Unit 1 Section 9 Writing—Write an Informal Email(课件PPT)-【赢在微点·轻松课堂】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册（北师大版2019）

赢在微点 轻松课堂 英语 UNIT 1 LIFE CHOICES Section 9　Writing —Write an Informal Email UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 题型解读 谋篇布局 有关建议的邮件是写给某人,就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议的应用文,有时是写给某一组织就其服务改进方面提出建议和忠告。建议信应目的明确,合情合理 首段:说明写信缘由 主体段落:陈述具体的建议和理由 尾段:希望建议被考虑和采纳 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.Since/Now that you are worried about how to choose suitable courses, I’m writing to/I’d like to offer some suggestions about how to ... 因为你担心如何选择合适的课程,我写信/我想就如何……提些建议。 2.I am sorry to learn/know/hear that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others. 知道/听到你现在在与他人交流方面有些麻烦/困难, 我很难过。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 5 3.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ... 很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。 4.Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些建议可以帮助你。 5.I think you can make it if you follow the following advice/the advice below. 如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.Why not join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but also make friends. 为什么不参加一个志愿者俱乐部?如果你这样做的话, 你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。 2.In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down. 另外,如果你看书或听音乐,这将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 3.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/In my view, there’s no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you. 依我看/我认为,你没有必要害羞,我们都愿意成为你的朋友。 4.I’d like to recommend/suggest/advise that you should sign up for the present subjects. 我建议你报名参加现在的课程。 5.Only in this way will you improve your Chinese and speak it more fluently. 只有用这种方式,你才能提高汉语并更流利地讲汉语。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 6.As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is the most important. 至于如何与同学相处,你应该记住,友善最重要。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。 2.As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice/suggestions above. 如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,愿意和你交朋友。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 3.I am certain that if you follow my advice, you’ll keep up with your classmates. 我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会跟上同学们的。 4.I believe, with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these challenges. 我相信,通过你的努力,你会成功克服这些挑战的。 5.The situation is easy to change if you take/follow/accept my advice. 如果你采纳我的建议,改变这种处境是很容易的。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 　　假定你是李华,以下是你的英国朋友Tom给你的邮件。请你根据邮件内容给他回信。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 Dear Li Hua, These days I don’t feel good and I need your help. You know last month my family moved to a new city where I have no friends. I spend every single day by myself, going to school, studying or just surfing the Internet, which makes me feel lonely. I really want to change it. What can I do? Yours, Tom 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态   要点结构图 开头点题 1.表示安慰和理解 2.提出写信目的 应用文 (建议信) 第二人称 一般现在时 主体段落 1.建议出门参加社交活动 2.建议帮助他人和与他人交友 尾段 说明自己的愿望 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 第二步:斟词酌句　靓化表达 1.我理解你正觉得多么的孤独。(宾语从句) I really understand .  2.很难适应一个陌生的城市。(it作形式主语) 。 3.什么都不做只是待在家中并且沉迷于网络对你不好。(动词的-ing形式作主语) Just staying at home doing nothing but . .   how lonely you must be feeling It’s hard to get used to a strange city. being addicted to the Internet is not good for you UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 4.你最好参加一些社交活动。(主谓宾) . → (用why not ... 升级句式)  5.通过这么做,你可以认识你周围更多的人。(主谓宾) By doing so, around you.  6.我建议你报名参加志愿者俱乐部去帮助别人。(主谓+宾从) 。 You’d better join in some social activities.  Why not join in some social activities? you can know more people I recommend that you sign up for a volunteer club to help others.  UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 7.我相信与此同时你可以与他人成为朋友。(主谓+宾从) . I’m sure you will make friends with others at the same time.  UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 第三步:合理过渡　完美卷面(用恰当的衔接过渡词汇,如however, additionally等) Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear about your experience and I really understand how lonely you must be feeling. It’s hard to get used to a strange city. However, just staying at home doing nothing but being addicted to the Internet is not good for you. 范文 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 To begin with, why not join in some social activities? By doing so, you can know more people around you. Additionally, I recommend that you sign up for a volunteer club to help others. I’m sure you will make friends with others at the same time. Hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Yours, Li Hua 范文 UNIT 1　Section 9　Writing—Write an Informal Email 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第一册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 $$