Unit 5 Section B(3a－4) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B(3a－4)　写作指导 英语 八年级上册 人教版 原创新课堂 本单元的话题是“娱乐活动”。针对该话题，书面表达的主要命题角度是谈论对不同类型的电视节目、电影、比赛活动等的看法。写此类文章时多用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主。 【重点短语】 1．action movie ______________ 　　　　 2.find out _______________ 　　　　　　　　 3.have a discussion ______________ 4．准备好 ___________________ 5.做得好 ___________________ 6.因……而出名 ___________________ 讨论 动作片 找出 be ready to do a good job be famous for 【万能句型】 【万能句型】 开头句：1.We had a discussion about TV shows.我们针对电视节目进行了一次讨论。 2．My favorite film is... because... 我最喜欢的电影是……因为…… 3．I can't stand/don't mind... 我受不了/不在意…… 中间句：1.The program/movie is about... 这个节目/电影是关于…… 2．I think they are meaningless/educational/... 我认为它们没有意义/有教育意义/…… 3．He loves it because he can... 他喜欢它因为他可以…… 结尾句：1.What do you think of...？你认为……怎么样？ 2．If you want to see something interesting，choose it！如果你想看一些有趣的东西，选它！ 3．It's a really... and... program. 它真的是一个……的节目。 【正能量金句】 1．I hope to find out what's going on around the world. 我希望弄清世界各地正在发生的事情。 2．I like to follow the story and see what happens next. 我喜欢跟随故事情节并了解接下来将会发生什么事。 3．They may not be very exciting，but you can expect to learn a lot from them.它们可能不是很令人兴奋，但是你可以期待从中学到很多东西。 假如你是李华，请你根据下面表格提示内容，写一篇约70词的英语短文，谈谈你和你父母最喜欢的电视节目及原因。 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ 姓名 最喜欢的节目 原因 李华 动物世界 (AnimalWorld) 喜欢动物 李爸爸 体育新闻 (SportsNews) 爱运动 李妈妈 肥皂剧 (Soap Opera) 喜欢跟随故事情节看 【审题立意】 谈论喜好的文章，属于说明文的范畴，写作时要注意以下几点： 1．表明对电视节目的好恶时，该类句型多用一般现在时； 2．写作时，不要把表格内容简单地罗列，应适当增加细节，保持文意连贯。 【升格作文】 My parents and I like different kinds of TV programs. I love watching Animal World best because I love animals and I expect to know more about them from the program.My father likes Sports News best because he is interested in sports.Doing sports are a good way to keep healthy.①My mother likes soap operas very much.She likes to follow the stories and see what will happen next. Everyone in my family has different ideas about TV programs. However，we all like watching TV. My parents and I like different kinds of TV programs. I love watching Animal World best because I love animals and I expect to know more about them from the program.My father is a sports fan，so Sports News is his favorite.②And he thinks doing sports is a good way to keep healthy.What about my mother？③She likes soap operas best because she likes to follow the stories and see what will happen next. Everyone in my family has different ideas about TV programs. However，we all like watching TV. 【综合点评】 ①处错误在于动词­ing形式作主语时，谓语动词应为单数，“are”应该改为“is”。 ②处优点在于变换了句型，使上下文衔接更为流畅自然。 ③处增添一个问句过渡句，让文章更为连贯。 近期电视上的真人秀(reality shows)类节目热播，赢得观众的好评。但随着这一类节目的泛滥，许多真人秀的“真”让人质疑，“秀”的成分居多， “人”最宝贵的情感和品质变成了吸引观众的招牌。请你结合自身经历写一篇约70词的短文，谈谈你对真人秀类节目的看法及感受。 Some people choose to watch some good and healthy reality shows because these shows can make us relaxed and learn something from them, such as the importance of working together. Several weeks ago, I watched a reality show named Impossible Challenge. Most of the actors try their best to challenge themselves. I was inspired. Also, I realized that cooperation is very important. So I take part in many clubs to challenge myself and I get on with others. So the reality shows can both open our mind and make us learn many excellent qualities from the actors. 【结构提纲】 eq \x(开篇点题) ―→My parents and I like different kinds of TV programs. eq \x(展开说明) ―→ I love... because I expect to know more about them. My father/mother likes... best because he/she... eq \x(结尾总结) ―→ eq \x(We all like watching TV.) $$