1.写作突破-主题范畴一 人与自我（教用）-【加速度中考】2025年贵州中考英语写作突破练

主题范畴一人与自我 话题1 学校生活 子一阶素材积累 P开头句 : It's very important for us. 1.[冀教七（上）U1P6]Hell,Jack.Welcome to ·结尾句 our school.Let me show you around. 1.[冀教八（上）U8P124]I work hard in school and 2.[人教九（全）U14P108]My time in junior high I hope to go to college someday. school has been enjoyable. 2.In short,we've learned much about the world 3.[冀教七（下）U4P58]I am learning a lot of through our wonderful school activities. interesting things at school. >谚语 中间句 1.[冀教七（下）U8PI22]Education is not preparation 1.[外研七（上）M5P28]Ig0 to school on for life;education is life itself.教育不是为生 weekdays,but not on Saturday and Sunday. 活做准备：教育就是生活本身。 2.[冀教八（上）U2P20]Ms.Liu gives us lots of2.No road is long with good company..路上有良 interesting projects in English class. 伴，不觉路途远 3.[冀教八（上）U2P31]Of all the subjects,I like 3.A candle lights others and consumes itself. English best because it's so useful and interesting. 烛照亮别人却牺牲了自己。 子二阶典例探究 [2024河南改编]在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。校刊 英语专栏正在以“Sud山ying alone or studying with a group?”为题开展征文活动。请根据写作要求， 从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。 要求：1.短文须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，并适当拓展： 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Studying alone Studying with a group solve problems on my own get help from others keep my mind on schoolwork share ideas with group members 第一步：审题立意定基调 1.文体：说明文： 2.人称：第一人称； 3.时态：一般现在时； 4.主题：介绍喜欢的学习方式，并说明原因。 4 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 Some students like to study alone.Others 介绍克从的 Beginning enjoy studying with a group.As for me.I 学习方式 like studying.… Studying alone or studying Firstly,studying..helps/makes me... with a group? Boby 说明原闪 Secondly... What's mare/Besides,... Ending 结语All in all/In a word.,I think studying. 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 Studying alone or studying with a group? 1 Some students like to study alone.Others enjoy ①尝试用“while'”合并为一个句子： studying with a group.As for me,I like studying alone Some students like to study alone,while others better. enjoy studying with a group. Firstly,studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own.Most of the time,I need to think hard about them all by myself.So my thinking ability is improved at the same time.Secondly,studying alone ②尝试用“when”引导的时间状语从句改写： can keep my mind on what I'm doing.With a clear Secondly,when I study alone,I can keep my head,I am able to finish my homework quickly.In this mind on what I'm doing. way,I will gradually develop a good learning habit. ③尝试用“an”合并为一个句子： I think studying alone is really a good way.Studying I think studying alone is really a good way and alone will benefit me a lot in my life. it will benefit me a lot in my life. ◆写作范例模板 My School Life School is a place for students to learn knowledge and make friends.Different students have different ideas about life at school..I like my school life very much..[点明主题，引出下文] First,we have different subjects in my school and the teachers in my school are very kind to us. They always give us a hand when we need help.Second,the students are very friendly and I make many friends here.Last but not least,there are all kinds of interesting activities after class and I joined the English club last term.It is helpful for me.[分点叙述] In a word,my school life is rich and colorful. 季三阶实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 1.I made a decision to study harder and make my parents be proud of me.(用s动词不定式表目的来升 格句子) I made a decision to study harder to make my parents be proud of me. 2.I become more outgoing than before.I get along well with people around me.not only...but also …合并为一个句子) I not only become more outgoing than before,but also get along well with people around me. 3.Problem-solving is a skill and it will benefit us throughout our school lives.(用定语从句升格句子) Problem-solving is a skill that will benefit us throughout our school lives. 4.Our school life is very wonderful.(用how引导的感叹句升格句子) How wonderful our school life is! 二、写作 第一篇[2024贵阳南明区一模改编] 作为青少年，我们都想拥有多姿多彩、健康快乐的校园生活。请参考图文信息，以“Having a School Life”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。 School environneul Having a Cood health School activitics School Life Cood relationship 要求：1.结合实际，用适当的形容词补全标题： 2.短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名 Having a School Life I am a junior high school student.I have a colorful and enjoyable school life. The moment you enter this school,you will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there.In this school,we are living like a big family.Teachers here are as kind as parents and classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters.We have different kinds of clubs,such as dancing club,English club and sports club.You can choose what you are interested in.During the break,I often do exercise to keep healthy. I really like my school life. 第二篇 国有国法，家有家规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都 能健康成长。请根据下表提示，以“My School Rules'”为题，写一篇英语短文 要求：1.短文须包含表格中所有信息，并适当拓展； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Things we can do: Things we can't do: 1)上课认真听讲 1)课堂上不讲闲话 2)保持教室整洁 2)不带食物进教室 3)在校穿校服 3)在校不打架 你的看法：… My School Rules Every school has rules for students.As students,we must obey them.First of all,in class,we shouldn't talk but listen to the teachers carefully.We are not supposed to take food or drinks into the classroom.We should keep our classroom quiet and clean.Then,after class,we should finish our homework on time.One more thing,we should wear our school uniforms at school.Besides,we should protect trees,grass and flowers there because they make our school more beautiful.At last, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.Don't fight with each other. Although we have different views on the rules,I think everyone should obey the school rules. 话题2经历与感受 子一阶素材积累 。开头句 结尾句 1.[冀教七上U8P117]Look at this photo from my L.[人教八下U3PI9]I finally understand that we goodbye party.I am so happy all of my friends need to share the housework to have a clean and were there. comfortable home. 2.[泸教九下U5P67]Last year,my parents took2.[人教九全Ul2P91]ly bad luck had unexpectedly me on a very special holiday. turned into a good thing. 。中间句 3.[人教九全Ul2P96]What a lucky/an unlucky day！ l.[人教七下UIlP65]The rooms were really dark4.Generally speaking,what I value most is my and it was difficult to take photos,so I didn't family. take any. 5.I have learned that spending time with family 2.[人教八上U1P2]I just stayed at home most of and friends is really important for us. the time to read and relax. >谚语 3.[人教八下U2PI11]I get such a strong feeling of1.Love me,love my dog,爱屋及乌。 satisfaction when I see the animals get better and 2.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a the look of joy on their owners'faces. single step.千里之行，始于足下。 4.Some students worry about their exams,while3.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者， other students can't get on well with their 事竟成。 classmates or parents 4.Experience is the best teacher.实践出真知. 二阶典例探究 [2024贵州]成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在 开展主题为“The Change Made Me..”(改变让我…)的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。 要求：1.补全标题； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Change Made Me (Better/Improve/...) wak→sirong change careless-→careful … What happened? story Who was in the story? … ll made me... (feelings I got lo know... 第一步：审题立意定基调 1.文体：记叙文； 2.人称：第一人称： 3.时态：一般过去时： 4.主题：介绍自己的经历及感受。 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 Many things in our life can help us to 表明作 Beginning be better.In my opinion/From my point of 意阁 view/As far us I am concemed/Personally speaking...my changes have made me bctter/improve/stmng/... The Change Vade Me In the past,I was afraid to/in fear of/nscd Boby 介绍白己 的经历 to... After/Because of/Thauks to....I changed u lot.I became... 表达山心 All of thesc changes made me better/moro Ending 的感受 confident/... 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 洞色升华 The Change Made Me Better ①尝试用“There be句型”改写： 1 Many things in our life can help us to be better. In my opinion,I think my changes have made me better. There are many things in our life that can help us to be better. I used to be weak because of my bad habits.After communicating with my teacher.I ate regularly every ②尝试用“s0..hat.”改写： day and took exercise often,so I am strong now.What I was so careless that I made many mistakes in was more,2 I was careless.I made many mistakes my exams. in my exams.My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits. ③尝试用“and”合并为一个句子： 3 These good changes made me better.They also These good changes made me better and brave made me brave enough to face new challenges. enough to face new challenges. ◆写作范例模板 Dear John, How are you doing these days?I'm writing to share my voluntary experience with you.Let me tell you something about it.[表明写信目的] On the morning of May 16,my classmates and I went to the local community to help people sort out the waste.This activity not only helps us to take part in social activities,but also gives us the opportunity to help people in need.I think it is very meaningful and can enrich our life experiences.In the afternoon,we went to a nursing house.We helped and took care of the elderly.It helps us to experience life,understand society and make friends.We also know more about the current situation of the elderly.We will do more things to care about the elderly in the future..[描述经历与感受] 8 I think the volunteer service that day was quite fruitful.[表达感想] Yours, Li Hua 三阶实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 1.It was a little hard for us,we still need to have confidence..(用although引导的让步状语从句升格句子) Although it was a little hard for us,we still need to have confidence. 2.I will never forget it and I have understood the importance of teamwork since then.because 的原因状语从句升格句子) I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then. 3.Exercise an hour every day is necessary for us.(用it作形式主语升格句子) It is necessary for us to exercise an hour every day. 4.We should have a good relationship with others and we can live a happier life.(用现在分词短语作 状语升格句子) Having a good relationship with others,we can live a happier life. 二、写作 第一篇[2024福建改编 假如你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Hey对这次活动很感兴 趣。请参考图文信息，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想 要求：1.短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展： 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ◆]eam about the Long March(长徘) listen to the stories of the Red Army m enjoy paper cutting art kGtr(Grr高 onnmnooaooaga2 分… Dear Henry, I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last Friday.Let me tell you something about it. In the morning,we visited the History Museum.We learned about the history of the Long March.Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army,which greatly touched us.After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center,where we enjoyed paper cutting art.We also watched local opera performances that are educational. The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of the traditional art of China. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 9 第二篇[2024陕西改编] 假如你是李斌，开学初老师在劳动实践课(abor class)上布置了一项作业，内容是栽培一种植 物（绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等），观察并记录它（们）的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有 趣，打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。 参考词汇：grow,look after,watch,record(n.记录)，a feeling of satisfaction,fun,leam, 要求：1.邮件须包含题目要求所给的关键信息，并适当拓展： 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词： 3.文章不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Hi Tom, How's it going?I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you. This term,my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes.I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny.I put the seed in a nice container and carefully recorded its changes.Each day,I watered and looked after Sunny with care.It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger.When I saw the sunflower grow well,I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it. The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature.I hope you try this too!Can you share your interesting experience with me?Looking forward to your reply. Li Bin 第三篇[2024费阳清镇二模改编] 互相帮助是一种美德。请参考图文信息，以“Helping Others Makes Me ”为题，写一 篇短文，谈谈自己的一次助人为乐的经历及感受 要求：1.补全标题； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 share your experience express your feelings :◆What happoncd? Whal did you learn from it? When did it happen? Ilow did you feel about it? Who did you help? Helping Others Makes Me Helping others is a really happy thing for me. It was on a snowy afternoon when I was walking back home.Just at the street corner,I found an old man sitting on the ground.He was cold and tired.I asked him what was the matter.He told me that he had no money for food and he was very hungry.I used my pocket money to buy a bowl of noodles for him.He ate the noodles quickly and thanked me very much. And I gave him all of my pocket money then.Seeing his thankful smile,I felt happy that I could help a man in need.From then on,I never spent money on useless things and always tried to help the poor and the old. I believe helping others in need is one of my pleasures. 0 话题3活动、计划与安排 ·一阶素材积累 开头句 Chess challenges you and makes you think 1.[冀教七（下）U8P122]I'm really excited about hard.You will learn and have fun at the same my summer plans.I'm going to live with a time. family in the countryside.It will be a good 2.[冀教七（下）U4P6o]Did you have a good weekend? experience. What are you going to do next weekend? 2.[冀教七（下）U8PI24]I will experience a new3.[冀教七（下）U8PI22]It's going to be a fun life in another part of China.I am going to write summer.You all have wonderful plans. down all of my experiences and share them with 4.[冀教九（全）U8PI24]We are planning another you.It will be fun.I am really looking forward trip to Chinatown during the Spring Festival.I to it! love festivals. 3.[外研七（下）M3P16]I'm going to enjoy myself>谚语 during the May Day holiday 1.Great plans should be carefully considered. 4.[外研七（下）M3PI6]Usually I spend the 谋之道，周密为宝。 summer holiday at home,but this year is going 2.By failing to prepare,you are preparing to fail. to be very different because I'm going on a 凡事预则立，不预则废。 summer camp in Sydney,Australia. 3.It takes as much energy to wish as it does to 中间句 plan.计划和希望需要的精力是一样的。 1.[冀教七（下）U4P51]I am going to be a4.A man who does not plan long ahead will find volleyball player in the future.I enjoy volleyball trouble at his door.人无远虑必有近忧。 so much! 5.Before everything else,getting ready is the 2.[冀教七（下）U4P56]I'm going to learn secret of success..做好准备是成功的首要秘诀。 something new this Saturday. 6.Well begun is half done..良好的开端是成功的 3.[冀教七（下）U8P114]We made a long list..We 一半。 will go swimming and play in the sun every day!7.A good plan today is better than a perfect plan 4.[外研七（下）M3P14]On Saturday morning,'m tomorrow.今天的一个好计划胜于明天的完美 going to check my email and do my homework. 计划。 Then I'm going to help with the housework. 8.Only a life with a goal has a direction,and a 结尾句 life with a plan is more wonderful.有目标的人 1.[冀教七（下）U4P52]Join our chess club！ 生才有方向，有规划的人生才更精彩。 喜二阶典例探究 [2024眉山改编]假如你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请参考图文信息，给 你的英国笔友David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。 要求：1.短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 When will you go there? What activities will you do? Who will you go with? 2 activities） My Travel Plan lo Beijing How long will you stay? How will you go there? (2 reasons) Why will you do the activities? 第一步：审题立意定基调 1.文体：应用文： 2.人称：第一人称： 3.时态：一般将来时、一般现在时： 4.主题：介绍暑假去北京的旅行计划。 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 Ihe summer vacation is coming soon.and I havc 开J见： Beginning many exciting plans.I pian tolam going to...with 直接介绍主题 my parents/friends... We will go therc by planchrain..in...and stay there for... days/weeks. My Travel Plan 介绍其休 First,we will go to...because... to Beijing Boby 细节 Second,...is also a good choice for us to enjoy... What's more.we are going to...We think...is an amazing place which is well worth a visit.Thore are... I believe that we will have fun/have a good time/enjoy 总结并测问 Ending ouselves...there.So what are your plans for the summer 对的计划 vacalion/What ahoul your summer plan?/... 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 Dear David, How's it going? With the summer vacation coming soon,I feel so ①尝试用“would like to do'”改写： excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and Now I would like to share my travel plan me to Beijing.1Now I want to share my travel plan with with you. you. 12 续表 衔接成管 润色升华 We'll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. ②尝试用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句 During that period,we're going to visit the Palace Museum 改写： first and know about stories of the past.Besides,another Besides,another place we must go to is the place we must go to is the Great Wall.It is the longest wall Great Wall,which is the longest wall in the in the world.We're going to take a walk there because it's a world. great place which is worth a visit. 3 We'll enjoy ourselves in Beijing.What about your ③尝试用“that”引导的宾语从句改写： summer plan? I believe/hope that we'll enjoy ourselves in Li Hua Beijing. ◆写作范例模板 My New Year's Plan Hello,everyone！The New Year is coming.It's a good time to make plans..[介绍主题] My first New Year's plan is about my health.Swimming is a good way to exercise.Next year,I will try to swim to improve my health.I'd like to have healthy food to develop healthy eating habits.Second, I will study hard as much as possible so that I can get better grades.My third plan has to do with my hobbies.I love drawing and singing in my free time,so I will finish drawing two nice works as well as getting chances to go to some concerts.[分点介绍其体计划] It's difficult to do,but I will do my best to keep to all my plans.[表达决心] 子三阶实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 1.I go to visit some places like museums.I will keep quiet and wait in line politely.(用if引导的条件 状语从句合并为一个句子) If I go to visit some places like museums,I will keep quiet and wait in line politely. 2.Our school can also organize some reading activities.Students can learn a lot from reading activities. (用which引导的定语从句合并为一个句子) Our school can also organize some reading activities,from which students can learn a lot. 3.I am going to develop a new hobby..(用take up升格句子) I am going to take up a new hobby. 4.You can come and have fun with us during the International Food Festival..(用祈使句升格句子) Come and have fun with us during the International Food Festival. 5.Why does Li Yang make great progress in such a short time?All teachers are talking about it. wy引导的宾语从句升格句子) All teachers are talking about why Li Yang makes great progress in such a short time. 二、写作 第一篇[2024齐齐哈尔改编] 时光飞逝，难忘的初中生活即将结束，你们将迎来一个轻松、愉快的假期。如何能让你的假期 更加丰富多彩呢？请结合下面表格，以“How to Spend a Meaningful Summer Vacation”为题，写一篇 13