Unit1 Laugh Out Loud 写作提高训练- 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题（外研版2019选择性必修第一册）

Unit1 Laugh Out Loud 写作提高训练 - 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题 （外研版2019选择性必修第一册） 一、书信写作 1．请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Mental Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一种调节情绪的方法。内容包括： 1. 介绍这种方法； 2. 说明推荐的理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 题目自拟，不计入总词数； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你校英文报正在开展以smile为题的征文比赛。请你以“The power of smile”问题，结合自己经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。注意：词数100左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，一个月前参加了“Healthy Life”杂志社组织的“健康生活方式选择”主题夏令营活动。请你给该杂志社编辑写封信反馈你参加夏令营前后的变化，内容包括： 1.之前的困扰； 2.采取的行动； 3.收获和感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 4．微笑不仅是东西方国家常用的肢体语言，而且对人民还有很多好处，请你以“The Benefits of Smile”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 减轻压力； 2. 提高免疫力； 3. 改善心情。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：免疫系统 immune system ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李华，请你根据以下信息在英语课上向同学们介绍一位你喜爱的喜剧演员——罗温·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson) 。 1．罗温·艾金森出生于1955年1月6日，是著名的英国喜剧男演员。他因饰演“憨豆先生”这一角色而家喻户晓。他毕业于牛津大学，获硕士学位; 2．他的代表作品有《憨豆先生》; 3．对他的评价。 注意：1.词数80左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假定你是学生会主席，受委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，告知大家学校将组织一个情商训练营(emotional intelligence training camp)。内容包括： 1.训练营的时间； 2.训练内容(自信心培养、人际沟通、克服紧张等)； 3.注意事项。 注意： 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 NOTICE ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Student Union March 8,2023 7．假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法，内容包括： 1. 好心情的重要性； 2. 不良情绪产生的原因； 3. 如何调整。 注意：1. 词数120； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear classmates, We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 二、读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 1. There was a lively young boy named Jimmy who had a bit of an anger problem. He got angry very easily. Whenever something didn’t go his way, Jimmy would shout, stamp his feet, and say some mean words to people. For example, one day at school, Jimmy’s classmate accidentally knocked over his lunch tray (托盘). Jimmy yelled at his classmate, ignoring the tray that had fallen to the floor, and stomped (迈着重重的步子走) angrily to the corner of the canteen. Another time, his little brother borrowed one of his favorite books without asking. When Jimmy found out, he screamed at his brother, seized the book back, and threw it across the room, which made his brother cry. Such behavior worried his parents, who wanted to help Jimmy learn to control his temper (脾气). One night, they sat him down and handed him a special notebook and a set of colorful pens. “Jimmy,” his mother said, “every time you feel angry, I want you to write about it in this notebook. Write down what happened, how you felt, and what you did.” Jimmy thought this was a strange request. He looked at the notebook and pens. “Writing about my anger?” he thought. But he agreed. The next day, when Jimmy was at school, his friend accidentally bumped (撞) into him, causing him to drop his books. Jimmy felt the familiar increase of anger rising inside him. He was just about to shout when he remembered the notebook in his backpack. He took it out, sat down, and began to write. He wrote about the bump, how it made him feel, and what he wanted to do. By the time he finished writing, he felt much calmer. This continued every day. At first, his notebook filled up quickly with annoying incidents. But as the days passed, the notebook saw fewer and fewer intense stories. Jimmy found that writing down his feelings helped him to control his temper. By the end of the month, Jimmy noticed he was writing in his notebook less and less. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One day, Jimmy realized he hadn’t written anything in the notebook all week and told it to his parents. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Jimmy was surprised to be asked to write something positive in his notebook. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2． Shelly was a teenage girl full of energy and curiosity. She found herself in a familiar yet exciting situation as New Year’s Eve drew near. Her parents, busy doctors in the emergency department, were eager to spend the festive occasion with family at her grandparents’ house. Jason and Judy, Shelly’s loving grandparents, were excited to host the joyous celebration. In the midst of the busy preparations, Shelly found herself alone in the attic(阁楼) , filled with old trunks and forgotten relics. As she searched through the dusty relics in the attic, her eyes caught a bronze item among the forgotten treasures. It was a Scout badge(童子军徽章) , her father’s from his youthful days as a Scout. This badge held a profound meaning, symbolizing her father’s adventurous spirit and dedication to service. Eager to share her find, Shelly carefully put the badge into her pocket and rejoined the celebration. As the evening progressed, she proudly showed off the badge to her friends in the neighborhood, sharing tales of her father’s Scouting adventures. However, time flew by with laughter and joy. It was then that the badge slipped unnoticed from her grasp, disappearing into the dark night. Panic stricken and heartbroken, Shelly quickly searched for the lost badge, checking every corner she had been. But the badge was nowhere to be found. Tears streamed down her face as she knew how disappointed her father would be if he knew she had lost his precious Scout badge. The loss of the badge was not just a physical loss, but a symbol of the connection she felt with her father and his past. Shelly’s world felt incomplete, and she prayed that somehow, she would find the badge and restore the broken bond. She decided to search the neighborhood again. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But as time passed, Shelly’s hope of finding the badge began to fade. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Together, father and daughter set out for the search. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3． “Tomorrow is Mother’s Day. I’ve been saving up for the past month and I’m going to buy my mother a lipstick she loves,” Cherry, my friend, said on the way home from school. “See you tomorrow!” We waved goodbye as she went into a gift shop. But her excitement reminded me that I hadn’t prepared anything special for my mother yet. I continued walking along the road, carefully thinking about what gift I should choose. I had planned to buy her some flowers and chocolates. Now, compared with my friend’s lipstick, they seemed to be too simple. “Maybe I should go to the gift shop, too.” I told myself. I pushed open the door to a nearby shop and tried to find a perfect gift. I picked up a lipstick but immediately put it back after seeing its price. I could never afford that! Then I walked into another shop and saw a very lovely cup. “It’d be a wonderful gift and Mum would love it!” I thought. I picked it up and turned it over to see the price, hoping it was not too expensive. Once again, I couldn’t afford it. Feeling sad, I continued to wander around the shops until darkness fell outside. Eventually, I gave up and went home. When I opened the door, I was greeted by the good smell from the kitchen. “Mum, I am home!” I pretended to be cheerful. Mom turned around and kissed me lightly on the cheeks, saying, “Dinner is almost ready. Today, I happened to be able to come home a little bit earlier. I have made some of the snacks you loved when you were a kid. I really missed the happy time we spent together!” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just then and there, I had a good idea. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Early in the morning, I was woken up by the gentle knocks on my door. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4． My father never told me he loved me when I was a child. I always saw him as being a serious man who rarely had a smile. But my mom told me “I love you” everyday. So I really never thought about not hearing it from my dad. I never really thought about it much until I faced the reality of death. On November 9th, 1990, I received word that my National Guard unit was going to the war zone. I had been in the Guard for 10 years and never dreamed that we would be activated for a war, even though I knew it was what we trained for. I went to my father and gave him the news. I could sense he was worried about me going but he said nothing, and eight days later I was gone. On November 17th,1990, our military vehicles rolled out of rural Greenville, Michigan. The streets were filled with families and well-wishers to see us off. As we were close to the edge of town, I looked out the window of my truck and saw my wife, my children, and Mom and Dad. They were all waving and crying, except for my father. He just stood there, almost like a stone statue. He looked pretty old at that moment. I don’t know why, he just did. I was gone for that Thanksgiving and missed our family’s dinner. A few days after Thanksgiving I was able to call my wife, and she told me something that has made me look at my father in a different way ever since. She told me that my father recited his usual Thanksgiving prayer. But this time he added one last sentence. As a tear ran down his cheek, he said, “Dear Lord, please watch over and guide my son, Rick, with your hand in his time of need as he serves his country, and bring him home to us safely.” At that point he burst into tears. I had never seen my father cry, and when I heard this, I guessed my father really did love me. Eight months later, I returned home from the war. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ever since that day, my relationship with my father was never the same. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5． Mark Mancuso’s phone started ringing. He glanced at it. It was an alarm for the calendar, informing him that it was his mom’s birthday. His mom, Amelia, was two hundred miles from here, a bit of drive, but Mark had driven further to have dinner with a friend. It was just that he didn’t like his mom’s complaints. Then he went to a flower shop. With a smile, he had an idea. Entering the flower shop, Mark said with a wide grin, “Can you arrange to have flowers delivered to Syracuse, N. Y.? It’s my mom’s 70th birthday, so I’d like to send her a bouquet.” he flower shop owner replied, “Of course, I only need your mom’s name, phone number and address. Do you want me to help you write a birthday letter?” “Yes,” Mike said as he read out those information. Then, he added, “Please write: Happy birthday to the most wonderful mom in the world. Your son, Mark.” Mark went out with a sense of success, seeing a little girl in the corner, crying. Mike crouched (蹲) next to her. “Hi, honey, are you OK?” “I’m Mandy, and I’d like to buy my mother a rose,” the little girl said as she sobbed. “But I’m short of money! The flower shop owner told me that I could only get a daisy, but my mother loves red roses.” “You just wait here,” Mark said and then went to the flower shop and bought Mandy a beautiful red rose. “This is for you,” he said, putting the rose into her hands. Mandy received the rose and looked up at Mike with a smile. “Thank you. But can you take me to my mother? It’s not too far, but I don’t suppose I can get there on my own.” Mark nodded. Mandy led him along the road. A moment later Mandy took a left, and Mark saw with amazement that they were at the gate of a cemetery (墓地). 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The girl lightly placed the rose on a grave. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mark could feel his eyes filling with tears. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 9 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit1 Laugh Out Loud 写作提高训练 - 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题 （外研版2019选择性必修第一册） 一、书信写作 1．请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Mental Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一种调节情绪的方法。内容包括： 1. 介绍这种方法； 2. 说明推荐的理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 题目自拟，不计入总词数； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                   Control Your Emotion and Be Mentally Healthy I highly recommend the practice of mindfulness meditation as a powerful tool for regulating emotions. This method involves focusing one’s attention on the present moment, observing thoughts and feelings without judgment. By engaging in mindful meditation, we can gain a deeper understanding of our emotional states, learn to accept them, and eventually, control them. This not only enhances our mental well-being but also improves our ability to handle stress and challenges effectively. Try it, and you’ll find yourself more emotionally balanced and resilient. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Mental Health”栏目投稿，推荐一种调节情绪的方法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 集中精力于：focus one’s attention on→concentrate one’s attention on 获得：gain→obtain 加强：enhance→strengthen 处理：handle→deal with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I highly recommend the practice of mindfulness meditation as a powerful tool for regulating emotions. 拓展句：I highly recommend the practice of mindfulness meditation as a powerful tool which is used for regulating emotions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] By engaging in mindful meditation, we can gain a deeper understanding of our emotional states, learn to accept them, and eventually, control them.（运用了动名词engaging 作宾语） [高分句型2] Try it, and you’ll find yourself more emotionally balanced and resilient.（运用了固定句型“祈使句+and+陈述句”） 2．你校英文报正在开展以smile为题的征文比赛。请你以“The power of smile”问题，结合自己经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。注意：词数100左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A possible version The Power of Smile There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the soul. Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. Noticing my frustration, Shelly, my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran away weeping. Regrettably, I was too ashamed to apologize and I couldn’t feel worse, which threw me into a world of darkness. The moment I saw her approaching the next day, I lowered my head immediately, trying to avoid her deliberately. However, she stopped me and gave me a hug. When I looked up, I met a smiling face, as gentle as a summer breeze. At that moment, all my anxiety and depression melted away. When words fail, smile speaks. 【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生以“The power of smile”问题，结合自己经历写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：stress→pressure 立刻：immediately→instantly 注意到：notice→spot 拥抱：hug→embrace 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. 拓展句：Since I was overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. 【点睛】[高分句型1] There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the soul.（运用了when引导定语从句） [高分句型2] Noticing my frustration, Shelly, my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran away weeping.（运用了现在分词作状语，such…that…引导结果状语从句） 3．假定你是李华，一个月前参加了“Healthy Life”杂志社组织的“健康生活方式选择”主题夏令营活动。请你给该杂志社编辑写封信反馈你参加夏令营前后的变化，内容包括： 1.之前的困扰； 2.采取的行动； 3.收获和感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Eiditor, As I took part in the summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I started to analyze them seriously, especially playing games, the unhealthy way I relaxed myself, and its effects on my life. A month ago, I felt stressed out and always relaxed with computer games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! After the camp, I realized that it was time to adjust my lifestyle by finding other ways to relax. Rock climbing and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination. After a month of trying out, I feel more energetic now. I believe that I can change myself for the better. Yours truly, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给该杂志社编辑写封信反馈一下参加夏令营前后的变化。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：take part in →participate in 影响：effect →impact 焦虑不安的：stressed out →anxious 意识到：realize →be aware 2.句式拓展 句式转换 原句：Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination. 拓展句：Big struggle though it was, I made it with great determination. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As I took part in the summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I started to analyze them seriously, especially playing games, the unhealthy way I relaxed myself, and its effects on my life.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】Rock climbing and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead.（运用了动名词短语作主语和省略了关系代词的定语从句） 4．微笑不仅是东西方国家常用的肢体语言，而且对人民还有很多好处，请你以“The Benefits of Smile”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 减轻压力； 2. 提高免疫力； 3. 改善心情。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：免疫系统 immune system ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Benefits of Smile Smiling is of great benefit to us in many ways. The benefits of smiling are as follows. Firstly, smiling can reduce stress. Even listening to others’ laughter and seeing smiling faces can help you feel calm and relaxed. Secondly, smiling strengthens your immune system, which enables you to fight against various diseases. Lastly, smiling contributes to improving your mood. Next time you are feeling down, try putting on a smile and there’s a high chance that your mood will change for the better. Therefore, no matter what happens, please keep smiling every day. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The Benefits of Smile”为题写一篇英语短文。讲述微笑对人们的很多好处。内容包括： 1. 减轻压力；2. 提高免疫力；3. 改善心情。 【详解】1.词汇积累 有益处的：of benefit→beneficial 导致，有助于：contribute to →result in 情绪低落：down→frustrated/depressed 各种各样的：various→ a variety of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The benefits of smiling are as follows. 拓展句：The benefits that smiling can bring us are as follows. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, smiling strengthens your immune system, which enables you to fight against various diseases.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Next time you are feeling down, try putting on a smile and there’s a high chance that your mood will change for the better.（运用了next time引导的状语从句及there is a high chance that句型） 5．假定你是李华，请你根据以下信息在英语课上向同学们介绍一位你喜爱的喜剧演员——罗温·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson) 。 1．罗温·艾金森出生于1955年1月6日，是著名的英国喜剧男演员。他因饰演“憨豆先生”这一角色而家喻户晓。他毕业于牛津大学，获硕士学位; 2．他的代表作品有《憨豆先生》; 3．对他的评价。 注意：1.词数80左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear fellow classmates, Today, I’d like to introduce a world­-famous comedian—Rowan Atkinson. He, a British actor, who was born on January 6,1955, performed the role—Mr.Bean in the TV series of the same name. Acknowledged as the typical character of British humour, Mr.Bean is just an awkward but not abnormal man. The way he behaves is the real British humour. He perceives the world in his own special manner. Actually, Rowan is a serious and intelligent man with a master’s degree from Oxford University. People from all over the world are deeply impressed by his unique acting style.And there won’t be another man like Mr.Bean in the world. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英语短文向同学们介绍一位你喜爱的喜剧演员——罗温·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson) 。 【详解】1.词汇积累 被认为：acknowledged as→regarded as 独特的：special → unique 实际上：actually→in fact 表演：acting→ performance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Today, I’d like to introduce a world-famous comedian—Rowan Atkinson. 拓展句：Today, I’d like to introduce a comedian—Rowan Atkinson, who is world-famous. 【点睛】【高分句型1】He, a British actor, who was born on January 6,1955, performed the role—Mr.Bean in the TV series of the same name. （运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】People from all over the world are deeply impressed by his unique acting style.（运用了被动语态结构） 6．假定你是学生会主席，受委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，告知大家学校将组织一个情商训练营(emotional intelligence training camp)。内容包括： 1.训练营的时间； 2.训练内容(自信心培养、人际沟通、克服紧张等)； 3.注意事项。 注意： 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 NOTICE ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Student Union March 8,2023 【答案】One possible version: NOTICE This is to inform everyone that our school is going to organize an emotional intelligence training camp of 7 days and 6 nights from March 21 to March 27,2023. The details of the training during the camp are as follows: confidence building, interpersonal communication, nervousness overcoming and so on. Those who are interested are required to sign up by March 15,2023 in Room 203. More information about the camp will be notified later on according to the number of attendants. The Student Union March 8,2023 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，告知大家学校将组织一个情商训练营。 【详解】1.词汇积累 告知：inform→tell 要求：require→ask 消息：information→news 以后：later on→next 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：More information about the camp will be notified later on according to the number of attendants. 拓展句：More information about the camp will be notified later on according to the number of attendants, which you should note and receive. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This is to inform everyone that our school is going to organize an emotional intelligence training camp of 7 days and 6 nights from March 21 to March 27,2023. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Those who are interested are required to sign up by March 15,2023 in Room 203. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 7．假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法，内容包括： 1. 好心情的重要性； 2. 不良情绪产生的原因； 3. 如何调整。 注意：1. 词数120； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear classmates, We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear classmates, We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods. The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave. For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others. For another, a bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you. So, what causes a bad mood? There are a variety of reasons for them. For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. We may feel down after receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends. At the same time, too much pressure from work can also makes us unhappy. However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one. As far as I’m concerned, exercise is one of the keys to get rid of a bad mood. Meanwhile, the simple act of sharing time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety. So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→significant 各种各样的：a variety of→various 摆脱：get rid of→cast off 就个人而言：As far as I’m concerned=Personally speaking 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. 拓展句：For example, we may get into a bad mood, because we fail an exam. 【点睛】[高分句型1] For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.(运用了the next time引导的时间状语从句) 二、读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 1. There was a lively young boy named Jimmy who had a bit of an anger problem. He got angry very easily. Whenever something didn’t go his way, Jimmy would shout, stamp his feet, and say some mean words to people. For example, one day at school, Jimmy’s classmate accidentally knocked over his lunch tray (托盘). Jimmy yelled at his classmate, ignoring the tray that had fallen to the floor, and stomped (迈着重重的步子走) angrily to the corner of the canteen. Another time, his little brother borrowed one of his favorite books without asking. When Jimmy found out, he screamed at his brother, seized the book back, and threw it across the room, which made his brother cry. Such behavior worried his parents, who wanted to help Jimmy learn to control his temper (脾气). One night, they sat him down and handed him a special notebook and a set of colorful pens. “Jimmy,” his mother said, “every time you feel angry, I want you to write about it in this notebook. Write down what happened, how you felt, and what you did.” Jimmy thought this was a strange request. He looked at the notebook and pens. “Writing about my anger?” he thought. But he agreed. The next day, when Jimmy was at school, his friend accidentally bumped (撞) into him, causing him to drop his books. Jimmy felt the familiar increase of anger rising inside him. He was just about to shout when he remembered the notebook in his backpack. He took it out, sat down, and began to write. He wrote about the bump, how it made him feel, and what he wanted to do. By the time he finished writing, he felt much calmer. This continued every day. At first, his notebook filled up quickly with annoying incidents. But as the days passed, the notebook saw fewer and fewer intense stories. Jimmy found that writing down his feelings helped him to control his temper. By the end of the month, Jimmy noticed he was writing in his notebook less and less. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One day, Jimmy realized he hadn’t written anything in the notebook all week and told it to his parents. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Jimmy was surprised to be asked to write something positive in his notebook. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One day, Jimmy realized he hadn’t written anything in the notebook all week and told it to his parents. They smiled warmly, proud of the progress he had made. His father said, “That’s great, Jimmy! It means you’re learning to manage your anger.” Jimmy felt a sense of accomplishment, realizing how much he had grown. “Dear Jimmy, since you have no anger to write, why not write something positive in your notebook?” his mother said. Jimmy was surprised to be asked to write something positive in his notebook. “Why?” he asked curiously. “Because,” his mother explained, “it’s important to celebrate the good times too. Write about things that make you happy or proud of yourself. It’ll help you focus on the positive aspects of life.” Jimmy nodded, understanding the wisdom in her words. From then on, his notebook became a place where he recorded both his struggles and his victories, helping him navigate through life with a balanced perspective. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩吉米易怒，常因小事发脾气。父母担忧，给他一本特殊笔记本和彩色笔，建议他每次生气时写下事发经过、感受和行动。吉米照做，逐渐发现记录情绪有助于控制脾气。随着时间推移，笔记本里记录的事情越来越少，吉米也发现自己发脾气的次数减少了。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“有一天，吉米意识到他整个星期都没有在笔记本上写任何东西，就把这件事告诉了他的父母。”可知，第一段可描写吉米学会了控制自己的愤怒，妈妈提出了新的要求。 ②由第二段首句内容“吉米被要求在他的笔记本上写一些积极的东西，这让他很惊讶。”可知，第二段可描写吉米理解了妈妈的用意，明白了她话语中的智慧，笔记本就成了记录他的挣扎和胜利的地方。 2.续写线索：父母为吉米的成就感到骄傲——妈妈提出了新的要求——理解了妈妈的用意——笔记本有了新的用途 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①控制你的愤怒：manage your anger/control your anger ②要求：ask/demand/request ③专注于：focus on/concentrate on 情绪类 ①热情地：warmly/passionately ②高兴的：happy/pleased 【点睛】[高分句型1] One day, Jimmy realized he hadn’t written anything in the notebook all week and told it to his parents. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Jimmy felt a sense of accomplishment, realizing how much he had grown.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语和how引导宾语从句) [高分句型3] Write about things that make you happy or proud of yourself.(运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句) 2． Shelly was a teenage girl full of energy and curiosity. She found herself in a familiar yet exciting situation as New Year’s Eve drew near. Her parents, busy doctors in the emergency department, were eager to spend the festive occasion with family at her grandparents’ house. Jason and Judy, Shelly’s loving grandparents, were excited to host the joyous celebration. In the midst of the busy preparations, Shelly found herself alone in the attic(阁楼) , filled with old trunks and forgotten relics. As she searched through the dusty relics in the attic, her eyes caught a bronze item among the forgotten treasures. It was a Scout badge(童子军徽章) , her father’s from his youthful days as a Scout. This badge held a profound meaning, symbolizing her father’s adventurous spirit and dedication to service. Eager to share her find, Shelly carefully put the badge into her pocket and rejoined the celebration. As the evening progressed, she proudly showed off the badge to her friends in the neighborhood, sharing tales of her father’s Scouting adventures. However, time flew by with laughter and joy. It was then that the badge slipped unnoticed from her grasp, disappearing into the dark night. Panic stricken and heartbroken, Shelly quickly searched for the lost badge, checking every corner she had been. But the badge was nowhere to be found. Tears streamed down her face as she knew how disappointed her father would be if he knew she had lost his precious Scout badge. The loss of the badge was not just a physical loss, but a symbol of the connection she felt with her father and his past. Shelly’s world felt incomplete, and she prayed that somehow, she would find the badge and restore the broken bond. She decided to search the neighborhood again. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But as time passed, Shelly’s hope of finding the badge began to fade. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Together, father and daughter set out for the search. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】But as time passed, Shelly’s hope of finding the badge began to fade. She tried to be brave and not let her father see how upset she was, but it was difficult to hide her emotions. Her parents noticed the change in her behavior and asked her what was wrong. Shelly reluctantly told them about the lost badge, and her father’s face fell. However, instead of being angry, her father hugged her and told her it was okay. He explained that the badge was special to him, but it was more important that she was safe and happy. Together, father and daughter set out for the search. They visited the places Shelly had been to during the celebration, and with each step, they held onto hope. As they combed through the streets and parks, they stopped to talk to neighbors and friends, asking if anyone had seen the badge. Finally, as they reached the local park, Shelly spotted a glint of bronze nestled among the fallen leaves. With a rush of relief, she retrieved the precious badge, and their heart swelled with joy and gratitude. Through this experience, Shelly learned the importance of honesty, and the depth of her father’s love and understanding. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了一个名叫Shelly的少女在新年前夕，无意中丢失了她父亲珍贵的童子军徽章，这个徽章对她父亲有着特殊的意义。Shelly非常伤心和恐慌，担心父亲会失望。然而，她的父亲并没有生气，而是安慰她，并一起寻找丢失的徽章。最终，他们在公园里找到了徽章，Shelly从中学会了诚实的重要性，也感受到了父亲深沉的爱和理解。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“但随着时间的流逝，Shelly找到徽章的希望开始变得渺茫。”可知，第一段可描写Shelly不到徽章，沮丧的回家了。父母发现了她的异常，她不得不告知真相。结果父亲并没有责备她，而是决定和她一起找徽章。 ②由第二段首句内容“父亲和女儿一起出发寻找。”可知，第二段可描写在父女俩的共同努力下，徽章找到了。在开心喜悦之余，Shelly 也意识到了诚实的重要和父亲对她深深的爱。2.续写线索： Shelly未找到勋章——伤心地回到家中不情愿地告知丢失徽章的真相——父亲未有责备而是安慰——父女二人共同寻找徽章——公园的落叶中发现徽章——Shelly的感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①察觉：notice/detect ②.拥抱：hug/give sb a hug/embrace ③.寻找：comb through/search for carefully 情绪类 ①.生气的：angry/annoyed ②.开心的：happy/joyful/delighted 【点睛】[高分句型1]. He explained that the badge was special to him, but it was more important that she was safe and happy.（由连接词that引导宾语从句以及that引导的主语从句） [高分句型2]. As they combed through the streets and parks, they stopped to talk to neighbors and friends, asking if anyone had seen the badge. （由as引导时间状语从句以及现在分词作状语） 3． “Tomorrow is Mother’s Day. I’ve been saving up for the past month and I’m going to buy my mother a lipstick she loves,” Cherry, my friend, said on the way home from school. “See you tomorrow!” We waved goodbye as she went into a gift shop. But her excitement reminded me that I hadn’t prepared anything special for my mother yet. I continued walking along the road, carefully thinking about what gift I should choose. I had planned to buy her some flowers and chocolates. Now, compared with my friend’s lipstick, they seemed to be too simple. “Maybe I should go to the gift shop, too.” I told myself. I pushed open the door to a nearby shop and tried to find a perfect gift. I picked up a lipstick but immediately put it back after seeing its price. I could never afford that! Then I walked into another shop and saw a very lovely cup. “It’d be a wonderful gift and Mum would love it!” I thought. I picked it up and turned it over to see the price, hoping it was not too expensive. Once again, I couldn’t afford it. Feeling sad, I continued to wander around the shops until darkness fell outside. Eventually, I gave up and went home. When I opened the door, I was greeted by the good smell from the kitchen. “Mum, I am home!” I pretended to be cheerful. Mom turned around and kissed me lightly on the cheeks, saying, “Dinner is almost ready. Today, I happened to be able to come home a little bit earlier. I have made some of the snacks you loved when you were a kid. I really missed the happy time we spent together!” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just then and there, I had a good idea. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Early in the morning, I was woken up by the gentle knocks on my door. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Just then and there, I had a good idea. Since there was no time or money for me to buy a gift, I decided to write a letter to express my love to my mother. Having finished the letter, I ran through the album and selected a picture in which Mum and I were having a picnic in a park. After the clock on my bedroom wall struck 11 pm, I went out to the sitting room and put the letter on the table, hoping that she would see it in the morning. Early in the morning, I was woken up by the gentle knocks on my door. I jumped out of bed and opened the door. There stood my mother, holding tightly to her chest the letter and the picture. Even in the darkness, I still could feel her excitement. “I love the letter and the picture! It is the best gift I have ever received!” my mother said. “The picture has reminded me the happy moments we spent together! Thank you, my sweetheart!” 【导语】本文以母亲节礼物为线索。朋友Cherry告诉作者第二天就是母亲了，她精心给妈妈挑了一支口红，而这提醒作者还没有为妈妈准备礼物。作者逛了好几家礼品店，发现自己买不起一件像样的礼物。回到家里后作者发现妈妈做了小吃，并且妈妈说怀念过去度过的美好时光，作者突然想到可以给妈妈写一封信，并选了一张和妈妈一起在公园野餐的照片，这让妈妈非常开心。 【详解】1. 续写线索： ①由续写第一段首句“就在那时，我有一个好主意。”可知，第一段可以描写作者为妈妈准备母亲节礼物的情况。 ②由续写第二段首句“一大早，我就被轻轻的敲门声吵醒了。”可知，第二段可以描写妈妈看到母亲节礼物后非常感动和兴奋。 2. 段落续写：作者想到一个好主意——作者决定写封信并准备一张和妈妈的照片——一大早妈妈看到礼物后很激动 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①购买：buy/purchase ②挑选：select/pick ③希望：hope/wish 情绪类 ①兴奋：excitement/thrill   ②快乐的：happy/pleasant/delightful 【点睛】【高分句型1】Having finished the letter, I ran through the album and selected a picture in which Mum and I were having a picnic in a park.(使用了现在分词的完成式作状语、“介词+which”引导定语从句) 【高分句型2】There stood my mother, holding tightly to her chest the letter and the picture. (使用了完全倒装、现在分词作状语) 4． My father never told me he loved me when I was a child. I always saw him as being a serious man who rarely had a smile. But my mom told me “I love you” everyday. So I really never thought about not hearing it from my dad. I never really thought about it much until I faced the reality of death. On November 9th, 1990, I received word that my National Guard unit was going to the war zone. I had been in the Guard for 10 years and never dreamed that we would be activated for a war, even though I knew it was what we trained for. I went to my father and gave him the news. I could sense he was worried about me going but he said nothing, and eight days later I was gone. On November 17th,1990, our military vehicles rolled out of rural Greenville, Michigan. The streets were filled with families and well-wishers to see us off. As we were close to the edge of town, I looked out the window of my truck and saw my wife, my children, and Mom and Dad. They were all waving and crying, except for my father. He just stood there, almost like a stone statue. He looked pretty old at that moment. I don’t know why, he just did. I was gone for that Thanksgiving and missed our family’s dinner. A few days after Thanksgiving I was able to call my wife, and she told me something that has made me look at my father in a different way ever since. She told me that my father recited his usual Thanksgiving prayer. But this time he added one last sentence. As a tear ran down his cheek, he said, “Dear Lord, please watch over and guide my son, Rick, with your hand in his time of need as he serves his country, and bring him home to us safely.” At that point he burst into tears. I had never seen my father cry, and when I heard this, I guessed my father really did love me. Eight months later, I returned home from the war. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ever since that day, my relationship with my father was never the same. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    Eight months later, I returned home from the war. I ran over and hugged my wife and children in a flurry of tears. When I came to my father, I could tell he was excited even though he tried to hide it. I looked at him and then embraced him tightly. He whispered in my ear , “I’m very proud of you, Son , and I love you.”I looked that man , my dad, straight in the eyes as I held his head between my hands and I said, “I love you too, Dad,” and we embraced again. And then together, both of us cried. Ever since that day, my relationship with my father was never the same. We had many deep conversations with each other, sharing our views on something or attitudes towards life. I learned that he had always been proud of me, and he was not afraid to say “I love you” anymore. Neither was I. I was just sorry that it took so many years and a war to find it out. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者孩子的时候，父亲从未对他说过“我爱你”，他也一直没有思考过这个问题，直到被派去参加战争，作者感觉到父亲对自己的担心，但却什么也没说。作者参加战争的那个感恩节没有回家，妻子打电话告诉作者父亲为他祈祷平安回来，作者觉得父亲是真的爱自己。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“八个月后，我从战场上回来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者从战场回来和家人团聚，并且听到了父亲说“我爱你”的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“从那天起，我和父亲的关系就再也不一样了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和父亲的关系发生变化，经常深入交谈，彼此分享，父亲也不再害怕说“我爱你”的过程。 2.续写线索：拥抱妻子和孩子——拥抱父亲，父亲说“我爱你”——二人拥抱痛哭——关系改变——彼此交谈和分享——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拥抱：hug/hold in one's arms ②看，凝视：look at/stare at ③分享：share/ have a share with sb. 情绪类 ①激动：show one’s excitement / be excited ②以……为骄傲：be proud of/take pride in 【点睛】[高分句型1]. When I came to my father, I could tell he was excited even though he tried to hide it.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句和even though引导的让步状语从句） [高分句型2]. We had many deep conversations with each other, sharing our views on something or attitudes towards life.（运用现在分词作状语） [高分句型3]. I learned that he had always been proud of me, and he was not afraid to say" I love you" anymore.（that连接的宾语从句作learned的宾语） 5． Mark Mancuso’s phone started ringing. He glanced at it. It was an alarm for the calendar, informing him that it was his mom’s birthday. His mom, Amelia, was two hundred miles from here, a bit of drive, but Mark had driven further to have dinner with a friend. It was just that he didn’t like his mom’s complaints. Then he went to a flower shop. With a smile, he had an idea. Entering the flower shop, Mark said with a wide grin, “Can you arrange to have flowers delivered to Syracuse, N. Y.? It’s my mom’s 70th birthday, so I’d like to send her a bouquet.” he flower shop owner replied, “Of course, I only need your mom’s name, phone number and address. Do you want me to help you write a birthday letter?” “Yes,” Mike said as he read out those information. Then, he added, “Please write: Happy birthday to the most wonderful mom in the world. Your son, Mark.” Mark went out with a sense of success, seeing a little girl in the corner, crying. Mike crouched (蹲) next to her. “Hi, honey, are you OK?” “I’m Mandy, and I’d like to buy my mother a rose,” the little girl said as she sobbed. “But I’m short of money! The flower shop owner told me that I could only get a daisy, but my mother loves red roses.” “You just wait here,” Mark said and then went to the flower shop and bought Mandy a beautiful red rose. “This is for you,” he said, putting the rose into her hands. Mandy received the rose and looked up at Mike with a smile. “Thank you. But can you take me to my mother? It’s not too far, but I don’t suppose I can get there on my own.” Mark nodded. Mandy led him along the road. A moment later Mandy took a left, and Mark saw with amazement that they were at the gate of a cemetery (墓地). 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The girl lightly placed the rose on a grave. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mark could feel his eyes filling with tears. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The girl lightly placed the rose on a grave. “Hello Mommy,” she said in a soft voice. “I’ve brought you your favorite rose. I want to tell you I love you so much and I miss you. Daddy misses you too. However, he can’t come to see you this year due to business. I know you can’t come back. I wish we could be together again, Mommy, just the three of us before you got sick. How happy we felt at that time!” Mark could feel his eyes filling with tears. He knew what he should do next. After sending Mandy home, Mark went back to the florist and canceled the delivery. He drove all the way home, and when his mother opened the door, he tightly hugged her. “I love you, Mom.” Mark said. “Oh Mark, I’m so glad you’re here! I thought you’d send flowers as you did last year, or phone me. It’s so good to see you. I love you, my son!” Mark thought of Mandy who’d never have the chance to see her mother again and he knew that he was the luckiest man in the world. 【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章讲述了Mark不愿开车回家陪母亲过生日，只是买束花让花店安排代送。但他随后遇到一个小女孩，而女孩对死去的母亲的思念深深地触动了他。Mark取消了鲜花代送，亲自回家给母亲过生日。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ① 由第一段首句内容“女孩轻轻地把玫瑰放在坟墓上。”可知，第一段可描写女孩在母亲的坟墓前表达出的对母亲的思念。 ② 由第二段首句内容“Mark感到热泪盈眶。”可知，第二段可描写Mark深受触动，开车回家陪母亲过生日。 2. 续写线索：女孩表达思念、怀念母亲在的日子——Mark深受触动——送女孩回家——取消鲜花快递——回家陪母亲过生日——感悟。 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①送她回家：send her home /accompany her home ②轻声说：say in a soft voice/say softly ③打电话：telephone/make a phone call ④紧紧拥抱：hug sb tightly/embrace sb tightly/hold sb in a warm embrace 情绪类 ①高兴：be happy/be glad/be delighted ②幸运：lucky/fortunate 【点睛】【高分句型1】I wish we could be together again, Mommy, just the three of us before you got sick. （虚拟语气以及before引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】He drove all the way home, and when his mother opened the door, he tightly hugged her.（and连接的并列句和when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型3】Mark thought of Mandy who’d never have the chance to see her mother again and he knew that he was the luckiest man in the world.（who引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句） ( 21 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$