内容正文:
Section Ⅳ
Integrated skills
目 录
新知深化学习
课时检测
写作专项提能
听力发掘训练
新知深化学习
I'm eager for my parents' love.
我渴望得到父母的爱。
★eager adj.热切的,渴望的,渴求的
|用|法|感|知|
•(“邀请”类写作佳句)We will be eager to see your wonderful performances.
我们期待看到你精彩的表演。
•(2023·浙江1月高考写作)I was eager that I could see the hummingbird again.
我渴望能再次看到那只蜂鸟。
归纳点拨
(1)be eager to do sth. 渴望做某事
be eager for sth. 渴望某物
be eager that ... 渴望……
(2)eagerness n. 热切,渴望
(3)eagerly adv. 热心地;热切地
[名师指津] eager侧重强调期望或渴望,而anxious侧重强调焦虑或担心。
|应|用|融|会|
(1)单句语法填空
①I'm eager______ more information about your activity.
②I'm so glad to hear from you, which I had been looking forward to ________(eager).
③I wasn't able to hide my ___________(eager) when I asked, “What do you wish me to do now?”
for
eagerly
eagerness
(2)选词填空(eager, anxious)
④She is _______to go to college, but ________about not passing the College Entrance Examination.
(3)完成句子
⑤__________________ the project should be started early.
我们热切希望这项计划能早日着手进行。
eager
anxious
We are eager that
听力发掘训练
一、由听力厚积语料库
1.have high hopes for sb. _______________
2.follow these pieces of advice ________________
3.begin with something like ________________
4.要求更多的空闲时间 ____________________
5.设身处地为某人着想 _______________________
6.对某人如此严格 _____________________
对某人寄予厚望
遵循这些建议
从以下内容开始
ask for more free time
put oneself in sb.'s shoes
be so strict with sb.
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二、教材录音材料的发掘训练
1.Why does Rebecca's mother not value her effort?
A.She has high hopes for Rebecca.
B.She has too much control over Rebecca.
C.She doesn't understand Rebecca.
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2.What are important according to Cynthia?
A.School and friendship.
B.School and relaxation.
C.Relaxation and friendship.
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3.How did Cynthia think of her senior high school when she was young?
A.Wonderful. B.Fulfilling. C.Tiring.
4.What's Cynthia's attitude towards Rebecca's problem?
A.Anxious. B.Negative. C.Positive.
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三、依据教材听力完成句子
1.From your email, it sounds like you ______________________
your schoolwork.
2.Your mother wants you to be successful but she probably fails to see____________________.
3.Try following these pieces of advice and see _______________
__________________________.
put a lot of effort into
how you struggle
if they help
improve your relationship
4.You should also try to meet in the middle when _____________
__________.
5.Why don't you make a deal that_________________________?
6.When your mother doesn't let you go out with your friends, think about the reason________________.
talking to your
mother
you are both satisfied with
why she does so
四、听力同类主题的微写作
假设你想加入社区志愿者协会,但你的妈妈担心这会影响你的学习,所以不同意你参加。请你根据听力材料中Cynthia的建议,和你妈妈谈一谈。
参考范文:
Mom, can I talk with you? I know you are concerned that the voluntary work will influence my study.So I promise I will only do it in my spare time, which won't affect my study.After all, it's a good chance to communicate with more people, thus helping me accumulate social experience, which you know is my shortcoming.
写作专项提能
■写作项目——Write a letter of advice
本单元要求写一封建议信。建议信是针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告的邮件,因此建议信应写得简明扼要,目的明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。为使对方易于接受,建议信的用语应委婉、诚恳。
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由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据本课时Part B中的听力文本,可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下:
二、学要点构思
建议信是针对对方的问题给出建议,所以首先应分析对方存在的问题,此时注意切入的角度应具体、实际;然后再针对问题提出合情合理、实际有效的解决办法,避免站在宏观的角度泛泛而谈。
如本课时,根据Part A中的三则材料可以提炼出亲子关系中存在的问题有:
①Rebecca's parents attach too much importance to her grades.
②Simon's parents do not spend much time with him.
③Laura's parents protect her too much.
根据Part B中的听力文本可以得出合理的解决办法有:
①Choose a good time to talk to your mother politely to make sure she understands your feelings.
②Put yourself in your mother's shoes and try to understand what she does.
三、学衔接过渡
在提出建议时,为了避免流水账式罗列观点的现象,可灵活使用衔接词firstly、 besides、 what's more或to begin/start with、 then、 later、 last but not least等,增加上下文的连贯性。如听力文本中Cynthia在提出建议时,使用了first、 second进行衔接,同时运用了like、 for example展开举例说明。
四、学语言风格
建议信开头应表达自己的同理心,如听力文本中的“I understand your feelings.”。提建议时应多用祈使句或You should ...、 You had better ...、 I suggest ...。整体行文应尽量采用委婉表达,如听力文本中的“Try following these pieces of advice and see if they help improve your relationship.”及“I know it isn't easy, but you ...”等。
写作项目指导
Write a letter of advice to someone who has problems with his/her parents
——针对青少年遇到的亲子矛盾写一封建议信
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1 What are the problems between teenagers and their parents?
Part 2 What's your advice to help solve the problems? And why?
Part 3 End the letter with a positive message.
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 结合对方求助的问题,表达你的看法
1.常见的亲子矛盾有哪些?
(1)青少年的问题:
①对父母的话充耳不闻:
turn a deaf ear to__________________
what parents say
②和父母说话时缺乏耐心:
_______________when talking with parents
③花在屏幕前的时间比和父母在一起的时间多:
________________in front of the screen than with parents
be impatient
spend more time
(2)父母的问题:
④代替孩子做决定:
_______________for their children
⑤强制孩子一直学习:
force their children_____________________
⑥把自己的孩子与别人作比较:
_________________________________
make decisions
to study all the time
compare their children with others
2.如何表达你的态度?
①____________________________ (我能理解你的感受), since this has happened to me before.
②__________________ (得知……我很遗憾) that you are faced with the challenge of communicating with your parents.
I can understand your feelings
I am sorry to hear
第二部分 针对对方的具体问题给出合理建议,并说明理由
1.解决亲子矛盾的建议有哪些?
①________________________________with your parents.
和你的父母展开暖心、坦诚的对话。
②When you disagree with your parents, try to think about the problem______________________.
当你和父母意见相左时,尝试从他们的角度思考问题。
Have warm and open conversations
from their point of view
③_____________________and feelings calmly, and address their concerns.
心平气和地向他们解释你的行为和感受,打消他们的顾虑。
④You should be brave enough to tell your parents that you are ______________________________________for some things.
你可以勇敢地告诉父母,你已经长大了,有些事情可以自己做决定了。
Explain your actions
old enough to make your own decisions
2.提出这些建议的理由是什么?
①_____________________the peace is regular and honest communication.
维持和睦关系的关键在于定期、坦诚的沟通。
②Parents want to _________________________________that seem obvious to them.
父母想要让我们避免犯他们看起来很明显的错误。
The key to keeping
prevent us from making mistakes
第三部分 给出鼓励或安慰并表达自己的希望
①With your effort, everything will_________________.
在你的努力下,一切都会好转。
②I will be more than glad if you____________________________.
如果你觉得我的建议有帮助,我将非常高兴。
③_______________________will make a difference to you. 我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助。
turn out all right
find my suggestions helpful
I hope these suggestions
[针对练笔]
请你就“How to get along well with your parents”这一话题表达自己的看法,给面临亲子矛盾的青少年提几条建议,内容包括:
1.事前跟父母沟通;
2.跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静;
3.多花时间跟父母在一起。
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参考范文:
As you are growing, your relationship with your parents may become more and more tense.Here are some tips for you to get along well with your parents.
Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute.This way you will be able to tell what they will agree or disagree before you make plans.Besides, try to remain calm when your parents say no to something.You'd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them.Last but not least, spend time with your family and communicate with each other at home.
Hope these suggestions will make a difference to you.
写作素材储备
(一)积佳句
1.建议信的常用开头句
(1)I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...
(2)I'm very glad to receive your letter and it's a pleasure to tell you something about ...
(3)I'm writing to offer my suggestions on the improvement of .../ I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of ...
(4)Learning that you have trouble in .../After reading your letter ...I'm writing to offer my suggestions on ...
2.提出建议的常用句式
(1)I suggest/advise that you should (not) do ...
(2)I wonder if ...
(3)It could be better if ...
(4)I believe it would be better to ...
(5)Why not ...?
(6)In my opinion, ...
(7)I advise you (not) to .../If I were you, I would ...
3.进一步解释说明的常用句式
(1)As you know, ...
(2)Considering ...
(3)As/Since ...
(4)In that way, ...
(5) ..., so that ...
(6)This would allow ...to ...
4.建议信的常用结尾句
(1)I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval.
(2)I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
(3)I do hope my suggestions may be of great help to you.
(二)背好段
1.针对交友问题提出建议
First of all,communicate with your classmates more often, as it may help you develop a close relationship with them.Besides, why not join in activities and discussions held in your class? If you do this, you can make friends easily.Last but not least, it is a good idea to help others whenever possible.
首先,多和同学交流,因为这可能有助于你与他们建立亲密的关系。此外,为什么不参加课堂上的活动和讨论呢?如果你这样做,你可以很容易地交到朋友。最后但同样重要的是,尽量去帮助他人是个不错主意。
2.针对出国留学后的适应问题提出建议
Firstly, it is very important for you to work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.Secondly, it can be a good idea to make some friends with your classmates, which can help you get along well with each other.Thirdly, you can join in all kinds of activities.It can help you forget your loneliness, and solve some of your problems.
首先,努力学习英语对你来说非常重要,这可以给你更多的机会与他人交流。其次,和你的同学交朋友是个好主意,这可以帮助你们彼此友好相处。再次,你可以参加各种各样的活动,这可以帮助你忘记孤独,并解决你的一些问题。
课时检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.微语境写作
1._____________ (我认为), parents should give their children more space and freedom and don't ______________________________
________(一直催促他们学习).
2.___________________________ (我渴望得到父母的爱) and hope they will understand me.
In my opinion
keep pressing them to study all the
time
I'm eager for my parents' love
3.My father never told me he loved me but I know that he has always ________________ (以我为荣).
4.Parents should __________________________ (鼓励孩子们去) take part-time jobs._______________ (通过这样做), their children may become more independent, braver and more responsible.
been proud of me
encourage their children to
By doing this
5.First of all, I would like to suggest you should ______________________________________(试着和父母沟通) even if it is not easy.
6.I think it's necessary for you to ___________________ (向家人寻求帮助) when you are in trouble.
try to communicate with your parents
turn to your family
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,最近你收到了笔友Lucy的来信,诉说自己和父母在学习问题上经常发生争吵。请给她回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;2.给出建议;
3.安慰对方。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文:
Dear Lucy,
I'm more than sorry to hear that your parents and you often quarrel about your study. I can understand your feelings, since this has happened to me before.Here are some tips to improve this situation.
First, you should understand that it is because your parents care about you that they pay much attention to you and your study. Besides, you should look for a time to talk about the problems in your study calmly and patiently. And then you can solve them. What's the most important is that all of you should have a good mood and mentality, which can create a relaxing environment for you to do any thing.
Hope everything is going well. Look forward to hearing your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头、结尾续写一个60词左右的片段。
In a quiet suburb, there lived a high school student named Liam.He was the son of two chemists.Naturally, everyone thought Liam would follow in his parents' footsteps and pursue (追求) a career in science and become a scientist.However, Liam's heart was to put into something entirely different — he was passionate about literature and writing.
Each morning, Liam would wake up to hear his parents discuss the latest scientific discoveries and development over breakfast.One particular morning, Liam was upset, as the task of selecting his high school courses weighed heavily on him.He knew his parents would expect him to fill his schedule with science and math classes and engage in work related to science.At breakfast, Liam's mother noticed his sadness and asked, “Is everything alright, Liam?” Liam hesitated (犹豫) but then replied, “I'm just thinking about my course selection for next semester.” His father cut in, “You should consider more science courses.They will prepare you for a great career in science, just like us.”
Throughout the day, the thought of disappointing his parents troubled Liam.He loved and respected them but felt hesitated between their expectations and his own ambition.That afternoon, Liam met his best friend, Sam, at their favorite cafe.“Liam, you seem worried.What's on your mind?” Sam asked.Liam admitted, “I'm struggling with course selection.My parents want me to focus on science, but I really want to take more literature and writing classes.” Sam listened carefully and comforted him, “Liam, it's important to follow your passion.Maybe you should talk to your parents about what you really want.They might be more understanding than you think.”
Encouraged by Sam's words, Liam decided to have an honest conversation with his parents that night.
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Liam's mother reached out and took his hand, saying, “Liam, we only want what's best for you.If literature is truly your calling, we will support you.”
参考范文:
Encouraged by Sam's words, Liam decided to have an honest conversation with his parents that night.Over dinner, he bravely expressed his love for literature and his desire to explore that field in high school.Liam's parents listened intently, their expressions softening as they began to understand the depth of his passion.They saw the fire in their son's eyes as he spoke about the power of words and the magic of storytelling.Liam's mother reached out and took his hand, saying, “Liam, we only want what's best for you.If literature is truly your calling, we will support you.”
[阅读拓展训练]
As you grow rapidly through your teenage years, you will experience a lot of changes.The changes may seem difficult and they may seem to happen quickly.Don't panic! You will deal successfully with them! You are a young adult now!
With more responsibility, you will find more freedom to make your own choices.This is a time to be well informed about your choices so that you can make healthy balanced decisions that will help shape your future.You may already know your career path or you may have no idea at all what you want to do.Both situations are fine! Work hard and the right opportunity will present itself to you.
Young adulthood means greater freedom and more choices.You will probably want to be independent.But try not to shut your family out of your life.You should learn to think of others even though you are old enough to look after yourself.Your family have been with you since you came into this world.
It is also perfectly natural in this time for you to spend more time with your friends than your family.Choose your friends wisely.A true friend will stand by you no matter what happens.This period is part of the life cycle.There are some people who will be with you throughout life's journey and there will be some people with whom you part and go separate ways. Leaving school can be hard.The reality is that you may not ever see all of your classmates again.
You are a young adult.It is your life.No one can live it for you.The choices that you make from now on will be your choices.So making the right choices will be important to you.Life is for living.Enjoy your life wisely!
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了每个人在成长的过程中都需要经历的过程:学会承担责任,学会独立,懂得自己做出正确的选择。
1.Who do the underlined words “some people” in Paragraph 4 probably refer to?
A.Your parents. B.Your classmates.
C.True friends. D.Your relatives.
解析:词义猜测题。根据第四段中的“A true friend will stand by you no matter what happens.”可知,“some people”指代“真正的朋友”。
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2.As far as the author is concerned, what is teenage years?
A.It is a period of complete freedom.
B.It is too hard for young people to get through.
C.It is an important time for the young to make the right choices.
D.It is a very important period for young students to leave their parents.
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解析:细节理解题。根据第二段第二句“This is a time to be well informed about your choices ... help shape your future.”和最后一段中的“So making the right choices will be important to you.”可知,对于青少年来说,青少年时期是他们做出正确选择的关键时期。
3.Who is the passage mainly intended for?
A.Teenagers. B.Teachers.
C.Young parents. D.Adults.
解析:推理判断题。根据本文关键词“teenage years”可知,作者写这篇文章是为了帮助青少年了解青少年时期该如何做,所以主要是写给青少年的。
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4.What's the best title for this passage?
A.The Choices in Life
B.The Key to Success
C.Say Goodbye to the Past
D.Becoming a Young Adult
解析:标题归纳题。根据第一段最后两句可知,本文主要告诫青少年要成长起来,独立解决问题,成为一个成年人,承担起成年人的责任,故D项适合作本文标题。
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本课结束
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