第二章 十四 发言稿 欢迎辞-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 大数据显示，全球人口老龄化现象日趋严重，照顾老人成了一个突出的社会问题。你公司顺应社会需求推出了新产品——家政机器人(household robot)。请你用英文写一篇发言稿，在面向全球直播的产品发布会上介绍该产品。内容包括： 1．推出新产品的原因和目的； 2．介绍新产品的特点和功能。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Ladies and Gentlemen， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Thank you. 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：发言稿/欢迎辞是社会生活中经常使用的文体，是在较为隆重的仪式和公众场合发表的文字稿件。主要是表达欢迎、感谢、交代注意事项或者阐述介绍某些活动内容，期望能达到良好的预期目的。 时态分析：发言稿/欢迎辞的时态以____________为主，有时也使用一般将来时。 第一段：发言的事项、目的/表示欢迎； 第二段：__________________ ______________________________________； 第三段：美好祝愿。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 介绍事物或活动的具体内容(功能、流程、结果、意义等) 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用原因和背景拓展要点 他们没有足够的时间照顾家里的老人。 They don't have enough time to ___________________________________． 2．用功能和作用拓展要点 (1)我们设计家用机器人来照顾老人。 We _________________________to take care of the old people. take care of the old people in their family design the household robot (2)它可以在固定的时间做饭。 It can _______________________． (3)它可以陪伴老人聊天、下棋和锻炼身体。 It can _____________________in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. 3．用事例拓展要点 例如，如果一位老人突然生病，机器人会呼叫医生寻求帮助。 ______________________________________, the robot will call doctors for help. cook meals at a fixed time accompany old people For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly 4．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)如果你拥有这样一个机器人，这将对你大有裨益。 It would be a great help for you______________________. (2)我相信我们的家用机器人不会让你失望的。 I believe our household robot ____________________． if you own such a robot won’t disappoint you 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)他们没有足够的时间照顾家里的老人。 They don't have enough time to take care of the old people in their family. →They don't have enough time to ___________(照顾；照料) _____________________(老人) in their family. (2)这已经成为一个典型的社会问题。 It has become a typical social problem. →It has become a typical social ___________________(问题/现象). attend to the seniors/the elderly issue/phenomenon 2．精准用词 它可根据个人需要进行更改。 It can be changed according to individual needs. →It can be _________ (调整) according to individual needs. 3．词块优先 (1)它可以陪伴老人聊天、下棋和锻炼身体。 It can accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. →It can ______________________ (company短语) in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. adjusted keep the elderly company (2)如果一位老人突然生病，机器人会呼叫医生寻求帮助。 If an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. →If an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will _______(turn短语) doctors for help. (3)我相信我们的家用机器人不会让你失望的。 I believe our household robot won't disappoint you. →I believe our household robot won’t _____________ (let短语)． turn to let you down 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)他们没有足够的时间照顾家里的老人。这已经成为一个典型的/突出的社会问题。 They don't have enough time to attend to the elderly in their family. It has become a typical/prominent social problem. →They don't have enough time to attend to the elderly in their family, ______has become a typical/prominent social problem. (定语从句) which (2)它可以在固定的时间做饭。它可根据个人需要进行调整。 It can cook meals at a fixed time. It can be adjusted according to individual needs. →It can cook meals at a fixed time, _______can be adjusted according to individual needs. (定语从句) 2．非谓语动词 为了解决这个问题，我公司推出了专门照顾老年人的家用机器人。 To solve this problem, our company put out the household robot, which is designed to take care of the seniors. →To solve this problem, our company put out the household robot ___________ (design) to take care of the seniors. (非谓语动词作后置定语) which designed 3．被动语态 我们设计家用机器人来照顾老人。 We design the household robot to attend to the elderly. →The household robot ___________ (design) to attend to the elderly. 4．特殊句式 我相信我们的家用机器人不会让你失望的。 I believe our household robot will not let you down. →I ____ (强调动词) believe our household robot will not let you down. is designed do 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_____________ (如你所知), with the development of economy, people have to face various pressures. 2．________ (此外), it can accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. 3．_______________ (更重要的是), it can deal with emergencies. 4．____________ (例如), if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will turn to doctors for help. As you know Besides More importantly For example 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①They don't have enough time attend to the elderly in their family, which has became a prominent social problem. 错误改正：_____________;________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ____________________ attend前加to became→become have time to do sth “有时间做某事”；which后时态为现在完成时，have/has+过去分词。 ②It can cooks meals at a fixed time, which can be adjust according to individual needs. 错误改正：_____________;__________________ 分析错因：______________________________________________ ③For an example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will turn to doctors for helping. 错误改正：________;_____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ cooks→cook adjust→adjusted 情态动词后用动词原形；be+过去分词表示被动。 去掉an helping→help for example “例如”；turn to sb for help “向某人求助”。 2．文海拾贝 ①面对各种压力 face various pressures ②照顾老人 attend to the elderly ③推出 put out ④在固定的时间 at a fixed time ⑤处理紧急情况 deal with emergencies (一) (2024·河南省南阳市南阳六校高一期末考试)假定你是李华，英语课上老师让同学们分享自己做出的最正确的一个选择。请你以“The best choice I've made”为题，写一篇发言稿。内容包括： 1．简述该选择； 2．它对你的影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 The best choice I've made Dear teacher and classmates, ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Thank you for listening! [精彩范文] The best choice I've made Dear teacher and classmates， In the summer vacation of my second year at middle school, my parents gave me a chance to make a decision by myself. That summer, I could choose to go on a trip to my favourite place or do some volunteer work. To be frank, I really wanted to go on a trip with them. But in the end, I chose to volunteer in the poor areas in the west of our country, which turned out to be the best choice in my life, since it helped me learn an important lesson of life. Making others happy can make us happy, too. Thank you for listening! 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.volunteer work 志愿者工作　2.to be frank 说实话　 3.in the end 最终，最后　4.poor areas 贫困地区　5.turn out 证明是，结果是 ◆亮句： But in the end, I chose to volunteer in the poor areas in the west of our country, which turned out to be the best choice in my life, since it helped me learn an important lesson of life. 句式解析：which 引导非限制性定语从句；since引导原因状语从句。 (二) (2024·广东省深圳市宝安区高二期末考试)请你以“My View on Sportsmanship”为题，写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括： 1．你对体育精神的理解； 2．运动员的事迹举例； 3．对你的影响和启示。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My View on Sportsmanship ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] My View on Sportsmanship Hello everyone， I'd like to talk about sportsmanship today. To me, it means playing fair, respecting others, and being graceful whether you win or lose. Let's look at an example: Serena Williams. She shows amazing sportsmanship on and off the tennis court. Even when things don't go her way, she stays respectful and humble. Athletes like Serena teach us that winning isn't everything; it's how you behave along the way that matters. They inspire us to always do our best while we're staying true to our values. Thank you. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.play fair 公平比赛　2.graceful adj. 得体的，有风度的　 3.amazing adj. 惊人的，了不起的　4.on and off the court 场上场下　 5.go one's way 顺利进行，对某人有利　6.respectful and humble 恭敬谦卑　7.inspire sb to do sth 激励某人做某事 ◆亮句：Athletes like Serena teach us that winning isn't everything; it's how you behave along the way that matters. 句式解析：第一个that引导宾语从句；winning为动名词作主语；it's how you ... that matters运用了强调句型，其中的how引导主语从句。 (三) (2024·全国甲卷)英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. Today I’d like to focus on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles. As we all know, changes in transportation will bring great changes to people’s lives. Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transport for short trips. Besides, China’s high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development. Currently, advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives, helping reduce air pollution. 答案 These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science. Therefore, we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation. Thank you for your listening! 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.focus on 集中于 2.environmentally friendly means 环保手段 3.connect v. （使）连接 4.effectively adv. 有效地；实际上 5.save travel time 节省旅行时间 6.advanced adj. 先进的；高级的 7.make a contribution 做贡献 ◆亮句：Besides, China’s high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development. 句式解析：主干是China’s high-speed railway network has connected various cities，时态是现在完 成时；非谓语动词saving和promoting与其逻辑主语China’s high-speed railway network之间为主动关系，在句中作结果状语。 R $$