Unit6 Nurturing Nature写作提高训练- 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题（外研版2019选择性必修第一册)

Unit6 Nurturing Nature写作提高训练 - 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题 （外研版2019选择性必修第一册） 一、书信写作 1．假定你是校英文报先锋 （Pioneer）的编辑，受你校学生会委托，发布一份以保护生物多样性为主题的海报设计大赛的通知，内容包括： 1. 大赛目的； 2. 作品要求； 3. 参赛方式等。 protect biodiversity：保护生物多样性 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，下周你校将组织以“保护自然遗产”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1.面临的现状； 2.保护的意义； 3.具体的措施。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Protect the Natural Heritage Ladies and Gentlemen, Today, I stand before you to address a pressing issue: the urgent need to protect our natural heritage. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3． 假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“绿色生活从我做起”的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿并参赛。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good morning, everyone! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 4．你校上周举办了“校园环保周”活动，请给校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动内容; 2.活动影响。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Campus Environmental Protection Week _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李华，上周参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护冬令营。请你写一篇博客分享这段有意义的经历。内容包含： 1.活动内容和相关安排； 2.个人感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Week in the Wild ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim在你微信朋友圈看到你发的“公筷行动(the Serving Chopsticks Movement)”的图片，发邮件向你咨询。请你给他回复，内容提要： 1. “公筷行动”简介； 2. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．你校英文报以“ Protecting the Earth”为主题，向在校学生征文。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 保护地球的重要性； 2. 作为学生应该如何行动。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假定你是李华, 上周六你参加了学校举行的以“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛。请你给英国朋友 Ryan 写一封邮件分享这次经历, 内容包括: 1. 参赛过程（包括你的参赛作品等）； 2. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m writing to share with you our school’s creative work competition I participated in last Saturday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．假定你是李华，请以“Be Energy- smart”为主题写一篇倡议书，谈一谈在日常生活中如何节电的做法（至少两点）。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．近年来，大量野生动物数量锐减，濒临灭绝，引起人们的关注。请你以  “救救野生动物（Saving the Wildlife）” 为题写一篇英语文章呼吁人们保护野 生动物，内容包括： 1.简述现状； 2.分析原因； 3.提出解决办法。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇: poacher n.盗猎者   reserve n.保护区 Saving the Wildlife _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 1. John was a highway patrol trooper (巡逻警察) responsible for ensuring traffic safety on T Highway. One afternoon in July, there was a heavy rainstorm. While driving through the busiest part of the highway during the downpour, he noticed that traffic was beginning to slow down ahead of him, with some cars coming to a stop and veering (转向) into another lane. John initially thought there had been a car accident, so he reduced his speed to take a closer look. However, he quickly discovered that the real cause of the hold-up was an animal wandering on the wet road. As he got nearer, he realized it was a dog. There was a large dog that looked like a brown German shepherd (牧羊犬) in the middle lane. The weather conditions were terrible, with a gray sky and heavy rain reducing visibility on the highway. This delay could lead to a traffic jam, and it was certainly very dangerous to have the dog wandering in the middle of the road. He immediately turned on his blue lights because people usually slow down when they see the blue lights and called into the radio so they knew where he was. He pulled over, got out, and whistled to draw the dog’s attention. It seemed as if the dog knew John was its lifesaver. It walked to John and his car. Once the dog was in the car, John pulled into a parking lot nearby, where he called Petworks Animal Service. While waiting, he noticed the dog wearing a collar with its name “Marley”. John recorded a short video of the dog. Then an animal control officer came and took Marley to the shelter. John came back to work. Watching cars travelling on the highway through the window glass, he thought he might do something to let the dog’s owner know the pet was found safe. After work, John posted the video online with a brief description attached. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, news came that Marley’s owner had been found and would visit him. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. When I’m driving alone, my thoughts bring me back to my teenage years. My memory is foggy as to whether I was sixteen or seventeen years old that sunny autumn Saturday. But the memory is crystal clear when I think of that cold morning. Dad and I were driving to town when we met a squirrel (松鼠), which left a deep impact on my life. That morning, I was sitting next to Dad, daydreaming as I stared out of the window and singing along with the music on the radio. I’m sure it was a piece of hippie music my dad didn’t approve of. Considering it “one of those loud hippie songs”， he complained that I should turn it off. My dad was a strong man I loved and feared. I did what he told me and knew there was no backtalk, ever. He was a strict and impatient man, but when he laughed, it sounded like a fiery volcano, with loud and explosive sounds coming from the bottom of his belly. There was nothing quiet about Dad. We were approaching the crossroad of two side streets in this typical Chicago neighborhood. There was a park on our left side, with slides emptied at this hour. In front of a local bar, were brownish- green lawns(草坪) between gray city strips. The Tavern Bar served great lunches all week to the factory workers and I thought, how strange, no pizzas and burgers were coming from there. The streets were so unusually empty. That was why I was surprised when Dad suddenly tried to stop his car as we were turning left. We weren’t going fast at all, so I was puzzled at his strange reaction. Nothing was in sight. I stopped singing, sat upright, and looked around for a clue as to what he was doing. Paragraph 1: From that moment on, all I could do was observe. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Then, carrying the squirrel, we drove to the nearest animal hospital. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. One Thursday, my classmates, teachers, and I went to Dahu Park to study nature. Dahu Park’s Moon Bridge is one of the most famous places in the whole world. That’s because, at night, it shines bright like the moon! On the bridge, I saw something huge floating on top of the water. I wondered what it was, so I went down to look. When I saw what it was, I wished I hadn’t. There was a rotting, dead, ugly fish floating in the pond. My friend Jasper came over to see what I was looking at and he almost threw up. I asked him if he needed medicine. He said he needed me to get that fish as far away from him as possible. I poked it with a stick, I realized that it was hard and its eye was missing. I was totally disgusted. I lost my appetite. Our teacher, sensing what was about to happen, took us away from the pond. We walked for a while and kept exploring Dahu Park. As we crossed over a bridge, I tried not to look into the water. Then, I saw three old men fishing. Two looked annoyed and nervous, but the other was calm. They looked like they were competing. I got closer. The calm one patiently waited for a fish to fall into the trap. When he finally caught a fish, I was so happy I could have jumped into the lake. But the fish was really small. I expected him to put it in a container or something, but no, he threw it to a nearby bird. It swallowed it happily. The other birds looked at it with jealousy, and then moved closer to the old man. I was shocked. He worked so hard and finally caught a fish, and he threw his first one to a bird! 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I thought maybe the disgusting fish I saw earlier had something to do with this old man’s actions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing what they talked about the seriousness of water pollution, I understood why. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 6 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit6 Nurturing Nature写作提高训练 - 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题 （外研版2019选择性必修第一册） 一、书信写作 1．假定你是校英文报先锋 （Pioneer）的编辑，受你校学生会委托，发布一份以保护生物多样性为主题的海报设计大赛的通知，内容包括： 1. 大赛目的； 2. 作品要求； 3. 参赛方式等。 protect biodiversity：保护生物多样性 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Notice With the aim of raising our environmental awareness and protecting biodiversity, a poster design competition themed “Biodiversity Protection” will be organized by the Student Union. To begin with, originality is the first requirement. Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of biodiversity and the urgency to protect it. Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive. Whoever is interested is welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@163. com before 20th November, 2024. The winning works will be announced on December 2nd,2024 in this newspaper. Looking forward to your participation. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生发布一份以保护生物多样性为主题的海报设计大赛的通知。 【详解】1.词汇积累 以……为目的：with the aim of → with the intention of 提高：raise → enhance 鼓舞人心的：inspiring → encouraging 此外：moreover → what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the aim of raising our environmental awareness and protecting biodiversity, a poster design competition themed “Biodiversity Protection” will be organized by the Student Union. 拓展句：With the aim of raising our environmental awareness and protecting biodiversity, a poster design competition whose theme is “Biodiversity Protection” will be organized by the Student Union. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of biodiversity and the urgency to protect it.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句和现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】Whoever is interested is welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@163. com before 20th November, 2024.（运用了whoever引导的主语从句） 2．假定你是李华，下周你校将组织以“保护自然遗产”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1.面临的现状； 2.保护的意义； 3.具体的措施。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Protect the Natural Heritage Ladies and Gentlemen, Today, I stand before you to address a pressing issue: the urgent need to protect our natural heritage. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Protect the Natural Heritage Ladies and Gentlemen, Today, I stand before you to address a pressing issue: the urgent need to protect our natural heritage. Our planet is blessed with a range of stunning landscapes, diverse ecosystems and invaluable wildlife. However, our cultural heritage is under attack from neglect, urbanization and climate change, leading to great losses. The significance of protecting our natural relics cannot be overstated. They are not just stones and relics but also a reflection of our ancestors’ wisdom. Firstly, promote sustainable tourism that prioritizes the preservation of sites over commercial gains. Secondly, raise public awareness to educate communities about the value of the heritage. Let us act now to ensure that these priceless pieces of our history are not lost to time. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“保护自然遗产”为主题写一篇演讲稿参加英文演讲比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 极好的：stunning→ unexceptionable 然而：however→ nevertheless 夸大：overstate→ exaggerate 确保：ensure→ make sure 2.句式拓展 改倒装句 原句：They are not just stones and relics but also a reflection of our ancestors’ wisdom. 拓展句：Not only are they stones and relics but also they serve as a reflection of our ancestors’ wisdom. 【点睛】【高分句型1】However, our cultural heritage is under attack from neglect, urbanization and climate change, leading to great losses.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】Firstly, promote sustainable tourism that prioritizes the preservation of sites over commercial gains.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 3． 假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“绿色生活从我做起”的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿并参赛。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good morning, everyone! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 【答案】       Good morning, everyone!       As we know, living Green is very important for everyone. For us students, we should create a green school in order to contribute to a comfortable studying environment.       Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. Secondly, we are willing to attach great importance to saving water, paper and electricity and planting trees and put them into practice. Thirdly, we must have good habits so that we can keep every corner tidy in our school.       Therefore, everyone, let’s take action immediately. Thank you for your listening. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“绿色生活从我做起”为题写一篇演讲稿参加校英文演讲比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：firstly→to begin with 应该：should→be supposed to 乐意做某事：be willing to do sth.→be pleased to do sth. 重要性：importance→significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. 拓展句：Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures which are related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, living Green is very important for everyone. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Thirdly, we must have good habits so that we can keep every corner tidy in our school. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句) 4．你校上周举办了“校园环保周”活动，请给校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动内容; 2.活动影响。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Campus Environmental Protection Week _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                         Campus Environmental Protection Week Last week, “Campus Environmental Protection Week” was held at our school. A variety of engaging activities were organized. There were informative lectures on environmental protection delivered by experts, where students learned about the importance of reducing waste, conserving energy, and protecting wildlife. Waste sorting competitions were also held, with students competing to see who could sort waste materials correctly and quickly This event has not only enhanced our awareness of environmental protection but also inspired us to take practical actions in our daily lives. It is our responsibility to protect the environment and make the world a better place. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校上周举办了“校园环保周”活动，请给校英语报写一篇报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要性：importance→significance 举行：hold→host 提高：enhance→promote 激励：inspire→motivate 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Last week, “Campus Environmental Protection Week” was held at our school. A variety of engaging activities were organized. 拓展句：Last week, “Campus Environmental Protection Week” was held at our school, when a variety of engaging activities were organized. 【点睛】[高分句型1] There were informative lectures on environmental protection delivered by experts, where students learned about the importance of reducing waste, conserving energy, and protecting wildlife. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Waste sorting competitions were also held, with students competing to see who could sort waste materials correctly and quickly. (运用了who引导的宾语从句) 5．假定你是李华，上周参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护冬令营。请你写一篇博客分享这段有意义的经历。内容包含： 1.活动内容和相关安排； 2.个人感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Week in the Wild ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 A Week in the Wild Last week, I, together with 30 other students, went to Yunnan and took part in the Wildlife Protection Winter Camp held by WWF. We spent one week in the wild rain forests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals. We observed how different species of monkeys adapted themselves to their natural habitats. Plus, various activities to help protect them have been organized, such as picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. We were amazed by the tireless efforts that the locals were making. The camp not only raised our environmental awareness, but also deepened our understanding of wildlife protection. Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇博客分享参加野生动物保护冬令营的经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：take part in→participate in 举行：hold→host 各种各样：various→a variety of 活动：activity→event 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Plus, various activities to help protect them have been organized, such as picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. 拓展句：Plus, various activities to help protect them have been organized, which include picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Plus, various activities to help protect them have been organized, such as picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together. (运用了倒装句) 6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim在你微信朋友圈看到你发的“公筷行动(the Serving Chopsticks Movement)”的图片，发邮件向你咨询。请你给他回复，内容提要： 1. “公筷行动”简介； 2. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Learning that you are interested in the picture I posted in my WeChat Moments, I’m writing to share with you some detailed information. As you can see, it is about the Serving Chopsticks Movement, which is aimed at advocating using serving chopsticks to move food from a serving plate to one person’s bowl when friends or family have dinner together. In this way, we can prevent spreading viruses and bacteria. Apparently, I strongly support the use of serving chopsticks. If you want to know more about it, please feel free to drop me a line. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim回复邮件，介绍“公筷行动”活动的情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感兴趣的：be interested in→take interest in 支持：support→be in favor of 详细的：detailed→specific 显然：apparently→obviously 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：In this way, we can prevent spreading viruses and bacteria. Apparently, I strongly support the use of serving chopsticks. 拓展句：Apparently, I strongly support the use of serving chopsticks because in this way, we can prevent spreading viruses and bacteria. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are interested in the picture I posted in my WeChat Moments, I’m writing to share with you some detailed information. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] If you want to know more about it, please feel free to drop me a line. (运用了if引导条件状语从句) 7．你校英文报以“ Protecting the Earth”为主题，向在校学生征文。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 保护地球的重要性； 2. 作为学生应该如何行动。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Protecting the Earth It is of great significance to protect the earth. It provides us with essential resources and a beautiful living environment. Without a healthy earth, we cannot have a good life. As students, we should take practical measures. We can start from small things to save energy, like turning off the lights when leaving the room. In addition, we can actively participate in environmental protection activities by planting trees or picking up litter in the park. Let’s do our part to make a positive contribution to protecting the earth and creating a better world for future generations. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报以《保护地球》为主题，向在校学生征文，要求考生按照要求写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要性：significance→ importance 保护：protect→ preserve 必要的：essential→ necessary 参与：participate in→ take part in 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：It is of great significance to protect the earth. 拓展句：Protecting the earth is of great significance. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can start from small things to save energy, like turning off the lights when leaving the room.（运用了动名词短语turning off作like的宾语、when引导的时间状语从句的省略） 【高分句型2】Let’s do our part to make a positive contribution to protecting the earth and creating a better world for future generations.（运用了不定式to make作目的状语、动名词protecting和creating作宾语） 8．假定你是李华, 上周六你参加了学校举行的以“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛。请你给英国朋友 Ryan 写一封邮件分享这次经历, 内容包括: 1. 参赛过程（包括你的参赛作品等）； 2. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m writing to share with you our school’s creative work competition I participated in last Saturday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Ryan, I’m writing to share with you our school’s creative work competition I participated in last Saturday. With the theme of “Ocean Protection”, a great number of competitors from different grades of our school produced a variety of creative works, including posters, T-shirts, handbags, videos and so on. I made an animation video to show the living conditions of fish before and after the sea was polluted, emphasizing the importance of protecting oceans, which received unanimous praise from judges. This contest not only won me an award, but also helped me make many like-minded friends and strengthened my determination to protect the ocean. Small actions as we take, it will, I believe, make a huge difference in our life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于书信写作。要求考生给英国朋友Ryan写封邮件，分享学校上周六举行的一“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛，介绍参赛过程和感受。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 主题：theme→topic 大量的、许多的：a great number of→plenty of 各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of 强调：emphasize→highlight 比赛：competition→contest 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：With the theme of “Ocean Protection”, a great number of competitors from different grades of our school produced a variety of creative works, including posters, T-shirts, handbags, videos and so on. 拓展句：With the theme of “Ocean Protection”, a great number of competitors from different grades of our school produced a variety of creative works,which included posters, T-shirts, handbags, videos and so on. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I made an animation video to show the living conditions of fish before and after the sea was polluted, emphasizing the importance of protecting oceans, which received unanimous praise from judges.（运用了以连词before and after引导的时间状语从句和以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 【高分句型2】Small actions as we take, it will, I believe, make a huge difference in our life.（运用了以连词as引导的让步状语从句的倒装句和插入语形式。） 9．假定你是李华，请以“Be Energy- smart”为主题写一篇倡议书，谈一谈在日常生活中如何节电的做法（至少两点）。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                   Be Energy-Smart As we know, we are currently experiencing an energy crisis and saving electricity should become a way of life. Being energy smart means doing the same with less-using electricity more efficiently or in reduced amounts. First of all, consider installing energy-efficient equipment and appliances. More importantly, develop smart energy habits. Turn down the air-conditioner to a reasonable temperature, which can reduce your electricity bill by 5%. Also, turn off the lights in empty rooms and hang clothes out to dry etc. All of these can matter a lot. Let’s take action right now. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“Be Energy- smart”为主题写一篇倡议书，谈一谈在日常生活中如何节电的做法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 应该：should→be supposed to 首先：first of all→to begin with 重要地：importantly→significantly 重要：matter→count 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：More importantly, develop smart energy habits. 拓展句：More importantly, develop smart energy habits, which turns out to be useful. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As we know, we are currently experiencing an energy crisis and saving electricity should become a way of life.（运用了as引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Turn down the air-conditioner to a reasonable temperature, which can reduce your electricity bill by 5%.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 10．近年来，大量野生动物数量锐减，濒临灭绝，引起人们的关注。请你以  “救救野生动物（Saving the Wildlife）” 为题写一篇英语文章呼吁人们保护野 生动物，内容包括： 1.简述现状； 2.分析原因； 3.提出解决办法。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇: poacher n.盗猎者   reserve n.保护区 Saving the Wildlife _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Saving the Wildlife       In the last few years, the population of many wild animals has dropped sharply, putting them at the risk of extinction, which triggers great concern in society.       Sadly, human activity is the main reason why the wildlife is endangered. In many places where the wildlife can be found, people are destroying their natural habitats, leaving them nowhere to live. Poachers are threatening their lives.To save the wildlife, it is high time that we took effective measures. We’d better plant more trees so as to restore their sweet home and build more reserves.          In a shared world with a shared future, saving the wildlife is saving ourselves. Let’s contribute every effort to saving them before it is too late! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇文章呼吁人类保护野生动物。 【详解】1.词汇积累 主要的：main→major 毁坏：destroy→ruin 采取措施：take measures→take steps 为了：so as to→in order to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We’d better plant more trees so as to restore their sweet home. 拓展句：We’d better plant more trees so that we can restore their sweet home. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the last few years, the population of many wild animals has dropped sharply, putting them at the risk of extinction, which triggers great concern in society.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】To save the wildlife, it is high time that we took effective measures. （运用了 it is high time that引导的虚拟语气） 二、读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 1. John was a highway patrol trooper (巡逻警察) responsible for ensuring traffic safety on T Highway. One afternoon in July, there was a heavy rainstorm. While driving through the busiest part of the highway during the downpour, he noticed that traffic was beginning to slow down ahead of him, with some cars coming to a stop and veering (转向) into another lane. John initially thought there had been a car accident, so he reduced his speed to take a closer look. However, he quickly discovered that the real cause of the hold-up was an animal wandering on the wet road. As he got nearer, he realized it was a dog. There was a large dog that looked like a brown German shepherd (牧羊犬) in the middle lane. The weather conditions were terrible, with a gray sky and heavy rain reducing visibility on the highway. This delay could lead to a traffic jam, and it was certainly very dangerous to have the dog wandering in the middle of the road. He immediately turned on his blue lights because people usually slow down when they see the blue lights and called into the radio so they knew where he was. He pulled over, got out, and whistled to draw the dog’s attention. It seemed as if the dog knew John was its lifesaver. It walked to John and his car. Once the dog was in the car, John pulled into a parking lot nearby, where he called Petworks Animal Service. While waiting, he noticed the dog wearing a collar with its name “Marley”. John recorded a short video of the dog. Then an animal control officer came and took Marley to the shelter. John came back to work. Watching cars travelling on the highway through the window glass, he thought he might do something to let the dog’s owner know the pet was found safe. After work, John posted the video online with a brief description attached. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, news came that Marley’s owner had been found and would visit him. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】After work, John posted the video online with a brief description attached. He called on netizens to lend a helping hand. Amazingly, the video went viral in no time. Countless people gave likes to the video, leaving heartwarming comments. They not only admired John for his selfless good deeds but also actively shared the video on various platforms to help look for Marley’s owner. Watching such a large number of helpful people getting enthusiastically involved, John was deeply touched. His heart was filled with hope and anticipation, waiting for the good news that Marley would be reunited with its owner soon. Days later, news came that Marley’s owner had been found and would visit him. Hearing that, John felt excitement sweeping over him. Soon, there came a knock on the door. The moment he opened the door, a lady came into view. She reached out, grasped John’s hands and expressed her sincere gratitude. John responded with a warm smile and knelt down to pet Marley, who was wagging his tail excitedly. Before leaving, she insisted on giving John a gift. He politely refused, saying Marley’s safety and happiness was what he hoped for. As a highway patrol trooper, John went above and beyond the call of duty by helping a lost dog. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲的是巡逻警察John在一次暴雨天巡逻T高速公路时，发现一只狗在湿滑的路面上游荡，导致交通受阻。John采取了一系列行动，将狗安全地带到了附近的停车场。之后，他联系了Petworks Animal Service，并发现狗脖子上戴着写有名字的项圈。最终，动物管制人员将狗带到了收容所，而John也考虑采取措施通知狗的主人狗已安全找到。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“下班后，约翰在网上发布了这个视频，并附上了简短的描述。”可知，第一段可描写约翰发布的视频引起的关注和回应。 ②由第二段首句内容“几天后，消息传来，马利的主人找到了，要来看它。”可知，第二段可描写主人前来领回狗和主人如何表达感激。 2.续写线索：视频走红——网友点赞并转发——John感动——主人到访——主人感激——坚持要送礼物——John拒绝 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①走红：go viral/be in vogue ②出现：come into view/come into sight ③拒绝：refuse/turn down 情绪类 ①感动：touched/moved ②感激：gratitude/thankfulness 【点睛】[高分句型1] His heart was filled with hope and anticipation, waiting for the good news that Marley would be reunited with its owner soon. (由现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句) [高分句型2] John responded with a warm smile and knelt down to pet Marley, who was wagging his tail excitedly. (由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. When I’m driving alone, my thoughts bring me back to my teenage years. My memory is foggy as to whether I was sixteen or seventeen years old that sunny autumn Saturday. But the memory is crystal clear when I think of that cold morning. Dad and I were driving to town when we met a squirrel (松鼠), which left a deep impact on my life. That morning, I was sitting next to Dad, daydreaming as I stared out of the window and singing along with the music on the radio. I’m sure it was a piece of hippie music my dad didn’t approve of. Considering it “one of those loud hippie songs”， he complained that I should turn it off. My dad was a strong man I loved and feared. I did what he told me and knew there was no backtalk, ever. He was a strict and impatient man, but when he laughed, it sounded like a fiery volcano, with loud and explosive sounds coming from the bottom of his belly. There was nothing quiet about Dad. We were approaching the crossroad of two side streets in this typical Chicago neighborhood. There was a park on our left side, with slides emptied at this hour. In front of a local bar, were brownish- green lawns(草坪) between gray city strips. The Tavern Bar served great lunches all week to the factory workers and I thought, how strange, no pizzas and burgers were coming from there. The streets were so unusually empty. That was why I was surprised when Dad suddenly tried to stop his car as we were turning left. We weren’t going fast at all, so I was puzzled at his strange reaction. Nothing was in sight. I stopped singing, sat upright, and looked around for a clue as to what he was doing. Paragraph 1: From that moment on, all I could do was observe. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Then, carrying the squirrel, we drove to the nearest animal hospital. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: From that moment on, all I could do was observe. Dad parked the car quickly and jumped out, never saying a word, which was also highly unusual. I watched him run forward and kneel beside a squirrel, which was badly hurt. This small creature had just run into our car as it raced into the street. Perhaps it was gathering food for the winter on the way. Dad examined it for a second and immediately asked me to bring him a towel. Paragraph 2: Then, carrying the squirrel, we drove to the nearest animal hospital. All the way, he kept silent while his bright blue eyes, usually filled with passion and life, had filled up and one teardrop escaped. After a long wait at the hospital, we were informed that the squirrel miraculously survived. On the way back home, I carefully held the squirrel like holding a full glass of water. During the following days, under Dad’s considerate care, the squirrel gradually recovered. During the process, I found Dad’s soft side, and was deeply touched by his love and respect for all life and nature. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与父亲在驾车途中遇到一只受伤松鼠并救助它的经历，以及从中获得的关于生命和自然的深刻感悟。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“从那一刻起，我只能观察。”以及第二段首句内容“然后，我们带着松鼠去了最近的动物医院。”可知，第一段可描写作者静静地观察，发现一只小松鼠撞上了父亲的车，受伤了。 ②由第二段首句内容“然后，我们带着松鼠去了最近的动物医院。”可知，第二段可描写松鼠得到了救助，而作者也发现了父亲温柔的一面。 2.续写线索：静静观察——父亲抱起一只受伤的松鼠——松鼠受伤严重——带着松鼠去动物医院——非常担忧——得到救助——终于康复——为父亲感到自豪 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①撞上：run into/knock into ②充满了：be filled with/be full of ③打动：touch/move 情绪类 ①体贴的：considerate/ thoughtful ②热情：passion/enthusiasm 【点睛】【高分句型1】Dad parked the car quickly and jumped out, never saying a word, which was also highly unusual.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】This small creature had just run into our car as it raced into the street.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） 3. One Thursday, my classmates, teachers, and I went to Dahu Park to study nature. Dahu Park’s Moon Bridge is one of the most famous places in the whole world. That’s because, at night, it shines bright like the moon! On the bridge, I saw something huge floating on top of the water. I wondered what it was, so I went down to look. When I saw what it was, I wished I hadn’t. There was a rotting, dead, ugly fish floating in the pond. My friend Jasper came over to see what I was looking at and he almost threw up. I asked him if he needed medicine. He said he needed me to get that fish as far away from him as possible. I poked it with a stick, I realized that it was hard and its eye was missing. I was totally disgusted. I lost my appetite. Our teacher, sensing what was about to happen, took us away from the pond. We walked for a while and kept exploring Dahu Park. As we crossed over a bridge, I tried not to look into the water. Then, I saw three old men fishing. Two looked annoyed and nervous, but the other was calm. They looked like they were competing. I got closer. The calm one patiently waited for a fish to fall into the trap. When he finally caught a fish, I was so happy I could have jumped into the lake. But the fish was really small. I expected him to put it in a container or something, but no, he threw it to a nearby bird. It swallowed it happily. The other birds looked at it with jealousy, and then moved closer to the old man. I was shocked. He worked so hard and finally caught a fish, and he threw his first one to a bird! 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I thought maybe the disgusting fish I saw earlier had something to do with this old man’s actions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing what they talked about the seriousness of water pollution, I understood why. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： I thought maybe the disgusting fish I saw earlier had something to do with this old man’s actions. The fish he caught had been skinny and looked sick. I was so close to him that I could hear him say something about the people polluting the water. That’s when I realized what he was talking about. The reason why we saw the dead fish earlier was that people were polluting the water. I noticed the fish he caught had the same black pattern on its scales as the dead fish. Those weren’t scales; those were the result of bad chemicals. I felt really sad for the fish. Hearing what they talked about the seriousness of water pollution, I understood why. Maybe someone threw some trash with chemicals into the water. Then another person threw another piece of trash into the lake. Maybe when the two chemicals were mixed together, they created a new deadly substance that killed the fish. This doesn’t just affect the fish, it affects us too. If the smaller fish get poisoned, and the big fish eat them, the big fish will get poisoned. If we eat the poisoned fish, we will get poisoned. Then, Dahu Park will not be famous for its Moon Bridge, but it will be famous for its dead fish. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，作者和老师、同学去大湖公园学习自然，在池塘里看到了漂着的死鱼，作者看到有老人在钓鱼，并将钓到的鱼丢给鸟。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我想也许我之前看到的恶心的鱼和这位老人的行为有关。”可知，第一段可描写作者听了老人讲关于人们污染水的事情以及鱼死的原因， ②由第二段首句内容“听到他们谈论水污染的严重性，我明白了为什么。”可知，第二段可描写污染的类型和不良影响。 2.续写线索：听老人的讲关于污染事情——作者感到难过—污染的类型——带来的影响 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①意识到：realize /be aware of ②看到：see/witness ③扔：throw/chuck ④影响：affect/impact 情绪类 ①难过的：sad/sorrowful 【点睛】[高分句型1] That’s when I realized what he was talking about. (运用了when引导的表语从句和what引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] The reason why we saw the dead fish earlier was that people were polluting the water. (运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句) [高分句型3] If we eat the poisoned fish, we will get poisoned.. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) ( 19 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$