第二章 一 邀请信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，中秋节快到了，你想邀请你班的美国交换生Tom来家里过节。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．发出邀请； 2．简要介绍中秋节； 3．期待与Tom共度佳节。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：邀请信用于邀请他人参加某项活动或加入某个组织，比如参加聚会、共度假期或游览某地等；邀请信的主要目的是建立密切联系，加强感情交流，同时拓展相关内容，激发他人兴趣。语气要真诚、礼貌，给人很亲切的感觉。时态分析：邀请信的时态以一般现在时和______________为主。 第一段：邀请原因和发出邀请； 第二段：______________________ _______________； 第三段：期待对方接受邀请和尽快回复。 一般将来时 邀请的内容(时间、地点、具体活动等) 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用时间拓展要点 中国的中秋节是在农历八月十五。 The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is __________________________________ _______． 2．用意义拓展要点 人们认为月亮更圆。它象征着家人团聚。 The moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round. It means _________________________． on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month reunion of family members 3．用活动拓展要点 (1)晚上，家人聚在一起吃团圆饭。 In the evening, family members ____________________________________． (2)之后，我们将围坐在圆桌旁，欣赏美丽的月亮并享用月饼。 After that, we will ___________________________________________________ _________． 4．用影响和感受拓展要点 它们一定会给你留下深刻印象。 They are bound to _________________． get together and have a family reunion dinner sit around a round table and enjoy the beautiful moon and moon cakes impress you a lot 5．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)一定要来和我们一起愉快玩耍。 _________________________________ (2)我们高兴地期待着你的到来。 ________________________________________________ Do come and have great fun with us. We are looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)中国的中秋节快到了。 The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is coming. →The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is ___________(靠近；临近)． (2)人们认为月亮更圆，象征着家人团聚。 The moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round, which means reunion of family members. →The moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round, which __________(象征着) reunion of family members. approaching symbolizes 2．精准用词 (1)我们希望你能和我们在一起。 We hope you can stay with us. →We would be _________________(非常高兴) to have you here with us. (2)我写信邀请你和我的家人一起度过这个节日。 I'm writing to let you spend the festival with my family. →I'm writing to _________(邀请) you to spend the festival with my family. extremely pleased invite 3．词块优先 (1)中国的中秋节快到了。 The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is coming. →The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is _________________ (corner短语)． (2)中国的中秋节是在农历八月十五。 The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. →The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival ____________(fall短语) the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. around the corner falls on (3)它们一定会给你留下深刻印象。 They are bound to impress you a lot. →They are bound to _________________________________(impression短语)． leave/make a deep impression on you 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)人们认为月亮更圆。它象征着家人团聚。 The moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round. It symbolizes reunion of family members. →The moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round, ______symbolizes reunion of family members.(定语从句) which (2)之后，我们将围坐在圆桌旁，欣赏美丽的月亮并享用月饼。它们一定会给你留下深刻印象。 After that, we will sit around a round table and enjoy the beautiful moon and moon cakes. They are bound to impress you a lot. →After that, we will sit around a round table and enjoy the beautiful moon and moon cakes, _______are bound to impress you a lot.(定语从句) which 2．非谓语动词 之后，我们将围坐在圆桌旁，欣赏美丽的月亮并享用月饼。 After that, we will sit around a round table and enjoy the beautiful moon and moon cakes. →After that, we will sit around a round table, __________ (enjoy) the beautiful moon and moon cakes.(非谓语动词作伴随状语) enjoying 3．复合结构 随着中国中秋节的临近，我写信邀请你和我的家人共度佳节。 The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is approaching. I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival with my family. →______________________________________________, I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival with my family. (with复合结构) With the Chinese Mid\|Autumn Festival approaching 4．被动语态 (1)中国的中秋节是在农历八月十五。 The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival is on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. →The Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival _________________(celebrate/hold) on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. is celebrated/held (2)人们认为月亮更圆。它象征着家人团聚。 People think/believe the moon is fuller with the shape of round, which symbolizes reunion of family members. →The moon _________________(believe/think) to be fuller with the shape of round, which symbolizes reunion of family members. is believed/thought 5．特殊句式 中秋节对中国人来说就像是圣诞节对西方人一样。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Chinese Mid\|Autumn Festival is to Chinese people what Christmas is to people in the west. 【名师点津】　A is to B what C is to D中的what用作连词，相当于(just) as，引导比较状语从句，意为“A对于B而言正如C对于D一样”。 第五步 添加衔接更流畅 1．_____________ (在那天), the moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round, which symbolizes reunion of family members. 2．___________ (因此), it is to Chinese people what Christmas is to people in the west. 3．___________________________ (此外), for centuries, people across China celebrate the festival in similar ways. 4．__________ (在那之后), we will sit around a round table, enjoying the beautiful moon and moon cakes, which are bound to impress you a lot. On that day As a result Besides/In addition/Additionally After that 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①With the Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival approaches, I'm writing to invite you spend the festival with my family. 错误改正：___________________________________; _________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ approaches→approaching或With改为As with+宾语+宾补的复合结构中，用v-ing形式表示主动；或as作连词引导时间状语从句，意为“随着……”；invite sb to do sth “邀请某人做某事”。 approaches→approaching或With改为As spend前加to spend前加to ②On that day, a moon is believed to be fuller with the shape of round, which symbolize reunion of family members. 错误改正：________; ___________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _________________________________ ③After that, we will sit around a round table, enjoy the beautiful moon and moon cakes, which is bound to impress you a lot. 错误改正：_______________; _____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________ a→the 独一无二的事物用定冠词the修饰；which引导非限制性定语从句，指前面一整句话，谓语动词用单数。 enjoy→enjoying enjoy为现在分词作伴随状语；which引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明moon和moon cakes，为复数。 symbolize→symbolizes is→are 2．文海拾贝 ①随着中国的中秋节的临近 with the Chinese Mid－Autumn Festival approaching ②很高兴做某事 be pleased to do sth ③邀请某人做某事 invite sb to do sth ④降临 fall on ⑤注定会；一定会 be bound to (一) (2024·辽宁省沈阳市第十五中学高二月考)假设你是某市高中学生李华，你的家乡新建了一个主题公园，请给你在加拿大的笔友Tony写一封邮件，邀请他来该主题公园游玩。内容包括： 1．邮件目的； 2．介绍新建的主题公园的相关内容； 3．期待回复。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Dear Tony， I have great news! Our new theme park is open and I would love to invite you to join us. It's a perfect place to have fun and relax. Located in the center of our city, the park offers thrilling rides and beautiful botanical gardens. There's something for everyone! This park is also great for kids. They will love the playgrounds, interactive shows, and educational exhibits. And don't worry about food, we have restaurants and cafes too. 答案 The park has strict safety measures in place and the staff is friendly and helpful. I really hope you can visit soon. Let me know if you have any questions. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.(be) located in 位于；坐落在　2.interactive show 互动秀　3.educational exhibit 教育性展览 4．strict safety measure 严格的安全措施　5.staff n. 员工 ◆亮句：Located in the center of our city, the park offers thrilling rides and beautiful botanical gardens. 句式解析：Located in ... 为过去分词短语作状语，与逻辑主语the park为被动关系；of our city为介词短语作后置定语。 (二) (2024·广东省梅州市高一期末联考)假定你是李华，你校高一年级将于下周举行“12公里徒步活动”，请你代表学生会给你校外籍教师Johnson写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加本次徒步活动。内容包括： 1．向他发出邀请； 2．介绍本次徒步活动； 3．活动注意事项。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Johnson， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours sincerely， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Johnson， On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to invite you to join in the 12－km hiking trip to be held next week. This activity is scheduled to take place from 8：00 am to 11：30 am next Friday. All the students and teachers from Senior One will gather on the playground at 7：30 am, attending a brief opening ceremony. Then we will walk 6 kilometers before we make a return trip to school. If you would like to join us, please remember that you should wear a pair of sneakers that fit well. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.join in 参加，加入　2.take place 进行；发生　 3.gather on the playground 在操场上集合 4．a brief opening ceremony 简短的开幕式　 5.a pair of sneakers 一双运动鞋　6.fit well 非常适合 ◆亮句：If you would like to join us, please remember that you should wear a pair of sneakers that fit well. 句式解析：If引导条件状语从句；第一个that引导宾语从句；第二个that引导定语从句，修饰先行词sneakers。 (三) (2024· 北京师范大学第二附属中学高二期中考试)假如你是红星中学高一学生李华，你校将举办一次环保主题活动，请你写一封邮件，邀请你班交换生Jim参加。内容包括： 1．活动的目的； 2．活动的日程(时间、地点、内容等)； 3．询问对方意向。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Jim， How have you been recently? As the World Environmental Day is coming, an educational activity aiming to raise our awareness of environmental protection will be held in our school. I believe you will be interested in it. Let me tell you more about the arrangement. On the morning of June 5th, a professor will give a lecture at 9：00 in the central hall, through which we can get more knowledge in this field. Then in the afternoon, an exhibition of some world－famous artworks on protecting the earth will be held in the Students' Activity Center. 答案 What do you think of this activity? Would you like to come and join us? I'm looking forward to your participation. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.awareness of environmental protection 环保意识　2.field n. 领域　3.exhibition n. 展览，展出　4.world－famous artwork 举世闻名的艺术作品　5.come and join us 来加入我们　6．participation n. 参加，参与 ◆亮句：As the World Environmental Day is coming, an educational activity aiming to raise our awareness of environmental protection will be held in our school. 句式解析： As ... is coming是时间状语从句；aiming to ... protection为现在分词短语作activity的后置定语，意为“旨在提高我们的环保意识”。 R $$