第二章 十一 演讲稿-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，你校准备举办以“Chinese Youth of the New Era”为主题的英文演讲活动。请结合屠呦呦和袁隆平等老一辈科学家的精神，谈一谈作为新时代青年的你们应该怎么做。内容包括： 1．有梦想； 2．有担当； 3．有自信，不言弃。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Thank you very much for your attention. 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：演讲稿是表达自己的意见、看法，进行思想汇报或工作情况汇报而事先准备好的文稿。演讲首先选择一个主题，其次设定明确的主旨句、中心思想和要点；演讲要根据听众的来源，搜集听众信息，体现出听众的爱好；论据材料必须中肯、多样、详尽、恰当。 时态分析：演讲稿的时态主要以___________为主，有时候也使用将来时。 第一段：开门见山，针对主题表明自己的观点和立场； 第二段：_________________ ___________________________________________________； 第三段：总结陈述。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 中心思想和主要内容(为什么；建议或解决措施；有什么结果、影响、意义等) 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．首段两句拓展要点 (1)我很荣幸就“新时代的中国青年”发表演讲。 ___________________make a speech about “Chinese Youth of the New Era”. (2)中国青年应该具备以下素质。 The Chinese youth should ______________________________． It’s my great honor to have/own the following qualities 2．用原因和背景拓展要点 (1)作为新时代的中国青年，我们应该有特定的梦想。 ________________________________, we should have specific dreams. (2)我们必须训练自己更加自信，永不放弃，因为这是成功的关键。 We have to train ourselves to be more confident and never give up, because ____________________． As the Chinese youth of the new era it is the key to success 3．用结果和意义拓展要点 (1)他们驱使我们努力学习，用丰富的知识帮助我们过上更好的生活。 They ____________________and_______________________with rich knowledge. (2)一个民族将充满希望，一个国家将拥有辉煌的未来。 A nation will _____________and a country will ________________________． 4．用影响和感受拓展要点 当我们将来遇到困难时，我们可以勇往直前。 We may _________________bravely when we meet difficulties in the future. drive us to study hard help us live a better life be full of hope have a bright/brilliant future keep going forward 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我很荣幸就“新时代的中国青年”发表演讲。 It's my great honor to make a speech about “Chinese Youth of the New Era”. →It's my great honor to _________(发表) a speech about “Chinese Youth of the New Era”. (2)他们驱使我们努力学习，用丰富的知识帮助我们过上更好的生活。 They drive us to study hard and help us live a better life with rich knowledge. →They _______________(激励) us to study hard and help us live a better life with rich knowledge. deliver motivate/inspire 2．精准用词 当我们将来遇到困难时，我们可以勇往直前。 We may keep going forward bravely when we meet difficulties in the future. →We may _________(前进) bravely when we ___________(遇见) difficulties in the future. 3．词块优先 (1)中国青年应该具备以下素质。 The Chinese youth should have/own the following qualities. →The Chinese youth should _______________(possess短语) the following qualities. advance encounter be possessed of (2)作为新时代的中国青年，我们应该有特定的梦想。 As the Chinese youth of the new era, we should have specific dreams. →As the Chinese youth of the new era, we _______________(suppose短语) have specific dreams. (3)他们驱使我们努力学习，用丰富的知识帮助我们过上更好的生活。 They motivate us to study hard and help us live a better life with rich knowledge. →They motivate us to study hard and help us live a better life with __________________ (command短语) knowledge. are supposed to a good command of 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)如果我们像伟大的科学家屠呦呦和袁隆平那样有责任感，我们就可以在未来遇到困难时勇敢前进。 We possess responsibility like our great scientists Tu Youyou and Yuan Longping. We may advance bravely when we encounter difficulties in the future. →____ we possess responsibility like our great scientists Tu Youyou and Yuan Longping, we may advance bravely when we encounter difficulties in the future.(条件状语从句) If (2)我们必须训练自己更加自信，永不放弃，因为这是成功的关键。 We have to train ourselves to be more confident and never give up, because it is the key to success. →We have to train ourselves to be more confident and never give up, _______is the key to success. (定语从句) 2．非谓语动词 我很荣幸发表题为“新时代的中国青年”的演讲。 It's my great honor to deliver a speech, which is entitled “Chinese Youth of the New Era”. →It's my great honor to deliver a speech ________(entitle) “Chinese Youth of the New Era”．(非谓语动词作定语) which entitled 3．特殊句式 (1)他们驱使我们努力学习，用丰富的知识帮助我们过上更好的生活。 They motivate us to study hard and help us live a better life with a good command of knowledge. →They ___________motivate us to study hard ___________help us live a better life with a good command of knowledge. (not only ... but also结构) →_____________ they motivate us to study hard ________help us live a better life with a good command of knowledge. (not only ... but also ... 倒装结构) not only but also Not only do but also (2)我们应该有强烈的责任感。 We should have a strong sense of responsibility. →___________________________________ we should have. (强调宾语) (3)如果年轻一代有梦想，有强烈的责任感，一个民族就会充满希望，一个国家就会拥有辉煌的未来。 If the younger generations have dreams and a strong sense of responsibility, a nation will be full of hope and a country will have a brilliant future. →_______the younger generations have dreams and a strong sense of responsibility ____a nation be full of hope and a country have a brilliant future. (only倒装句) It is a strong sense of responsibility that Only if will 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．____________ (在我看来)，the Chinese youth should be possessed of the following qualities. 2．______________ (首先), as the Chinese youth of the new era, we are supposed to have specific dreams. 3．___________ (此外), it is a strong sense of responsibility that we should have. 4．________________ (最后), we have to train ourselves to be more confident and never give up, which is the key to success. In my view To begin with Moreover Finally/Eventually 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①From my view, the Chinese youth should be possessed with the following qualities. 错误改正：__________;______________ 分析错因：________________________________________________________ ②Not only do they motivate us study hard but also help us live better life with a good command of knowledge. 错误改正：______________;_____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _______________________ From→In with→of in one’s view “在某人看来”；be possessed of “具有，拥有”。 study前加to better前加a motivate sb to do sth “激励某人做某事”；live a[JP6] ... [JP]life “过……的生活”。 ③Finally, we have to train ourselves to be more confidence and never give up, it is the key to success. 错误改正：_____________________;______________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ __________________________ confidence→confident it→which或it 前加and be后用形容词confident作表语；which引导非限制性定语从句或and连接并列句。 2．文海拾贝 ①发表演讲 deliver a speech ②具备 be possessed of ③强烈的责任感 a strong sense of responsibility ④激励/驱动某人做某事 motivate/inspire/drive sb to do sth ⑤成功的关键 the key to success (一) (2024·江苏省南京师范大学附属中学高一期末考试)假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部组织了主题为“Live a healthy life”的演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿参加此次活动，内容包括： 1．高中生在健康生活方面存在的问题； 2．健康生活的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Live a healthy life Hello, everyone!﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ That's all. Thank you! [精彩范文] Live a healthy life Hello, everyone! As we know, living a healthy life is important to each of us. However，many high－school students don't have healthy living habits. For example，a lot of them often lose themselves in playing computer games and stay up very late at night. What's worse, most of them go to school without breakfast. They just eat much junk food every day, which does great harm to their health. Moreover, they prefer staying at home all day to doing any sports. 答案 In my opinion, we need to live a healthy life. First, having a good sleep is necessary. We should get up early and go to bed early. Second, it's vital to keep a balanced diet, have breakfast on time, and eat enough vegetables and fruits. Last, we should do exercise regularly to keep fit. That's all. Thank you! 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.healthy living habits 健康的生活习惯2．lose oneself in ... 沉浸于……　3.stay up 熬夜 4．what's worse 更糟糕的是　5.junk food 垃圾食品　 6.do great harm to ... 对……造成巨大的伤害　7.necessary adj. 必要的，必需的　8.vital adj. 至关重要的，必不可少的　9.on time 按时 10．keep fit 保持健康 ◆亮句：They just eat much junk food every day, which does great harm to their health. 句式解析：which引导非限制性定语从句。 (二) (2024·宁夏青铜峡市宁朔中学高二阶段性测试)目前，刷短视频风靡全网，请你根据此现象写一篇演讲稿在英语课前和同学们分享。内容包括： 1．简述刷短视频的利与弊； 2．你的观点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：刷短视频 watch short videos Good morning, everyone. I'd like to﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ That's all. Thank you. [精彩范文] Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my opinion on watching short videos, which has both pros and cons. On the one hand, watching the entertaining and easy－to－understand short videos can help us to relax to some extent. On the other hand, students lacking self－discipline are easily addicted to watching short videos, thus affecting their study and life. Dear fellows, we should set a limit to our leisure time on short videos. But if you are not disciplined, you'd better shy away from them. That's all. Thank you. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.pros and cons 利与弊　2.easy－to－understand 通俗易懂的　 3.to some extent 在某种程度上　4.lack v. 缺乏，不足　 5.self－discipline n. 自律，自我约束　6.leisure time 空闲时间　 7.shy away from 回避 ◆亮句：On the other hand, students lacking self－discipline are easily addicted to watching short videos, thus affecting their study and life. 句式解析：lacking self－discipline为现在分词短语作后置定语；watching ... 为动名词短语作宾语；affecting ... 为现在分词短语作结果状语。 (三) (2024·江西省宜春市宜丰中学高一月考)你校英语报正在举办主题为“Being Committed to Self－improvement”的演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．阐述自我提升的意义； 2．介绍自我提升的做法； 3．呼吁大家努力提升自我。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Thank you! [精彩范文] Dear fellow students， I'm glad to share the topic “Being Committed to Self－improvement” here today. I firmly believe in the importance of self－improvement. As far as I am concerned, it is a journey of growth and development, and it is essential for personal success. How can you start to improve yourself? Firstly, stay focused and fight for self－improvement every day. Secondly, be open to feedback. Feedback from others can help you identify the area where you need improvement. 答案 Finally, keep exercising and learning. Only with a good body and rich knowledge can you stand up to any challenge. In conclusion, I urge you all to be committed to self－improvement. It may be a long and challenging journey, but it is worth it. Thank you! 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.self－improvement n. 自我改善；自我提升　2.feedback n. 反馈意见　3.identify v. 找到，发现　4.stand up to 抵抗，对抗　5.in conclusion 总而言之　6.challenging adj. 富有挑战性的 ◆亮句：Only with a good body and rich knowledge can you stand up to any challenge. 句式解析：only修饰副词、介词短语或状语从句放在句首时，句子要部分倒装，此处only修饰介词短语with a good body and rich knowledge。 R $$