Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.(悲伤的电影让我哭泣。)（同步写作讲义）英语人教版九年级全一册

Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 单元写作指导与演练 近三年考情分析 话题 考查热度 情感(Feelings) 谈论事物对人的影响 一、话题分析： 本单元的话题是“情感(Feelings)”，属于说明文的范畴，通过学习，学生能够谈论自己高兴或者难过的一些经历，掌握make的使动用法，能够写一篇作文讲述一件让自己高兴或难过的经历，学会用积极的心态看待事物,调节自己的情绪。 二、教学目标 1.语言知识 (1)能正确使用下列词汇和常用表达。 2.语言能力 (1)能谈论使人高兴或难过的经历。 (2)掌握make的使动用法(make + sb. + infinitive without to; make + sb. +adj.)。 (3)完成写作,内容为讲述一件让自己高兴或难过的经历。 3.学习策略 (1)能区分褒义词汇和贬义词汇，理解和体会他人的感受并能表达自己的感受。 (2)学会识别文章中的习语和词组，积累相关语言知识，提高阅读理解。 (3)掌握叙述性文章的逻辑线索(例如发生的事件、时间、地点、原因和意义等)，并能较生动地讲述个人经历。 4.情感意识 通过对过去事情的回忆，学会用积极的心态看待事物,调节自己的情绪。 5.文化意识 通过情感表达的学习，培养学生的跨文化理解和尊重，以及积极的心态和情绪调节能力。 三、写作步骤 1.文章通常可分三段叙述，总分总结构： 第一段，叙述什么让你高兴/难过，以及原因，开篇点题。 第二段，是正文，叙述它是如何让你感到高兴/难过。 第三段，总结全文，抒写你的感受并结尾。 2.人称：第一人称。 3.时态：一般现在时。 ( 人称:第一人称 ) ( 时态 : 一般现在时 ) ( 审题 ) ( I love ... very much . As I grow up, I’ve met lots of ... I will never forget the days when I... ) ( 开篇点题 ) ( 高兴 / 难过经历 ) ( First,there are .. . ; Some of them are .. . Second, ... helps me a lot in .. . From then on, I become... ) ( 经历 ) ( 写作框架 ) ( All in all ,... I will never forget ... I’ll be with you forever. ) ( 总结 ) 生活中，总有一些经历、习惯或者爱好会给你带来快乐，让你开心。请以 “________ makes me happy”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1.什么让你快乐； 2.它是如何让你感到快乐的；3.你的感受。 _________________ makes me happy ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【词汇积累】 1.uncomfortable 不舒服的 2.rather than 而不是 3.even though 即使，尽管 4.learn from向……学习 5.communicate with与……交流 6.because of因为 7.be worried about 担心 8. make sb sad使人伤 9. drive me crazy让我抓狂 10.make sb. feel nervous让某人感到焦虑 11.feel left out感觉被忽略 12.to start with首先，开始 13.take one's position代替某人的位置 14.let sb.down让某人失望 15. kick sb. off开除某人 16.be hard on sb.对某人苛刻 17. have fun玩得开心 18. make some new friends交一些新朋友 19. feel much better感觉更好一些 20. get mad生气 【句型积累】 一、重点句型 1.I will never forget the days when I... 我永远不会忘记我... 2.On my way to school... I felt upset. 在我上学的路上...我感到心烦意乱。 3.I was worried about... 我担心... 4.However, ...encouraged me. 但是...鼓励我。 5. ...make me nervous/afraid. ...让我紧张/害怕。 6.From then on, I become more confident in... 从那时起，我对……更有信心了... 7.I think I can succeed if I try my best to do everything. 我想如果我尽力做好每一件事，我就能成功。 8.What did you learn from the experience? 你从这次经历中学到了什么? 9.Fame is not very important.It can make me nervous if too many people follow me around. 名誉并不是很重要。如果太多的人跟在我周围会使我感到紧张。 二、谈论事物对人的影响 1.Sad movies don't make John cry. 悲伤的电影不会让约翰哭泣。 2.Those awful pictures on the walls make me uncomfortable. 墙上那些可怕的照片让我很不舒服。 3.This made the queen and his people worried. 这让女王和他的人民很担心。 三、make的使动用法 1.The loud music makes me nervous. 吵闹的音乐让我紧张。 2.Money and fame don't always make people happy. 金钱和名誉并不总是让人快乐。 3.She said that the sad movie made her feel like crying. 她说这部悲伤的电影让她想哭。 【俗语谚语】 1. A joy shared is a joy doubled, a sorrow shared is a sorrow halved. 分享一个快乐是双倍的快乐，分享一份悲伤是半份的悲伤。 2.Behind bad luck comes good luck. 塞翁失马焉知非福。 3.Happiness consists in contentment. 知足常乐。 4. Worse off than some, better off than many; to fall short of the best. but be better than the worst. 比上不足比下有余。 5.Adversity may bring good luck. 逆境可能带来好运。 【参考范文】 (一) Life is full of love Life is full of love.I still remember one thing that touches me a lot. It was a rainy day.I failed my math exam and I felt very upset.What's worse,I didn't bring my umbrella.I felt even more worried.Suddenly,the rain drops disappeared.To my surprise,I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my classmate.He said that an exam couldn't stand for everything.He believes I can get good grades next time.I knew he cared me.And his words really cheered me up.It made me happy.After that,I worked harder and made great progress. (二) Doing housework makes me happy Doing housework is part of my life.It's necessary to share housework with other family members.I'd like to tell you one of my experiences. Last Sunday,I made a special dinner for my mom It didn't work as well s I thought.I hurt my fingers while cutting food,and I forgot to put salt into the dishes.When my mother came back home,she was so happy that she hugged me and kissed me. From this experience,I've learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but also bring happiness to my family. 【词汇积累】 一、短语默写 1．使失望 2．开除某人 3．而不是 4．注视 5．错过做某事 6．让某人进来 7．敲(门) 8．意见一致 9．齐心协力；通力合作 10．对某人苛刻；对某人要求严厉 二、短语速记（写出下列短语的英文） 11． 既不……也不…… 12． 打扫干净 13． 想要做某事 14． 面色苍白 15． 毫无疑问 16． 担心，担忧 17． 召来，叫来 18． 取代某人的位置 19．使某人生气 20．使某人不高兴 21．有很多共同之处 22．成为某人的朋友 23．感到被冷落 24．使我们的友谊更稳固 25．宁愿 26．等待 27．忽略；不提及；不包括 28．和……玩得开心 29．让某人做某事 30．听轻音乐 31．使人发疯/发狂 三、重点短语 32．使人发疯/发狂 33．越……越……；愈……愈…… 34．召来；叫来 35．既不……也不…… 36．起初；开始时 37．使失望 38．开除某人 39．对某人苛刻；对某人要求严厉 40．而不是 41．齐心协力；通力合作 42．在……以前 43．捎……一程 44．（与……）成一排 45．不敢相信地 46．赶到；露面 47．在（某时间点）以前 48．卖光 【句子积累】 一、完成句子 1．用“make”改写句子。 The cat steps on Gina’s painting. She gets mad. 2．用“make”改写句子。 Jenny has to say goodbye to her grandfather. She feels sad. 3．用“make”将两个句子连成一句。 The car driver is careless. Tom is angry. 4．用make将两个句子连成一句话。 The math problem is very difficult. Mike is nervous. 5．用“make”改写句子。 Emma wins the first prize in the chess competition. Her parents feel proud. 二、汉译英 1.汤姆对他自己总是要求严格。（汉译英） 2．药物和休息都不能帮到他。(neither...nor) 3．但不管是什么事，不要对自己要求太苛刻。 4．我有很多财富，但是我总是担心会失去我的钱。 5．汤姆生病了，看起来面色苍白。（汉译英） 6．我有我想要的所有的东西，而且我不想要我无法得到的东西。 三、按照要求翻译句子 1．在考试前我感到有一个沉重的担子压在我的肩膀上。(feel like) 2．不要给你自己太多的压力。(be hard on) 3．她一回到家就敲她儿子的门。(knock on) 4．使她惊讶的是,她的脑子止不住地想发生在学校里的事情。(to one’s surprise) 5．他充满了勇气而不是害怕去了篮球场。(rather than) 四、按照中文意思完成句子 1．虽然我有很多权力，但它却并不能使我快乐。 I have a lot of power, it doesn’t . 2．当他独自走回家时，他感到有一个沉重的负担压在他的肩上。 He there was a heavy weight he walked home alone. 3．这部电影太悲伤了以至于让蒂娜和艾米都哭了。 4．这让艾丽斯不高兴，因为她认为朱莉现在和我比和她更要好。 It makes Alice unhappy because she thinks Julie now me than with her. 5．我担心老师会把我逐出社团。 I’m worried that my teacher will the club. 6．他弟弟不开心的时候既不看电视，也不玩电脑游戏。 His brother watches TV plays computer games when he is upset. 五、情景运用 1．你想表达轻柔的音乐让你感到放松，可以这样说： . 2．好朋友想知道你昨天和谁出去玩了，她会这样问： yesterday? 3．老师想知道过端午节时，你最喜欢什么，你会这么回答： As for the Dragon Boat Festival, . 4．Jim告诉大家他过去很怕黑，他会这么说： . 5．你想知道朋友对他在德国生活的看法，可以这么问对方： ? (一) （23-24九年级下·全国·随堂练习）今天上午你经历了两件难忘的事情。请以“Learning to Forgive Others”为题，参照下面表格内容写一篇英语短文，简要描述事情的经过，并谈一下你的感悟。词数：80—100 （已给出的部分不计入总词数），可适当发挥。 事情经过 你的心情 你的感悟 妈妈起晚了，没做早饭，而且昨天忘了洗你的校服了。 …… 上学路上，你骑车撞倒了一位老人。 老人说：“没事，下次要小心些。” Learning to Forgive Others I will always remember what happened to me this morning. __________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二) （23-24九年级下·全国·课后作业）生活中有欢笑，有泪水，有感动，有遗憾，总有让我们记忆深刻的事情。请同学们写一篇120词左右的短文，叙述这段经历和当时的感受以及自己的收获。 要求：1. 注意时态；2. 用多种句式叙述内心感受。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (三) （23-24九年级下·全国·课堂例题）人非圣贤，孰能无过？作为一名学生，在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事？在认识到自己所犯的错误或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？请根据写作要点提示，以“The Mistake Made Me Grow Up”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事； 2. 谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的； 3. 你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。 注意： 1. 字数：90词左右； 2. 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 已给标题不计入总字数。 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I. 思路导图 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up Beginning One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Opinions Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry… Conclusion It made me grow up and I learned… II. 范文欣赏 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk. It is a beautiful pen. I really wanted to own it. Then I took the pen and put it in my schoolbag. While Lisa was looking for her pen, I was afraid and didn’t have the courage to tell her the truth. I told my mother about the pen after I got home. She said I made a mistake and told me I should be honest and make up for it. Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry, so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her. The next day, I did so and Lisa forgave me. I once made the mistake. It made me grow up and I learned the importance of honesty. 1. 句子提升。 It is a beautiful pen. (用感叹句升格) ________________________________________________ I told my mother about the pen after I got home. (用when引导时间状语从句升格) ________________________________ I once made the mistake. (用which引导定语从句升格) ________________________________________________________________________________________V. 同类话题好句积累。 【开头句】 Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. Research has shown that music has a great influence on people. The topic I want to talk about today is “How to be happy”. Here is a picture from a news report. In the picture, we can see three people. 【中间句】 However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. After listening to it, you will feel peaceful. Next, we must keep healthy. Others may think it’s you who have knocked her down. 【结尾句】 In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. Music is so wonderful. I like it very much. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life. I hope it won’t happen again. Let’s trust each other and help anyone in trouble. 2. 优化作文。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (四) （23-24九年级下·全国·随堂练习）在预习导学中你搜集到了一些与幸福相关的故事，从你搜集到的故事中挑选一个，用英文写一篇短文简单介绍一下。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (五) （23-24九年级下·全国·课后作业）每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. How do you often feel? 2. What makes you so…? Why? 3. Do you want to make any changes? How? 要求： 1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 3. 词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (六) （22-23九年级下·全国·课时练习）每个人都有幸运和不幸运的时候，在你的记忆中，你所经历的最开心或最糟糕的一天是什么样子？写出你的经历和感受。不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (七) （22-23九年级下·全国·课时练习）在你的校园生活中，你一定经历过让你非常感动的事。请根据自己的经历，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文记叙这件令你感动的事。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、通顺。 参考词汇：make sb. moved ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (八) （21-22九年级·全国·课时练习）假如你是王明，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容，写一篇短文用于投稿。词数：80—100。 内容要点 参考词汇 Parents’ care cook food, take...to and from school, look after Parents’ love trust, advice, encouragement My thanks … Dear Mom and Dad, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Wang Ming (九) （2021·河南南阳·二模）在我们的成长过程中，总会有某个人一直陪伴在我们身边，给予我们帮助和力量。请以“______ is always with me”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点：1）请补全标题，如my father, my mother, my teacher, Miss Wang等。 2）他（她）是怎样陪伴你的； 3）你想为他（她）做些什么。 2. 要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 ______ is always with me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (一) （2023·江苏盐城·中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1. Who/What do you always like being with? 2. Why do you like being with him/her/it? (Give two or three reasons) … 注意事项： 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Being with You You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二) （2023·山东烟台·中考真题）假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括： l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢； 2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua (三) （2023·四川凉山·中考真题）在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺； 2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 4. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Thanks, ________ Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend…_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (四) （2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 注意事项： 1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (五) （2022·重庆·中考真题）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Corner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。 要求： 1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒 1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果） 2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……） 3. …… Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?__________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. (六) （2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。 内容包括： 1.你对这位老师的印象； 2.你感谢他（她）的原因； 3.你对他（她）的祝福。 注意： 1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当举例或拓展； 3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。 It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to ________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 单元写作指导与演练 近三年考情分析 话题 考查热度 情感(Feelings) 谈论事物对人的影响 一、话题分析： 本单元的话题是“情感(Feelings)”，属于说明文的范畴，通过学习，学生能够谈论自己高兴或者难过的一些经历，掌握make的使动用法，能够写一篇作文讲述一件让自己高兴或难过的经历，学会用积极的心态看待事物,调节自己的情绪。 二、教学目标 1.语言知识 (1)能正确使用下列词汇和常用表达。 2.语言能力 (1)能谈论使人高兴或难过的经历。 (2)掌握make的使动用法(make + sb. + infinitive without to; make + sb. +adj.)。 (3)完成写作,内容为讲述一件让自己高兴或难过的经历。 3.学习策略 (1)能区分褒义词汇和贬义词汇，理解和体会他人的感受并能表达自己的感受。 (2)学会识别文章中的习语和词组，积累相关语言知识，提高阅读理解。 (3)掌握叙述性文章的逻辑线索(例如发生的事件、时间、地点、原因和意义等)，并能较生动地讲述个人经历。 4.情感意识 通过对过去事情的回忆，学会用积极的心态看待事物,调节自己的情绪。 5.文化意识 通过情感表达的学习，培养学生的跨文化理解和尊重，以及积极的心态和情绪调节能力。 三、写作步骤 1.文章通常可分三段叙述，总分总结构： 第一段，叙述什么让你高兴/难过，以及原因，开篇点题。 第二段，是正文，叙述它是如何让你感到高兴/难过。 第三段，总结全文，抒写你的感受并结尾。 2.人称：第一人称。 3.时态：一般现在时。 ( 人称:第一人称 ) ( 时态 : 一般现在时 ) ( 审题 ) ( I love ... very much . As I grow up, I’ve met lots of ... I will never forget the days when I... ) ( 开篇点题 ) ( 高兴 / 难过经历 ) ( First,there are .. . ; Some of them are .. . Second, ... helps me a lot in .. . From then on, I become... ) ( 经历 ) ( 写作框架 ) ( All in all ,... I will never forget ... I’ll be with you forever. ) ( 总结 ) 生活中，总有一些经历、习惯或者爱好会给你带来快乐，让你开心。请以 “________ makes me happy”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1.什么让你快乐； 2.它是如何让你感到快乐的；3.你的感受。 _________________ makes me happy ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Reading makes me happy I love reading very much.It makes me happy.I think reading cannot only help me get knowledge but also open my mind.More importantly,reading bring me happiness. First,there are many stories in books.Some of them are interesting.Some of them are educational.I always lose myself in books and have learned a lot from as well.Second,reading books helps me a lot in my studies.Books are really useful when I meet difficulties.They make me skillful at solving problems. All in all books have become a good friend of mine. It's a part of my life.A good book is like a good friend.So,do more reading,and become happier. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，话题作文，以“______makes me happy"为题写一篇短文，首先，要把题目补充完整。本文可分三段叙述，第一段叙述什么让你快乐，以及原因，开篇点题；第二段是正文，叙述它是如何让你感到快乐的；第三段总结全文，抒写你的感受并结尾。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般现在时，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，写作中，注意多种句式交替使用，要叙述完整，保证条理清晰，语言通顺，符合逻辑关系，确保单词拼写、标点和语法使用正确。 【词汇积累】 1.uncomfortable 不舒服的 2.rather than 而不是 3.even though 即使，尽管 4.learn from向……学习 5.communicate with与……交流 6.because of因为 7.be worried about 担心 8. make sb sad使人伤 9. drive me crazy让我抓狂 10.make sb. feel nervous让某人感到焦虑 11.feel left out感觉被忽略 12.to start with首先，开始 13.take one's position代替某人的位置 14.let sb.down让某人失望 15. kick sb. off开除某人 16.be hard on sb.对某人苛刻 17. have fun玩得开心 18. make some new friends交一些新朋友 19. feel much better感觉更好一些 20. get mad生气 【句型积累】 一、重点句型 1.I will never forget the days when I... 我永远不会忘记我... 2.On my way to school... I felt upset. 在我上学的路上...我感到心烦意乱。 3.I was worried about... 我担心... 4.However, ...encouraged me. 但是...鼓励我。 5. ...make me nervous/afraid. ...让我紧张/害怕。 6.From then on, I become more confident in... 从那时起，我对……更有信心了... 7.I think I can succeed if I try my best to do everything. 我想如果我尽力做好每一件事，我就能成功。 8.What did you learn from the experience? 你从这次经历中学到了什么? 9.Fame is not very important.It can make me nervous if too many people follow me around. 名誉并不是很重要。如果太多的人跟在我周围会使我感到紧张。 二、谈论事物对人的影响 1.Sad movies don't make John cry. 悲伤的电影不会让约翰哭泣。 2.Those awful pictures on the walls make me uncomfortable. 墙上那些可怕的照片让我很不舒服。 3.This made the queen and his people worried. 这让女王和他的人民很担心。 三、make的使动用法 1.The loud music makes me nervous. 吵闹的音乐让我紧张。 2.Money and fame don't always make people happy. 金钱和名誉并不总是让人快乐。 3.She said that the sad movie made her feel like crying. 她说这部悲伤的电影让她想哭。 【俗语谚语】 1. A joy shared is a joy doubled, a sorrow shared is a sorrow halved. 分享一个快乐是双倍的快乐，分享一份悲伤是半份的悲伤。 2.Behind bad luck comes good luck. 塞翁失马焉知非福。 3.Happiness consists in contentment. 知足常乐。 4. Worse off than some, better off than many; to fall short of the best. but be better than the worst. 比上不足比下有余。 5.Adversity may bring good luck. 逆境可能带来好运。 【参考范文】 (一) An experience that made me very happy was winning the nationwide English speech competition last year. At first,I didn't know what to write for my speech,but after talking to my teacher and reading some books,I had some ideas and started writing.Then I practiced my speech many times. On the day of the competition,I saw many people there.This made me feel very nervous.I started to worry that I would forget my speech.Then I remembered what my teacher told me-close my eyes and take deep breaths.I did that and felt much better.When my turn came,I gave my speech with confidence. I waited anxiously for the results,and when I heard that I was the first prize winner,I jumped up and down with joy. From this experience,I know that being well-prepared is very important.And it is also important to ask people around us for advice.Most importantly,we should have confidence in ourselves! (二) Doing housework makes me happy Doing housework is part of my life.It's necessary to share housework with other family members.I'd like to tell you one of my experiences. Last Sunday,I made a special dinner for my mom It didn't work as well s I thought.I hurt my fingers while cutting food,and I forgot to put salt into the dishes.When my mother came back home,she was so happy that she hugged me and kissed me. From this experience,I've learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but also bring happiness to my family. 【词汇积累】 一、短语默写 1．使失望 2．开除某人 3．而不是 4．注视 5．错过做某事 6．让某人进来 7．敲(门) 8．意见一致 9．齐心协力；通力合作 10．对某人苛刻；对某人要求严厉 【答案】 1．let…down 2．kick sb. off 3．rather than 4．keep one’s eyes on 5．miss doing sth. 6．let sb. in 7．knock on/ at 8．in agreement 9．pull together 10．be hard on sb. 二、短语速记（写出下列短语的英文） 11． 既不……也不…… 12． 打扫干净 13． 想要做某事 14． 面色苍白 15． 毫无疑问 16． 担心，担忧 17． 召来，叫来 18． 取代某人的位置 19．使某人生气 20．使某人不高兴 21．有很多共同之处 22．成为某人的朋友 23．感到被冷落 24．使我们的友谊更稳固 25．宁愿 26．等待 27．忽略；不提及；不包括 28．和……玩得开心 29．让某人做某事 30．听轻音乐 31．使人发疯/发狂 【答案】11．neither...nor... 12．clean up 13．want to do sth. 14．in pale 15．without doubt 16．worry about 17．call in 18．take sb’s place 19．make sb mad 20．make sb unhappy 21．have a lot in common 22．be friends with sb 23．feel left out 24．make our friendship stronger 25．would rather 26．wait for 27．leave out 28．have fun with 29．make/let sb. do sth. 30．listen to quiet music 31．drive sb. crazy/mad 三、重点短语 32．使人发疯/发狂 33．越……越……；愈……愈…… 34．召来；叫来 35．既不……也不…… 36．起初；开始时 37．使失望 38．开除某人 39．对某人苛刻；对某人要求严厉 40．而不是 41．齐心协力；通力合作 42．在……以前 43．捎……一程 44．（与……）成一排 45．不敢相信地 46．赶到；露面 47．在（某时间点）以前 48．卖光 【答案】 32．drive sb. crazy/drive sb.mad 33．the more…the more… 34．call in 35．neither…nor… 36．to start with 37．let down 38．kick sb. off 39．be hard on sb. 40．rather than 41．pull together 42．by the time 43．give a lift 44．in line with 45．in disbelief 46．show up 47．by the end of 48．sell out 【句子积累】 一、完成句子 1．用“make”改写句子。 The cat steps on Gina’s painting. She gets mad. 【答案】The cat steps on Gina’s painting. This makes her get mad. 【详解】句意：猫踩到了吉娜的画。她生气了。分析题干可知，原句时态为一般现在时，可以用“make sb. do sth.”改写句子，即“这让她很生气”；用this指代“The cat steps on Gina’s painting.”这件事，作主语；make sb. do sth.“使某人做某事”，主语“this”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应用三单形式makes；her“她”，作宾语；get mad“生气”，为省略to的动词不定式作宾语补足语。故填The cat steps on Gina’s painting. This makes her get mad. 2．用“make”改写句子。 Jenny has to say goodbye to her grandfather. She feels sad. 【答案】Jenny has to say goodbye to her grandfather. This makes her feel sad. 【详解】句意：珍妮不得不和她的祖父告别。她感到悲伤。分析题干可知，原句时态为一般现在时，可以用“make sb. do sth.”改写句子，即“这使她感到悲伤”；用this指代“Jenny has to say goodbye to her grandfather.”这件事，作主语；make sb. do sth.“使某人做某事”，主语“this”为第三人单数，谓语动词应用三单形式makes；her“她”，作宾语；feel sad“感到悲伤”，为省略to的动词不定式作宾语补足语。故填Jenny has to say goodbye to her grandfather. This makes her feel sad. 3．用“make”将两个句子连成一句。 The car driver is careless. Tom is angry. 【答案】The careless driver makes Tom angry. 【详解】句意：那个汽车司机很粗心。Tom很生气。原句可表达为“粗心的汽车司机让Tom很生气”，make sb. adj.“使某人……”，句子用一般现在时，the careless driver作主语，谓语动词应用三单形式。故填The careless driver makes Tom angry. 4．用make将两个句子连成一句话。 The math problem is very difficult. Mike is nervous. 【答案】The difficult math problem makes Mike nervous. 【详解】句意：这道数学题很难。迈克很紧张。用make将句子连起来可表达为“这道数学难题使迈克很紧张”，make sb+形容词“使某人如何”；主语是The difficult math problem，谓语动词用三单形式，故填The difficult math problem makes Mike nervous. 5．用“make”改写句子。 Emma wins the first prize in the chess competition. Her parents feel proud. 【答案】Emma wins the first prize in the chess competition. This makes her parents feel proud. 【详解】句意：Emma在国际象棋比赛中获得第一名。她的父母感到骄傲。“Emma在国际象棋比赛中获得第一名”的这件事让她的父母感到骄傲，可用this指代前句所讲述的事情，make sb. feel adj.“使某人感到……”，句子用一般现在时，主语是“this”，此时谓语动词用三单形式。故填Emma wins the first prize in the chess competition. This makes her parents feel proud. 二、汉译英 1.汤姆对他自己总是要求严格。（汉译英） 【答案】Tom is always hard on himself. 【详解】Tom“汤姆”，作主语；be hard on sb.“对某人严厉”，形容词短语；主语Tom为第三人称单数，时态为一般现在时，be动词用is；always“总是”，放在is后；Tom为男性，故用himself表示“他自己”。故填Tom is always hard on himself. 2．药物和休息都不能帮到他。(neither...nor) 【答案】Neither medicine nor rest can help him. 【详解】药物：medicine；休息：rest；能帮到他：can help him。neither...nor“既不……也不（两者都不）”，连接主语。故填Neither medicine nor rest can help him. 3．但不管是什么事，不要对自己要求太苛刻。 【答案】But whatever it was, don’t be too hard on yourself. 【详解】but“但是”；whatever“无论什么”，从句引导词；it从句主语；be从句谓语，时态为一般过去时，此处应用was；主句为祈使句的否定形式，应用“don’t+动词原形”结构；be too hard on sb.“对某人要求太严格”，固定词组；yourself“你自己”。故填But whatever it was, don’t be too hard on yourself. 4．我有很多财富，但是我总是担心会失去我的钱。 【答案】I have a lot of wealth, but I’m always worried about losing my money. 【详解】我：I；有：have；很多财富：a lot of wealth；但是：but；总是：always；担心某事：be worried about sth.；失去我的钱：lose my money。根据语境可知，时态是一般现在时，所以I后的be动词用am，about是介词，其后的动词lose要变成动词-ing形式losing。故填I have a lot of wealth, but I’m always worried about losing my money. 5．汤姆生病了，看起来面色苍白。（汉译英） 【答案】Tom is sick and his face looks as pale as chalk. 【详解】根据中文可知，句子用一般现在时。汤姆：Tom；生病了：be sick，主语是三单，be动词用is；面色：his face；看起来：look，主语是三单，谓语动词用三单；苍白：as pale as chalk。根据语境可知，前后两个句子并列，应用and连接。故填Tom is sick and his face looks as pale as chalk. 6．我有我想要的所有的东西，而且我不想要我无法得到的东西。 【答案】I have everything I want, and I don’t want what I can’t have. 【详解】have“有”；everything I want“我想要的所有的东西”；and“而且”；want“想要”；what I can’t have“我无法得到的东西”，句子是一般现在时，主语I是第一人称，动词用原形，故填I have everything I want, and I don’t want what I can’t have. 三、按照要求翻译句子 1．在考试前我感到有一个沉重的担子压在我的肩膀上。(feel like) 2．不要给你自己太多的压力。(be hard on) 3．她一回到家就敲她儿子的门。(knock on) 4．使她惊讶的是,她的脑子止不住地想发生在学校里的事情。(to one’s surprise) 5．他充满了勇气而不是害怕去了篮球场。(rather than) 【答案】1．I felt like there was a heavy weight on my shoulders before the exam. 2．Don’t be hard on yourself. 3．She knocked on his son’s door as soon as she got home 4．To her surprise,her mind couldn’t stop thinking about what had happened in the school. 5．He went to the basketball field with courage rather than fear. 【解析】1．feel like 感到像；a heavy weight on on one’s shoulders一个沉重的担子压在某人肩膀上；before the exam在考试前。主句的谓语动词用一般过去时，所以从句也用过去时。故答案为I felt like there was a heavy weight on my shoulders before the exam. 2．be hard on对……苛刻，对……要求严格。这里是祈使句，所以应该以动词原形开头。故答案为Don’t be hard on yourself. 3．knock on敲门；as soon as一……就……；get home到家。根据汉语可知，这里叙述的是过去的事情。故答案为She knocked on his son’s door as soon as she got home. 4．to one’s surprise令某人吃惊的是；stop doing停止正在做的事情；think about考虑。根据汉语可知，句子应该用一般过去时。故答案为To her surprise,her mind couldn’t stop thinking about what had happened in the school. 5．with courage充满了勇气；rather than而不是；go to the basketball field去篮球场。根据汉语可知，这里叙述的是过去的事情。故答案为He went to the basketball field with courage rather than fear. 四、按照中文意思完成句子 1．虽然我有很多权力，但它却并不能使我快乐。 I have a lot of power, it doesn’t . 【答案】 Although/Though make me happy 【详解】对比所给中英文可知，设空处为“虽然”以及“使我快乐”；although/though“虽然”，引导让步状语从句，句首首字母大写；make sb. happy“使某人快乐”，固定词组，根据空前的“doesn’t”可知，此处用动词原形；me“我”，人称代词宾格，作宾语。故填Although/Though；make；me；happy。 2．当他独自走回家时，他感到有一个沉重的负担压在他的肩上。 He there was a heavy weight he walked home alone. 【答案】 felt like on his shoulders as/ when 【详解】根据汉语提示可知，feel like表示“感觉”，根据“was”可知，应用一般过去时，feel的过去式是不规则变化felt；on his shoulders表示“在他的肩膀上”；as/when表示“当……的时候”。故填felt；like；on；his；shoulders；as/when。 3．这部电影太悲伤了以至于让蒂娜和艾米都哭了。 The movie was sad it made Tina and Amy cry. 【答案】 so that 【详解】根据中文提示可知，空处应填意为“如此……以至于……”的英文表达，so...that“如此……以至于……”，句中引导结果状语从句。故填so；that。 4．这让艾丽斯不高兴，因为她认为朱莉现在和我比和她更要好。 It makes Alice unhappy because she thinks Julie now me than with her. 【答案】 is better friends with 【详解】根据中文提示可知，第一空应填系动词is；第二、三空应填意为“更好的朋友”，friends“朋友”，better“更好的”，比较级，作定语修饰friends；第四空应填with“和……”。故填is；better；friends；with。 5．我担心老师会把我逐出社团。 I’m worried that my teacher will the club. 【答案】 kick me off 【详解】kick sb. off“开除某人，将某人踢下（某个地方或团队）”，will后接动词原形，kick后接宾格me。故填kick；me；off。 6．他弟弟不开心的时候既不看电视，也不玩电脑游戏。 His brother watches TV plays computer games when he is upset. 【答案】 neither nor 【详解】neither...nor...“既不……也不……”，表示两者都不，故填neither；nor。 五、情景运用 1．你想表达轻柔的音乐让你感到放松，可以这样说： . 【答案】Soft music makes me relax 【详解】soft music轻柔的音乐，make me relax让我感到放松，时态是一般现在时，主语是“Soft music”，动词用三单，故填Soft music makes me relax。 2．好朋友想知道你昨天和谁出去玩了，她会这样问： yesterday? 【答案】Who did you go out with 【详解】who“谁”，go out with“和……出去”，根据yesterday可知，此句是一般过去时，疑问句的助动词用did，故填Who did you go out with。 3．老师想知道过端午节时，你最喜欢什么，你会这么回答： As for the Dragon Boat Festival, . 【答案】I love the dragon boat races best 【详解】根据题干要求可知，可以说“我最喜欢龙舟比赛”。I“我”，作主语；短语love sth. best“最喜欢某物”；the dragon boat races“龙舟比赛”。故填I love the dragon boat races best。 4．Jim告诉大家他过去很怕黑，他会这么说： . 【答案】I used to be afraid of the dark 【详解】他过去很怕黑，可以这么表达“我过去怕黑。”，过去常常：used to be；害怕：be afraid of；黑暗：the dark，故填I used to be afraid of the dark。 5．你想知道朋友对他在德国生活的看法，可以这么问对方： ? 【答案】How do you like living there/How do you like living in Germany/What do you think of living there/What do you think of living in Germany 【详解】询问对方对某物的看法，应用固定句式：what do you think of sth或How do you like sth，且位于句首的单词首字母要大写，living there表示“住在这”或用living in Germany来表示“住在德国”。故填How do you like living there/How do you like living in Germany/What do you think of living there/What do you think of living in Germany。 (一) （23-24九年级下·全国·随堂练习）今天上午你经历了两件难忘的事情。请以“Learning to Forgive Others”为题，参照下面表格内容写一篇英语短文，简要描述事情的经过，并谈一下你的感悟。词数：80—100 （已给出的部分不计入总词数），可适当发挥。 事情经过 你的心情 你的感悟 妈妈起晚了，没做早饭，而且昨天忘了洗你的校服了。 …… 上学路上，你骑车撞倒了一位老人。 老人说：“没事，下次要小心些。” Learning to Forgive Others I will always remember what happened to me this morning. __________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Learning to Forgive Others I will always remember what happened to me this morning. When I got up, I found my mother didn’t make breakfast for me because she got up late. So I had to go to school without breakfast. And when I was going to put on my school uniform, I found my mother forgot to wash it. It made me unhappy. Later, I knew my mother didn’t sleep well at night because of her headache. I felt sorry for her. What’s more, when I went to school by bike, I knocked down an old man. I thought he would be hard on me, but he said, “Never mind. Be careful next time!” I was deeply moved. From these two things I know we should learn to understand each other. Society is like a big family. As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become much more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的主要内容，详细介绍事情的经过，你的心情以及你的感悟，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，直入主题，介绍发生在自己身上的两件事，包括事情的经过和你当时的心情； ②第二步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①get up起床 ②put on穿上 ③because of因为 ④by bike骑自行车 ⑤be hard on sb对某人苛刻 [高分句型] ① When I got up, I found my mother didn't make breakfast for me because she got up late.（when引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句） ② I found my mother forgot to wash it.（宾语从句） ③ As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become much more beautiful.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） (二) （23-24九年级下·全国·课后作业）生活中有欢笑，有泪水，有感动，有遗憾，总有让我们记忆深刻的事情。请同学们写一篇120词左右的短文，叙述这段经历和当时的感受以及自己的收获。 要求：1. 注意时态；2. 用多种句式叙述内心感受。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I will never forget the days when I moved to a new town. We had to move because of my father’s new job in another town. That made me sad and worried, and also made my good friends feel unhappy. The day after we moved to a new house, my parents took me to my new school. I felt really upset. Mr. Lin, my new head teacher, told me to introduce myself to the class. Speaking in front of my new classmates made me want to run away. However, the smiles on their faces encouraged me. After that, I tried to make some new friends. They took me to visit the museums and read in the library in the free time. Thanks to their help, I got used to the life in the new place quickly. From then on, I always tell myself that everything will be OK as long as we are brave enough. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题干提示及要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，叙述一件生活当中发生的事情； 第二步，介绍一下自己对这件事情的感受及收获。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②upset沮丧的 ③introduce oneself自我介绍 ④run away逃跑 ⑤get used to习惯 ⑥as long as只要 [高分句型] From then on, I always tell myself that everything will be OK as long as we are brave enough.(that引导宾语从句；as long as引导条件状语从句) (三) （23-24九年级下·全国·课堂例题）人非圣贤，孰能无过？作为一名学生，在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事？在认识到自己所犯的错误或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？请根据写作要点提示，以“The Mistake Made Me Grow Up”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事； 2. 谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的； 3. 你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。 注意： 1. 字数：90词左右； 2. 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 已给标题不计入总字数。 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I. 思路导图 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up Beginning One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Opinions Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry… Conclusion It made me grow up and I learned… II. 范文欣赏 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk. It is a beautiful pen. I really wanted to own it. Then I took the pen and put it in my schoolbag. While Lisa was looking for her pen, I was afraid and didn’t have the courage to tell her the truth. I told my mother about the pen after I got home. She said I made a mistake and told me I should be honest and make up for it. Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry, so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her. The next day, I did so and Lisa forgave me. I once made the mistake. It made me grow up and I learned the importance of honesty. 1. 句子提升。 It is a beautiful pen. (用感叹句升格) ________________________________________________ I told my mother about the pen after I got home. (用when引导时间状语从句升格) ________________________________ I once made the mistake. (用which引导定语从句升格) ________________________________________________________________________________________V. 同类话题好句积累。 【开头句】 Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. Research has shown that music has a great influence on people. The topic I want to talk about today is “How to be happy”. Here is a picture from a news report. In the picture, we can see three people. 【中间句】 However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. After listening to it, you will feel peaceful. Next, we must keep healthy. Others may think it’s you who have knocked her down. 【结尾句】 In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. Music is so wonderful. I like it very much. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life. I hope it won’t happen again. Let’s trust each other and help anyone in trouble. 2. 优化作文。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】【答题空1】What a beautiful pen! 【答题空2】When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. 【答题空3】That’s the mistake which I once made.     【小题2】例文 The Mistake Made Me Grow Up One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen on her desk. ①What a beautiful pen! I really wanted to own it. Then I took the pen and put it in my schoolbag. While Lisa was looking for her pen, I was afraid and didn’t have the courage to tell her the truth. ②When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. She said I made a mistake and told me I should be honest and make up for it. Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry, so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her. The next day, I did so and Lisa forgave me. ③That’s the mistake which I once made. It made me grow up and I learned the importance of honesty. 【详解】1.句意：这是一支漂亮的钢笔。pen“钢笔”，可数名词，应用what来引导感叹句，其句型为：What a/an+形容词+名词。故填What a beautiful pen it is! 句意：我回家后把钢笔的事告诉了妈妈。要求改成when引导的时间状语从句，原句可改为“当我回到家时，我告诉我妈妈关于钢笔的事”；when引导从句，位于句首，首字母要大写；I“我”，作从/主句主语；got home“回家”，作从句谓语；told my mother about the pen“告诉我妈妈关于钢笔的事”。故填When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. 句意：我曾经犯过那样的错误。要求改成which引导的定语从句，原句可改为“那是我曾经犯过的错误”；that’s“那是”，作主句主谓；the mistake“错误”，作表语，同时也是先行词；which作引导词；I once made“我曾犯过的”。故填That’s the mistake I once made. 2. [总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，详细陈述犯错的经历； 第二步，叙述在他人的帮助下认识到了错误以及纠错的过程； 第三步，总结与感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ① make up for 弥补，补偿 ② tell the truth 讲真话 ［高分句型］ ① When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. (when引导时间状语从句) ② That’s the mistake which I once made. (which引导的定语从句) (四) （23-24九年级下·全国·随堂练习）在预习导学中你搜集到了一些与幸福相关的故事，从你搜集到的故事中挑选一个，用英文写一篇短文简单介绍一下。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 The Pursuit of Happiness is a true story based on the life of Chris Gardner, a struggling salesman in San Francisco. Chris, played by Will Smith, faces numerous challenges including financial difficulties, homelessness, and single parenthood. Despite his circumstances, he remains determined to create a better life for himself and his young son. Chris’s relentless pursuit of happiness leads him to take on an unpaid internship at a prestigious stock brokerage firm. He faces countless obstacles and setbacks along the way but refuses to give up. Through hard work, perseverance, and unwavering belief in himself, Chris eventually secures a full-time position, successfully overcoming his adversity. The story highlights the power of resilience, determination, and the pursuit of one’s dreams and happiness. It portrays Chris Gardner’s inspiring journey from despair to triumph, leaving audiences with the message that no matter how challenging life may get, it’s possible to overcome obstacles and find true happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：考生应注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍故事的名称和主角； 第二步，具体阐述故事情节； 第三步，说明故事中蕴含的精神。 [亮点词汇] ①numerous很多的 ②determined坚定的 ③obstacles障碍 ④perseverance毅力 ⑤unwavering坚定的 ⑥inspiring鼓舞人心的 [高分句型] ①It portrays Chris Gardner’s inspiring journey from despair to triumph, leaving audiences with the message that no matter how challenging life may get, it’s possible to overcome obstacles and find true happiness.（that引导的同位语从句，no matter how引导的让步状语从句） (五) （23-24九年级下·全国·课后作业）每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. How do you often feel? 2. What makes you so…? Why? 3. Do you want to make any changes? How? 要求： 1. 内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 3. 词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I often feel angry. I’m angry with myself. I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games. I’m also angry with my best friend Bill. He argued with me several days ago and I don’t want to talk to him any more. But I really want to make a change. Maybe I should be strict with myself and maybe I should say sorry to Bill first. After all, I don’t want to lose my best friend.     I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我经常感到愤怒”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活习惯、与朋友相处等”几个方面重点介绍自己愤怒的对象及其原因； 第三步，书写结语。表达“生活充满和平与幸福”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① be angry with 对……生气 ② develop some healthy habits 养成一些健康的习惯 ③ staying up 熬夜 ④ not ... any more 不再…… ⑤ make a change 做出改变 ⑥ be strict with 对……严格 ⑦ say sorry to 对……道歉 ⑧ be filled with 充满 [高分句型] ① I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games.（but连接并列句，spend some time doing sth.句式） ② I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness.（宾语从句） (六) （22-23九年级下·全国·课时练习）每个人都有幸运和不幸运的时候，在你的记忆中，你所经历的最开心或最糟糕的一天是什么样子？写出你的经历和感受。不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday. I woke up late because my clock didn’t go off. I was nervous. I would be late for class. When I got to school, my English teacher was having class. As a result, my teacher punished me and I felt sad. At the beginning of the second class, my math teacher asked us to hand in math homework. I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him, which made me very afraid. After the lunch, I had a fight with my best friend. My headteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me home. I realized I let my parents down. That night I thought about these things carefully and decided to make a change and I believed I could be a better boy soon. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，需要详细描述最开心或最糟糕的一天是什么样子，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首句点题，介绍作者经历过的糟糕的一天是周二； 第二步，具体阐述周二这一天，作者经历的一些不开心的事情； 第三步，最后作者决定改变，做一个好男孩。 [亮点词汇] ①go off（电器设备）停止运转 ②ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事 ③make sb adj使某人…… [高分句型] ①I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday.（省略that的定语从句） ②I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him, which made me very afraid.（found后是省略that的宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句） ③My headteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me home.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） (七) （22-23九年级下·全国·课时练习）在你的校园生活中，你一定经历过让你非常感动的事。请根据自己的经历，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文记叙这件令你感动的事。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、通顺。 参考词汇：make sb. moved ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One day, I broke my leg while I was running in the playground in P. E. class. My classmates and my P. E. teacher quickly helped me to go to the hospital. I fell asleep after the doctor gave me a physical examination. I saw my P. E. teacher sleeping on the chair when I woke up after eight hours. He looked very tired. Ten minutes later, one of my classmates brought us some food. Their behavior made me very moved. When I ate the delicious noodles, my eyes were filled with tears. I think I will remember it forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，需要详细描述令你感动的事的过程，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍事件发生的时间、地点和人物； 第二步，具体阐述体育老师和同学是如何帮助自己的； 第三步，最后表达对他们的感激之情。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事 ②wake up醒来 ③be filled with充满 [高分句型] ①I fell asleep after the doctor gave me a physical examination.（after引导的时间状语从句） ②Their behavior made me very moved.（形容词作宾补） (八) （21-22九年级·全国·课时练习）假如你是王明，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容，写一篇短文用于投稿。词数：80—100。 内容要点 参考词汇 Parents’ care cook food, take...to and from school, look after Parents’ love trust, advice, encouragement My thanks … Dear Mom and Dad, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Wang Ming 【答案】例文： Dear Mom and Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all of your care and love. These years, you have done so much. Almost every day, Mom cooks delicious food for me and Dad takes me to and from school. When I’m sick, you look after me carefully and patiently. Both of you always trust me and care a lot about my school life and personal feelings. The talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow. The encouragement from you helps me fear no difficulties and troubles. Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Wang Ming 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点及参考词汇写短文表达自己的父母的感激之情，已给出格式为信件格式，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。可分为四段式写作：第一段点题；第二段讲父母做了什么；第三段讲父母对自己的帮助和鼓励；最后一段收尾，与开头呼应。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 (九) （2021·河南南阳·二模）在我们的成长过程中，总会有某个人一直陪伴在我们身边，给予我们帮助和力量。请以“______ is always with me”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点：1）请补全标题，如my father, my mother, my teacher, Miss Wang等。 2）他（她）是怎样陪伴你的； 3）你想为他（她）做些什么。 2. 要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 ______ is always with me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 My mother is always with me There is no one in the world who loves me more than my mother. She is always with me whenever I’m happy or sad. My mother has kept an eye on me since I was born. When I was young, she prepared interesting stories as well as delicious food for me. Now, I’m a student of Grade Nine. We can talk with each other like friends. When I’m tired of studying, she always listens to me patiently and manages to cheer me up. I hope I can do something for my mother, such as helping her with the housework, washing feet often for her and so on. I wish to be the person that she is proud of. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。内容是以“______ is always with me”为题，根据所给的要点，介绍一下这个人是如何一直陪伴在你身边，给予你帮助和力量的。 2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要根据要求补全题目；其次介绍他（她）是怎样陪伴你的；最后介绍你想为他（她）做些什么。 (十) (2021九年级·全国·专题练习)查看更多爱如沙漠里的绿洲，滋养着人的心灵；爱无处不在，来自父母，来自好友，来自老师，来自同学甚至陌生人。请用英文以 “Life is full of love”为题写一篇短文。 要点：1.你经历过的充满爱的故事；2.这件事对于你有什么影响。词数90词左右。 Life is full of love ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Life is full of love Life is full of love.I still remember one thing that touches me a lot. It was a rainy day.I failed my math exam and I felt very upset.What's worse,I didn't bring my umbrella.I felt even more worried.Suddenly,the rain drops disappeared.To my surprise,I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my classmate.He said that an exam couldn't stand for everything.He believes I can get good grades next time.I knew he cared me.And his words really cheered me up.It made me happy.After that,I worked harder and made great progress. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。先开篇点题；再用自己经历的充满爱的故事来充实内容。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来写；时态主要采用一般过去时来讲述自己收到的“爱”;描述自己的经历时，事情发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 (一) （2023·江苏盐城·中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1. Who/What do you always like being with? 2. Why do you like being with him/her/it? (Give two or three reasons) … 注意事项： 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Being with You You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Being with You You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class. Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don’t feel nervous any more. You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope I’ll be with you forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品； 第二步，按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人 ②thanks to多亏，由于 ③not…any more不再 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.（so…that引导的结果状语从句） ②I hope I’ll be with you forever.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） (二) （2023·山东烟台·中考真题）假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括： l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢； 2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Brown, I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school. I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy. It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果； 第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步； 第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with和某人交流 ②full of充满 ③all in all总的来说 [高分句型] ①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句) (三) （2023·四川凉山·中考真题）在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺； 2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 4. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Thanks, ________ Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend…_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Thanks, Mom Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend. The person that I want to thank most is my mother. She is 40 years old. She works in a hospital, and she works very hard. She is tall and thin. She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time. She is willing to do everything for me. To express my love, I can buy presents for her, study hard and help her do something useful. I will remember her love and be thankful to her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Thanks, ________”为标题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明想感谢的是谁； 第二步，感谢的人的个人信息，想感谢他/她的原因； 第三步，介绍如何感谢以及美好的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①works very hard工作很努力 ②takes care of照顾 ③all the time一直 ④be thankful to对……表示感激 [高分句型] ①The person that I want to thank most is my mother.（that引导的定语从句） ②I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.（that引导的宾语从句） (四) （2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 注意事项： 1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Person I Want to Thank In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。 (五) （2022·重庆·中考真题）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Corner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。 要求： 1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒 1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果） 2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……） 3. …… Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?__________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 【答案】例文 Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience. Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger. From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better. Thanks for listening. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题，结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 (六) （2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。 内容包括： 1.你对这位老师的印象； 2.你感谢他（她）的原因； 3.你对他（她）的祝福。 注意： 1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当举例或拓展； 3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。 It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to ________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$