读后续写层级1 读后续写素材积累(Word讲义)-【创新教程】2025年高考英语艺考生文化课总复习（人教版2019）

　　　　　　[三年考情分析]　 　　　项目 卷别　　 体裁 命题形式 话题 题材 命题趋势 2024新课标·Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 读后续写 短文 出行赶车 讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也出故障了。 一、选材特点 1．选材以情节曲折、线索明晰的记叙文为主。 2．主题有一定的背景， 材料有趣味性， 内容能延伸，话题正向且为考生所熟悉，能激发考生的想象力和续写动力。 3．材料贴近考生生活，且有助于引导其关注生活，关注自然。 二、命题形式 1．阅读材料篇幅在320词左右，难度适当，易于理解和模仿。 2．试题兼顾引导和限制，所给的段落提示句均是故事情节发展的过渡句，对续写故事的发展有提示、衔接、引导和一定程度的限制作用。 三、命题热点 1．阅读材料以育人、成长、历险、趣事和自然为主。 2．注重考查考生构思文章内容及衔接故事情节的创造性思维。 2024·浙江卷1月 读后续写 短文 学校生活 讲述了高中生Eva因为方向感不强，经常在学校里迷路，在一次体育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候Eva发现跟着树的影子能找到方向，她通过这个方法重新认识到了校园。 2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 读后续写 短文 参加写作比赛 在老师鼓励下，参加写作比赛获奖。 2023·浙江卷1月 读后续写 短文 作者和蜂鸟 作者去农场野餐时，救了只蜂鸟，几周后作者又去了农场，当离开农场时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。 2022·新高考Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 读后续写 短文 赛跑 大卫克服困难，完成比赛。 2022·浙江卷(1月) 读后续写 短文 学校生活 与不想要的队友共同完成任务的故事。 　　　　　层级一　读后续写素材积累　 一、“变化莫测”的天气 二、“各不相同”的人物外貌 三、“各具特色”的人物内在特征 四、“多情善变”的情感形容词 五、“能说会道”的常用动词 一、读后续写情绪的描写 1．喜乐 ①A smile of understanding flashed across his face. 他脸上露出了一个理解的微笑。 ②A ripple of excitement ran through them. 一阵兴奋的情绪传遍了他们的全身。 ③Laughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里萦绕。 ④His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。 ⑤A wild gaiety(快乐) took hold of her. 她感到一种狂喜。 ⑥Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。 ⑦I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。 ⑧I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。 ⑨She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。 2．愤怒 ①I was seized by anger.我愤怒极了。 ②He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。 ③His anger boiled over.他的怒火爆发了。 ④He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。 ⑤He was breathing fire and fury.他胸中充满怒火。 ⑥His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 ⑦He gave me a look of burning anger. 他愤怒地看了我一眼。 ⑧He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 ⑨He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。 ⑩His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。 3．悲伤烦恼 ①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 ②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我觉得像是漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 ③Her hands were shaking.She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 ④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he burst into tears.听到这个消息，他绝望地哭了。 ⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room. 她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。 ⑥She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands. 她掩面哭泣。 ⑦I tried to fight back tears./My eyes were filled with tears. 我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。 ⑧A frown(皱眉) now stood on his face. 他皱起了眉头。 ⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。 ⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face. 这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。 4．害怕 ①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。 ②Fear slowly creeps upon her. 恐惧慢慢地在她身上蔓延。 ③She was struck with horror when... 当……时她感到恐惧。 ④Her face turned pale and stood there tongue­tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，说不出话来。 ⑤A flood of fear welled up in him./ Fear flooded over him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/ 恐惧淹没了他。 ⑥She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。 二、读后续写身体部位动作的描写 5．head ①He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。 ②They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头同意。 ③She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。 ④He scratched his head, not understanding a word.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。 ⑤She buried her head in the pillow. 她用枕头捂住脑袋。 6．face ①A bright smile appeared on/ spread across/ crossed his face.灿烂的笑容出现在他的脸上/在他脸上蔓延开来/划过他的脸。 ②Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 ③His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。 ④His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点困惑。 ⑤Jack's face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。 7．cheek ①He rested his cheek on her shoulder.他将脸颊靠在她的肩上。 ②He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。 ③Her cheeks were wet with tears.她泪流满面。 ④A tear slid down her cheek.一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。 8．eye ①His eyes were wide with horror. 他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。 ②The dog's hungry eyes were on my sandwich. 那条狗饥饿的目光落在我的三明治上。 ③Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip. 蒂娜闭上双眼，咬了咬嘴唇。 ④He seemed unwilling to meet my eyes. 他似乎不愿意与我的目光接触。 ⑤I felt tears well up in my eyes. 我感到泪水在眼里涌出来。 9．mouth ①She opened her mouth to say something. 她张开嘴要说什么。 ②He covered his mouth to hide his yawn. 他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。 ③Our mouths dropped open in surprise. 我们惊奇地张大了嘴巴。 ④Suddenly a hand cupped her mouth. 突然一只手捂住了她的嘴。 ⑤She froze, her mouth hanging open. 她呆住了，嘴张开着。 10．hand ①He held the key in his hand.他手里拿着钥匙。 ②She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。 ③He slid his hands into his pockets.他悄悄地将手插进口袋里。 ④She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.她一边颤抖一边使劲搓着双手。 ⑤He sat with his head in his hands. 他双手抱头坐着。 11．finger ①She took off his bandages with gentle fingers. 她用她轻柔的手指取下了他的绷带。 ②She raised/held up a finger to her lips to ask for silence.她举起手指到嘴边，要我们安静。 ③I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it. 我用手指蘸了一下酱汁并尝了一下。 ④He was drumming his fingers nervously on the arm of the chair.他紧张地用他的手指轻轻地敲着椅子扶手。 ⑤He snapped his fingers and the waiter came running.他打了个响指侍者跑了过来。 12．arm ①They are sure to welcome you with open arms. 他们一定会张开双臂欢迎你。 ②He was running forward, waving his arms. 他正向前跑去，挥舞着手臂。 ③She folded her arms and stared at him.她双臂交叉，盯着他看。 ④She moved closer to her father and took his arm.她靠近她父亲，并抓住他的手臂。 13．shoulder ①I tapped the man on the shoulder and asked him to move.我拍拍这个人的肩膀，叫他动一下。 ②My shoulders dropped with relief. 我的肩膀松弛了下来。 ③He shouldered open the door. 他用肩膀顶开了门。 ④She shouldered her way through the crowd. 她用肩膀在人群中挤出一条路来。 ⑤He looked (back) over his shoulder.他回头看。 14．heart ①My heart aches when I think of their sorrow. 当我想到他们的悲痛时，我的心很痛。 ②Inside, his heart was slowly breaking. 他的心在慢慢地碎裂。 ③He smiled and her heart melted. 他笑了，她的心融化了。 ④Her heart was pounding with excitement. 她的心激动地怦怦直跳。 ⑤His heart thumped with fear. 他的心因为害怕而怦怦直跳。 15．back ①He leaned his back against the bar. 他斜倚着这根棍子。 ②They tied his hands behind his back. 他们把他的双手绑在他的背后。 ③He was carrying a small child on his back. 他正背着一个小孩。 ④She was lying on her back on the sofa. 她正躺在沙发上。 ⑤He backed slowly out of the room. 他慢慢地退出了房间。 16．foot ①She jumped to her feet when she heard the news. 当她听到这个消息时，她跳了起来。 ②She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently. 她不耐烦地跺着脚，来回走动。 ③She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.她不情愿地跟在父母后面，拖着脚步。 ④My feet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball. 当我正要射门的时候我脚下滑了一下，一脚踢空。 ⑤They carried him out of the room with his feet kicking.他们把他拖出房间，他的脚在空中乱踢。 17．knee ①Suddenly her knees weakened and she fell to the floor.突然她双膝一软，跪倒在地。 ②He hugged his knees to keep warm.他抱膝取暖。 ③He got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness.他双膝跪地，祈求原谅。 ④She sat on her father's knees while he read her a story. 爸爸给她读故事的时候，她坐在她爸爸的膝盖上。 ⑤He was on his knees, searching for the missing ring.他跪在地上寻找丢失的戒指。 18．leg ①She crossed the finish line on her tired legs. 她用她那疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线。 ②He rose to his feet on shaky legs. 他双腿颤抖地站了起来。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$