第二章 四 推荐信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假设你是李华，你的外籍教师Sam计划回国，他想给妈妈送一份有中国特色的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物，内容包括： 1．推荐的礼物； 2．推荐的原因； 3．表达祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sam， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：推荐信是向收信人推荐人、物或活动的专用书信。推荐时，应写清优点，用词应简洁明了、重点突出、语气真诚、礼貌，让收信人一目了然、印象深刻。 时态分析：推荐信的时态以_____________和一般将来时为主。 第一段：问候以及交代推荐的背景； 第二段：_____________________ _______________； 第三段：期待与祝愿。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 推荐的人或物的优点和特色等 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．首段两句拓展要点 (1)我很高兴听说你要给你妈妈买中国特色的礼物。 __________________you want to buy some special Chinese gifts for your mother. (2)我写信是给你一些建议。 I'm writing to _____________________． 2．用主题句拓展要点 我认为你应该买以下两种礼物：旗袍和中国结。 I think you should ____________________________________________． I’m glad to hear that offer you some advice buy the following gifts: Qipao and the Chinese knot 3．用功能和作用拓展要点 人们通常把中国结挂在客厅或汽车里。它代表好运。 People usually ______________________________________________and it means____________． 4．用感受和影响拓展要点 毋庸置疑，你妈妈会非常喜欢它的。 ______________________your mother will __________________． hang a Chinese knot in the sitting rooms or carsimpres good luck There is no doubt that like it very much 5．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)希望我的推荐能赢得你的青睐。 ______________________________________________ (2)祝你回程愉快，并务必代我向你的家人问好。 _________________________________________________________ Hopefully, my recommendation will win your favor. Wish you a pleasant return trip and do remember me to your family. 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我写信是想给你一些建议，这可能会对你有所帮助。 I'm writing to offer you some advice. It may help you. →I'm writing to offer you some advice. It may __________(使受益) you. (2)旗袍可以展现一个女性真正的美。 Qipao can show the real beauty of a woman. →Qipao can show the real _________ (魅力) of a woman. →Qipao can _______________(展现；呈现) the real beauty of a woman. benefit charm display/present 2．精准用词 我很高兴听到你想给你妈妈买一些中国特色的礼物。 I'm glad to hear that you want to buy some special Chinese gifts for your mother. →I'm glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts ___________________________ (具有中国特色的) for your mother. 3．词块优先 (1)我写信是想给你一些建议，这可能会对你有所帮助。 I'm writing to offer you some advice. It may help you. →I'm writing to offer you some advice. It may ______________ (favor短语). with Chinese characteristics do you a favor (2)毋庸置疑，你妈妈会非常喜欢的。 Undoubtedly, your mother will like it very much. →Undoubtedly, your mother will ______________________(preference短语) it very much. show a preference for 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)我写信是想给你一些建议，这可能会对你有所帮助。 I'm writing to offer you some advice. It may do you a favor. →I'm writing to offer you some advice, _______may do you a favor. (定语从句) (2)毋庸置疑，你妈妈会非常喜欢它的。 Undoubtedly, your mother will like it very much. →__________________________ your mother will like it very much. (同位语从句) which There is no denying/doubt that 2．非谓语动词 你也可以选择购买中国结。 You can choose to buy the Chinese knot. →It's also a good choice for you______________________. (不定式作主语) →________________________ is also a good choice. (动名词作主语) 3．被动语态 人们通常把中国结挂在客厅或汽车里。它代表好运。 People usually hang a Chinese knot in the sitting rooms or cars and it means good luck. →A Chinese knot is usually _______(hang) in the sitting rooms or cars, which represents good luck. to buy the Chinese knot Buying the Chinese knot hung 4．同位语 旗袍是中国女性非常美丽的传统服饰。它可以展现一个女性真正的美。 Qipao is a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, which shows the real beauty of a woman. →Qipao,_____________________________________________, can show the real beauty of a woman. 5．无灵主语 希望你会喜欢我的推荐。 Hopefully, you will favor my recommendation. →Hopefully, ___________________will win your favor. a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women my recommendation 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．___________ (个人来看), I think you should buy the following gifts: Qipao and the Chinese knot. 2．______________ (此外), it's also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. Personally What’ s more 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 (1)And I'm writing to offer you some advices, which may do you favor. 错误改正：__________________;_______________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _________________________________ (2)Qipao, a very beautiful tradition dress for Chinese women, which can show the real beauty of a woman. 错误改正：_______________________;______________ 分析错因：________________________________________________________ advices→advice favor前加a advice为不可数名词；favor意为“帮助”时，为可数名词，do sb a favor “帮某人一个忙”。 tradition→traditional 去掉which 应用形容词修饰名词dress；can show作句子谓语，which多余。 (3)It's usually hang in the sitting rooms or cars, which represent good luck. 错误改正：_____________;____________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ hang→hung represent→represents be+过去分词构成被动语态,hang意为“悬挂”时，过去分词为hung；which引导非限制性定语从句，指代整个主句的内容，表示单数,谓语动词用单数。 2．文海拾贝 ①帮某人一个忙 do sb a favor ②毫无疑问 there is no denying/doubt that ... ③喜爱；偏爱 show a preference for ④赢得某人的喜爱 win one's favor ⑤代我问候某人 remember me to sb (一) (2024·广东省深圳市南山区高一期末考试)假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jim所在学校的图书馆想要收藏关于中国文化的书籍，他发来邮件请你帮忙推荐相关书籍。请你给他回一封信，内容包括： 1．书籍类型； 2．推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Jim， You asked me to recommend some books about Chinese culture in your letter. It's my pleasure to share my ideas with you. To begin with, the first type I want to recommend is Chinese classic novels, which contain rich Chinese cultural ingredients. Some examples of them are Journey to the West and The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. In addition, the second type of my recommendation is the books about traditional festivals. 答案 Only by learning about traditions can you know the essence of a foreign history and social values. A specific book I would introduce is titled Traditional Chinese Festivals and Customs. I hope my recommendations would be of help to you. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.recommend v. 推荐　2.Chinese classic novel 中国古典小说　 3.contain v. 包含，容纳　4.rich Chinese cultural ingredients 丰富的中国文化元素　5.in addition 此外，另外　6.the essence of ……的精髓 ◆亮句：To begin with, the first type I want to recommend is Chinese classic novels, which contain rich Chinese cultural ingredients. 句式解析： I want to recommend是省略了关系代词that的定语从句，修饰type；which引导非限制性定语从句，解释说明先行词Chinese classic novels。 (二) (2024·河南省沁阳市第一中学高二阶段检测)假如你是校英文报记者李华，校图书馆新开设了英语原著阅览室。请你写一篇公开信向同学们推荐这个阅览室，内容包括： 1．阅览室的具体位置和开放时间； 2．推荐的理由； 3．表达期待。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours , Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear students， The reading room for English original books in school library is now open to the public. Here I will tell you something detailed about it. First of all, it is located on the third floor and opens from 8：00 am to 5：30 pm on weekdays and 9：00 am to 4：00 pm at weekends. I strongly recommend you go there in your spare time because it provides English materials in the original you can never find anywhere else. Besides, it is likely that you will meet people who are interested in or skilled at English there and you can make friends with them. Looking forward to seeing you there. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.English original book 英语原著　2.be open to the public 对公众开放　3.first of all 首先 4．in one's spare time 在某人的空闲时间　 5.be skilled at English 精通英语 ◆亮句：Besides, it is likely that you will meet people who are interested in or skilled at English there and you can make friends with them. 句式解析：that引导主语从句，it作形式主语，从句作真正的主语；who引导定语从句，修饰people；or连接两个并列成分interested in和skilled at。 (三) (2024·四川省宜宾市叙州区第二中学高一期末考试)假定你是李华，你校高一年级各类社团正面向全体学生招募团员。你班来自美国的交换生 John 对社团很感兴趣，但对加入哪个社团犹豫不决，因而写信请你帮忙推荐。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容如下： 1．推荐社团； 2．推荐理由； 3．表达期望。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear John， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear John， I am very glad to receive your e－mail asking for information about which club is fit for you. I know you are interested in music and want to know more about Chinese traditional culture. Therefore I suggest that you join the folk music club, which will benefit you. You will meet a variety of top players in the club where you can communicate with each other and enter a wonderful musical world. Apart from this, there are lots of performances held regularly in the club so that you can learn about many folk instruments which are likely to attract you. I do hope my advice is of help to you and you will enjoy yourself in the club. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.Chinese traditional culture 中国传统文化　 2.folk music club 民谣俱乐部　3.a variety of 各种各样的　 4.apart from 除……之外 5．performance n. 表演，演出　 6.folk instrument 民间乐器 ◆亮句：Apart from this, there are lots of performances held regularly in the club so that you can learn about many folk instruments which are likely to attract you. 句式解析：held regularly in the club为过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰performances；so that引导目的状语从句；which引导定语从句，修饰folk instruments。 R $$