第二章 十三 报道-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“最受尊敬的劳动者”的艺术作品展。请你为校英文电台写一篇报道，内容包括： 1．参加人员； 2．展览内容(摄影、绘画、手工作品等)； 3．展览反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：最受尊敬的劳动者Most Honored Worker Most Honored Worker ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：报道是社会生活中经常使用的文体，是一种书面和正式化的记叙文体。报道主要是对赛事活动等进行宣传和回顾，也可以发表个人的看法或者感受等，用词正式。注意不要写成信件或演讲稿等。 时态分析：报道的时态主要是____________。 第一段：报道的时间、参加人员、事件等； 第二段：___________________________ ___________________； 第三段：收获感受或活动的反响。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般过去时 报道事项的内容(过程、结果、影响等) 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用评价与反应拓展要点 (1)所有的学生和老师都对艺术展做出了积极的反应。 All the students and teachers _____________________to the art show. (2)出席展览的人都对展出的作品予以高度评价。 Those present at the show all _________________the works on display. 2．用结果拓展要点 展出取得了很大的成功。 The show was _____________． gave an active response thought highly of a big success 3．用影响和感受拓展要点 (1)这场展出给观众留下了深刻的印象。 The show _____________________deeply. (2)他们说，他们从这些平凡但可敬的工人身上学到了很多。 They said they _______________these ordinary but honored workers. 4．用内容拓展要点 他们都讲述了各行各业勤奋和坚持的故事。 All of them ______________diligence and persistence in_____________________. impressed the audience learnt a lot from told stories of different walks of life 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我们学校上周举办了一场艺术展。 Our school held an art show last week. →Our school _________________________________(组织；举办) an art show last week. (2)在上周六上午8：30开始之前，所有参与者都非常感兴趣地聚集在一起。 With great interest, all the participants gathered before it started at 8：30 am last Saturday. →With great __________________ (激情；热情), all the participants gathered before it started at 8：30 am last Saturday. organized/scheduled/arranged/launched enthusiasm/passion (3)他们说，他们从这些平凡但可敬的工人身上学到了很多。 They said they learnt a lot from these ordinary but honored workers. →They said they __________(受益) a lot from these ordinary but honored workers. 2．精准用词 他们都讲述了各行各业勤奋和坚持的故事。 All of them told stories of diligence and persistence in different walks of life. →All of them told _______(生动的) stories of diligence and persistence in different walks of life. benefited vivid 3．词块优先 (1)这场展出取得了成功。 The show was a big success. →The art show __________ (turn短语) to be a huge success. (2)这场展出给观众留下了深刻的印象，简直让他们叹为观止。 The show impressed the audience deeply and literally took their breath away. →The show ___________________________ (impression短语) the audience and literally took their breath away. turned out left/made a deep impression on 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 我们学校上周组织了一场艺术表演。所有的学生和老师都对艺术表演做出了积极的反应。 Our school organized an art show last week. All the students and teachers gave an active response to the art show. →Our school organized an art show last week, _________all the students and teachers gave an active response.(定语从句) to which 2．非谓语动词 (1)我们学校上周组织了一场艺术表演。这场艺术展题为“最受尊敬的劳动者”。 Our school organized an art show last week. The art show is entitled “Most Honored Worker”． →Our school organized an art show ________(entitle) “Most Honored Worker” last week.(非谓语动词作定语) entitled (2)出席展览的人都对展出的作品予以高度评价。他们说，他们从这些平凡但可敬的工人身上学到了很多。 Those present at the show all thought highly of the works on display. They said they benefited a lot from these ordinary but honored workers. →Those present at the show all thought highly of the works on display, ______(say) that they benefited a lot from these ordinary but honored workers.(非谓语动词作状语) saying 3．被动语态 (1)我们学校上周组织了一场艺术展。 Our school organized an art show last week. →An art show ______________(organize) in our school last week. (2)所有参与者都提交了不同形式的照片、绘画和手工艺品。 All the participants submitted different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts. →The works _______________(submit) in different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts. →Different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts _______________(submit)． was organized were submitted were submitted 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_______________ (事实上), the show left a deep impression on the audience and literally took their breath away. 2．__________ (此外), the works were submitted in different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts. 3．________________ (最后), the art show turned out to be a huge success. As it turned out Besides Finally/Ultimately 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Our school launch an art show entitled “Most Honored Worker” last week, to which our students and teachers gave a active response. 错误改正：_________________;_________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________ launch→launched a→an 时态为一般过去时；active的发音以元音音素开头。 ②As it turned out, the show left a deeply impression on the audience and literally took their breathe away. 错误改正：_______________;___________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ③Those present at the show all thought highly of the works in display, say that they learnt a lot from these ordinary but honored workers. 错误改正：________;______________ 分析错因：______________________________________________ deeply→deep breathe→breath 形容词deep修饰名词impression；take sbs breath away “令人惊叹”。 in→on say→saying on display “展出”；现在分词saying作伴随状语。 2．文海拾贝 ①对……给予积极的回应 give an active response to ②满怀热情 with great enthusiasm ③真的让某人惊叹 literally take one's breath away ④各行各业 different walks of life ⑤巨大的成功 a huge success (一) (2024·江苏省南京市第一中学高二月考)你校上周举办了帮助贫困地区留守儿童的云义卖 (online charity sale)活动。请你为校英文报写一篇活动报道，内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．活动过程：网上展示和销售闲置物品等； 3．活动意义和参与者感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] An online charity sale was held in our school last week. This activity was aimed at enhancing students' sense of social responsibility and helping the left－behind children in the poverty－hit area. More than 3，000 people in total, including students, teachers and parents, took an active part in it. The participants displayed and sold the idle items online. All the money they earned will be donated to those poor children as their tuition fees. The event has achieved a big hit. On the website's comment board, some participants said that they benefited enormously from the event and some expressed their hope that more illuminating activities like this could be held in the future. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.be aimed at doing sth 旨在做某事 2．sense of social responsibility 社会责任感 3．left－behind children 留守儿童　4.in total 总共 5．donate ... to ... 把……捐赠给…… 6．enormously adv. 非常，极其 ◆亮句：On the website's comment board, some participants said that they benefited enormously from the event and some expressed their hope that more illuminating activities like this could be held in the future. 句式解析：第一个that引导宾语从句；第二个that引导同位语从句。 (二) (2024·江苏省南菁高中、常州一中高二月考)假定你是李华，昨天你校组织全体师生进行了一次消防演练活动。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．演练经过； 3．活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：撤离 evacuate; 灭火器fire extinguisher A Firefighting Drill ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] A Firefighting Drill Yesterday, a firefighting drill was conducted in our school with all teachers and students involved to arouse our awareness of fire prevention. The drill started with an alarm, hearing which students quickly evacuated the classrooms orderly under the guidance of the teachers to the appointed place. The fire escape routes were clearly marked, and fire extinguishers were readily available throughout the school. So it was five minutes later that all the buildings were emptied and students and teachers gathered on the playground. Both teachers and students appreciated the opportunity to learn about fire safety. Many expressed their gratitude for the school's initiative in organizing such a drill. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.firefighting drill 消防演习　2.under the guidance of ... 在……的指导下　3.appointed place 指定地点　4.mark v. 做标记；做记号　n. 污点；标识　5.initiative n. 倡议 ◆亮句：Yesterday, a firefighting drill was conducted in our school with all teachers and students involved to arouse our awareness of fire prevention. 句式解析：with ... involved是“with＋宾语＋宾语补足语”结构作状语；to arouse ... 是不定式短语作目的状语。 (三) (2024·江西省宜春市丰城市东煌学校高二期末考试)假设你是校英文报的记者。上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟在去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多，刘伟对她进行了简单的急救处理并将她送到了医院，却错过了英语演讲比赛。请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 A Heroic Teen Missed a Competition but Saved an Injured Woman ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] A Heroic Teen Missed a Competition but Saved an Injured Woman Last Saturday, Liu Wei, a Senior Two student of our school, helped an injured woman. Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly. The woman struggled to get to her feet but failed, because her right leg was bleeding badly. Without any hesitation, Liu Wei came to her assistance. He applied pressure to the bleeding area and then tied his handkerchief firmly to the wound. Finally, he took the woman to the hospital nearby. It was at that time that he realized it was too late for the competition—he missed it. In order to give the woman in need a hand, Liu Wei gave up the competition. As his fellow schoolmates and teachers, we should learn from him. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.injured adj. 受伤的　2.on one's way to 某人在去往某地的路上　 3.fall off 跌落　4.carelessly adv. 粗心地；不注意地　 5.struggle to do sth 艰难地做某事　6.get to one's feet 站起来　 7.without any hesitation 毫不犹豫地　8.come to one's assistance 来帮助某人　 9.give sb a hand 帮助某人　10.in need 在危急中；在困难中 ◆亮句：Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly. 句式解析：where引导定语从句；when引导时间状语从句。 R $$