Unit3 My School单元作文讲解与训练-2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级上册

Unit3 My School 如何介绍学校布局以及学校生活 写作维度分析 本单元的话题是“谈论学校布局以及学校生活”,要求学生能用所学词汇和句型描述学校布局和各区域的功能。 此类写作可能会涉及图表描述、文字描述等形式。写作时，应该按照一定的空间顺序，有条理地描述该区域中各个地点的位置关系。注意灵活运用behind、next to、in front of、between、across from、at the back(of)等方位介词(短语)。 写作典例指导 假如你是李华，你美国的好朋友Peter给你发了一封关于他新学校的电子邮件。请根据表格中的信息提示，给他回一封邮件讲讲你的新学校，介绍你的学校情况和校园生活。 学校特点 不大但很漂亮 学校建筑 运动场、教学楼、教师办公楼、图书馆…… 学校布局 运动场在学校中央； 教学楼在运动场和教师办公楼之间； 图书馆挨着学校礼堂； …… 最喜欢的地方 …… 审主题：介绍学校并描述校园生活 审人称：第一、三人称 审体裁：说明文 审时态：一般现在时 审要点：学校特点、学校建筑、学校布局、最喜欢的地方 要求：1.应包含上表中的全部内容，可适当发挥； 2.条理清楚，行文连贯； 3.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Thank you for your email.Your school sounds nice!I'd like to tell you about my new school.My school is_______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路导图： 词句积累 词汇 描述性词汇 great极棒的，极好的 clean洁净的，干净的 special特殊的，特别的 beautiful美丽的 amazing令人惊奇(惊喜或惊叹)的 nice美好的，令人愉快的 small小的 modern现代的 方位介词(短语) across from在……对面 behind在……后面 next to紧挨着at the back of在……后面 in front of在……前面 in the middle of在……的中间 between...and...在……和……之间 学校建筑 science building科学楼 school hall学校礼堂 music hall音乐厅dining hall餐厅 sports field运动场 art building艺术楼classroom building教学楼 teachers' building教师办公楼 library图书馆 学校活动 do exercises做体操 raise the national flag 升国旗 read books读书have lunch吃午餐 have classes上课 句子 开头句 This is my new school.It's not big but very beautiful.这是我的新学校。它不大但是很漂亮。My new school is great and very beautiful.我的新学校很棒并且很漂亮。 中间句 1.与方位相关 There is...in front of/next to/at the back of/...在……前面/旁边/后面/……有…… There are...in...在……里有…… Behind...is...……的后面是…… It's between...and...它位于……和……之间。 ...is across from...……在……对面。 2.与活动相关 We do exercises/spend most of the time/raise the national flag/enjoy delicious food/...there.我们在那里做操/度过大多数时间/升国旗/享用美味的食物…… 结尾句 What a nice school!I love my new school.多好的学校呀!我爱我的新学校。 佳作展示 Dear Peter, Thank you for your email.Your school sounds nice!I'd like to tell you about my new school.①My school is not big but very beautiful. ②There is a sports field in the middle of the school.We go there and raise the national flag every Monday.It's great!②The classroom building is between the sports field and the teachers' building.It looks very new.We spend most of the time in our classroom.②And the library is next to the school hall.In the library,there are many kinds of books.③It's my favourite place because it's quiet and I like reading books there.The dining hall is in front of the library and we have meals there. ④What a nice school!I love my new school. Bye for now, Li Hua 教材原句 There is a garden between the school hall and the science building.(教材P39 3a) There's a large sports field next to the school hall.(教材P40 1b) It's my favourite place because there are many kinds of food.(教材P401b) 名师点评 此篇习作行文连贯，条理清晰。 ①开篇点题，对学校进行了整体描述。 ②准确运用介词短语in the middle of、between...and...、next to,清楚地描述了学校各地点间的位置关系。 ③运用because引导的原因状语从句说明了“我”最喜欢图书馆的原因。 ④运用感叹句，表达了“我”对学校的赞叹与喜爱。 写作迁移训练 假设与你们学校合作的英国学校派团前来参观。请你根据下面的学校布局图，向外国友人们介绍学校布局和校园生活。 图书馆 科技楼 教学楼 餐厅 办公楼 运动场 大门 要求： 1. 写作应包含上图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯； 3. 词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello and welcome to our school. I’ll show you around. Let's begin the tour. _____________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作提示】 1.主题：介绍学校布局和校园生活 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时 4.写作思路：首先介绍学校整体情况，接着具体描述学校布局、环境与校园生活，最后表达对学校的情感。 【范文赏读】 Hello and welcome to our school. I’ll show you around. Let's begin the tour. Our school is big and beautiful. On the right of the school gate is our office building. Our classroom building is in the middle of the school. And it has five floors. My classroom is on the third floor. There is a big sports field behind our classroom building. We have PE class and do sports there. The science building is across from the classroom building. The library is behind the science building. There are many kinds of books in it. We really enjoy reading books in the library. And the dining hall is in front of the science building. You can enjoy delicious food there. We can also see many green trees and colourful flowers in our school. We like our school and enjoy the school life very much. I hope you all have a good time here. （文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit3 My School 如何介绍学校布局以及学校生活 写作维度分析 本单元的话题是“谈论学校布局以及学校生活”,要求学生能用所学词汇和句型描述学校布局和各区域的功能。 此类写作可能会涉及图表描述、文字描述等形式。写作时，应该按照一定的空间顺序，有条理地描述该区域中各个地点的位置关系。注意灵活运用behind、next to、in front of、between、across from、at the back(of)等方位介词(短语)。 写作典例指导 假如你是李华，你美国的好朋友Peter给你发了一封关于他新学校的电子邮件。请根据表格中的信息提示，给他回一封邮件讲讲你的新学校，介绍你的学校情况和校园生活。 学校特点 不大但很漂亮 学校建筑 运动场、教学楼、教师办公楼、图书馆…… 学校布局 运动场在学校中央； 教学楼在运动场和教师办公楼之间； 图书馆挨着学校礼堂； …… 最喜欢的地方 …… 审主题：介绍学校并描述校园生活 审人称：第一、三人称 审体裁：说明文 审时态：一般现在时 审要点：学校特点、学校建筑、学校布局、最喜欢的地方 要求：1.应包含上表中的全部内容，可适当发挥； 2.条理清楚，行文连贯； 3.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Thank you for your email.Your school sounds nice!I'd like to tell you about my new school.My school is_______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路导图： 词句积累 词汇 描述性词汇 great极棒的，极好的 clean洁净的，干净的 special特殊的，特别的 beautiful美丽的 amazing令人惊奇(惊喜或惊叹)的 nice美好的，令人愉快的 small小的 modern现代的 方位介词(短语) across from在……对面 behind在……后面 next to紧挨着at the back of在……后面 in front of在……前面 in the middle of在……的中间 between...and...在……和……之间 学校建筑 science building科学楼 school hall学校礼堂 music hall音乐厅dining hall餐厅 sports field运动场 art building艺术楼classroom building教学楼 teachers' building教师办公楼 library图书馆 学校活动 do exercises做体操 raise the national flag 升国旗 read books读书have lunch吃午餐 have classes上课 句子 开头句 This is my new school.It's not big but very beautiful.这是我的新学校。它不大但是很漂亮。My new school is great and very beautiful.我的新学校很棒并且很漂亮。 中间句 1.与方位相关 There is...in front of/next to/at the back of/...在……前面/旁边/后面/……有…… There are...in...在……里有…… Behind...is...……的后面是…… It's between...and...它位于……和……之间。 ...is across from...……在……对面。 2.与活动相关 We do exercises/spend most of the time/raise the national flag/enjoy delicious food/...there.我们在那里做操/度过大多数时间/升国旗/享用美味的食物…… 结尾句 What a nice school!I love my new school.多好的学校呀!我爱我的新学校。 佳作展示 Dear Peter, Thank you for your email.Your school sounds nice!I'd like to tell you about my new school.①My school is not big but very beautiful. ②There is a sports field in the middle of the school.We go there and raise the national flag every Monday.It's great!②The classroom building is between the sports field and the teachers' building.It looks very new.We spend most of the time in our classroom.②And the library is next to the school hall.In the library,there are many kinds of books.③It's my favourite place because it's quiet and I like reading books there.The dining hall is in front of the library and we have meals there. ④What a nice school!I love my new school. Bye for now, Li Hua 教材原句 There is a garden between the school hall and the science building.(教材P39 3a) There's a large sports field next to the school hall.(教材P40 1b) It's my favourite place because there are many kinds of food.(教材P401b) 名师点评 此篇习作行文连贯，条理清晰。 ①开篇点题，对学校进行了整体描述。 ②准确运用介词短语in the middle of、between...and...、next to,清楚地描述了学校各地点间的位置关系。 ③运用because引导的原因状语从句说明了“我”最喜欢图书馆的原因。 ④运用感叹句，表达了“我”对学校的赞叹与喜爱。 写作迁移训练 假设与你们学校合作的英国学校派团前来参观。请你根据下面的学校布局图，向外国友人们介绍学校布局和校园生活。 图书馆 科技楼 教学楼 餐厅 办公楼 运动场 大门 要求： 1. 写作应包含上图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯； 3. 词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello and welcome to our school. I’ll show you around. Let's begin the tour. _____________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作提示】 1.主题：介绍学校布局和校园生活 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时 4.写作思路：首先介绍学校整体情况，接着具体描述学校布局、环境与校园生活，最后表达对学校的情感。 【范文赏读】 Hello and welcome to our school. I’ll show you around. Let's begin the tour. Our school is big and beautiful. On the right of the school gate is our office building. Our classroom building is in the middle of the school. And it has five floors. My classroom is on the third floor. There is a big sports field behind our classroom building. We have PE class and do sports there. The science building is across from the classroom building. The library is behind the science building. There are many kinds of books in it. We really enjoy reading books in the library. And the dining hall is in front of the science building. You can enjoy delicious food there. We can also see many green trees and colourful flowers in our school. We like our school and enjoy the school life very much. I hope you all have a good time here. （文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$