第二章 十二 通知-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，你校英文报拟举办英语诗歌创作比赛，现向同学们征集优秀作品。你受校英文报委托用英语写一则通知，内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．具体要求(主题、语言、词数等)； 3．截稿日期及投稿方式。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ the School English Newspaper 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：通知一般用于上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达事情和召集会议等。通知分为书面通知和口头通知。书面通知强调语句简练，用词贴切，用语书面化；而口头通知比较灵活简练，较为口语化。书面通知的正文上面的正中有Notice或Announcement 标题。在正文最后的右下角要写上发通知的单位或组织者的姓名。 时态分析：通知的时态以一般现在时和___________为主。 第一段：通知的目的，并简要介绍事项； 第二段：___________ ___________________ ___________________； 第三段：期待参与。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般将来时 通知的内容(活动的时间、地点、活动 安排、注意事项等) 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用目的拓展要点 比赛的目的是激发学生学习英语的热情，丰富我们的学校生活。 The purpose/goal of the competition is __________________________________ ___________________________________． 2．用内容拓展要点 主题包括分享你的学校生活，向父母或老师表达爱意，重视友谊等。 The theme ___________________________________________________________ _______________, and so on. to arouse students enthusiasm for learning English and enrich our school life includes sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, valuing friendship 3．用具体要求拓展要点 你应该用最多100个词语来表达你的真实感受。 You should use good expressions ____________________________with a maximum of 100 words. 4．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)热烈欢迎任何想加入我们的人。 _________________________________________ (2)期待你的积极参与。 _______________________________________ to show/express your true feelings Whoever wants to join us is warmly welcome. Looking forward to your active participation. 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)比赛的目的是激发学生学习英语的热情，丰富我们的学校生活。 The purpose/goal of the competition is to arouse students' enthusiasm for learning English and enrich our school life. →The purpose/goal of the competition is to ________________________________ (激发) students' enthusiasm for learning English and enrich our school life. fuel/motivate/stimulate/set off/stir up (2)你应该用最多100个词语来表达你的真实感受。 You should use good expressions to express your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words. →You should use good expressions to __________(表达) your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words. convey 2．精准用词 你应该用最多100个词语来表达你的真实感受。 You should use good expressions to convey your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words. →You should use ________________ (富有创造力的和丰富的) expressions to convey your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words. creative and rich 3．词块优先 (1)比赛的目的是激发学生学习英语的热情，丰富我们的学校生活。 The purpose/goal of the competition is to fuel students' enthusiasm for learning English and enrich our school life. →The competition ________________(aim短语) fueling students' enthusiasm for learning English and enriching our school life. (2)所有参赛作品都必须有积极的主题。 All entries must have a positive theme. →All entries must _______________ (possess 短语) a positive theme. leais aimed at be possessed of (3)主题包括分享你的学校生活，向父母或老师表达爱意，重视友谊等。 The theme includes sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, valuing friendship, and so on. →The theme ____________ (range短语) sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, to valuing friendship, and so on. ranges from 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)你应该用最多100个词语来表达你的真实感受。 You are advised to use creative and rich expressions to convey your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words. →_______________ you should use creative and rich expressions to convey your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words.(主语从句) (2)最重要的是创意和创造力。 The originality and the creativity matter most. →_________________ are the originality and the creativity.(主语从句) It is advised that What matters most 2．非谓语动词 (1)《学校英语报》定于本月举办英语诗歌写作比赛。比赛旨在激发学生学习英语的热情，丰富我们的学校生活。 An English Poetry Writing Competition is scheduled to be held by the School English Newspaper this month. The competition is aimed at fueling students' enthusiasm for learning English and enriching our school life. →________________ students' enthusiasm for learning English and enriching our school life, an English Poetry Writing Competition is scheduled to be held by the School English Newspaper this month.(aim非谓语动词作状语) Aimed at fueling (2)所有参赛作品都必须有积极的主题。主题包括分享你的学校生活，向父母或老师表达爱意，重视友谊等。 All entries must have a positive theme. The theme ranges from sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, to valuing friendship, and so on. →All entries must have a positive theme, _________ (range) from sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, to valuing friendship, and so on. (非谓语动词作定语) ranging 3．特殊句式 最重要的是创意和创造力。 The originality and the creativity matter most. →______________________________________________ (强调主语) 4．被动语态 您的参赛作品必须在10月30日之前提交到电子邮箱englishnewspaper@163.com。 You must submit your entry to englishnewspaper@163.com before Oct. 30. →Your entry must ____________(submit) to englishnewspaper@163.com before Oct. 30. It is the originality and the creativity that matter most. be submitted 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_________ (首先), all entries must have a positive theme, ranging from sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, to valuing friendship, and so on. 2．____________ (此外), it is advised to use creative and rich expressions to convey your true feelings with a maximum of 100 words. Firstly Additionally 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Aimed at fueling students' enthusiasm for learning English and enrich our school life, an English Poetry Writing Competition is scheduled to held by the School English Newspaper this month. 错误改正：_________________;____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _________________________ enrich→enriching held前加be enriching与fueling并列作介词at的宾语；英语诗歌创作比赛是被举行，用被动语态。 ②Requirement for the competition are as follow. 错误改正：__________________________;___________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________________________________ ③Firstly, all entries must have a positive theme, range from sharing your school life, showing love to parents or teachers, to value friendship, and so on. 错误改正：_______________;______________ 分析错因：_______________________________________________ Requirement→Requirements follow→follows 无冠词修饰且谓语动词为are,主语为复数概念；as follows为固定搭配，意为“如 下”。 range→ranging value→valuing ranging为现在分词作定语；介词to后用v-ing形式。 2．文海拾贝 ①旨在做某事 be aimed at doing sth ②激发某人的热情 fuel one's enthusiasm ③范围从……到…… range from ... to ... ④……的最大值 a maximum of ⑤提交 submit (一) (2024·四川省绵竹中学高一月考)假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华，这周日你们学校将邀请地震专家王教授来校进行地震知识讲座，请你代表学生会用英语写一则通知，请同学们积极参加。内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．讲座时间、地点和内容； 3．注意事项。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Student Union [精彩范文] Notice To help students learn something about earthquakes，our school will invite Professor Wang, an expert in earthquakes, to give us a lecture in the school hall at 9 o'clock on Sunday morning. All the students are welcome to attend it. Professor Wang will share with us some knowledge about earthquakes, such as the cause and damage of them. He will teach some important skills to protect ourselves and survive during the earthquake. I strongly believe this lecture can benefit us a lot. By the way, you should arrive before 8：50. Student Union 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.an expert in earthquakes 地震专家 2．give sb a lecture 给某人做演讲　3.attend v. 出席，参加　4.survive v. 幸存　5.strongly believe 坚信　 6.benefit sb a lot 使某人受益良多　7.by the way顺便说一下 ◆亮句：To help students learn something about earthquakes，our school will invite Professor Wang, an expert in earthquakes, to give us a lecture in the school hall at 9 o'clock on Sunday morning. 句式解析：To help ... 为不定式短语作目的状语；an expert in earthquakes作Professor Wang的同位语。 (二) (2024·河北衡水中学高一期末考试)新年即将来临，学生会将于星期五晚上8：00～10：00在学校五楼报告厅举办一场英语晚会，现请你以学生会的名义发一则英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加。通知包含以下要点： 1．晚会主题：“迎新春，享受英语”； 2．节目内容； 3．参会要求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] NOTICE In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy English” is going to be held by our Student Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, in the lecture hall on the fifth floor. There will be many activities from the students, such as English short－play performances, English story－telling and English songs. What's more, some foreign students will be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party. All students as well as the faculty and staff are expected to attend it on time and not to litter. At last, you are welcome to our English Evening party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself. Student Union 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.in order to 为了　2.theme n. 主题　3.what's more 此外　 4.faculty and staff 教职员工 5．be expected to do sth 被期望做某事　 6.litter v. (在公共场所)乱扔(垃圾) ◆亮句：In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy English” is going to be held by our Student Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, in the lecture hall on the fifth floor. 句式解析：In order to ... 为介词短语作目的状语；with ... 介词短语作后置定语，修饰English Evening party。 (三) (2024·九省联考)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括： 1.介绍活动目的； 2.说明参赛要求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to englishdepartment@163.com before the deadline of June 1st. We are looking forward to your participation and creative submissions. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.aim to do sth 旨在做某事 2.raise awareness 提高意识 3.be encouraged to do sth 被鼓励做某事 4.consist of 由……组成 5.original adj. 原创的 6.contribute to 贡献；促成；有助于 7.entry n. 作品；条目；进入 8.submission n. 提交 ◆亮句：Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. 句式解析：现在分词focusing和showing与其逻辑主语Entries之间为主动关系，在句中作伴随状语； how引导宾语从句。 R $$