Unit 4 History and Traditions Reading for Writing(课件)-【上好课】高一英语同步高效课堂（人教版2019必修第二册）

高中英语人教版2019必修第二册 Unit 4 History and Traditions Reading for Writing 01. Warm up Lead-in Warm up What can you see in Jiujiang? spectacular mountains striking waterfalls beautiful flowers Lead-in Warm up What can you hear in Jiujiang? the chirp of birds the gurgle of water Lead-in Warm up What can you feel in Jiujiang? the warm sunshine kisses from the breeze Lead-in Warm up What can you taste in Jiujiang? delicious local snacks various traditional dishes Lead-in Warm up What can you smell in Jiujiang? sweet scent of flowers fresh air in the city Lead-in Warm up seses How to describe a place using five senses? sight hearing touch taste smell 02. Pre-writing Lead-in Pre-writing BEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS Prediction: What is this paragraph about? Lead-in Pre-writing Q: What’s the topic sentence of the paragraph? Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you’re lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand. Topic sentence(introductory sentence): Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. Lead-in Pre-writing Q: What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring? Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. Its beauty and the way it offers something for all senses. Lead-in Pre-writing Q: Why did the author use “birds greet the new day with their morning song” in the sentence ? On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. It means that you not only smell but also breathe in the smell of fresh flowers early in the morning as the birds sing their first song of the new day. Lead-in Pre-writing On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. He used a figure of speech-personification to make the scene he wanted to describe more vivid and lively. Q: What is the meaning of “breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song”? Lead-in Pre-writing To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. Q: What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and culture? By stopping by a village pub and relaxing with a drink and traditional dishes while listening to music and watching dancing. Lead-in Pre-writing Q: What are the best ways to experience some Chinese traditions and customs? By travelling to different places, using all your senses to experience everythingor communicating with local people. Lead-in Pre-writing Play a matching game feel the sun on your skin enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIeand” its many green counties the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers Sight Hearing Touch Smell Taste Lead-in Pre-writing The paragraph talks about different senses in different places. Write the senses and places in the order that they appear. Senses 1. Places 1. 2. 2. 3. 3. 4. 4. sight hearing touch smell in the green countries and hills by the sea in the mountains in the mountains Lead-in Pre-writing Analyze the structure of the paragraph Introduction structure Body Ending Transitions(transitional sentences) Details and examples(five sense method) Lead-in Pre-writing With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing and dining. sceneries culture transitional sentence 过渡句 Lead-in Pre-writing If you’re lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first hand. Ending sentence 03. Writing Lead-in Writing Use what we have learnt to describe Jiuijang. Introduction: Make the reader eager to read your writing. A striking image Something surprising A quote or question In Jiujiang, every day starts with a “fire”! The houses turn red as the sun rises above the mountains. Lead-in Writing Use what we have learnt to describe Jiuijang. Body: 1. Transitions In the morning/ afternoon/ evening First, second, etc. In the north... in the south... 2. Details and examples Use sensory words. Give examples. Figures of speech. Use five sense method. Lead-in Writing Use what we have learnt to describe Jiuijang. Body: What can you see, hear, smell, etc.? I learnt a lot. There were many things... Some people... Who? What? What did you learn? Lead-in Writing What can you see in Jiujiang? The peaceful landscape of Jiujiang and its many counties is a true feast for the eyes, with ________________________dotted with__________________and________________. 九江风光宁静秀美，郡县草木葱茏，青山连绵起伏，瀑布、鲜花点缀其中，堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。 its spectacular mountains striking waterfalls beautiful flowers Lead-in Writing What can you hear in Jiujiang? And down by the Poyang Lake, ____________________and ____________________make up the unique music of Jiujiang. 鄱阳湖边水流汩汩，海鸟啾啾，奏响了九江独特的交响乐。 the gurgle of water the chirp of birds Lead-in Writing What can you feel and smell in Jiujiang? On a quiet morning, feel the breeze __________________, and breathe in_____________________________while this city greets the new day with its first smile. 在宁静的早晨，感受微风亲吻着我们的脸颊，呼吸着鲜花的芬芳，而这座城市则以第一抹微笑迎接新的一天的到来。 the sweet scent of flowers kissing our faces Lead-in Writing What can you taste in Jiujiang? To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a shop to ____________________________when___________________________. Better yet, find a restaurant and_________________________________. 为了有体验的机会，在小店停留，品尝美味的当地小吃，和当地人交谈。更好的找一家餐馆，享受各种传统美食。 interacting with local people enjoy various traditional dishes taste delicious local snacks Lead-in Writing Use what we have learnt to describe Jiuijang. Ending: 1. Let the reader know that the passage ends. 2. Help the reader remember your writing. At night, the stars come out to tell us that all is well and Jiujiang grows quiet. For now we’ll sleep, and tomorrow the sun will set us on fire again for a new day! 03. Post-writing Lead-in Post-writing Beautiful Jiujiang and Its Traditions In Jiujiang, every day starts with a “fire”! The houses turn red as the sun rises above the mountains. The city not only has a long history of producing great writers and poets but owns many tourist destinations which excite and inspire all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of Jiujiang and its many counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its spectacular mountains dotted with striking waterfalls and beautiful flowers. And down by the Poyang Lake, the chirp of birds and the gurgle of water make up the unique music of Jiujiang. On a quiet morning, feel the breeze kissing our faces, and breathe in the sweet scent of flowers while this city greets the new day with its first smile. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Jiujiang has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, in the afternoon, stop by a shop to taste delicious local snacks when interacting with local people. Better yet, find a restaurant and enjoy various traditional dishes. At night, the stars come out to tell us that all is well and Jiujiang grows quiet. For now we’ll sleep, and tomorrow the sun will set us on fire again for a new day! Lead-in Post-writing How to evaluate the draft? 1. Does the writer start with an image, quote or question? 2. Is the description well-organised and easy to learn? 3. Has the writer included sensory details? 4. Does the writer use specific words and give examples? 5. Is the ending effective? 6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes? Lead-in Post-writing How to evaluate the draft? 1. Does the writer start with an image, quote or question? 2. Is the description well-organised and easy to learn? 3. Has the writer included sensory details? 4. Does the writer use specific words and give examples? 5. Is the ending effective? 6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes? √ √ √ √ √ √ Lead-in Summary 1 2 3 How can we organize our essays? How can we build great sentences? S summary What can we write about? Lead-in Summary 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack得知你进入一个新学校学习，来信询问你新学校的一些情况。请你写信回复，简单介绍一下你的学校。 注意：  1、词数100左右，开头语已经为你写好；  2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Lead-in Summary sight hearing touch taste smell Describe our shool using what we have learnt in this class. Lead-in Summary Show time Love our school Love our hometown Love our country Lead-in Homework 1. Evaluate your partner’s draft and ask him/her to revise it. 2. Make a class book about your favorite places. Thank you for your listening 4104.0 null 104518.305 $$