第二章 十五 倡议书-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，是某学校的学生会主席。你发现有些同学在就餐时间吃零食，不去餐厅吃饭。请你针对这一现象，给英语专栏写一则倡议书，呼吁同学们关注饮食健康。内容包括： 1．健康饮食的重要性； 2．吃零食的坏处； 3．向同学们发出倡议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：倡议书又称倡议信，是针对某一现象或者问题向某单位或者某个群体发出倡议，以得到大家的支持。写作时要清楚写作的目标人群，以及阐述清楚问题所在，以引起人们附议。忌所倡议的事情不切实可行，不能引起人们关注。 时态分析：倡议书的时态主要涉及___________和一般将来时。 第一段：倡议的事项以及原因或目的； 第二段：__________________ _________________； 第三段：再次呼吁并期待加入。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 倡议的具体内容(措施、结果、影响等) 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．首段两句拓展要点 (1)我们学校的一些学生吃零食而不吃饭。 Some students in our school_______________________________. (2)我会呼吁你们定期吃饭，而不是吃零食。 I would ________________have meals regularly instead of snacks. 2．用原因和背景拓展要点 吃健康的食物很重要，因为我们需要足够的营养来保持我们的身体正常工作。 Eating healthy food is important, because we need enough nutrients ___________ ______________________． eat snacks instead of meals advocate you to to keep our body working well 3．用结果拓展要点 (1)吃零食对他们的健康有害。 Eating snacks __________their health. (2)吃零食，我们很容易生病。 By eating snacks, we may______________. 4．用功能和作用拓展要点 零食不能提供足够的营养。 Snacks don’t ________________________． is bad for get sick easily provide enough nutrients 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)吃零食对他们的健康有害。 Eating snacks is bad for their health. →Eating snacks is __________(有害的) to their health. (2)吃健康的食物很重要，因为我们需要足够的营养来保持我们的身体正常工作。 Eating healthy food is important, because we need enough nutrients to keep our body working well. →Eating healthy food is important, because we need enough nutrients to keep our body ____________(运转) well. harmful functioning (3)我会呼吁你们定期吃饭，而不是吃零食。 I would advocate you to have meals regularly instead of snacks. →I would ________________(呼吁) you to have meals regularly instead of snacks. 2．精准用词 从现在开始让我们保持一个好的饮食吧。 Let's keep a good diet from now on. →Let's keep a ____________________ (健康的和均衡的) diet from now on. call on/appeal to healthy and balanced 3．词块优先 (1)我们学校的一些学生吃零食而不吃饭。 Some students in our school eat snacks instead of meals. →Some students in our school ____________________________(habit短语) eating snacks instead of meals. (2)众所周知，吃健康的食物很重要。 As we all know, eating healthy food is very important. →As we all know, eating healthy food is _________________ (be of＋抽象名词)． have/form/get into the habit of of great importance 第四步　 　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)我们学校的一些学生有吃零食而不吃饭的习惯，这对他们的健康有害。 Some students in our school have the habit of eating snacks instead of meals. Eating snacks is harmful to their health. →Some students in our school have the habit of eating snacks instead of meals, _________is harmful to their health.(定语从句) which (2)零食不能提供足够的营养。我们的身体一整天都需要足够的营养。 Snacks don't provide enough nutrients. Our body needs enough nutrients for the whole day. →Snacks don't provide enough nutrients __________our body needs for the whole day.(定语从句) (3)我们经常吃零食。它们所含的化学物质会在我们体内积聚并伤害我们的身体。 We eat snacks frequently. The chemicals they contain will build up inside our body and harm our body. →_____ we eat snacks frequently, the chemicals they contain will build up inside our body and harm our body. (条件状语从句) that/which If 2．特殊句式 定期吃饭，我们才会健康、快乐地成长。 We will grow up healthily and happily by having meals regularly. →_____________________________ will we grow up healthily and happily. (only倒装结构) Only by having meals regularly 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_________ (因此), I would call on you to have meals regularly instead of snacks. 2．_____________ (众所周知), eating healthy food is of great importance, because we need enough nutrients to keep our body functioning well. 3．_________ (此外), snacks don't provide enough nutrients that our body needs for the whole day. 4．__________ (更糟糕的是), by eating snacks, we may get sick easily. Therefore As we all know Besides Worse still 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Some students in our school have the habit of eat snacks instead of meals, which is harmful to his health. 错误改正：____________;_______________ 分析错因：________________________________________________________ ②As we all know, eat healthy food is of great importance, because we need enough nutrients to keep our body functioning good. 错误改正：_____________;______________ 分析错因：___________________________________________________ eat→eating his→their 介词of后用动名词作宾语；Some students为复数，用their代替。 eat→eating good→well 用动名词eating作主语；用副词well修饰动词functioning。 ③If we eat snacks frequent, the chemicals they contain will build up inside our body and to harm our body. 错误改正：__________________;_________ 分析错因：_________________________________________________________ frequent→frequently 去掉to 副词frequently修饰动词eat；and连接will后两个并列的动词原形。 2．文海拾贝 ①养成……习惯 have/form/get into the habit of ②对……有害 be harmful to ③呼吁某人做某事 call on/appeal to/advocate sb to do sth ④包含 contain ⑤保持健康和均衡的饮食 keep a healthy and balanced diet (一) (2024·福建省宁德市高二期末质量检测)假设你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你校将于下周开展以“Happy Labor, Happy Life”为主题的劳动周活动。请你用英文写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1．劳动的意义； 2．倡议参加劳动周活动。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Student Union [精彩范文] Dear fellow students， Currently, labor education has been increasingly attached great significance to, and it is necessary for us to engage in labor, so our school will hold a labor week activity next week, whose theme is “Happy Labor, Happy Life”． As a matter of fact, time spent laboring is rewarding. It can promote our practical skills, strong will, unity and cooperation. At the same time, we will also be given the precious opportunity to contribute our share and rewarded with a spiritual fulfillment. As a result, actively engage in our activity and take our obligation both at home and at school, which will turn out to be very beneficial and essential. Student Union 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.currently adv. 现时，当前　2.labor education 劳动教育　 3.attach great significance to ... 高度重视……　4.engage in 参与，从事　 5.as a matter of fact 事实上　6.promote v. 促进，提升 ◆亮句：As a result, actively engage in our activity and take our obligation both at home and at school, which will turn out to be very beneficial and essential. 句式解析：第一个and连接两个并列的祈使句engage in our activity和take our obligation; which引导非限制性定语从句。 (二) (2024·江苏省南京市中华中学高一学情调研)传统节日是民族骄傲的源泉。你校学生会决定举行腊八节相关活动，让学生们更好地了解腊八节。假定你是学生会主席，将要向全体学生发出倡议。请你写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1．活动时间、地点； 2．活动内容； 3．活动意义。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Student Union [精彩范文] Dear students， The Laba Festival, which is celebrated on the eighth day of the last lunar month, is drawing near. In order to make us students better understand the Laba Festival, a Laba activity will be held in the school lecture hall on the 8th day of the 12th lunar month. It is open to all our school students. During the activity, we will learn about the origin and development of the festival by videos and exhibitions. After that, we can also taste Laba porridge and learn how to cook it. Traditional festivals are the sources of national pride. This kind of activity can greatly stimulate our interests in traditional culture and festival. Looking forward to your participation. Student Union 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.draw near 靠近；临近　2.origin and development 起源与发展　3.Laba porridge 腊八粥　4.the sources of ... ……的源泉　 5.national pride 民族自豪感 ◆亮句：The Laba Festival, which is celebrated on the eighth day of the last lunar month, is drawing near. 句式解析：which引导非限制性定语从句；of the last lunar month为介词短语作后置定语，修饰the eighth day。 (三) (2024·安徽省淮北市树人高级中学高二质量检测)假如你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校报上发表一封倡议书，号召同学们踊跃参加下周日下午两点学校举办的冬季慢跑活动。内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．活动安排和注意事项； 3．呼吁参加。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Student Union [精彩范文] Dear students， With the aim of helping us students release the pressure of study and building up our body, our school decides to organize winter jogging next Sunday. As scheduled, we will start jogging at 2 o'clock next Sunday afternoon and it will last 3 hours. The route begins directly in front of the school gate to the city park, where we will have a rest and then head back. As we all know, jogging can be tiring, so wearing comfortable clothes and shoes is essential. In addition, it is recommended that you start to jog slowly in cold weather. The jogging will surely be unforgettable. Don't hesitate to participate, and we will have a wonderful time together. Student Union 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.with the aim of ... 以……为目的　2．release pressure 释放压力　3.build up one's body 增强某人的体质　4.jog v. 慢跑　5.route n. 路线　 6.hesitate to do sth 犹豫做某事 ◆亮句：As we all know, jogging can be tiring, so wearing comfortable clothes and shoes is essential. 句式解析：As引导非限制性定语从句；jogging和wearing ... shoes均为动名词(短语)作主语；so连接两个并列句jogging can be tiring和wearing comfortable ... is essential。 R $$