第二章 五 申请信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假设你是李华，暑假在纽约学习，从网上得知当地博物馆要举办中国传统服装展览，正在招募志愿者。请写一封申请信，内容包括： 1．写信的目的； 2．个人特长； 3．表达期待。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：申请信是向组织或个人提出申请，希望得到某个职务或者提升自己、帮助他人等。在申请时，应尽可能彰显个性，做到与众不同，同时要大方得体。言辞要求正式、准确，态度要诚恳，不能自吹自擂、满篇浮夸。同时不能少了敬语、感谢语等。 时态分析：申请信的时态多用___________和一般将来时。 第一段：申请事由和提出 申请； 第二段：______________ __________________； 第三段：期待。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 个人的认识以及个人的优势和特长等 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用主题句拓展要点 我认为我能胜任这份工作的原因如下。 The reasons ___________________________are as follows. 2．用结果拓展要点 我英语流利，这有利于与他人交流。 I am a fluent English speaker, so it _________________________others. why I think I am fit for the job helps communicate with 3．用感受和影响拓展要点 我很荣幸能传播我们的文化，促进两国之间的文化交流。 I'm honored to ____________________________________________between our two countries. 4．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)如果你能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。 __________________________________________ (2)期待你的早日回信。 _____________________________________ I’m thankful if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your early reply. spread our culture and improve the cultural exchange 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我认为我能胜任这份工作的原因如下。 The reasons why I think I am fit for the job are as follows. →The reasons why I think I am _________(合适的) for the job are as follows. →The reasons why I think I am __________(有资格的) for the job are as follows. (2)我精通中国传统服装。 I am good at traditional Chinese clothing. →I _______________________ (精通；擅长) traditional Chinese clothing. suitable qualified have a good command of 2．精准用词 我写信的目的是成为其中的一员。 I'm writing to be one of them. →I'm writing to _____________(申请) the job. 3．词块优先 (1)我英语说得很流利，这有利于与他人交流。 I am a fluent English speaker, so it helps communicate with others. →I am a fluent English speaker, so it ______________ (beneficial短语) communicating with others. apply for is beneficial to (2)如果你能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。 I'm thankful if you could consider my application. →I’d ____________(appreciate短语) if you could ________________________ ____________(consideration短语)． appreciate it take my application into consideration 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)我英语说得很流利，这有利于与他人交流。 I am a fluent English speaker, so it helps communicate with others. →I am a fluent English speaker, ______helps communicate with others. (定语从句) (2)我很荣幸能传播我们的文化，促进两国之间的文化交流。 I'm honored to spread our culture and improve the cultural exchange between our two countries. →_____________________ I can spread our culture and improve the cultural exchange between our two countries.(主语从句) which It is a great honor that 2．非谓语动词 我从网上知道需要一些志愿者。我写信是为了成为他们中的一员。 I have known from the Internet that some volunteers are needed. I'm writing to be one of them. →____________ (know) from the Internet that some volunteers are needed, I'm writing to be one of them. (非谓语动词作原因状语) Knowing 3．被动语态 (1)当地博物馆要举办中国传统服装展览。 People will hold an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing in a local museum. →An exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing _____________________________ (hold/organize) in a local museum. →An exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing _____________ (schedule) to take place in a local museum. (2)期待你的早日回信。 Looking forward to your early reply. →Your early reply _________________ (expect)． is going to be held/organized is scheduled is highly expected 4．特殊句式 我是中国人，而且对服装设计感兴趣。 I am a Chinese and interested in clothing design. →I am ___________a Chinese ____________interested in clothing design. (not only ... but also结构) →_______________ a Chinese _________interested in clothing design. (not only ... but also倒装结构) not only but also Not only am I but also 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．______________ (首先), I am not only a Chinese but also interested in clothing design and I have a good command of traditional Chinese clothing. 2．______________________ (此外), I am a fluent English speaker, which is beneficial to communicating with others. 3．________________ (最后但同样重要的是), it is a great honor for me to spread our culture and improve the cultural exchange between our two countries. To begin with In addition/Additionally Last but not least 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Knowing from the Internet that an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing is going to be hold in a local museum and some volunteers are needed, I'm writing to apply to the job. 错误改正：____________;_________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _____________________ hold→held apply后的to→for be+过去分词构成被动语态,hold的过去分词为held；apply for “申请”。 ②The reasons that I think I am qualified for the job is as follows. 错误改正：___________;_________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _____________________ ③In addition to, I am a fluent English speaker, whom is beneficial to communicating with others. 错误改正：________________;_________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ______________________ that→why is→are why引导定语从句，修饰the reasons，在从句中作状语；主语是the reasons，为复数。 去掉第一个to whom→which in addition “此外”；此处which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前面整句话。 2．文海拾贝 ①将要被举办 be going to be held/organized; be scheduled to take place ②适合；有资格 be suitable for; be fit for; be qualified for ③精通；擅长 have a good command of ④有益于 be beneficial to ⑤将……考虑在内 take sth into consideration (一) (2024·河南省洛阳偃师中成外国语学校高二月考)假如你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的； 2．个人优势； 3．期盼答复。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir/Madam， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Sir/Madam， I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition to be held in your art gallery. I think that I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to introduce Chinese paintings better. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the art gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting. 答案 I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.apply to do sth 申请做某事　2.art gallery 美术馆　 3.be qualified for 胜任　4.Chinese painting 国画　 5.be fluent in both Chinese and English 中英文流利　 6.show sb around 带领某人参观 ◆亮句： I think that I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. 句式解析：that引导宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句；since childhood作时间状语。 (二) (2024·福建省龙岩第一中学高一月考)假定你是李华，得知研学机构Global Camp正在招募市图书馆寒假“英语阅读沙龙”活动的主持人。请你写一封英文申请信，内容包括： 1．个人优势； 2．流程设想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To Whom It May Concern， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] To Whom It May Concern， I am writing in response to your posting for a host in English Reading Salon in the City Library. I believe I have the time and talent to be a good host. First, I can devote my vacation to this project. Second, my fluency in English and organizing ability make me equal to the job. If recruited, I will design customized activities to get every participant involved. I can also invite my foreign teacher as the guest speaker to lecture on strategies for reading the original. Enclosed are my resume and a detailed project plan. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.in response to 回复　2.devote ... to 把……用于　 3.organizing ability 组织能力 4．(be) equal to 胜任　 5.design customized activity 设计个性化活动　6.guest speaker 演讲嘉宾 7．enclosed adj. 随信附上的　8.resume n. 简历，履历 ◆亮句： If recruited, I will design customized activities to get every participant involved. 句式解析： If recruited是条件状语从句的省略，补充完整为If I am recruited；to get ... 是不定式短语作目的状语；involved是过去分词作宾语补足语。 (三) (2024·广东省惠州市第一中学高二月考)假定你是李华，你校英文报刊登了一则招募校运动会志愿者的启事。请你写一封申请信，内容包括： 1．申请理由； 2．你的优势。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：招募 recruit ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Dear Editor， Learning that volunteers are being recruited for the school sports meeting, I'm writing to apply. Although not engaged in any event, I consider it my duty to make contributions to its success. What distinguishes me from other applicants is my ability to cope with urgencies on different occasions. Besides, my previous experiences will help me communicate with others better and make proper and quick responses. I would highly appreciate it if my application could be approved. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.make contributions to ... 对……做出贡献　 2.distinguish ... from ... 使……有别于…… 3．cope with 应对　4.previous experiences 以往的经历　 5.make proper and quick responses 做出适当而迅速的反应　 6.highly appreciate 非常感谢 ◆亮句：What distinguishes me from other applicants is my ability to cope with urgencies on different occasions. 句式解析： What ... applicants 是主语从句；to cope with ... 是不定式短语作后置定语；on different occasions是介词短语作状语。 R $$