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期中复习之书面表达25篇
(广州期中真题)
1.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是知心姐姐Aunt Lina,收到了学生Bob的来信。请你根据以下信件内容撰写一封回信。
要求:1. 请根据Bob遇到的问题谈谈你的看法,然后给出至少两条建议。
2. 要求词数80-100,已给出的部分不算入总词数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Aunt Lina
There have been many problems between me and my parents since I became a Grade Nine student. Whenever I try to stay up late for study, my parents will make me go to bed. Sometimes I fail to finish my homework on time because of that. Moreover, they ask me to run 3000 meters every weekend to stay healthy, but I just want to have a good rest. What should I do now?
Yours,
Bob
Dear Bob,
I’m glad that you trust me and write to me for help. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Aunt Lina
2.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)进入初三以来,你和你的同学都遇到了不少问题,这些问题让你们很苦恼,学校心理学社在校报上开设了一个专栏接收同学们的来稿,并邀请了Aunt Judy为大家解答困惑。作为班长李华,将以邮件的形式发送到校报的邮箱。请根据以下表格提示,陈述你和你同学的问题,并向Aunt Judy寻求帮助和建议。
Students
Problems
Amy
1. 和父母沟通有困难,一沟通就……
2. 父母期望我更好,制定许多规则,让我受不了。比如 (至少举一个例子)
Peter
1. 压力很大,经常考试不合格,……
2. 对运动不感兴趣。
Me
(请补充至少一个问题并谈谈自己的感受)
要求:
①语言通顺,观点明确,书写工整;
②80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
③文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名,可适当发挥。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是Jimmy,请根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍你的家庭生活。
Hello, everyone. My name is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)随着年龄的增长,不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流,各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你和父母的相处情况,不计入总词数。
要点提示:
(1)你与父母相处存在的2个问题;
(2)提出你解决问题的办法;
(3)你的想法。
要求:
(1)文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;
(2)条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80字;
(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是心理咨询老师Anna,最近你收到了一封来自初三学生李华的邮件,内容如下:
Dear Anna,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 9 student in Xinhua High School. Recently, I feel really upset. School work is too much and I have no time to relax myself. But every day when I go back home feeling tired, my parents keep nagging (唠叨) about everything, such as cellphones, homework, exams... It seems that they don’t understand me at all. I feel so breathless that I just avoid talking to them. But this makes our relationship even worse. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice?
请针对李华提出的问题,给他回信(不少于80词),内容包括:
1. 对其处境表示理解;
2. 给出建议(不少于三条);
3. 结束语。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Anna
6.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你叫露西,你的朋友Nick来信中说,他现在升入初三,每次考试成绩都不太理想,希望你能给他提出一些建议和方法,帮助他提高学习成绩。
注意事项:
(1)信的开头和结尾已给出,文中不得出现真实的姓名;
(2)词数 80左右;
(3)提示要点如下:
①制定学习计划;
②上课认真听讲、做笔记;
③认真完成作业;
④充足睡眠和适当运动;
⑤……
Dear Nick,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time these days. The truth is that many junior three students have the same experience as you, so you are not alone.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my above suggestions would help you and you’ll soon adapt yourself to the junior three life.
Yours,
Lucy
7.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)李华十一期间想去杭州看亚运会,但他的父母不同意他去,理由如下:
李华父母担心
如何解决
他不能照顾好自己,无法保证自身安全
你可以告诉他们你的旅行计划,如……
去杭州花费大,家里开支紧张
……
十一期间去杭州的人很多,住宿和吃饭都不方便
……
李华非常郁闷,写信给朋友 Lily 倾诉,请你代Lily写一封回信。
注意事项:
1. 短文须包含上述文中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 不得出现真实的人名或学校名称;
3. 词数在90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
I’ve received your letter recently. I know you have trouble in communicating with your parents. Here are some very useful tips to help you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你收到了网友韩梅梅的来信,就读九年级的她在信中陈述了她的困惑,请根据以下思维导图,进行回信。
Your letter
●Meimei’s problems:
1. worry about study, can’t fall asleep...
2. have trouble making friends, feel lonely...
● Your understanding:
● Your advice:
1. (请你针对问题补充建议)
2. (请你针对问题补充建议)
● Your encouragement:
写作要求;
1. 紧扣主题和提示写作,可适当拓展。
2. 词数80左右(信件的开头已给出,不计入词数)。
3. 不得透露学校名称以及个人姓名等信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Meimei,
I’ve read your letter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容写一封题目为“A Letter to My Parents”的书信,用于投稿。
要点
参考内容
Parents’ care
cook food; look after ...
Parents’ love
trust; advise; encourage
My thanks
...
注意:
1. 文章必须包含三个方面的内容,要点可适当发挥。参考词汇,供选择使用。
2. 词数:80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入词数)。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你收到了网友韩梅梅的来信。就读九年级的她在信中陈述了她的困惑。请根据以下思维导图,进行回信。
写作要求:1. 紧扣主题和提示写作,可适当拓展。
2. 词数80左右(信件的开头已给出,不计入词数)。
3. 不得透露学校名称以及个人姓名等信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Meimei,
I’ve read your letter.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
11.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)良好的家庭教育对青少年的健康成长很重要,许多伟人的成功都得益于父母的教育。请你给学校英语报的“亲子”专栏写一篇短文,分享你所了解到的名人家庭教育“秘笈”, 并分享你认为父母在教育你时做得好的地方以及你的感受。
爱迪生(Edison)的母亲
尊重信任孩子,保护孩子的创造力
阿姆斯特朗(Armstrong)的母亲
鼓励孩子敢于做梦
宋庆龄的父亲
培养孩子的独立精神和解决问题的能力
你父母的做法和你的感受
……
要求:
1)要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2)正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3)100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:cultivate v. 培养;independence n. 自主自立
Family education plays an important role in shaping a child’s character and value. Many successful people benefited a lot from their parents. Here are some of the examples.
12.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)你们小组负责为校报设计一个“暖心互助”的专栏。以下是你们收集到的同学们的普遍烦恼,请根据以下提示,为这个专栏写稿。请补充完整要点,适当拓展。
Problems
担忧学习
?
Advice
1、遇到难题时,向老师、同学求助;
2、学会以良好的方式来放松,比如……
?
Students in our school have some common problems____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike因为家规和父母产生了矛盾,心情很沮丧,并向你求助。请你写一篇英文信件回应他的问题。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My parents set too many rules for me. They always tell me,“Don’t spend so much time playing computer games. You should do something meaningful.” “Don’t stay up late.” “Do some house work.” I’m annoyed(烦恼) . What should 1do?
Yours,
Mike
注意:
1.首先阐明制定家规的意义,再逐条谈谈你对Mike家规的看法,并给他提出至少一条如何与父母交流沟通的建议。
2.要求词数80-100词。开头部分内容不计入总词数。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。
Dear Mike,
Most of the students will meet this kind of problem._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
14.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你发现部分同学在考试之前会出现一些焦虑症状。请你根据下面表格提示用英语写一份发言稿, 向同学们陈述常见的焦虑症状并提出一些建议。
常见焦虑症状:
建议:
1. 紧张
1.与父母和朋友多沟通
2. 睡眠不好
2. ……
3. 食欲不振
3. ……
要求:
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇: symptom 症状 anxiety 焦虑
Hi, boys and girls:
I am going to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among students before exams. Most students ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
15.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是初三学生李华,最近遇到困难需要向知心姐姐Aunt Linda寻求帮助。
内容包括:
1. 描述你遇到的困难(学习、人际、家庭等 其中一个方面);
2. 你的感受;
3. 寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 文章必须包括提示的内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
3. 词数:80词以上。开头结尾已给出,不计算在词数内。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I read your advice page every week and I find your advice very helpful.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤独
1. 参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友
2. ?(请你补充)
英语单词难记,学习英语有困难
1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词
2. ?(请你补充至少两点)
词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数)。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck in everything!
Li Hua
17.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)高尔基说过:“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为提高学生阅读兴趣,你校英语社将组织一场读书分享会。请你根据以下信息,用英文写一篇读书心得与同学分享。心得需包括以下要点:
Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.”
18.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,学校的心理咨询老师。最近,你收到Kate的邮件,来信说她跟父母沟通有困难。请你给她回一封邮件,就如何与父母沟通相处提出建议。内容如下:
要求:1.包含以上全部要点。
2.词数80左右,文章开头及结尾已经给出,不计入总词数内。
3.文章文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息,否则不予评分。
参考词汇:argue with 与……争吵
Dear Kate,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
19.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是英语校报“答读者问”专栏主笔 Aunt Linda。校报收到初三学生 Ben 的来信,他提出了所面临的问题。请你根据 Ben 的来信和以下提示写一封回信,给 Ben 的问题提出你的建议并陈述理由。
提示:
1.上课专心听讲,课后尽快完成作业。
2.适当放松,比如适当运动、听音乐。
3.睡前喝牛奶,有助睡眠。
4.多和父母沟通,告诉他们你的真实感受。
……请补充更多的建议。
注意
1.回信应包括所有要点;
2.词数 80 左右信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数.。
Dear Ben ,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your study, your sleep and your relationship with your parents. But you’re not alone, we all face difficulties sometimes.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是格林社区中心(the Green Community Center)的工作人员,许多居民前来投诉小区某些居民的不文明做法。请你写一封公开信给格林社区的居民,信中包含表格中的内容:提出问题,并就社区出现的不文明现象提出建议和说明原因。
problems
advice
reasons
rubbish everywhere…mess…
pick up…three times a day…
improve(改善)the environment
pet dogs…bark…night …
...(请你补充)
...(请你补充)
car…park…in the pavement(人行道)
...(请你补充)
...(请你补充)
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作,超出范围的内容无效。
Dear residents(居民),
We have noticed the problems in this community.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Green Community Center
21.(21-22九年级上·广东广州·期中)初三学生Sandy面临中考,面对父母和老师的期望,以及每天堆积如山的作业感到非常苦恼。昨天她因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架,最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼,请你根据下列提示,以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。
要求:不少于100词。
提示:
1. 如何舒缓目前的压力;
2. 如何安排好每天的学习和休息;
3. 如何处理与父母的关系。
Dear Sandy,
I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Nancy
22.(21-22九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是李华,你的朋友Tom即将面临第一次月考,然而他却非常焦虑,请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议,帮助他调整心态,轻松迎考。要点如下:
(1)学会放松自己(体育锻炼,听音乐……);
(2)保持健康的饮食(多吃蔬菜……);
(3)保证充足的睡眠。
要求:
(1)词数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
You are not alone. Don’t worry about your study too much.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
23.(2017·广东广州·一模)学校的英文校报征稿,请你以“My Family Life”为题写一篇文章,词数80左右,文章包括以下信息点:
the people in your family
三人:父、母、我
your possessions
电脑、手机、书籍
housework
洗碗、浇花
your family rules
1) 周一至周五晚上不许看电视
2) 下午6点前必须回到家
3) 每次玩电脑游戏不能超过半小时
your feelings about your family life
…
My Family Life
Everyone has a family,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
24.(21-22九年级上·广东广州·期中)你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
注意:1.回信应包括所有要点;
2.(信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少, 感觉孤单
1.参加学校社团(club)—结识更多朋友
2.?(请你补充)
英语单词难记
1.多阅读英语故事、新闻—在运用中学单词
2.?(请你补充)
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
25.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)“劳动教育(labor education)”已纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
内容包括:
注意:
1. 包含以上思维导图内容,可以适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右(信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Labor Education
Labor education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.
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(广州期中真题)
1.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是知心姐姐Aunt Lina,收到了学生Bob的来信。请你根据以下信件内容撰写一封回信。
要求:1. 请根据Bob遇到的问题谈谈你的看法,然后给出至少两条建议。
2. 要求词数80-100,已给出的部分不算入总词数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Aunt Lina
There have been many problems between me and my parents since I became a Grade Nine student. Whenever I try to stay up late for study, my parents will make me go to bed. Sometimes I fail to finish my homework on time because of that. Moreover, they ask me to run 3000 meters every weekend to stay healthy, but I just want to have a good rest. What should I do now?
Yours,
Bob
Dear Bob,
I’m glad that you trust me and write to me for help. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Aunt Lina
【答案】例文
Dear Bob,
I’m glad that you trust me and write to me for help. Most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I’m not surprised at it. And I think your parents really care for you. You’d better communicate with your parents. Staying up late to study will make you sleepy during the day and can’t study well. I think your parents’ advice is right. You should listen to your parents’ advice. In addition, although running is very tiring, it is good for your body. Good habits can help you get good grades. Finally, you can make a schedule with your parents so that you can make better use of your time. I’m sure you can solve this problem.
Yours,
Aunt Lina
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“对Bob的问题给出建议”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示理解Bob遇到的问题。
第二步,劝告Bob听取父母的意见,并给出理由。
第三步,鼓励Bob并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①care for关心
②had better最好
[高分句型]
①In addition, although running is very tiring, it is good for your body.(让步状语从句)
②Finally, you can make a schedule with your parents so that you can make better use of your time.(so that引导目的状语从句)
2.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)进入初三以来,你和你的同学都遇到了不少问题,这些问题让你们很苦恼,学校心理学社在校报上开设了一个专栏接收同学们的来稿,并邀请了Aunt Judy为大家解答困惑。作为班长李华,将以邮件的形式发送到校报的邮箱。请根据以下表格提示,陈述你和你同学的问题,并向Aunt Judy寻求帮助和建议。
Students
Problems
Amy
1. 和父母沟通有困难,一沟通就……
2. 父母期望我更好,制定许多规则,让我受不了。比如 (至少举一个例子)
Peter
1. 压力很大,经常考试不合格,……
2. 对运动不感兴趣。
Me
(请补充至少一个问题并谈谈自己的感受)
要求:
①语言通顺,观点明确,书写工整;
②80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
③文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名,可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Dear Aunt Judy,
Some of us have some problems. And we don’t know what to do. Can you help us?
Amy has difficulty in communicating with her parents. Whenever she talks to her parents, they always expect her to become better. At home, there are lots of family rules. For example, she is not allowed to watch TV at home. She can’t stand those rules.
Peter has too much stress and he can’t sleep well at night. As a result, he feels tired in class. He fears the exams and often fails in the end. He has no interest in sports and sometimes he is afraid of having the P.E. class.
As for me, my biggest problem with my parents was that I wasn’t allowed to spend more time on my hobbies. My parents thought that the hobbies would take up my time and thus they would affect my grades. But hobbies really make me relaxed and I don’t want to give them up. What should I do?
Could you give us some suggestions? We are looking forward to them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称和第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写信目的,寻求帮助;
第二步,陈述艾米的问题;
第三步,陈述彼得的问题;
第四步,叙述自己的问题;
第五步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in the end 最后
②give up 放弃
③take up 占用
[高分句型]
①Whenever she talks to her parents, they always expect her to become better. (whenever引导时间状语从句)
②As for me, my biggest problem with my parents was that I wasn’t allowed to spend more time on my hobbies. (that引导表语从句)
3.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是Jimmy,请根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍你的家庭生活。
Hello, everyone. My name is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone. My name is Jimmy. There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. We are close to each other and we share housework together. My mother cooks the meals and washes all the clothes. My father helps with the dishes and cleans the kitchen after meals and I sweep the floor and iron the clothes. On weekends, we go to the park to have a picnic and take some beautiful pictures. What’s more, we go to the supermarket and cook a great meal together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的家庭生活,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的家庭成员;
第二步,介绍家务分担情况;
第三步,介绍周末家庭活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be close to 与……亲近
②help with 帮助
③on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
My father helps with the dishes and cleans the kitchen after meals and I sweep the floor and iron the clothes. (and连接的并列句)
4.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)随着年龄的增长,不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流,各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你和父母的相处情况,不计入总词数。
要点提示:
(1)你与父母相处存在的2个问题;
(2)提出你解决问题的办法;
(3)你的想法。
要求:
(1)文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;
(2)条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80字;
(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents.
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【答案】例文
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my marks and give me too much pressure. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to get on well with parents, I think we should study hard and try to talk with them more. Here are my suggestions. First, we and our parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us. Third, try to think about our parents more, therefore we will find that we can understand them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥、突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己与父母存在的问题;
第二步,介绍该如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[亮点词汇]
① allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
② pay attention to 注意
③ too much 太多
④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
⑤ get on well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
① I think my parents don’t quite understand me.(宾语从句)
② Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us.(祈使句+or+陈述句)
5.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是心理咨询老师Anna,最近你收到了一封来自初三学生李华的邮件,内容如下:
Dear Anna,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 9 student in Xinhua High School. Recently, I feel really upset. School work is too much and I have no time to relax myself. But every day when I go back home feeling tired, my parents keep nagging (唠叨) about everything, such as cellphones, homework, exams... It seems that they don’t understand me at all. I feel so breathless that I just avoid talking to them. But this makes our relationship even worse. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice?
请针对李华提出的问题,给他回信(不少于80词),内容包括:
1. 对其处境表示理解;
2. 给出建议(不少于三条);
3. 结束语。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Anna
【答案】例文:
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. Don’t worry about your problems too much. Here’s some advice which may help you.
First, you should learn how to relax yourself. Doing more sports such as running and playing table tennis is good for your health. Listening to music is also a good way to relax. Besides, I think you’d better talk with parents often. Share your thoughts and feelings with them. More communication will be helpful for your relationship, and they will understand you. What’s more, as a Grade 9 student, you should be confident in yourself. Never be stressed and nervous about your lessons and exams.
I hope you can stay in good spirits, and study better. Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Anna
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据来信可知李华的问题包括没有时间放松、父母唠叨等,文章可以对于这些问题展开建议;注意条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对其处境表示理解;
第二步,分别从学会放松、多和父母沟通、对自己有信心这几个方面给出建议。
第三步,结束语,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about 担心
②such as 例如
③be good for 对……有好处
④be confident in yourself 对自己有信心
⑤in good spirits 精神很好
[高分句型]
①Here’s some advice which may help you.(定语从句)
②I hope you can stay in good spirits, and study better.(宾语从句)
6.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你叫露西,你的朋友Nick来信中说,他现在升入初三,每次考试成绩都不太理想,希望你能给他提出一些建议和方法,帮助他提高学习成绩。
注意事项:
(1)信的开头和结尾已给出,文中不得出现真实的姓名;
(2)词数 80左右;
(3)提示要点如下:
①制定学习计划;
②上课认真听讲、做笔记;
③认真完成作业;
④充足睡眠和适当运动;
⑤……
Dear Nick,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time these days. The truth is that many junior three students have the same experience as you, so you are not alone.
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I hope my above suggestions would help you and you’ll soon adapt yourself to the junior three life.
Yours,
Lucy
【答案】例文:
Dear Nick,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time these days. The truth is that many junior three students have the same experience as you, so you are not alone.
Learning to make studying plans is very helpful because you can know what you should do every day. You should listen carefully and take notes in class. You can ask questions after class and finish your homework all by yourself. Try not to spend too much time playing computer games. You should also get enough sleep and take exercise to make you energetic. I suggest that you make new friends and ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. If they are in trouble, you should help them. Helping others is helping yourself.
I hope my above suggestions would help you and you’ll soon adapt yourself to the junior three life.
Yours,
Lucy
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇建议信;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,提供一些学习和生活的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对读者当前的困境表示同情,并告知他不是唯一面临这种问题的人;
第二步,提供一些学习和生活的建议,如制定学习计划,认真听课,少玩电脑游戏,保证充足的睡眠和运动,结交新朋友,向老师寻求帮助等;
第三步,鼓励读者帮助他人,并告诉他帮助别人就是帮助自己;
第四步,对读者表示希望,希望他能够尽快适应初三的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①by yourself独自
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③make new friends结交新朋友
[高分句型]
①Learning to make studying plans is very helpful because you can know what you should do every day.(because引导的原因状语从句;what引导的宾语从句)
②I suggest that you make new friends and ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble.(that引导的宾语从句;when引导的时间状语从句)
7.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)李华十一期间想去杭州看亚运会,但他的父母不同意他去,理由如下:
李华父母担心
如何解决
他不能照顾好自己,无法保证自身安全
你可以告诉他们你的旅行计划,如……
去杭州花费大,家里开支紧张
……
十一期间去杭州的人很多,住宿和吃饭都不方便
……
李华非常郁闷,写信给朋友 Lily 倾诉,请你代Lily写一封回信。
注意事项:
1. 短文须包含上述文中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 不得出现真实的人名或学校名称;
3. 词数在90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
I’ve received your letter recently. I know you have trouble in communicating with your parents. Here are some very useful tips to help you.
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’ve received your letter recently. I know you have trouble in communicating with your parents. Here are some very useful tips to help you.
They believe that you cannot take good care of yourself and ensure your own safety. You can tell them your travel plan. You will go to the sports stadium regularly every day to watch games and rest at the hotel on time, instead of wandering around. You will call them every day.
As for spending money in Hangzhou, you will use your vacation to work part-time and earn your own money. In this way, you can support your parents.
Finally, you will book the hotel in advance for food and accommodation. If eating is inconvenient, you may eat some instant noodles or bread.
I hope my advice will help you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,收到来信,表达关切;引出话题:提供一些建议;
第二步,根据表格要点提示,逐一陈述,适当拓展;
第三步,书写总结,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① take care of 照顾
② instead of 代替;而不是
③ in this way 以这种方式
[高分句型]
① I hope my advice will help you. (宾语从句)
② If eating is inconvenient, you may eat some instant noodles or bread. (if引导条件状语从句)
8.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你收到了网友韩梅梅的来信,就读九年级的她在信中陈述了她的困惑,请根据以下思维导图,进行回信。
Your letter
●Meimei’s problems:
1. worry about study, can’t fall asleep...
2. have trouble making friends, feel lonely...
● Your understanding:
● Your advice:
1. (请你针对问题补充建议)
2. (请你针对问题补充建议)
● Your encouragement:
写作要求;
1. 紧扣主题和提示写作,可适当拓展。
2. 词数80左右(信件的开头已给出,不计入词数)。
3. 不得透露学校名称以及个人姓名等信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Meimei,
I’ve read your letter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Meimei,
I’ve read your letter. You said you were worried about your studies and couldn’t fall asleep. You have trouble making friends and feel lonely. Firstly, I suggest that you don’t have to worry about studying. As long as you work hard, no matter what your grades are, you must willingly accept them. If your grades are not very ideal, you can continue to study hard in the future. Secondly, for making friends, I suggest you join some clubs. You can make some friends who share common interests with you. I believe that as long as you believe in yourself, you will definitely succeed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指出朋友面临的问题是什么;
第二步,对朋友的问题给出合理的建议;
第三步,总结并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried about对……担心
② fall asleep入睡
③ as long as只要
[高分句型]
① You said you were worried about your studies and couldn’t fall asleep.(省略that的宾语从句)
② You can make some friends who share common interests with you.(who引导的定语从句)
③ If your grades are not very ideal, you can continue to study hard in the future. (if引导的条件状语从句)
9.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容写一封题目为“A Letter to My Parents”的书信,用于投稿。
要点
参考内容
Parents’ care
cook food; look after ...
Parents’ love
trust; advise; encourage
My thanks
...
注意:
1. 文章必须包含三个方面的内容,要点可适当发挥。参考词汇,供选择使用。
2. 词数:80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入词数)。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
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【答案】例文
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for all the love and support you have given me over the years.
Throughout my childhood, you have been there to cook meals, wash clothes, and take care of me when I was sick. Your endless dedication to my well-being has made me feel safe and secure. I cannot thank you enough for your selfless love and care. You have always trusted me, given me sound advice, and encouraged me to pursue my dreams. Your unwavering support has given me the strength to overcome challenges and believe in myself.
As I grow older, I realize more and more how much I owe to you. I may not always show it, but I am truly grateful for everything you have done for me. Thank you, Mom and Dad, for being the best parents in the world. I love you both dearly.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love from
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据要点提示写作,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的——表达对父母的感谢;
第二步,阐述成长过程中父母的爱和关心;
第三步,再次表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①express my gratitude to向……表达我的感谢
②selfless无私的
③overcome challenges克服挑战
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for all the love and support you have given me over the years.(定语从句)
②As I grow older, I realize more and more how much I owe to you.(状语从句)
10.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你收到了网友韩梅梅的来信。就读九年级的她在信中陈述了她的困惑。请根据以下思维导图,进行回信。
写作要求:1. 紧扣主题和提示写作,可适当拓展。
2. 词数80左右(信件的开头已给出,不计入词数)。
3. 不得透露学校名称以及个人姓名等信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Meimei,
I’ve read your letter.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Meimei,
I’ve read your letter. You said you were worried about your studies and couldn’t fall asleep. You have trouble making friends and feel lonely. Firstly, I suggest that you don’t have to worry about studying. As long as you work hard, no matter what your grades are, you must willingly accept them. If your grades are not very ideal, you can continue to study hard in the future. Secondly, for making friends, I suggest you join some clubs. You can make some friends who share common interests with you. Finally, I believe that as long as you believe in yourself, you will definitely succeed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Meimei存在的问题;
第二步,具体提出解决问题的方法;
第三步,表达对未来的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心……
②have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难
③as long as 只要
[高分句型]
①As long as you work hard, no matter what your grades are, you must willingly accept them.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
②You can make some friends who share common interests with you.(含有限定性定语从句的复合句)
11.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)良好的家庭教育对青少年的健康成长很重要,许多伟人的成功都得益于父母的教育。请你给学校英语报的“亲子”专栏写一篇短文,分享你所了解到的名人家庭教育“秘笈”, 并分享你认为父母在教育你时做得好的地方以及你的感受。
爱迪生(Edison)的母亲
尊重信任孩子,保护孩子的创造力
阿姆斯特朗(Armstrong)的母亲
鼓励孩子敢于做梦
宋庆龄的父亲
培养孩子的独立精神和解决问题的能力
你父母的做法和你的感受
……
要求:
1)要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2)正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3)100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:cultivate v. 培养;independence n. 自主自立
Family education plays an important role in shaping a child’s character and value. Many successful people benefited a lot from their parents. Here are some of the examples.
【答案】例文:
Family education plays an important role in shaping a child’s character and value. Many successful people benefited a lot from their parents. Here are some of the examples.
Edison’s mother respected and trusted her child and protected her child’s creativity. Armstrong’s mother encouraged children to dare to dream. ChingLing Soon’s father cultivated his children’s independence and problem-solving ability. They all had such an excellent way of education that their children were so good. My parents also are great. They usually take me to get close to the nature when they are free. This can broaden my horizons and increase my knowledge. What’ more, they always respect me and let me make my own decisions on some things. I love them very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍三位父母对孩子的教育方式;
第二步,介绍自己父母的教育和自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage to do鼓励去做
②get close to靠近
[高分句型]
①They all had such an excellent way of education that their children were so good. (such...that引导的结果状语从句)
12.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)你们小组负责为校报设计一个“暖心互助”的专栏。以下是你们收集到的同学们的普遍烦恼,请根据以下提示,为这个专栏写稿。请补充完整要点,适当拓展。
Problems
担忧学习
?
Advice
1、遇到难题时,向老师、同学求助;
2、学会以良好的方式来放松,比如……
?
Students in our school have some common problems____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Students in our school have some common problems.
Students are worried about their study and they have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. To solve these problems, they can ask teachers and classmates for help. They can learn to relax in good ways, such as listening to music or exercising.
Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出学生的问题;
第二步,介绍学生担心学习并给出建议;
第三步,介绍学生感到孤独并给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②stay up late熬夜
③such as例如
④talk to与……交谈
[高分句型]
①Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to.(原因状语从句)
②I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.(宾语从句)
13.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike因为家规和父母产生了矛盾,心情很沮丧,并向你求助。请你写一篇英文信件回应他的问题。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My parents set too many rules for me. They always tell me,“Don’t spend so much time playing computer games. You should do something meaningful.” “Don’t stay up late.” “Do some house work.” I’m annoyed(烦恼) . What should 1do?
Yours,
Mike
注意:
1.首先阐明制定家规的意义,再逐条谈谈你对Mike家规的看法,并给他提出至少一条如何与父母交流沟通的建议。
2.要求词数80-100词。开头部分内容不计入总词数。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。
Dear Mike,
Most of the students will meet this kind of problem._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Most of the students will meet this kind of problem. As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along well with my parents. Here is some advice for you.
Your parents talks much, because they care about you. Maybe it is not a good way, but it shows your parents’ love. So I think you should listen to them. If your opinions are different from your parents’, you can communicate with them, and tell them what you are thinking about. If your parents don’t take your advice, just keep silent and give them a smile. I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对Mike家规的看法的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,借用“简单介绍对Mike家规的看法”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“对家规的看法、父母的用意、和父母交流的方法等”几个方面重点介绍对Mike家规的看法的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语:希望自己的建议对迈克有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from和……不同
②get along well with和……相处很好
③care about关心
[高分句型]
①If your opinions are different from your parents’, you can communicate with them, and tell them what you are thinking about.(if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
②I hope what I say here can help you a lot.(what引导的宾语从句)
14.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,你发现部分同学在考试之前会出现一些焦虑症状。请你根据下面表格提示用英语写一份发言稿, 向同学们陈述常见的焦虑症状并提出一些建议。
常见焦虑症状:
建议:
1. 紧张
1.与父母和朋友多沟通
2. 睡眠不好
2. ……
3. 食欲不振
3. ……
要求:
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇: symptom 症状 anxiety 焦虑
Hi, boys and girls:
I am going to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among students before exams. Most students ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
【答案】参考例文
Hi, boys and girls:
I am going to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety students before exams. Most students easily feel tired and even dizzy in class while other students think that they sometimes have a bad sleep and appetite, which really influence their study and life. Therefore, in order to solve these problems, here are some of my advice.
First of all, it’s a good choice to communicate more with your parents and friends, who will always help you when you are in need. In addition, doing some exercise can be also a good idea, which can not only help you build up your bodies but also make you relaxed and refreshed. What’s more, it will be helpful if you can form a habit of going to bed early and getting up early. And a glass of milk can also help you sleep well all night. Last but not least, you will feel happier and more relaxed in your life if you can pick up a hobby. For example, if you like music, you can listen to some beautiful music and sing some for yourselves or other people, which can make you well relax yourselves.
I hope all of these can be of some help to you. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,先根据提示介绍一些常见的焦虑症状,再提出一些相应的建议,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表达期望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb和某人交流
②build up hobbies培养爱好
③form a habit of doing sth养成做某事的习惯
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Most students easily feel tired and even dizzy in class while other students think that they sometimes have a bad sleep and appetite, which really influence their study and life.(while连接两个并列分句,第二个并列分句中含有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②First of all, it’s a good choice to communicate more with your parents and friends, who will always help you when you are in need.(who引导的非限制性定语从句)
③For example, if you like music, you can listen to some beautiful music and sing some for yourselves or other people, which can make you well relax yourselves.(if引导的条件状语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.(23-24九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是初三学生李华,最近遇到困难需要向知心姐姐Aunt Linda寻求帮助。
内容包括:
1. 描述你遇到的困难(学习、人际、家庭等 其中一个方面);
2. 你的感受;
3. 寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 文章必须包括提示的内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
3. 词数:80词以上。开头结尾已给出,不计算在词数内。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I read your advice page every week and I find your advice very helpful.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
Dear Aunt Linda,
I read your advice page every week and I find your advice very helpful.
Recently, I have been facing difficulties in my studies. I find it hard to concentrate and often feel overwhelmed by the workload. It’s been affecting my grades and I’m worried about my future. I feel frustrated and disappointed in myself. I know I’m capable of doing better, but I just can’t seem to get it together. I’m reaching out to you for help. Can you give me some tips on how to improve my study habits? Maybe some strategies to help me focus and manage my time better? I would really appreciate any advice you can offer.
Thank you for always being there for me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:文章必须包括提示内容,可适当发挥,准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等。 [写作步骤]
第一步,承接文章开头。
第二步,介绍自己在学习中遇到的困难,说明感受并寻求帮助。
第三步,表达对知心姐姐的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①concentrate集中
②overwhelmed过度压抑的
③affect影响
④be capable of有能力做某事
⑤reach out联系
⑥strategies策略
⑦manage管理
[高分句型]
①It’s been affecting my grades and I’m worried about my future.(and链接并列句)
②I find it hard to concentrate and often feel overwhelmed by the workload.(it作形式宾语)
16.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤独
1. 参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友
2. ?(请你补充)
英语单词难记,学习英语有困难
1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词
2. ?(请你补充至少两点)
词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数)。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck in everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary everyday, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封信;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的提示内容,适当添加细节,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以“很抱歉听说你无法适应中学生活”来引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从“朋友、学习”两个方面进行描述;
第三步,书写结语。祝福对方好运。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②in return作为回报
③On the other hand另一方面
④In addition另外
[高分句型]
①In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.(who引导定语从句)
②Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.(动名词作主语)
③In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary everyday, it will be easier for you to remember more words.(if引导条件状语从句)
17.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)高尔基说过:“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为提高学生阅读兴趣,你校英语社将组织一场读书分享会。请你根据以下信息,用英文写一篇读书心得与同学分享。心得需包括以下要点:
Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.”
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” I think reading books is good for us. Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. It can improve memory. Reading makes us confident and happy.
Of the books I have read, I like Journey to the West best. Its author is Wu Chengen. The Monkey King or Sun Wukong is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. I am interested in reading the book because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up.
A book that suits you is a better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时根据题干中的提示信息分享自己的读书心得,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细介绍读书的好处;
第二步,具体介绍自己喜欢的一本书,包括书名、作者、内容简介以及喜欢这本书的原因;
第三步,提出读书时的一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①I am interested in reading the book because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②A book that suits you is a better choice. (that引导的定语从句)
18.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是李华,学校的心理咨询老师。最近,你收到Kate的邮件,来信说她跟父母沟通有困难。请你给她回一封邮件,就如何与父母沟通相处提出建议。内容如下:
要求:1.包含以上全部要点。
2.词数80左右,文章开头及结尾已经给出,不计入总词数内。
3.文章文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息,否则不予评分。
参考词汇:argue with 与……争吵
Dear Kate,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Kate,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents.
Nowadays, arguments between teenagers and parents have been a serious problem, which is mainly because of the lack of communication. Besides, many rules are set by parents like forbidding their kids from going out or watching TV. What’s worse, it is the generation gap that leads to lots of misunderstandings between each other.
In order to solve this problem, first of all, it’s necessary for both of you and your parents to listen to each other carefully when you are about to argue with each other. Second, you need to join some activities with your parents together. It can help you know more about their lives and thoughts.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作内容已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的要点,务必写全,在适当的地方使用参考词汇。可适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出青少年与父母争吵的现象。
第二步,针对这一现象进行原因分析,注意要补充一个理由;
第三步,写出针对这些问题的解决办法,注意要补充一个建议;
[亮点词汇]
① a serious problem 一个严重的问题
② the lack of communication 缺少沟通
③ forbid sb. from doing sth. 禁止某人做某事
④ lead to 导致
⑤ generation gap 代沟
[高分句型]
① Nowadays, arguments between teenagers and parents have been a serious problem, which is mainly because of the lack of communication. (which引导非限定性定语从句。)
② What’s worse, it is the generation gap that leads to lots of misunderstandings between each other.(“it is ... that ...”是强调句结构)
19.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是英语校报“答读者问”专栏主笔 Aunt Linda。校报收到初三学生 Ben 的来信,他提出了所面临的问题。请你根据 Ben 的来信和以下提示写一封回信,给 Ben 的问题提出你的建议并陈述理由。
提示:
1.上课专心听讲,课后尽快完成作业。
2.适当放松,比如适当运动、听音乐。
3.睡前喝牛奶,有助睡眠。
4.多和父母沟通,告诉他们你的真实感受。
……请补充更多的建议。
注意
1.回信应包括所有要点;
2.词数 80 左右信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数.。
Dear Ben ,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your study, your sleep and your relationship with your parents. But you’re not alone, we all face difficulties sometimes.
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【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your study, your sleep and your relationship with your parents. But you’re not alone, we all face difficulties sometimes.
The first problem you face is that you have too much homework and have to stay up late. You feel sleepy in class. I think you should listen to teachers in class carefully and finish your homework quickly. You can also ask your teachers for help. Maybe they’ll give you less homework. Drinking milk, listening to music and doing some sports can relax you and have a good sleep. The other problem is that your parents are too strict with you. You’d better talk with them about your ideas. You can tell your parents that too much pressure is not good for your study. They’ll understand you.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请补充更多的建议”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出对方遇到的问题;
第二步,具体阐述为解决对方问题而提出的建议;
第三步,书写结语,希望自己的建议能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②listen to teachers听老师讲课
③ask for help求助
④be strict with sb.对某人要求严格
[高分句型]
①The first problem you face is that you have too much homework and have to stay up late. (包含定语从句和表语从句)
② You can tell your parents that too much pressure is not good for your study. (包含宾语从句)
20.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)假如你是格林社区中心(the Green Community Center)的工作人员,许多居民前来投诉小区某些居民的不文明做法。请你写一封公开信给格林社区的居民,信中包含表格中的内容:提出问题,并就社区出现的不文明现象提出建议和说明原因。
problems
advice
reasons
rubbish everywhere…mess…
pick up…three times a day…
improve(改善)the environment
pet dogs…bark…night …
...(请你补充)
...(请你补充)
car…park…in the pavement(人行道)
...(请你补充)
...(请你补充)
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作,超出范围的内容无效。
Dear residents(居民),
We have noticed the problems in this community.
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Green Community Center
【答案】例文
Dear residents(居民),
We have noticed the problems in this community. The rubbish is everywhere and makes the neighborhood in a mess. Some pet dogs always bark loudly at night. Some people often park their cars in the pavement in the doorway. To deal with these problems, we have the following suggestions.
First, as for those who often leave their rubbish everywhere, they are supposed to throw the rubbish in time. The rubbish must be picked up three times a day. This can improve the environment. Second, for the owners whose dogs are barking at night, they should train his dog to be quiet during the night. In this way, the dog will be quiet. Finally, they must be parked in the parking lot because parking cars on the pavement can be very dangerous for children.
Let’s join our hands together to make the Green Community Center.
Green Community Center
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍社区出现的不文明现象,并提出建议和说明原因,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细介绍社区出现的不文明现象都有哪里;
第二步,根据不同的不文明现象提出相应的建议并说明原因;
第三步,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②pick up捡起
③in the parking lot在停车场
[高分句型]
①To deal with these problems, we have the following suggestions. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②First, as for those who often leave their rubbish everywhere, they are supposed to throw the rubbish in time. (who引导的定语从句)
21.(21-22九年级上·广东广州·期中)初三学生Sandy面临中考,面对父母和老师的期望,以及每天堆积如山的作业感到非常苦恼。昨天她因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架,最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼,请你根据下列提示,以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。
要求:不少于100词。
提示:
1. 如何舒缓目前的压力;
2. 如何安排好每天的学习和休息;
3. 如何处理与父母的关系。
Dear Sandy,
I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Nancy
【答案】例文
Dear Sandy,
I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. Here is my advice.
First, it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure. Second, you can make plans for your everyday life. After you study for about two hours, you can take a walk outside and try to relax. Besides, don’t stay up late. It’s not good for your health. Third, never argue with your parents. You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them. Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas. They will help you find better ways to solve them.
In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents.
Yours,
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要结合提示问题,针对Sandy的问题给出建议,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“给出建议”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“如何舒缓目前的压力、如何安排好每天的学习和休息、如何处理与父母的关系”三个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望对方有一个更快乐、压力更小的生活”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share...with...和……分享……
②take up a hobby养成一种兴趣爱好
③make plans for为……制定计划
④stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them.(and连接并列结构)
②In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
22.(21-22九年级上·广东广州·期中)假设你是李华,你的朋友Tom即将面临第一次月考,然而他却非常焦虑,请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议,帮助他调整心态,轻松迎考。要点如下:
(1)学会放松自己(体育锻炼,听音乐……);
(2)保持健康的饮食(多吃蔬菜……);
(3)保证充足的睡眠。
要求:
(1)词数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
You are not alone. Don’t worry about your study too much.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
You are not alone. Don’t worry about your study too much. You should trust yourself. And here is my advice for you.
First, you should learn how to relax yourself. You can try taking exercise or listening to music. These can help you feel less worried. Second, you should keep a healthy diet. Eat more green vegetables and fresh fruit instead of junk food. Third, you’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep. Enough sleep can provide you with the energy you need and make you active during the day. Finally, you should talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. They can give you some advice on how to relieve the worries.
Follow these tips and you’ll feel better. I hope you can do well in your exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,而且要对要点进行适当的发挥,丰富文章的内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,安慰和鼓励对方不要太焦虑,要相信自己;
第二步,从自我放松、饮食和睡眠等方面给出建议,帮助其缓解考前焦虑;
第三步,书写结语,并表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① trust 相信;信任
② relax oneself 放松自我
③ keep a healthy diet 保持健康饮食
④ instead of 代替,而不是
[高分句型]
① First, you should learn how to relax yourself.(疑问词+不定式作宾语)
② Third, you’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep.(had better do sth. 最好做某事)
23.(2017·广东广州·一模)学校的英文校报征稿,请你以“My Family Life”为题写一篇文章,词数80左右,文章包括以下信息点:
the people in your family
三人:父、母、我
your possessions
电脑、手机、书籍
housework
洗碗、浇花
your family rules
1) 周一至周五晚上不许看电视
2) 下午6点前必须回到家
3) 每次玩电脑游戏不能超过半小时
your feelings about your family life
…
My Family Life
Everyone has a family,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Family Life
Everyone has a family, and there are three people in my family: Dad, mom and I, and we live a very happy life.
We’ve got many things: a big TV, a computer and lots of books. Each of us has a mobile phone so that we can communicate with each other more conveniently. Housework is divided equally in our family, like washing dishes, and watering flowers. The rules of my family are pretty strict. For example, I was not allowed to watch TV during weekdays. I must get back home before 6 o’clock. Time for playing computer games shouldn’t be over thirty minutes.
Even though these rules are strict, I know they just want me to be better. We love each other and support each other. I enjoy my family life very much.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,介绍自己家的规则以及自己对家庭生活的感受。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以用第一、三人称来叙述内容,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段介绍我的家人;第二段叙述我家的财产以及我家的规则;第三段表示我爱我的家庭生活。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
24.(21-22九年级上·广东广州·期中)你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
注意:1.回信应包括所有要点;
2.(信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少, 感觉孤单
1.参加学校社团(club)—结识更多朋友
2.?(请你补充)
英语单词难记
1.多阅读英语故事、新闻—在运用中学单词
2.?(请你补充)
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. You’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You also found it difficult to learn English and hard to memorize the English vocabularies. Reading more English stories and news can help you increase your vocabularies. In addition, you can watch English movies. In this way, it will be easier for you to remember more words.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求针对朋友少感到孤独的问题和英语学习困难的问题给出自己的建议并说明理由。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主,讲述如何解决朋友少感到孤独的问题和英语学习困难的问题,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
25.(22-23九年级上·广东广州·期中)“劳动教育(labor education)”已纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
内容包括:
注意:
1. 包含以上思维导图内容,可以适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右(信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Labor Education
Labor education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.
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【答案】例文:
Labor Education
Labor education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s necessary because it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.
I usually do labor at home, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers. I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits from it.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can also hold competitions about the labor skills to see who is the best. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中所给出的要点,结合自身劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己对劳动教育的看法;
第二步,介绍自己的劳动经历及感受;
第三步,给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②do the dishes 洗餐具
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
④as for 至于
[高分句型]
①I think it’s necessary because it is good for our health.(省略that的宾语从句;because引导原因状语从句)
②As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas.(疑问词+动词不定式)
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