Unit 1 Section B(3a－4) 写作指导（作业课件）-【原创新课堂】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（人教版 广东专用）

Section B(3a－4)　写作指导 英语 八年级上册 人教版 原创新课堂 本单元的话题是“假期活动”，要求学生围绕该话题记述假期旅行。文章的体裁以记叙文为主，主要描述参观访问、旅途见闻或走亲访友等活动的过程。文章以时间或地点为顺序展开，写作时加上自己的感受则能使文章更加丰富充实。 【重点短语】 1．度假 _________________　　　　　　　　　 2.不少_______________ 3．玩得开心 ________________________________________________ 4．feel like ____________　　　　　 5.because of ____________　　　　 6.something special _________________ on vacation 感觉好像 have a good time/enjoy oneself/have a great time 因为 quite a few 一些特别的东西 【万能句型】 开头句：1.Last...，... went to... on vacation. 上个……，……去了……度假。 2．We had a good time with... 我们和……玩得开心。 3．Today was a ... day. 今天是一个……的天。 中间句：1.We visited... 我们参观了…… 2．Everything was excellent. 一切都很棒。 3．I couldn't wait to... 我迫不及待地…… 结尾句：1.What a(n) pleasant/unforgettable trip! 一次愉快/难忘的旅行！ 2．The trip was so... that we... 这次旅行太……因此我们…… 3．It was... today，but I．.. 尽管今天……，但我…… 【正能量金句】 1．Travel opens up the mind. 旅游开阔眼界。 2．Man who travels far knows more. 行路多者见识多。 3．Read ten thousand books，and travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书，行万里路。 近期，育才中学将举行以“研学旅行”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A/An ________ Study Trip”为题，写一篇约70词的英语演讲稿，谈谈你今年已经参加过的研学之旅及感受。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 【审题立意】 本文是一篇以“A/An ________ Study Trip”为题的演讲稿。写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，介绍演讲稿的主题；第二段介绍研学旅行的时间、天气、交通方式、地点、活动等内容；第三段介绍对这次研学的看法和感受。 【升格作文】 A Wonderful Study Trip Boys and girls，today my topic is an educational study trip. On March 21st，I visited Guangdong Museum with my classmates by bus. It was sunny but cold. In the museum，I saw beautiful Chinese paintings and learned the history of Guangdong. At noon，I tasted some Guangdong food. Also，I took quite a few photos. The trip made me very excited. All in all，the study trip was wonderful. During the trip，I had great fun and learned something useful A Wonderful Study Trip Boys and girls，today my topic is an educational study trip. On March 21st，I visited Guangdong Museum with my classmates by bus. It was sunny but cold. In the museum，I saw beautiful Chinese paintings and learned the history of Guangdong. At noon，I tasted some Guangdong food.They were so delicious that I couldn't wait to buy some for my family.①Also，I took quite a few photos to keep the wonderful memory. The trip made me very excited. All in all，what a wonderful study trip！② During the trip，I not only had great fun but also learned something useful.③ 【综合点评】 ①处扩写不仅使用了本单元的重点句型“so... that...”，而且使用了can't wait to do短语。 ②处变为感叹句，表达更为有力。 ③处使用连词 “not only...but also...”综合概括了作者对这次活动的感受。 开学第一节英语课上，老师鼓励大家用英语讲述自己多姿多彩的暑期生活。请你以“My Trip to________”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你的假期旅行见闻及感受。 要求：1.补全标题； 2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。 My Trip to ___________ I had a great summer vacation.I traveled to Beijing with my family in July.We went there by train and we stayed there for a week. Beijing is a beautiful city.We visited many places of interest. The weather was hot，but we were excited.I went to the countryside to live with my grandparents in August.Their village was small and quiet，and the weather was cool.I loved the green trees，the clear river and the lovely animals there.I helped my grandparents do some farm work. Sometimes I felt tired，but I was never bored. What a wonderful vacation I had! Beijing $$