Unit 7 Section B (3a－3b) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年九年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

英语 九年级全册 人教版 原创新课堂 Section B (3a－3b)　写作指导 话题剖析 本单元以“规则”为话题，让同学们在了解学校、家庭以及社会中各种各样的规章制度的同时，也反思自己的行为。这种文体通常是夹叙夹议的，因此，写作时应针对某项规则，有条理地阐述自己的观点。在阐述自己的观点时，要有理有据，不能偏激。 目标展示 阅读有关文章并能将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中，会写一篇关于遵守规章制度方面的文章。 国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一两条校规或班纪，并谈一下自己的看法。 要求：1.语句通顺，书写规范； 2．词数：80左右。 _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 There are many rules in our school.The rule I most dislike at our school is that we have to wear uniforms every day.The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly.I think young people should look smart.So I'd like to wear my own clothes.If we have to wear uniforms，we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy. Although we have different views on the rules，I think everyone should obey the school rules. 一、回答问题。 When you are a teenager，it seems that every time you say “I want to...”，your parents answer，“No，you can't.” Teenagers often think they should be allowed to make their own decisions，but their parents may worry about children's development. Li Hai，a 15­year­old boy from Huarong，is a middle school student.He is often late for school because he stays up too late.His parents always ask him to go to bed early and have enough sleep.But Li Hai thinks that he should be allowed to watch TV and play computer games as much as he wants.If his parents refuse his requirements (要求)，he will argue with his father or mother.“Maybe my son thinks the family rules are too strict or unfair，” says Mrs. Li，“But we think we're doing the right thing.Li Hai needs to spend more time on his study. We expect him to get into a good university.” Li Hai is always asking，“Could you make the bed for me？” or “Could you help me to sweep the floor？” He thinks doing housework is a waste of time. His parents insist doing chores with him every weekend.Gradually he realizes the importance of doing housework.Sometimes he helps his mother with housework.These days，Li Hai knows his parents care about him and he must follow these strict family rules.Only then will he have a chance to become a better teenager. 1．What do teenagers want according to the first paragraph? They want to be allowed to make their own decisions. 2．Why is Li Hai often late for school? Because he stays up too late. 3．How may Li Hai feel about the family rules? He may think the family rules are too strict or unfair. 4．What's the expectation (期望) of Li Hai's parents? It's getting into a good university./They expect Li Hai to get into a good university. 5．What did Li Hai think of doing housework at first? He thought doing housework is a waste of time. 二、书面表达。 最近，你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like？”为主题的班会。请你综合图中同学的观点，写一篇短文，向学校校刊投稿，并发表你自己的看法。 要求：1.80词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2．文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 One possible version： What Are Good Parents Like? Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas. Sam thinks good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades. Bob thinks his parents are supportive. They always bring out the best in him. Ann thinks good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can't see them，but they are always there. In my opinion，good parents should be good teachers as well as good friends of the kids. There should be love，patience，listening and encouragement between the parents and children. They should also be example of the children to follow. So good parents should be diligent，responsible，honest and willing to help others. 【思路点拨】 此次写作是一篇论述性的作文，主要是谈论校规。文章的时态应为一般现在时，人称可为第一人称。表达自己的观点和看法时，可交替使用主动语态或被动语态。提纲如下： eq \x(开篇引题) → eq \x(There are many rules in our school.) eq \x(阐述规则) → eq \x(At our school we have to wear uniforms.) eq \x(发表看法) → eq \b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(\x(同学们的看法)→\x(...think the uniforms are ugly.),\x(自己的看法)→I think...should look smart.,If we have to...we should be allowed to design...,\x(升华观点)→Although...I think everyone should obey...)) $$