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主题范畴三 人与自然 话题6 环境保护 一阶 素材积累 开头句 waste. 1. [泸教七上U3 P31 ]The Earth provides us with 结尾句 air, water and food. It is our home. 1. [泸教七上U3 P31 lWe must stop doing these We. 2. [泸教九下U3 P35]Our world is in danger. things. It is important for us to protect the Earth must do something to protect the environment. for our future. 3. [泸 教九下 U3 P35]In order to protect the 2. [泸教九 下U3 P35]If we just learn to live in environment, we need to take proper action. new and different ways, we can make a 4. It's our duty to protect the environment. difference. 中间句 3.[外研九 上 M12 Po6]If everyone starts to do 1. [人教九全U13 P97]The river was dirty: Even something, the world will be saved. the bottom of the river was full of rubbish. b谚语 2. [泸教九下U3 P35]We should also recycle as 1. Let the green coexist with us! 让绿色与我们 many things as we can 共存! 3. Our environment is changing for the worse. so it 2. Protecting the environment is good for health is time for us to go green. 保护环境,有益健康。 4. We can turn off the lights as well as other 3. Losing the ecological balance makes it difficult appliances when we are not using them. for human beings to take any steps. 失去生态 5. We should try our best to reduce pollution and 平衡,人类寸步难行。 二阶典例探究 [2024内江改编]假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后,他给你发来邮 件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容,给他回复一封邮件。 要求:1.短文须包含邮件的询问内容,并适当拓展 2.内容积极向上,不少于80词; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名 Dear Li Hua, I had a good time in your school last week. It is so beautiful and clean. I want to know as students, 1. how you make the school green; 2. how you keep the school clean; 3. how you reuse waste; 4. how you save energy. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours. Alan 23 第一步:审题立意定基调 1.文体:应用文: 2.人称:第一人称 3.时态:一般现在时; 4.主题:介绍如何保护校园环境。 第二步:谋篇布局成框架 Boginning 寒I'm gladhuppy/pleasedl/. lo hear from you. Firstly, .. plant trees and flowers... Secondly. . pick up rubbish/garbage and 分点回答 Bxl 如何保护校园环境 out it in the bins... 做法: Ihirlly... Io reuse... Firally, ... turn off... CFnding -期待回信 Tlook forwarcl to your reply. 第三步:语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 Dear Alan, I am pleased to hear from you. I'm also glad you like our school. Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every year. Secondly, each of us students is a cleaner. We see ①尝试用“if”引导的条件状语从句改写: garbage on the plavground. And then we will activelv pick If we see garbage on the playground, we will it up and put it into the bin. Thirdly, to avoid waste, we actively pick it up and put it into the bin. reuse textbooks. ②We will also use old items to make some ②尝试用“at the same time”改写: reusable items. such as using cans as pen holders. Finally At the same time, we will also use old items to save energy, we turn off the water when brushing our to make some reusable items, such as using teeth. If we leave the classroom, we will tumn off the power. cans as pen holders. These are some of our wavs to make our school greener. Do ③尝试用“when”引导的时间状语从句改写: you usually do these? When we leave the classroom, we turn off I look forward to your reply. the power. Yours. Li Hua 写作范例模板 Dear schoolmates. Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I'd like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are limited. Therefore, we must value them. Here are my suggestions on how to save electricity. [表明写作目的] First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don't need them. Second, try to use as little electronic things as possible. Last,spread the idea of using less electricity to others. [分点叙述做法] I hope you can do these, not only for you, but for everyone. And if everyone can take action from [24 now on,our quality of life will become better. [发出呼吁] Students' Union June l6th - 三阶 实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 1.行动胜于雄辩。(翻译句子 Actions speak louder than words. 2. My father often rode his bike to work last vear. (用used to 升格句子) My father used to ride his bike to work last year. 3. We should stop using plastic bags.(用had better do sth.升格句子) We had better stop using plastic bags. 4. Don't waste things and use things for a long time.(用 as long as possible 升格句子) Don't waste things and use things as long as possible. 5. With some creative ideas, we can turn waste into treasure in our daily life.(改为被动语态) With some creative ideas, waste can be turned into treasure in our daily life. 二、写作 第一篇 绿水青山就是金山银山。作为一名中学生,我们可以从身边的小事做起,节约资源,保护环 境。请以“MyGreenLife”为题,参考图文信息,写一篇短文,向校广播站投稿。 要求:1.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展; 2.内容积极向上,不少于80词; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 二 My Green Life Thc wnyx lo live a green life fThe prescnt. cnvimnmenlal rrohlems CYour hopc My Green Life Nowadays, the environmental pollution is becoming worse and worse. The government has taken action to protect our environment. As students, what can we do? For me, I will try my best to save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly. I will take public transport as much as possible when I go out. For example, I ride a bike or take a bus to school. I think it can reduce the air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights. fans and other electronic products when they are not in use. Thirdly. I plan to recycle and make full use of old things in my life. When I go shopping, I use paper or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. I also hope more and more students can join me in protecting the environment to live a greener life. 第二篇 假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”为主题的环保作品展。请参考 图文信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 要求:1.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展; 25 2.内容积极向上,不少于80词; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think clothes □ waste paper □creative chairs □ plastic bottles # □ save ... model planes used wood and glass C □ ._ Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about the show "Working the Waste into Magic". A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors. I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top and two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo! I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future. 第三篇 如今旅游深受欢迎,但在旅游中我们常会看到一些不文明行为(uncivilizedbehaviors)。 假设 你是李华,请结合表格信息,以“TravelinginGoodManners”为题,写一篇短文向某英文报刊投稿, 倡导文明旅游。 要求:1.短文须包含表格中所有信息,并适当拓展; 2.内容积极向上,不少于80词; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名 Uncivilized behaviors Your opinions Your advice throw rubbish everywhere impolite. pick flowers ina park impolite.. speak loudly in public places impolite... ._ Traveling in Good Manners Dear editor, Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. But we can often see some uncivilized behaviors during traveling. For example, some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling to places of interest. It's really impolite and also causes much inconvenience for other people, They should put rubbish into dustbins to protect the environment. Secondly, some people like picking flowers in the park just because they are beautiful. This is uncivilized and selfish. We can put up signs to remind people not to do that. Thirdly, there are people speaking loudly in public places. We should also remind them to lower their voice. In my opinion, we should travel in good manners so that everyone can enjoy the beauty of the world. Yours. Li Hua 26