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Unit 3 Teenage problems
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(24-25九年级上·江苏无锡·阶段练习)最近,你班就“新一代的成长”话题进行了一项社会调查,调查显示人们对新一代青少年的现状褒贬不一。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇文章,介绍调查结果,并谈谈你自己作为一名新一代青少年的感想。
优点(advantages)
缺点(disadvantages)
你自己的感想
1.好奇心强,乐于接受新挑战;
2.富有创造力,能想出新点子;
3.谦虚,从不炫耀;
4.……(至少一点)
1.追求与众不同,只考虑自己;
2.沉迷电脑游戏;容易发怒;
3.做事粗心,会犯同样的错误;
4.……(至少一点)
……(至少一点)
参考词汇:generation一代
注意:1.词数100左右。短文的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
2.短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3.短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Recently our class has conducted a survey about “The growth of the new generation”. People have different opinions it.
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2.(24-25九年级上·江苏宿迁·阶段练习)某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
1. 虽然我们时常感到压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解决压力。例如……
2. 我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”;
3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡;
4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。因为……
5. 有问题时,我们……
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数90个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2-3句话
How to Deal with Our Study Problems
We students always have a lot of problems with our schoolwork.
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3.(24-25九年级上·江苏宿迁·阶段练习)网络上流行一句话“人生的杯具是1G的大脑装着2G的烦恼”。假设你是一名青少年工作者Alex,请根据下面Jimmy的问题给他写一封回信。
问题
建议
作业过多,难有爱好;
朋友太少,常感孤独;
父母严格,难以沟通;
……(自拟一点)
巧列清单,合理安排;
乐于分享,善于倾听;
多用暖色,改变心情;
……(自拟一点)
注意:
1. 词数90左右;
2. 文中需包括所有要点,可进行适当发挥使短语连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的校名和人名等相关信息。
Dear Jimmy,
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Best wishes,
Alex
4.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期中)眼睛是心灵的窗户,可是现在越来越多的青少年眼睛都近视了。针对这一问题,请根据提示写一封倡议书:
现状
·越来越多的孩子戴眼镜
·超过70%的学生近视
·父母老师担忧
原因
·使用电子产品
·学习压力大
·缺少睡眠
建议
·做眼保健操
·户外运动
·健康饮食
·……
要求:1. 包括所有要点,并适当发挥。
2. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
参考词汇:视力差:have poor eyesight
Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country. It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse. It is time that we take the problem seriously.
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5.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期中)假如你是九年级学生李华,你在学校英文校刊上看到心灵驿站(Heart-to-heart Room)栏目的招募信息。请你根据招募条件和要求,用英文写一封申请信。
Join us!
A helper is wanted by Heart-to-heart Room. The helper should have at least three strong qualities:
★Helpful ★Organized
feel lonely
Attention!
Choose one of the top three teenage problems and explain what you think about it. Give suggestions on how to solve it.
要求:
1.包含所有要点,省略号部分略加发挥;
2.词数90词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得使用本人真实姓名和真实校名、地名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to join Heart-to-heart Room. I think I’m qualified (合格的) to help teenagers of my age with their problems.
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I will be very happy if I can be a helper. You can email me at lihua@sunshine.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6.(23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期中)假如你是某英语报Problem&Advice栏目的编辑Tom,你收到了读者Lisa的邮件,她向你寻求帮助。请你根据Lisa的烦恼,为她提出实用性建议。
Lisa’s Problem: As a Grade Nine student, I often stay up late to finish my schoolwork. I feel stressed. What should I do?
Your Advice: ……
要求:
1. 邮件须包含所给提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lisa,
Thank you for telling me about your problem.
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I hope these suggestions are useful to you.
Yours,
Tom
7.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期中)你校英语社团召开“成长不烦恼”交流会,请你根据以下提示,分享在遇到问题时是如何寻求帮助和解决问题的。
·What problem(s) do you have?
·Who can you ask for help?
·How can he or she help you deal with the problem(s)?
·…
要求:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2.词数100词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文章必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Hi, everyone. I am a student in Grade 9.
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Thank you!
8.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期中)阳光中学举办“Never keep problems to yourself”的主题活动,在学生中展开了一些调查,得到一些学生的主要问题如下,假如你是李华,请选择调查表中的2—3个问题,用英语写封建议信给他们,帮助他们解决问题:
Teenage problems
Feeling not confident about myself
Not having enough time for hobbies
Not having any close friends
Making little progress in study
Being laughed at by others
Being unable to communicate with parents
要求:
1.词数100左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear friend,
I’m also a Grade 9 student. It is common for us to have such problems. I’d like to give you some advice on how to deal with them.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(23-24九年级上·江苏苏州·期中)现今的学生们压力很大,经常面对各种测验或考试,因此有时会产生焦虑、急躁等情绪。你的好友Jack最近压力很大,向你来信求助,请你根据以下内容要点给他回复习,提供建议。
写作要点:
1.表现:担心考试; 考前很难入睡;(自拟一点)
2.建议:请从如何合理安排作息时间、和成年人沟通、使用颜色疗法或寻求精神支柱四方面具体建议。
写作要求:
1.词数100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to know that you have too much stress now. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Tony
10.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期中)据调查,步入九年级后,部分学生压力增大,遇到了一些问题。现某青少年健康网站向学校征集解决青少年问题的方法,请你写一篇短文投稿。要点如下:
问题
作业太多,睡眠不足, ……
建议
1. 做计划,列清单;
2. 多运动,因为 ……
3. 向老师和家长寻求建议;
4. ……
注意:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
We are Grade 9 students now. It is common for us to have some problems.
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It is expected that students will be under constant pressure. However, students should face the problem bravely and take care of themselves.
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Unit 3 Teenage problems
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(24-25九年级上·江苏无锡·阶段练习)最近,你班就“新一代的成长”话题进行了一项社会调查,调查显示人们对新一代青少年的现状褒贬不一。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇文章,介绍调查结果,并谈谈你自己作为一名新一代青少年的感想。
优点(advantages)
缺点(disadvantages)
你自己的感想
1.好奇心强,乐于接受新挑战;
2.富有创造力,能想出新点子;
3.谦虚,从不炫耀;
4.……(至少一点)
1.追求与众不同,只考虑自己;
2.沉迷电脑游戏;容易发怒;
3.做事粗心,会犯同样的错误;
4.……(至少一点)
……(至少一点)
参考词汇:generation一代
注意:1.词数100左右。短文的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
2.短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3.短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Recently our class has conducted a survey about “The growth of the new generation”. People have different opinions it.
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【答案】例文
Recently our class has conducted a survey about “The growth of the new generation”. People have different opinions about it.
The new generation has many advantages. They are curious and willing to take new challenges. They are creative and can come up with new ideas. They are also modest and never show off. However, they also have some disadvantages. They pursue being different and only consider themselves. Some of them are addicted to computer games and get angry easily. They are also careless and make the same mistakes.
As a member of the new generation, I think we should make use of our advantages and overcome our disadvantages. We should be more responsible and work hard to achieve our goals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中关于新一代青少年的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明你班就“新一代的成长”话题进行了一项社会调查,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述新一代青少年的优点和缺点;
第三步,表达自己作为一名新一代青少年的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take new challenges接受新挑战
②come up with提出
③be addicted to...对……上瘾
④make mistakes犯错误
[高分句型]
①As a member of the new generation, I think we should make use of our advantages and overcome our disadvantages. (省略that的宾语从句)
2.(24-25九年级上·江苏宿迁·阶段练习)某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
1. 虽然我们时常感到压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解决压力。例如……
2. 我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”;
3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡;
4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。因为……
5. 有问题时,我们……
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数90个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2-3句话
How to Deal with Our Study Problems
We students always have a lot of problems with our schoolwork.
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【答案】例文
How to Deal with Our Study Problems
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.
When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:题目要求根据提示就如何处理学习问题发表自己的观点,包括虽然感到有压力,但是要寻找方法解决,要足够细心,取得课业和爱好间的平衡,不要失去信心,并适合补充内容。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步,开篇点题(已给出);
第二步,根据所给要点,依次就如何处理学习问题发表自己的观点,包括寻找方法解决压力,要足够细心,取得课业和爱好间的平衡,不要失去信心等;
第三步,最后就出现问题时,发表自己的解决方法。
[亮点词汇]
①between...and...在……和……之间
②try to do sth. 努力做某事
③make progress 取得进步
[高分句型]
①We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②When having problems, we can ask people around us for help.(when引导的时间状语从句)
3.(24-25九年级上·江苏宿迁·阶段练习)网络上流行一句话“人生的杯具是1G的大脑装着2G的烦恼”。假设你是一名青少年工作者Alex,请根据下面Jimmy的问题给他写一封回信。
问题
建议
作业过多,难有爱好;
朋友太少,常感孤独;
父母严格,难以沟通;
……(自拟一点)
巧列清单,合理安排;
乐于分享,善于倾听;
多用暖色,改变心情;
……(自拟一点)
注意:
1. 词数90左右;
2. 文中需包括所有要点,可进行适当发挥使短语连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的校名和人名等相关信息。
Dear Jimmy,
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Best wishes,
Alex
【答案】例文
Dear Jimmy,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a lot of worries. You have so much homework that you don’t have hobbies. You have few friends so that you often feel lonely. In addition, your parents are strict with you. It is difficult for you to communicate with them. What’s more, you do not sleep well at night. I can give you some suggestions to help you relieve your worries. First, you should make lists and arrange them reasonably. Then, it’s better for you to share your worries with your parents and learn to listen to them. Furthermore, you can try to use warm color in your room and change your mood. At last, you should do something you like, for example, listening to music.
I hope that my suggestions can help you. I hope you have a good time every day.
Best wishes,
Alex
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏表格中任何要点,注意行文逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,知晓对方的烦恼,自己有一些建议;
第二步,针对问题给出自己的具体建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①In addition除此之外
②communicate with与……沟通
③What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①You have few friends so that you often feel lonely.(结果状语从句)
②I hope that my suggestions can help you.(宾语从句)
4.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期中)眼睛是心灵的窗户,可是现在越来越多的青少年眼睛都近视了。针对这一问题,请根据提示写一封倡议书:
现状
·越来越多的孩子戴眼镜
·超过70%的学生近视
·父母老师担忧
原因
·使用电子产品
·学习压力大
·缺少睡眠
建议
·做眼保健操
·户外运动
·健康饮食
·……
要求:1. 包括所有要点,并适当发挥。
2. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
参考词汇:视力差:have poor eyesight
Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country. It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse. It is time that we take the problem seriously.
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【答案】例文:
Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country. It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse. It is time that we take the problem seriously. At present, more and more students wear glasses, over 70% of the middle school students have poor eyesight. Both parents and teachers are worried about it.
Here are some main causes. First, some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Second, some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. Third, some students may not have enough sleep.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises at least twice a day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We had better eat healthy food. Of course, it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes. For example, we shouldn’t read in the sun or in bed.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引导当前越来越多的学生近视的现状;
第二步,给出青少年近视的原因以及建议;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①at present目前
②try to do sth.尝试做某事
③at least至少
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
①Of course, it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes. (to do不定式作形式主语)
②I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. (宾语从句)
5.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期中)假如你是九年级学生李华,你在学校英文校刊上看到心灵驿站(Heart-to-heart Room)栏目的招募信息。请你根据招募条件和要求,用英文写一封申请信。
Join us!
A helper is wanted by Heart-to-heart Room. The helper should have at least three strong qualities:
★Helpful ★Organized
feel lonely
Attention!
Choose one of the top three teenage problems and explain what you think about it. Give suggestions on how to solve it.
要求:
1.包含所有要点,省略号部分略加发挥;
2.词数90词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得使用本人真实姓名和真实校名、地名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to join Heart-to-heart Room. I think I’m qualified (合格的) to help teenagers of my age with their problems.
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I will be very happy if I can be a helper. You can email me at lihua@sunshine.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to join Heart-to-heart Room. I think I’m qualified to help teenagers of my age with their problems.
I am very helpful. I often help others when they have problems. Also, I am organized. I never forget the things I need to do. Moreover, I’m hard-working enough to do extra work after class.
I think most students have too much stress from study among the top three teenage problems. This must be bad for their mind and body. For example, some students are so stressed that they are often in a bad mood. Even worse, they can’t get on well with parents. To solve this problem, we’d better not care too much about marks. When necessary, share our worries with teachers and parents. Doing sports or listening to music can also make us relaxed.
I will be very happy if I can be a helper. You can email me at lihua@sunshine.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意语法正确,语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的优势;
第二步,介绍对青少年问题的看法以及如何帮助他人解决这一问题;
第三步,书写结尾,希望申请能够通过;
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②for example例如
③care about关心
④listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①I think most students have too much stress from study among the top three teenage problems. (宾语从句)
②For example, some students are so stressed that they are often in a bad mood.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
6.(23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期中)假如你是某英语报Problem&Advice栏目的编辑Tom,你收到了读者Lisa的邮件,她向你寻求帮助。请你根据Lisa的烦恼,为她提出实用性建议。
Lisa’s Problem: As a Grade Nine student, I often stay up late to finish my schoolwork. I feel stressed. What should I do?
Your Advice: ……
要求:
1. 邮件须包含所给提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lisa,
Thank you for telling me about your problem.
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I hope these suggestions are useful to you.
Yours,
Tom
【答案】例文:
Dear Lisa,
Thank you for telling me about your problem.
First, you should listen carefully and take notes in class. You should review your lessons carefully after class. If you have problems, you should ask your teachers and classmates for help in time. Do more activities with them to relax yourself. You can also listen to music and read books and so on. I hope my advice is helpful to you. I look forward to your good news.
I hope these suggestions are useful to you.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。感谢对方向自己倾诉烦恼。
第二步,具体提出建议。
第三步,书写结语。希望自己的建议对对方有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① thank sb for doing sth. 感谢某人做某事
② take notes 记笔记
③ ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
④ look forward to doing sth期待
[高分句型]
① If you have problems, you should ask your teachers and classmates for help in time.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② I hope my advice is helpful to you.(省略that的宾语从句)
7.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期中)你校英语社团召开“成长不烦恼”交流会,请你根据以下提示,分享在遇到问题时是如何寻求帮助和解决问题的。
·What problem(s) do you have?
·Who can you ask for help?
·How can he or she help you deal with the problem(s)?
·…
要求:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2.词数100词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文章必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Hi, everyone. I am a student in Grade 9.
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Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
Hi, everyone. I’m a student in Grade 9. I am an organized person and I can plan all my things well. However, I am not very good at sports, especially running. When I run, I always fall behind my classmates.
Last month, I went to my father for help. He told me that practice makes perfect and whenever he has time, he helps me practise running. Now I have made a little progress and I can run a little faster than before.
I am very thankful to my father. He always encourages me to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. With his help and support, I can make myself a better student.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的问题;
第二步,介绍是谁以及怎样帮助的自己。
[亮点词汇]
①fall behind落后
②encourage sb to do鼓励某人做某事
③be thankful to感激
[高分句型]
When I run, I always fall behind my classmates.(时间状语从句)
8.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期中)阳光中学举办“Never keep problems to yourself”的主题活动,在学生中展开了一些调查,得到一些学生的主要问题如下,假如你是李华,请选择调查表中的2—3个问题,用英语写封建议信给他们,帮助他们解决问题:
Teenage problems
Feeling not confident about myself
Not having enough time for hobbies
Not having any close friends
Making little progress in study
Being laughed at by others
Being unable to communicate with parents
要求:
1.词数100左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear friend,
I’m also a Grade 9 student. It is common for us to have such problems. I’d like to give you some advice on how to deal with them.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear friend,
I’m also a Grade 9 student. It is common for us to have such problems. I’d like to give you some advice on how to deal with them.
First of all, be confident. We should believe nothing is impossible. Don’t lose heart, or you can achieve nothing. What’s more, it’s important to be hard-working. If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. Also, we should always remember that a miss is as good as a mile, so try to be careful. To keep a balance between study and hobbies, perhaps you should manage your time better and get yourself more organized. Besides, when having stress or worries, remember to share them with others. It’s also a good choice to go to ask teachers or parents for help.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking. Face the year of Grade 9 wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容给出建议,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,表明写作意图,引出对后文的介绍;
第二步,具体给出建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②make progress取得进展
③keep a balance保持平衡
[高分句型]
①If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope you think my advice is worth taking.(宾语从句)
9.(23-24九年级上·江苏苏州·期中)现今的学生们压力很大,经常面对各种测验或考试,因此有时会产生焦虑、急躁等情绪。你的好友Jack最近压力很大,向你来信求助,请你根据以下内容要点给他回复习,提供建议。
写作要点:
1.表现:担心考试; 考前很难入睡;(自拟一点)
2.建议:请从如何合理安排作息时间、和成年人沟通、使用颜色疗法或寻求精神支柱四方面具体建议。
写作要求:
1.词数100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to know that you have too much stress now. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Tony
【答案】例文:
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us are so worried about exams that it’s hard to fall asleep before them. When we pay much attention to the exam, the test results won’t be good. Parents and teachers will blame them, they will also lose confidence. If we have proper stress, we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a bad effect on our study. We should learn to release pressure.
First of all, we should review carefully and make full preparation before the exam. Second, we shouldn’t stay up late to review for the exam. Third, after reviewing for a period of time, we should also relax ourselves appropriately. In addition, if we do well in the exam, we will give ourselves appropriate rewards.
So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress properly and get good grades.
Best wishes
Tony
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助Jake减轻压力的建议的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“你的好友Jack最近压力很大,向你来信求助,请你根据以下内容要点给他回复习,提供建议。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“表现、建议、希望等”几个方面重点介绍帮助Jake减轻压力的建议的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“所以我希望每个人都能妥善处理考试压力,取得好成绩”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with sth忙于某事;
②be worried about担心;
③pay attention to关注;
④have a bad effect on对……有不好的影响。
[高分句型]
①Some of us are so worried about exams that it’s hard to fall asleep before them. (“It is+形容词+to do sth”句型)
②When we pay much attention to the exam, the test results won’t be good. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期中)据调查,步入九年级后,部分学生压力增大,遇到了一些问题。现某青少年健康网站向学校征集解决青少年问题的方法,请你写一篇短文投稿。要点如下:
问题
作业太多,睡眠不足, ……
建议
1. 做计划,列清单;
2. 多运动,因为 ……
3. 向老师和家长寻求建议;
4. ……
注意:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
We are Grade 9 students now. It is common for us to have some problems.
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It is expected that students will be under constant pressure. However, students should face the problem bravely and take care of themselves.
【答案】例文
We are Grade 9 students now. It is common for us to have some problems. Many students have too much homework to do. We don’t have enough sleep. Parents care more about marks. These make us feel nervous and worried. However, students can solve these problems by taking the following actions.
First, students should plan carefully and make a list. Second, taking more exercise may be the best way to solve the problems, because students can let out all their stress by playing sports. Third, students can ask their teachers and parents for some advice. Lastly, students should go to bed early and have enough sleep, or they may not be energetic to study.
It is expected that students will be under constant pressure. However, students should face the problem bravely and take care of themselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍青少年问题以及解决这些问题的方法”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍步入九年级后大家都有一些常见的问题;
第二步,根据题干表格中的要点,详细介绍问题是哪些,以及解决的建议等;
第三步,点评学生应该直面问题,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②ask sb for sth向某人寻求某物
[高分句型]
Second, taking more exercise may be the best way to solve the problems, because students can let out all their stress by playing sports.(原因状语从句)
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