专题13 期中复习之书面表达20篇（深圳期中真题）-2024-2025学年九年级英语上学期期中复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（牛津深圳版）

期中复习之书面表达20篇 (深圳期中真题) 1．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）文化是一个国家、一个民族的灵魂，青少年应做文化自信的践行者。为了让青少年传承中华传统文化，增强文化自信，你的学校在9月份举办了传统文化月活动，请你给学校的微信公众号投稿，介绍本次活动，并谈谈青少年应该如何传承传统文化。要点如下： 内容 ①庆祝中秋节：制作月饼、……（自行补充一点） ②传统文化作品展：书法作品、……（自行补充一点） 评价 ①丰富校园生活； ②……（自行补充一点） 建议 ②积极参加传统文化活动；②……（自行补充一点） 要求： 1. 词数100词左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：书法作品：calligraphy works In order to pass down traditional Chinese culture and enhance cultural confidence, our school ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 2．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）岭南文化的优秀代表—“醒狮”是一种表演形式，展现了勇敢无畏的民族品质。请你为班级英语文化角的“人物”板块写一篇短文，介绍一位醒狮（Lion Dance）。 要点： 黄钦添 基本信息 男，58岁，黄飞鸿第五代传承人。 经历 1. 自幼习武； 2. 31岁创立首支职业舞狮队； 3. 在50多个国家演出，团队荣获“世界狮王（L sin King）称号”。 传承醒狮文化 制作舞狮电影；进校表演授课；…… 你的评价 …… 参考词汇：武术martial art第五代传承人；the fifth-generation inheritor。 要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺； 2. 文中不得使用真实的校名和姓名； 3. 80词以上，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Lion Dance, standing for Lingnan culture, is a kind of performance. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李华,你的英国笔友David在邮件中向你求助,请你为他学校即将举办的“中国传统文化周”策划一些包含中国元素的活动,请你写一封邮件回复他,邮件内容须包含以下要点: 1. 对该活动的看法（两点）; 2. 对活动内容的建议,如欣赏京剧表演、学剪纸等（至少三条）; 3. 对成功举办该活动的祝福. 要求: 1. 信中不得出现真实校名和姓名; 2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确; 3. 不少于80词. Dear David, I’m very glad to learn that the Chinese Traditional Culture Week will be held in your school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）深圳辉煌中学是一所五育并举的学校，10月学校将举办丰富多彩的校园活动，假如你是学生李华，是辉煌中学的一名学生，你所在的学校将举行一系列的校园活动。请根据以下提示，写一个倡议书，介绍学校活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加。 要点： 1．目的：丰富校园生活，发展多元文化 2．内容：1）大合唱比赛    2）美食节    3）…补充一点 3．你的号召与倡议 要求： 100字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数内； 参考词汇：enrich v.丰富    diversified cultures多元文化 Dear friends, Our school attaches great importance to the development of students’ comprehensive quality. In October, there will be many great events. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 5．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）凡人微光，处处闪烁，初中生活即将结束，在这三年里，在我们平凡的生活中有很多值得我们感谢的人。请以“The person I thank most”为题，写一篇短文介绍你最感谢的人。 内容要点： 1. 谁是你最想感谢的人； 2. 感谢他/她的理由。 注意事项： 1. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 短文须包含内容要点中的所有信息 (不要逐字翻译)，可适当发挥； 3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。 The person I thank most There are many people that have helped me in the past three years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）10月5日，日本东京电力公司宣布，已于当日启动第二批福岛核污染水排海工作。众所周知，向海洋排放核废水对海洋环境十分有害。假如你是李华，请你给学校的英语报写一篇演讲稿，介绍此举的危害，并呼吁同学们一起保护海洋。（提示词语：核废水 nuclear waste water) 要点： 1.向海洋排放核废水的危害； 2.我们可以如何保护海洋，如不往海洋倾倒垃圾……(至少写出三条措施)； 3.你的观点。 1.80个词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.适当增加细节，文章条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 How to protect the sea On October 5, Tokyo Electric Power Company announced that it had launched the second batch of Fukushima nuclear waste water discharging into the sea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍我国首位戴眼镜执行飞行任务的航天员桂海潮。 简介 1986年11月出生于云南，毕业于北京航空航天大学； 主要经历 1. 2003年观看杨利伟进入太空，梦想将来可以进入太空； 2. 2005年进入北京航空航天大学学习； 3. 2018年参加航天员选拔，并于2023年7月进入太空。 感悟 ……（请补充至少2点） 注意：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词：北京航空航天大学Beihang University；选拔test。 Have you heard about Gui Haichao? Below is some detailed information about him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s learn from Gui. 3．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）步入初三，学生与家长们都倍感压力，在学习与生活方面都容易发生争吵。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jack就有这方面的烦恼，他给你写信说他跟父母关系不好，并向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jack回信，给他一些关于如何与父母沟通的建议。 一、分析可能出现问题的诱因 1.彼此都很忙碌，没有沟通 2.父母制定很多规矩 3.请自行发挥一点 二、提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施 1.在父母方便的时候和他们谈谈 2.请自行发挥至少一点 要求：100 词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数内，可适当增加细节。 Dear Jack, Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。你们学校将举办英语征文展示活动，请你根据所给思维导图的提示，以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文,  谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80 (标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 How to Communicate with Our Parents Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是南华中学英语校报的编辑李华老师，该校九年级学生王小明向校报的Problems & Advice 栏目写的一封求助信，信中提及进入九年级以来，如作业太多、感到焦虑、无法平衡娱乐与学习的关系等问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，提出你的建议和解决方法。 内容要点： 1. 表示理解、给予安慰； 2. 提出合理的建议和解决方法： ①做好时间安排、不要过于焦虑； ②不要熬夜，做到劳逸结合； ③请你补充一点相关内容…… 3. 希望以上建议能够对该生有帮助。 写作要求： 1. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 表达得体，标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇：balance between work and rest 平衡学习与休息；pressure / stress n. 压力 Dear Wang Xiaoming I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper at Nanhua Middle School. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 1．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在学习中不断提高自我管理能力，以便更好地提升自己。请以“Learning to Manage Ourselves in Study”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 结合实际，谈谈在学习中提高自我管理能力的重要性。 2. 列举在学习中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。 3. 发出“在学习中提高自我管理能力”的号召。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。 2. 词数80~100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇： efficiency 效率 Learning to Manage Ourselves in Study Study plays an important part in our teenagers’ lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, the earlier we manage ourselves in study, the better it is for our future. 2．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）最近，教育部公布了“双减”政策，受到了家长和学生的广泛欢迎。请你根据要点提示，写一篇短文介绍这个政策的益处。 要点： 1. 减轻学生作业负担和校外培训负担； 2. 这个政策的益处： ①省下父母的培训费用； ②学生有更多的自主时间； ③考生自由发挥，至少补充一点。 提示词：双减double reduction 校外培训：off-campus tutoring 要求： 1. 80词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 As we all know, there is a hot policy on double reduction discussed among people. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, double reduction brings us many benefits. I hope it will be put into effect soon. 3．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到焦虑不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，安抚他的焦虑情绪，并谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些建议。 建议要点： 1. 经常做户外活动； 2. 少用电子产品； 3. 坚持做眼保健操； 4. …… 注意事项： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：户外活动 outdoor activities，电子产品 electronic products Dear Mike, I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是英语校报的李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信。他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信。说明Ben的问题。提出你的建议并陈述理由。 Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少，感觉孤独 1.参加学校社团——结识更多朋友 2. ……（请你补充） 英语单词难记 1.多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词 2. ……（请你补充） 要求： 1.回信应包含提示中所有要点； 2.词数80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是心理辅导老师Miss Wang，你收到初三学生王梅的来信。信中提到，双减政策下，给学生减负，作业量减少，但中考压力仍然存在。在学校，大多数时间就是待在教室；放学回家，完成作业后时间不知如何安排。同时父母也不让看电视，上网，跟父母的沟通交流也比较少。因此，这样的初三生活让她很焦虑和苦恼。 针对王梅的来信，请根据下面提示和要求，用英语给李华回信。 内容：1. 上课认真听讲，提高学习效率，课后自我提升； 2. 按时完成作业，保证每天必要的放松，如跑步，听音乐； 3. 多与父母沟通； 4. ……（给出自己的建议，至少一条） 要求：1. 语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整 2. 要求80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥 提示词：1. 提高学习效率  improve your study efficiency   2. 减少压力  reduce stress 3. 自我提升  enhance yourself in study Dear Wang Mei, Thank you for your letter. I realize that you needed help when I read your letter … ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Miss Wang 6．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）生活中总会有一些让我们感动的事情。可能是父母为我们做的一顿丰盛晚餐，也可能是我们生病时朋友的一句温暖问候……那么最让你感动的事情是什么呢？请根据下面的提示，以“The thing that touched me most”为题写一篇英语短文。 提示：1. Which thing touched you most? 2. How did the thing happen? 3. What do you think of the thing? 要求：1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 The thing that touched me most In our lives, there’s always something that touches us a lot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）Peter是某国际学校初三学生，他发现自己最近很难与父母沟通，于是写信请求the agony aunt的帮助。假设你是the agony aunt，Zhang Li，请你给Peter写一封信。 内容如下：1.列举常见的青少年与父母的分歧，（如：在发型和服式、玩电脑手机等）并简单分析原因； 2.提出两至三种缓和关系的具体建议。 要求：1.80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 3.文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。 Dear Peter, I have read your letter and learnt about your problems. Teenagers often argue with their parents as they are growing up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With your efforts, I hope you can find a way to get along better with your parents. Yours, Zhang Li 8．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假定你是Peter，你的英国朋友Jackson听说你的学校最近建立了“流动书吧 Bookmobile”，他很感兴趣。他希望你能写一封邮件详细介绍“流动书吧”。 要点： 1.“流动书吧”出现原因：鼓励阅读； 2.“流动书吧”的优点：随取随放等(自行发挥1—2点)； 3.你的使用感受。 要求： 1.80词左右，开头语给出，不计入总词数内； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Jackson, You told me that you are interested in the Bookmobile. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Peter 9．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）你校英语校报有一个名为Just Ask的专栏。平日你校学生会将自己的困惑投稿到这个专栏，小编则需对投稿进行回复。假设你是李华，恰好是这个专栏的小编。近日你收到一封来自Amanda的投稿，现请你阅读此封投稿并回复。 I have had a lot of arguments(争吵) with my parents since I became a ninth-grader. We argue about different things but mostly about my schoolwork. For example, I am never allowed to use the mobile phone because they want me to pay full attention to my study. I feel quite uncomfortable and this terrible feeling is like a dark cloud above me, so we just keep arguing. I know it is wrong but what should I do? Yours, Amanda 回信的开头已给出。回信需涵盖以下要点： 1. 表示关心与慰问； 2.分析学生提到的问题； 3.针对问题给出合理的建议； 1)告诉父母你的真实感受，被控制的感觉让你感到不舒服； 2)制定合理使用手机的规则，…… 3)…… 要求： 1. 词数要求80词以上； 2.不得出现真实人名、校名等； 3.需恰当的自我发挥，使文章更完整。 提示词汇：充满压力的 stressed        合理地reasonably Dear Amanda, I am sorry to hear that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 20．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是校报Problems & Advice板块的编辑Jerry，你收到了来自本校同学Emily的一封求助信，请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出合理建议。 问题 建议 家庭方面 父母经常出差，感到孤独 和父母多分享你的感受 学习方面 英语学习困难，害怕在同学们面前发言 多向同学、老师求助 友谊方面 与好朋友发生了争吵 …… 要求： 1. 包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 词数100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 5. 参考词汇：出差 take business trip；争吵 quarrel         Dear Emily, I feel sorry to hear of your problems. In your letter, you said that_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jerry 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 期中复习之书面表达20篇 (深圳期中真题) 1．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）文化是一个国家、一个民族的灵魂，青少年应做文化自信的践行者。为了让青少年传承中华传统文化，增强文化自信，你的学校在9月份举办了传统文化月活动，请你给学校的微信公众号投稿，介绍本次活动，并谈谈青少年应该如何传承传统文化。要点如下： 内容 ①庆祝中秋节：制作月饼、……（自行补充一点） ②传统文化作品展：书法作品、……（自行补充一点） 评价 ①丰富校园生活； ②……（自行补充一点） 建议 ②积极参加传统文化活动；②……（自行补充一点） 要求： 1. 词数100词左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：书法作品：calligraphy works In order to pass down traditional Chinese culture and enhance cultural confidence, our school ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文 In order to pass down traditional Chinese culture and enhance cultural confidence, our school held the Traditional Culture Month event in September. To celebrate Mid-Autumn Festival, we made moon cakes and listened to the stories about Mid-Autumn Festival. We also visited the exhibition of traditional cultural works: calligraphy works and Paper Cuttings works. Through this activity, not only did it enrich the students’ leisure life, but it also gave them a deeper understanding of traditional culture. I suggest that all of us actively participate in traditional cultural activities and contribute to the inheritance of traditional culture. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当填加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起介绍学校举办了传统文化月活动； 第二步，具体介绍本次活动的内容； 第三步，谈谈你的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ②gave sb a deeper understanding of使某人对……有了更深的了解 ③participate in参与 [高分句型] ①Through this activity, not only did it enrich the students’ leisure life, but it also gave them a deeper understanding of traditional culture. (not only…but also…用法) ②I suggest that all of us actively participate in traditional cultural activities and contribute to the inheritance of traditional culture. (宾语从句) 2．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）岭南文化的优秀代表—“醒狮”是一种表演形式，展现了勇敢无畏的民族品质。请你为班级英语文化角的“人物”板块写一篇短文，介绍一位醒狮（Lion Dance）。 要点： 黄钦添 基本信息 男，58岁，黄飞鸿第五代传承人。 经历 1. 自幼习武； 2. 31岁创立首支职业舞狮队； 3. 在50多个国家演出，团队荣获“世界狮王（L sin King）称号”。 传承醒狮文化 制作舞狮电影；进校表演授课；…… 你的评价 …… 参考词汇：武术martial art第五代传承人；the fifth-generation inheritor。 要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺； 2. 文中不得使用真实的校名和姓名； 3. 80词以上，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Lion Dance, standing for Lingnan culture, is a kind of performance. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Lion Dance, is a kind of performance. Huang Qintian, has been devoting himself to keeping Lion Dance alive for almost 30 years. Huang, has practised martial art since his childhood, he set up the first professional Lion Dance group. Their performance was so popular that it was shown in more than fifty countries, the fame and skill are not where his dream lies. His real wish is to encourage more people to learn about Lion Dance, but he also passed down the culture and spirit through lectures and performances at different campuses. He also shared his experience of learning Lion Dance online. From his story, protecting and inheriting our precious cultural heritage. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍黄钦添的信息，经历和如何传承醒狮文化。 第二步，再叙述你的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①devote to 致力于 ②set up 建立，创办 ③pass down 传承 [高分句型] ①Their performance was so popular that it was shown in more than fifty countries, the fame and skill are not where his dream lies.（so ……that引导的结果状语从句） ②His real wish is to encourage more people to learn about Lion Dance.（动词不定式作表语） 3．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李华,你的英国笔友David在邮件中向你求助,请你为他学校即将举办的“中国传统文化周”策划一些包含中国元素的活动,请你写一封邮件回复他,邮件内容须包含以下要点: 1. 对该活动的看法（两点）; 2. 对活动内容的建议,如欣赏京剧表演、学剪纸等（至少三条）; 3. 对成功举办该活动的祝福. 要求: 1. 信中不得出现真实校名和姓名; 2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确; 3. 不少于80词. Dear David, I’m very glad to learn that the Chinese Traditional Culture Week will be held in your school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David, I’m very glad to learn that the Chinese Traditional Culture Week will be held in your school. It’s a fantastic opportunity to introduce Chinese culture to your peers and to deepen the understanding of China’s rich heritage. Firstly, I believe this event will not only broaden students’ horizons but also foster cultural exchange between the East and the West. Secondly, it’s a great chance for students to appreciate the diversity of world cultures. As for the activities, I suggest the following: Organize a Peking Opera performance to showcase the unique charm of Chinese opera. Set up a paper-cutting workshop where students can learn the art of paper-cutting and create their own designs. Hold a Chinese calligraphy session to teach the basics of Chinese characters writing and their aesthetic principles. I also recommend a tea ceremony demonstration to experience the elegance of Chinese tea culture and a traditional Chinese music concert to enjoy the sounds of ancient Chinese instruments. I’m confident that with careful planning, the Chinese Traditional Culture Week will be a great success. I wish you all the best in organizing this event and look forward to hearing all about it. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 ③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意“要求”中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，表达自己对于该活动的看法； 第二步，列举建议的活动项目，欣赏京剧表演、学剪纸、学习中国书法，同时建议可以展示中国茶文化和中国传统乐器和音乐； 第三步，表达自己对于这个活动胜利举办的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①heritage遗产 ②broaden one’s horizons扩展某人的视野 ③foster cultural exchange促进文化交流 ④diversity of world cultures世界文化多样性 ⑤aesthetic 审美 ⑥look forward to期待 [高分句型] ① It’s a fantastic opportunity to introduce Chinese culture to your peers and to deepen the understanding of China’s rich heritage. 两个不定式短语作定语。 ② I believe this event will not only broaden students’ horizons but also foster cultural exchange between the East and the West. 这里使用了“not only... but also...”结构来并列两个目的或效果。 4．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）深圳辉煌中学是一所五育并举的学校，10月学校将举办丰富多彩的校园活动，假如你是学生李华，是辉煌中学的一名学生，你所在的学校将举行一系列的校园活动。请根据以下提示，写一个倡议书，介绍学校活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加。 要点： 1．目的：丰富校园生活，发展多元文化 2．内容：1）大合唱比赛    2）美食节    3）…补充一点 3．你的号召与倡议 要求： 100字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数内； 参考词汇：enrich v.丰富    diversified cultures多元文化 Dear friends, Our school attaches great importance to the development of students’ comprehensive quality. In October, there will be many great events. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Dear friends, Our school attaches great importance to the development of students’ comprehensive quality. In October, there will be many great events. In order to enrich campus life and develop diversified cultures, our school will hold a variety of campus activities in October. On October 5th, there will be a choir competition. If you like singing, it will be a good choice. Food festival is on October 14th. You can taste a lot of our local food. Of course, you can also make some food by yourself during the event. There will be a Reading Festival on October 30th. You can share some of your favorite books and thoughts. I hope you will take an active part in these activities. You will have a great time. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；   ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出学校10月份的活动； 第二步，介绍学校10月份的活动有哪些； 第三步，呼吁学生积极参与。   [亮点词汇]   ①in order to为了 ②a lot of许多 ③take part in参与 [高分句型]   ①In order to enrich campus life and develop diversified cultures, our school will hold a variety of campus activities in October.（动词不定式作目的状语）   ②If you like singing, it will be a good choice.（条件状语从句） 5．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）凡人微光，处处闪烁，初中生活即将结束，在这三年里，在我们平凡的生活中有很多值得我们感谢的人。请以“The person I thank most”为题，写一篇短文介绍你最感谢的人。 内容要点： 1. 谁是你最想感谢的人； 2. 感谢他/她的理由。 注意事项： 1. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 短文须包含内容要点中的所有信息 (不要逐字翻译)，可适当发挥； 3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。 The person I thank most There are many people that have helped me in the past three years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The person I thank most   There are many people that have helped me in the past three years. Among them, the person I thank most is my mother. My mother is very unselfish and patient. She has always been there for me, supporting and encouraging me in everything I do. When I faced difficulties in my studies, she patiently helped me understand the subjects. She also took care of me when I was sick and made sure I had everything I needed. Her love and dedication have made me a better person. I am truly grateful for all she has done for me. I hope my mother will always be young and healthy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，引出最想感谢的人； 第二步，具体阐述感谢的理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达对她的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①in the past过去 ②take care of照顾 ③make sure确保 [高分句型] ①There are many people that have helped me in the past three years. (that引导的定语从句) ②When I faced difficulties in my studies, she patiently helped me understand the subjects. (when引导的时间状语从句) 1．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）10月5日，日本东京电力公司宣布，已于当日启动第二批福岛核污染水排海工作。众所周知，向海洋排放核废水对海洋环境十分有害。假如你是李华，请你给学校的英语报写一篇演讲稿，介绍此举的危害，并呼吁同学们一起保护海洋。（提示词语：核废水 nuclear waste water) 要点： 1.向海洋排放核废水的危害； 2.我们可以如何保护海洋，如不往海洋倾倒垃圾……(至少写出三条措施)； 3.你的观点。 1.80个词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.适当增加细节，文章条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 How to protect the sea On October 5, Tokyo Electric Power Company announced that it had launched the second batch of Fukushima nuclear waste water discharging into the sea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to protect the sea On October 5, Tokyo Electric Power Company announced that it had launched the second batch of Fukushima nuclear waste water discharging into the sea. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. If the sea is polluted, Marine life will be dying. Humans can also get sick or die from eating seafood. In order to protect the ocean and ourselves, first of all, we can’t throw litter into the ocean. We also need to publicize the importance of protecting the Marine environment. All of us need to volunteer to protect the Marine environment. The earth is our common home, and we must protect it together. Let’s do it together. Our world will get better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“How to protect the sea”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍向海洋排放核废水的危害； 第二步，介绍我们可以如何保护海洋； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①get sick生病 ②die from死于 ③first of all首先 ④get better and better变得越来越好 [高分句型] ①If the sea is polluted, Marine life will be dying.（条件状语从句） ②In order to protect the ocean and ourselves, first of all, we can’t throw litter into the ocean.（动词不定式作目的状语） 2．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍我国首位戴眼镜执行飞行任务的航天员桂海潮。 简介 1986年11月出生于云南，毕业于北京航空航天大学； 主要经历 1. 2003年观看杨利伟进入太空，梦想将来可以进入太空； 2. 2005年进入北京航空航天大学学习； 3. 2018年参加航天员选拔，并于2023年7月进入太空。 感悟 ……（请补充至少2点） 注意：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词：北京航空航天大学Beihang University；选拔test。 Have you heard about Gui Haichao? Below is some detailed information about him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s learn from Gui. 【答案】例文： Have you heard about Gui Haichao? Below is some detailed information about him. Gui Haichao is the first astronaut with glasses to enter space. He was born in Yunnan in November 1986. In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. He wanted to travel into space in the future. He then began to study hard. In 2005, he went to study in Beihang University. In 2018, he took part in the test of becoming an astronaut. After years of hard work, his dream finally came true in July 2023. From my perspective, “No pain, no gain”, as the saying goes. Only with hard work can we succeed. In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it. Let’s learn from Gui. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格所给提示，介绍有关桂海潮的人生经历和你的感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步：作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文； 第二步：介绍桂海潮的人生经历（受到杨利伟的鼓舞，刻苦学习，努力实现航天梦），注意增加细节，使行文连贯； 第三步：说说你的感悟是什么，并号召大家向桂海潮学习。 [亮点词汇] ①enter space进入太空 ②took part in参加 ③came true实现 ④no pain, no gain一分耕耘，一分收获 [高分句型] ①In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. (while引导的时间状语从句） ②In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it. (if引导条件状语从句) 3．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）步入初三，学生与家长们都倍感压力，在学习与生活方面都容易发生争吵。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jack就有这方面的烦恼，他给你写信说他跟父母关系不好，并向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jack回信，给他一些关于如何与父母沟通的建议。 一、分析可能出现问题的诱因 1.彼此都很忙碌，没有沟通 2.父母制定很多规矩 3.请自行发挥一点 二、提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施 1.在父母方便的时候和他们谈谈 2.请自行发挥至少一点 要求：100 词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数内，可适当增加细节。 Dear Jack, Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. The reason for these problems may be that you are both busy and not communicating with each other. It may also be because parents set many rules. Finally, it may be a generation gap caused by age issues. I suggest you first talk to your parents at their convenience. Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts. Finally, everything has two sides, and it is correct for everyone to have different opinions. As long as it is right, we should accept it seriously. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容给Jack回信，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分析可能出现问题的诱因； 第二步，提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with each other相互交流 ②a generation gap代沟 ③talk to与……交谈 ④be helpful to对……有帮助 [高分句型] ①Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts.（条件状语从句） ②I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.（宾语从句） 4．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。你们学校将举办英语征文展示活动，请你根据所给思维导图的提示，以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文,  谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80 (标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 How to Communicate with Our Parents Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Communicate with Our Parents     Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. However, sometimes we may encounter difficulties when communicating with them. Here are some tips and approaches on how to communicate effectively with our parents.     My parents and I always have different opinions from our daily routines to our future plans. By identifying these areas, we can be more aware of the potential conflicts and find ways to address them. Firstly, it’s important not to get too angry or upset when our opinions differ from our parents’. We should try to stay calm and express our thoughts in a respectful manner. Moreover, we should make an effort to engage in more conversations with our parents. By initiating conversations, we can not only express ourselves but also show that we value their opinions. Last but not least, we need to learn to truly listen to our parents. By actively listening to their thoughts and concerns, we can better understand their point of view and find common ground.     In conclusion, communicating with our parents can sometimes be challenging, but by following these tips, we can improve the quality of our conversations and strengthen our relationships with them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，根据思维导图写出如何和父母交流。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句，引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从和父母之间意见不合的事情以及相应解决方法展开写作； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待和父母能有更好的沟通。 [亮点词汇] ①be aware of 意识到 ②Last but not least最后也是最重要的 ③In conclusion最后 [高分句型] ①Firstly, it’s important not to get too angry or upset when our opinions differ from our parents’. （When引导的时间状语从句） ②By initiating conversations, we can not only express ourselves but also show that we value their opinions. (not only...but also...句式） 5．（23-24九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是南华中学英语校报的编辑李华老师，该校九年级学生王小明向校报的Problems & Advice 栏目写的一封求助信，信中提及进入九年级以来，如作业太多、感到焦虑、无法平衡娱乐与学习的关系等问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，提出你的建议和解决方法。 内容要点： 1. 表示理解、给予安慰； 2. 提出合理的建议和解决方法： ①做好时间安排、不要过于焦虑； ②不要熬夜，做到劳逸结合； ③请你补充一点相关内容…… 3. 希望以上建议能够对该生有帮助。 写作要求： 1. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 表达得体，标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇：balance between work and rest 平衡学习与休息；pressure / stress n. 压力 Dear Wang Xiaoming I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper at Nanhua Middle School. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Wang Xiaoming, I am Li Hua, the editor of the English school newspaper at Nanhua Middle School. I have received your letter asking for advice and understand your stress. It’s normal for you to feel pressure. First, it is important to plan your time carefully. Don’t worry too much, or you won’t have enough courage to face difficulty. Second, I advise you not to stay up late. Try to keep a balance between work and rest. Third, you’d better communicate more with your parents, teachers and classmates. They can offer us some valuable advice. I hope these suggestions will help you to better cope with the stress and anxiety you are facing. Yours truly, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先对对方的来信中提到的问题和困扰表示理解； 第二步，具体针对不同的问题给出一些建议； 第三步，最后总结文章，希望建议能有帮助。 [亮点词汇] ① too much太多 ② stay up熬夜 ③ offer sb sth给某人提供某物 [高分句型] ① It’s normal for you to feel pressure.（it固定句型，不定式作主语） ② I hope these suggestions will help you to better cope with the stress and anxiety you are facing.（宾语从句） 1．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在学习中不断提高自我管理能力，以便更好地提升自己。请以“Learning to Manage Ourselves in Study”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 结合实际，谈谈在学习中提高自我管理能力的重要性。 2. 列举在学习中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。 3. 发出“在学习中提高自我管理能力”的号召。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。 2. 词数80~100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇： efficiency 效率 Learning to Manage Ourselves in Study Study plays an important part in our teenagers’ lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, the earlier we manage ourselves in study, the better it is for our future. 【答案】例文 Learning to Manage Ourselves in Study Study plays an important part in our teenagers’ lives. These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. The combination of management and being managed has improved each student’s participation in class management, enabled them to find their own position in the group, felt their own interests and responsibilities, and greatly stimulated their sense of ownership and responsibility. They can not only manage others but also manage themselves consciously. These student-centered self-management means have enhanced students’ sense of mission, responsibility and trust, and improved the work efficiency of the class. In my daily life, I have a poor sense of time, and sometimes I am lazy. So no matter what I do in the future, I will make a plan and complete it in strict accordance with the plan. At the same time, take the initiative to help others do something. Let’s improve our self-management ability in life together! In short, the earlier we manage ourselves in study, the better it is for our future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文主要要用一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，说明在学习中提高自我管理能力的重要性； ②第二步，举出在学习中自我管理能力薄弱的现象，并提出合理建议； ③第三步，号召大家要在学习中提高自我管理能力。 [亮点词汇] ①the combination of ……的结合 ②sense of mission 使命感 ③at the same time 同时 [高分句型] ①So no matter what I do in the future, I will make a plan and complete it in strict accordance with the plan. (no matter what引导的让步状语从句) ②The combination of management and being managed has improved each student’s participation in class management, enabled them to find their own position in the group, felt their own interests and responsibilities, and greatly stimulated their sense of ownership and responsibility. (多个动词并列作谓语) 2．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）最近，教育部公布了“双减”政策，受到了家长和学生的广泛欢迎。请你根据要点提示，写一篇短文介绍这个政策的益处。 要点： 1. 减轻学生作业负担和校外培训负担； 2. 这个政策的益处： ①省下父母的培训费用； ②学生有更多的自主时间； ③考生自由发挥，至少补充一点。 提示词：双减double reduction 校外培训：off-campus tutoring 要求： 1. 80词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 As we all know, there is a hot policy on double reduction discussed among people. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, double reduction brings us many benefits. I hope it will be put into effect soon. 【答案】例文： As we all know, there is a hot discussion on double reduction among people. According to the policy, students’ homework must be reduced and off-campus tutoring institutions aren’t allowed to have classes on weekends and on holidays. I believe this policy will benefit both students and parents. First, parents don’t have to spend much on off-campus tutoring courses, which will help them save lots of money. Second, we will have more free time to take part in after-school activities, such as joining all kinds of clubs. In addition, the relation between parents and their children will be improved, as there will be less anxiety and pressure. In short, double reduction brings us many benefits. I hope it will be put into effect soon. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“双减”政策的内容； 第二步，根据要点，介绍“双减”政策将会带来的好处，注意自行补充至少一点。 [亮点词汇] ①according to根据 ②free time空闲时间 ③take part in参加 ④such as例如 ⑤in addition此外 [高分句型] ①I believe this policy will benefit both students and parents.（省略that的宾语从句） ②First, parents don’t have to spend much on off-campus tutoring courses, which will help them save lots of money.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③In addition, the relation between parents and their children will be improved, as there will be less anxiety and pressure.（as引导的原因状语从句） 3．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到焦虑不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，安抚他的焦虑情绪，并谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些建议。 建议要点： 1. 经常做户外活动； 2. 少用电子产品； 3. 坚持做眼保健操； 4. …… 注意事项： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：户外活动 outdoor activities，电子产品 electronic products Dear Mike, I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. But don’t worry, eyesight can be restored. As long as you protect it. I can give you some advice. First of all, you need to do outdoor sports often. Secondly, you should use less electronic products, because they are very harmful to your eyesight. Finally, you should keep doing eye exercises, which will help you recover from the damaged eyesight. At the same time, you should have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay healthy. Eyesight is very important to us. I hope your eyesight can be restored soon. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图，对他的视力下降感到遗憾，并安慰他视力是可以恢复的； 第二步，具体阐述保护视力的方法； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望和祝福。 ［亮点词汇］ ①As long as只要 ②First of all首先 ③be harmful to对……有害 ［高分句型］ ①I hope your eyesight can be restored soon.（宾语从句） ②Finally, you should keep doing eye exercises, which will help you recover from the damaged eyesight.（定语从句） 4．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是英语校报的李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信。他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信。说明Ben的问题。提出你的建议并陈述理由。 Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少，感觉孤独 1.参加学校社团——结识更多朋友 2. ……（请你补充） 英语单词难记 1.多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词 2. ……（请你补充） 要求： 1.回信应包含提示中所有要点； 2.词数80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Ben,   I received your letter to the school newspaper and I understand you’re facing some challenges. I’d like to offer some advice to help you out. Firstly, you feel lonely with few friends. I suggest joining school clubs to meet more people. By taking part in these activities, you can make new friends who share your interests. It’s a great way to expand your social circle. Secondly, you have difficulty in remembering English words. Reading English stories and news can be a helpful way. This way, you can learn and remember words in context. Also, practising using these words in conversations or writing will improve your memory and understanding. I hope these suggestions will be useful to you. Remember that it takes time to make friends and improve your language skills. Stay positive and don’t hesitate to step out of your comfort zone. Good luck! Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山写出愿意给Ben提供一些建议； 第二步，分别写出Ben存在的问题并根据问题提出相应的建议； 第三步，表达希望能帮助Ben的美好愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要干某事 ②take part in参加 ③have difficulty in doing sth.在做某事上有困难 ④practise doing sth.练习做某事 [高分句型] ①Also, practising using these words in conversations or writing will improve your memory and understanding.（动名词作主语） ②By taking part in these activities, you can make new friends who share your interests. （who引导的定语从句） ③Remember that it takes time to make friends and improve your language skills.（that引导的宾语从句） 5．（21-22九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是心理辅导老师Miss Wang，你收到初三学生王梅的来信。信中提到，双减政策下，给学生减负，作业量减少，但中考压力仍然存在。在学校，大多数时间就是待在教室；放学回家，完成作业后时间不知如何安排。同时父母也不让看电视，上网，跟父母的沟通交流也比较少。因此，这样的初三生活让她很焦虑和苦恼。 针对王梅的来信，请根据下面提示和要求，用英语给李华回信。 内容：1. 上课认真听讲，提高学习效率，课后自我提升； 2. 按时完成作业，保证每天必要的放松，如跑步，听音乐； 3. 多与父母沟通； 4. ……（给出自己的建议，至少一条） 要求：1. 语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整 2. 要求80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥 提示词：1. 提高学习效率  improve your study efficiency   2. 减少压力  reduce stress 3. 自我提升  enhance yourself in study Dear Wang Mei, Thank you for your letter. I realize that you needed help when I read your letter … ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Miss Wang 【答案】例文 Dear Wang Mei, Thank you for your letter. I realize that you needed help when I read your letter. Now I would like to share something about your problem. During the last school year of your junior high school, studies are very heavy. Therefore, reducing stress seems more important. Meanwhile you should study hard. First, you should listen carefully in class and learn more efficiently. More importantly, you’d better enhance yourself in study. Second, you should do your homework on time but don’t forget to relax yourself. For example, you can listen to music and play sports. Finally, communicating is the best way to solve the problem. Last but not least, you should be confident. After all, you are smart. What a student must do is just to study hard and have fun at school. I am sure you will become a new Wang Mei. I am looking forward to your good news. Yours, Miss Wang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，根据提示内容提出建议； 第三步，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①had better do sth最好做某事 ②on time按时 ③have fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①I realize that you needed help when I read your letter.（that引导宾语从句） ②Therefore, reducing stress seems more important.（动名词作主语） 6．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）生活中总会有一些让我们感动的事情。可能是父母为我们做的一顿丰盛晚餐，也可能是我们生病时朋友的一句温暖问候……那么最让你感动的事情是什么呢？请根据下面的提示，以“The thing that touched me most”为题写一篇英语短文。 提示：1. Which thing touched you most? 2. How did the thing happen? 3. What do you think of the thing? 要求：1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 The thing that touched me most In our lives, there’s always something that touches us a lot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The thing that touched me most In our lives, there’s always something that touches us a lot. That might be a good meal our parents made for us or a warm greeting our friends gave us. However, the thing that touched me most is different. When the COVID-19 pandemic broke out in Wuhan, thousands of doctors and nurses from all over our country arrived there to help in time. They risked their health and even lives to treat the patients. While working, some of them tried not to go to the toilet to save protective coats. And when they were tired, they just took a nap on the floor. For them, saving lives was the most important. Luckily, they were much admired and kindly treated after everything went back to normal. There is no doubt that they are the true heroes of our time. Their spirits have touched me a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中最让你感动的事情的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“最让你感动的事情是什么呢？”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最让你感动的事、事情发生的过程、你对这件事的看法等”几个方面重点介绍最让你感动的事情的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“他们的精神深深打动了我”的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①break out 爆发； ②in time及时； ③try to do sth努力做某事； ④go back to回到。 [高分句型] ①However, the thing that touched me most is different. (that引导定语从句) ②There is no doubt that they are the true heroes of our time. (“There is no doubt that…”句型) 7．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）Peter是某国际学校初三学生，他发现自己最近很难与父母沟通，于是写信请求the agony aunt的帮助。假设你是the agony aunt，Zhang Li，请你给Peter写一封信。 内容如下：1.列举常见的青少年与父母的分歧，（如：在发型和服式、玩电脑手机等）并简单分析原因； 2.提出两至三种缓和关系的具体建议。 要求：1.80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 3.文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。 Dear Peter, I have read your letter and learnt about your problems. Teenagers often argue with their parents as they are growing up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With your efforts, I hope you can find a way to get along better with your parents. Yours, Zhang Li 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I have read your letter and learnt about your problems. Teenagers often argue with their parents as they are growing up.    One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent, he/she likes worring a lot, such as your haircut and wearing style. Besides, you are not allowed to use telephones or  computers. Almost every teenager has the same problem. It’s normal. All these things are part of your life. They want you to grow up healthily and happily. So how can you make things easier on yourself? Just make sure your parents know what you are doing. Get them to know your friends. Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don’t worry about your safety. Say sorry to them when you make mistakes. Take responsibility for what you have done. Talk about your ideas with them. Most of all, try to think about why your parents do this or do that. Some day, when you become a parent, they may be able to help you how to get on with your children. With your efforts, I hope you can find a way to get along better with your parents. Yours, Zhang Li 【详解】① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——青少年在成长过程中经常与父母争吵； 第二步，列举常见的青少年与父母的分歧并简单分析原因； 第三步，提出两至三种缓和关系的具体建议； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about了解 ②such as例如 ③make sure确保 ④talk about sth. with sb和某人谈论某事 [高分句型] ①Just make sure your parents know what you are doing. Get them to know your friends.(祈使句) ②Someday, when you become a parent, they may be able to help you how to get on with your children.(when引导时间状语从句) 8．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假定你是Peter，你的英国朋友Jackson听说你的学校最近建立了“流动书吧 Bookmobile”，他很感兴趣。他希望你能写一封邮件详细介绍“流动书吧”。 要点： 1.“流动书吧”出现原因：鼓励阅读； 2.“流动书吧”的优点：随取随放等(自行发挥1—2点)； 3.你的使用感受。 要求： 1.80词左右，开头语给出，不计入总词数内； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Jackson, You told me that you are interested in the Bookmobile. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Peter 【答案】例文 Dear Jackson, You told me that you are interested in the Bookmobile. I am more than willing to tell you more about it. In order to encourage us to read more books, the school has set up Bookmobile in different places inside our school. I would like to share the advantages of the Bookmobile with you. Firstly, you can pick up any book you like in the Bookmobile freely. Meanwhile, you need to drop one to exchange. Secondly, we students can read books anytime anywhere. Thirdly, it is convenient for us to share the interesting books with our peers. With the Bookmobile, I have developed a good reading habit. What’s more, I have more chances to communicate with my peers about the interesting parts from the books. Therefore, if you have time, don’t hesitate to pay a visit to our school and enjoy the Bookmobile. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Peter 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍学校的“流动书吧”，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，并介绍“流动书吧”出现原因； 第二步，介绍“流动书吧”的优点； 第三步，介绍你的使用感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②pick up捡起 ③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①you can pick up any book you like in the Bookmobile freely.(省略that的定语从句) ②if you have time, don’t hesitate to pay a visit to our school and enjoy the Bookmobile.(if引导的条件状语从句) 9．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）你校英语校报有一个名为Just Ask的专栏。平日你校学生会将自己的困惑投稿到这个专栏，小编则需对投稿进行回复。假设你是李华，恰好是这个专栏的小编。近日你收到一封来自Amanda的投稿，现请你阅读此封投稿并回复。 I have had a lot of arguments(争吵) with my parents since I became a ninth-grader. We argue about different things but mostly about my schoolwork. For example, I am never allowed to use the mobile phone because they want me to pay full attention to my study. I feel quite uncomfortable and this terrible feeling is like a dark cloud above me, so we just keep arguing. I know it is wrong but what should I do? Yours, Amanda 回信的开头已给出。回信需涵盖以下要点： 1. 表示关心与慰问； 2.分析学生提到的问题； 3.针对问题给出合理的建议； 1)告诉父母你的真实感受，被控制的感觉让你感到不舒服； 2)制定合理使用手机的规则，…… 3)…… 要求： 1. 词数要求80词以上； 2.不得出现真实人名、校名等； 3.需恰当的自我发挥，使文章更完整。 提示词汇：充满压力的 stressed        合理地reasonably Dear Amanda, I am sorry to hear that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear Amanda, I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in communicating with your parents. I can totally understand how upset you are right now as I had the similar problem like you before. Here are some useful tips. If your parents are too strict about your schoolwork and you feel feel quite uncomfortable, you should tell your parents your true feeling first. You are supposed to tell them that you feel stressed when being controlled too much. Additionally, in order to make your parents believe in you, it is a good idea to make some rules about using the mobile phone properly. Last but not least, it is no good quarreling with you parents all the time. Why not put yourself into your parents’ shoes when you are angry next time? All in all, through a good communication, everything will be fine! I hope you will find my suggestions helpful! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”中给Amanda建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍给Amanda建议”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容：表示关心与慰问；分析学生提到的问题；针对问题给出合理的建议。 第三步，书写结语表达“希望我的建议很有帮助”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble in doing做某事有困难 ②be too strict about对……要求严格 ③be supposed to应该 [高分句型] ①You are supposed to tell them that you feel stressed when being controlled too much.（that引导的宾语从句中包含when引导的时间状语从句） ②Why not put yourself into your parents’ shoes when you are angry next time?（when引导的时间状语从句） 20．（22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是校报Problems & Advice板块的编辑Jerry，你收到了来自本校同学Emily的一封求助信，请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出合理建议。 问题 建议 家庭方面 父母经常出差，感到孤独 和父母多分享你的感受 学习方面 英语学习困难，害怕在同学们面前发言 多向同学、老师求助 友谊方面 与好朋友发生了争吵 …… 要求： 1. 包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 词数100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 5. 参考词汇：出差 take business trip；争吵 quarrel         Dear Emily, I feel sorry to hear of your problems. In your letter, you said that_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jerry 【答案】例文 Dear Emily, I feel sorry to hear of your problems. In your letter, you said that a few problems troubled you. The following are my suggestions. You mentioned that you were lonely and your parents always took business trips. I suggest that you find some time to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you to study in peace of mind. To solve the problems of your English learning, you should ask your teachers for help if you can’t understand in class, and practise your oral English with your classmates if you are afraid of speaking in front of the whole class. You can also take part in some English corner activities after class. Besides, I’m sorry to hear that you quarreled with your friend. But don’t worry, please remember communication is the most important. Find out the key to the problem and apologize to him/her. I’m sure he/she’ll forgive you soon. Hope the above suggestions can help you, waiting for your good news. Yours, Jerry 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第二人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对方家庭的问题以及建议； 第二步，具体阐述学习和友谊方面的问题，并给出相应的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb for help向某人求助 ②the key to the problem问题的关键 ③I’m sorry to hear that听到这个我很难过 [高分句型] ①I suggest that you find some time to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you to study in peace of mind.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②you should ask your teachers for help if you can’t understand in class（if引导的条件状语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$