Unit6 Keep our city clean. 写作突破（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语上册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

译林版三起六年级上册 Unit 6 四步法写如何保持清洁 01. 写作方法指引 ANSWERING ETIQUETTE 02. 基础知识精讲 ANSWERING ETIQUETTE 03. 模拟写作提升 ANSWERING ETIQUETTE 04. 真题写作练习 ANSWERING ETIQUETTE 目录 CATALOG 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// PART 01 写作方法指引 写作方法指引-教材引路 引入话题 介绍应该能够做的事情 PART 02 基础知识精讲 基础知识精讲-介绍应该做的事情 01 基础知识精讲-介绍不应该做的事情 02 基础知识精讲 基础知识精讲-引入话题，结尾表达期望 03 基础知识精讲-介绍保持干净应该做的事情 句型：我们应该做的事情 We can…：表示 “我们能够……”，强调我们具备做某事的能力或可能性。 We should…表示 “我们应该……”，强调一种责任、义务或建议。 短语： walk to school走路上学；move some factories away把一些工厂搬走；put rubbish in the bin把垃圾放进垃圾箱；help keep the air clean 有助于保持空气洁净 ；plant more trees 种更多的树 基础知识精讲-介绍保持干净不应该做的事情 短语： throw rubbish on the floor把垃圾扔在地上 make the air dirty 使空气变脏 make the streets messy 使街道变乱 句型： 情态动词 shouldn't/ can't 及它们的否定形式后都要用动词原形。 主语 + shouldn't + 动词原形 + 其他 主语 + can't + 动词原形 + 其他. 基础知识精讲-引入话题，结尾表达期望 句型： Beginning: I love our city/ school… very much. Our school/ city… is dirty now. Ending: In this way, our city will be more beautiful and cleaner. 基础知识精讲-写作框架 我们应该做的事情： We can… We should… Keep our city clean 表达期望： In this way, our … will be more beautiful and cleaner. 我们不应该做的事情： We can’t… We shouldn’t… 介绍主题： I love our … very much. PART 03 模拟写作提升 模拟写作提升1 请以“Keep Our City Clean”为题,写一篇小短文。写一写我们可以做哪些事情使我们的城市更加干净整洁。 要求：语言通顺,意思连贯,不少于6句话。 参考提示： 1.What makes the air dirty? 2. What makes the streets dirty? 3. What can we do? 参考提示 框架： I love our city very much. But now ________. What can we do to make our city beautiful and clean? We shouldn’t ________. We should ________. We can ________. And our parents can go to work by metro. We can also ________. 参考单词： air pollution; noise pollution ; water pollution ; beautiful and clean; throw rubbish ; bin; by metro; plant trees and flowers 范文 How to make our city beautiful and clean? I love our city very much. But now the air pollution, noise pollution and water pollution are found everywhere. What can we do to make our city beautiful and clean? We shouldn't throw rubbish in public places, rivers or lakes. We should put it in the bin. We can take the bus, ride a bike or walk to school. And our parents can go to work by metro. We can also plant more trees and flowers. In this way, our city will be more beautiful and cleaner. 能够做的事情 表达期望 介绍主题 不能做的事 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 保持干净，要从自己做起。我们的校园是否干净呢?以“Keep our school clean”为题，向同学们发出一份倡议书。 要求： 1.语句通顺，条理清楚，语法正确。 2.不少于5句话。 参考提示 框架： I love my school very much. It’s ___________. We can’t __________. We can’t __________. To keep our school clean, we can __________. We can __________. We can __________. In these ways, our school will be more beautiful and cleaner. 参考单词： dirty; rubbish; clean; sweep the floor; clean desks and chairs; put rubbish; bin; litter 范文 Keep our school clean Our school is dirty now. Rubbish makes our school dirty. To keep our school clean, we should clean our classrooms. We should sweep the floor. We should clean desks and chairs. We should put rubbish in the bin. We should not litter. We should love our school clean. 能够做的事情 表达期望 介绍主题 不能做的事 PART 04 真题写作练习 真题写作练习-江苏无锡 同学们，保护环境要从自己做起，从身边做起。请以 “Keep our school clean”为题，根据所给提示向全校同学发出一份倡议书。 提示： 描述一下现在我们的校园是否干净整洁，并说明为保持校园干净整洁，我们可以做什么，不可以做什么。 要求： 1.语句通顺，条理清楚，语法正确。 2.不少于5句话。 参考提示 句型： I love my school very much. It’s ___________. We can’t __________. We can’t __________. To keep our school clean, we can __________. We can __________. We can __________. In these ways, our school will be more beautiful and cleaner. 单词： clean, beautiful, throw the rubbish, pick the flowers, sweep the floor, clean the desks, plant trees and flowers 范文 Let's keep our school clean I love my school very much. It’s clean and beautiful. We can’t throw the rubbish on the ground at school. We can’t pick the flowers or walk on the grass either. To keep our school clean, we can sweep the floor. We can put rubbish in the bin. We can clean the desks and chairs regularly. We can plant more trees and flowers too. In these ways, our school will be more beautiful and cleaner. 能够做的事情 表达期望 介绍主题 不能做的事 Thank you! SUMMARY REPORT $$