have a better learning environment. (it作形式主语、so that引导目的状语从句) 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$