Unit 3 Section B(3a－4) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B(3a－4)　写作指导 英语 八年级上册 人教版 原创新课堂 本单元的话题是“人物个性特征”，向我们展示了如何谈论人物特征，如何运用比较级对人物进行比较。写此类短文时，一要抓住人物特点，如外貌特征和个性特征；二要正确运用所学的比较级知识，写出人物的相同点和不同点。 【重点短语】 1．care about __________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 2．not as/so... as _________ 3．be similar to ____________ 4．擅长 ___________________________________ 5．把某人最好的一面表现出来 _______________________. 6．善于与……相处 ______________ 关心 be good at/be talented in/do well in 与……相似 bring out the best in sb 不如 be good with 【万能句型】 开头句：1.My best friend is quite different from me. 我最好的朋友与我完全不同。 2．A good friend is like a mirror. 一个好朋友就像一面镜子。 3．My favorite saying is... It makes me think about my best friend. 我最喜欢的谚语是……这让我想起我最好的朋友。 中间句：1.As for...，we have something in common. 至于……，我们有一些共同之处。 2．We both like...，but... than me. 我们都喜欢……，但是……比我…… 3．He/She is... with... 他/她有着……的外表。 结尾句：1.In my mind，he/she is my best friend in the world. 在我看来，他/她是我在这个世上最好的朋友。 2．Though we...，we will be the best friends all the time. 尽管我们……，我们将一直是最好的朋友。 3．We are good friends and we care about each other.我们是好朋友并且我们关心彼此。 【正能量金句】 1．A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. 一个真正的朋友会向你伸出援手，使你感动。 2．Friends are like books—You don't need a lot of them as long as they're good. 朋友就像书，不在多贵在好。 友谊如人生的甘泉，人人都需要。请你写一篇约70词的短文，从外貌、性格、爱好等方面介绍你和你最好的朋友Lucy之间的异同及你的感受。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 【审题立意】 本文要求从外貌、性格、爱好等方面介绍你和你最好的朋友Lucy的相同之处和不同之处。时态用一般现在时，人称用第一和第三人称单数。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，进行比较时要用到比较级。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【升格作文】 Lucy is my best friend. We have a lot in common, but we still have some differences. She is as tall as me, but she's thinner than me. She's more outgoing than me.So she has more friends than me.Both of us like dancing, but I dance better than her.She works harder than me.She always gets better grades than I do.And she is good at English, so she often helps me with my English.We have different hobbies. I like watching movies in my free time but she likes reading books. I feel happy to have such a good friend.　　 Lucy is my best friend. We have a lot in common, but we still have some differences. She is as tall as me, but she's thinner than me. She's more outgoing than me.That's why she has more friends than me.①Both of us like dancing, but I dance better than her.About the learning，she works harder than me.②She always gets better grades than I do.And she is good at English, so she often helps me with my English.As for hobbies, I like watching movies in my free time while she likes reading books.③ I feel happy to have such a good friend. 【综合点评】 ①处改为表语从句，且本单元书本上有类似的句子，学生更能接受，从而使行文更为高级。 ②处添加“About the learning”的表达， 使上下文过渡更为自然。 ③处恰到好处地使用了连接词As for, while, 使文章更加自然、流畅。 友谊因志同道合而弥足珍贵，也因彼此差异而精彩纷呈。请你以“My Friend and I”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你和你的朋友。 要求：1.短文须包含思维导图中所有信息； 2．重点谈谈你和你的朋友的异同及你的择友观； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。 My Friend and I I have a good friend. Her name is Lisa. We have a lot in common. Both of us are outgoing and like to help others. We both like sports. We think they can make us happy. As for study, she studies harder than me, so she does better in all subjects. I want to be a teacher when I grow up, while she wants to be a doctor to help people. I think a good friend is like a mirror. We should have something in common so that we can talk about and share everything together. And the most important is to be true. $$