第二章 十 短文投稿-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 教育部正式发文，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。为了响应号召，你校上学期开展了一系列劳动实践课程，包括蔬菜种植、制作手工艺品、家电维修等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括： 1．你喜爱的课程； 2．你的心得体会； 3．你对课程的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：制作手工艺品make handicrafts My Favourite Hands­on Course ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：短文投稿属于短文类写作。投稿，通常会有特定的主题，写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。常见的作文形式是“参赛”和“征文”两种，内容分为写人和叙事两种。标题的含义很多，建议写自己最擅长和熟悉的人和事。投稿类书面表达试题凸显时代性，要多关注社会生活实际。 时态分析：短文投稿的时态主要是______________和一般过去时，也可能会使用一般将来时。 第一段：引出话题，点明主题； 第二段：________； 第三段：总结(表达感谢与祝福)，升华意义。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 主题内容 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用原因和背景拓展要点 为了响应国家劳动教育的号召，我们学校上学期开设了一系列实践课程。 _____________________________________________, our school offered a series of hands­on courses last term. 2．用活动内容拓展要点 实践课程包括种植蔬菜、制作传统手工艺品和修理家用电器。 The hands­on courses __________________________________________________ and ____________________________． In response to the call of nationwide labor education include planting vegetables, making traditional handicrafts repairing household appliances 3．用影响和感受拓展要点 我基本了解了必要的生活技能，比如缝扣子和织围巾。 I ____________________________essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf. 4．用反应和评价拓展要点 (1)这绝对是一次美妙的经历。 It was ___________________________． (2)实践课程在学生中广受欢迎。 The hands­on courses____________________________. gained a basic understanding of surely a wonderful experience are popular among the students 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我们学校上学期开设了一系列实践课程。 Our school offered a series of hands­on courses last term. →Our school ________________(开设) a series of hands­on courses last term. (2)我对必要的生活技能有了基本的了解，比如缝扣子和织围巾。 I gained a basic understanding of essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf. →I gained a ___________________ (基本的了解) of essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf. launched/set up fundamental glimpse 2．精准用词 这绝对是一次美妙的经历。 It was surely a wonderful experience. →It was surely a _____________________________ (有益的和有价值的) experience. rewarding and worthy/valuable 3．词块优先 (1)实践课程包括种植蔬菜、制作传统手工艺品和修理家用电器。 The hands­on courses include planting vegetables, making traditional handicrafts and repairing household appliances. →The hands­on courses ___________ (range短语) planting vegetables, making traditional handicrafts to repairing household appliances. (2)实践课程在学生中广受欢迎。 The hands­on courses are popular among students. →The hands­on courses have __________________________(popularity短语) among the students. range from gained/won wide popularity 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)缝纫是我最喜欢的课程之一。我基本了解了必要的生活技能，比如缝扣子和织围巾。 Sewing is one of my favourite courses. I gained a fundamental glimpse of essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf. →Sewing is one of my favourite courses, ______________I gained a fundamental glimpse of essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf.(定语从句) where/in which (2)可以举办一个展览以展示学生们精心设计的作品，表现他们的创造力。 An exhibition could be held to demonstrate the students' well­designed works and display their creativity. →_____________ (如果可能的话), an exhibition could be held to demonstrate the students' well­designed works and display their creativity.(条件状语从句的省略) If possible 2．非谓语动词 (1)我们学校上学期开设了一系列实践课程。实践课程从种植蔬菜、制作传统手工艺品到修理家用电器。 Our school launched a series of hands­on courses last term. The hands­on courses range from planting vegetables, making traditional handicrafts to repairing household appliances. →Our school launched a series of hands­on courses last term, ________(range) from planting vegetables, making traditional handicrafts to repairing household appliances.(非谓语动词作定语) ranging (2)这无疑是一次有益而值得的经历。它丰富了我们的课余生活，帮助我们养成了劳动的好习惯。 It was surely a rewarding and worthy experience. It enriched our after­school life and helped us form the good habit of labouring. →It was surely a rewarding and worthy experience, _________ (enrich) our after­school life and _________(help) us form the good habit of labouring.(非谓语动词作结果状语) enriching helping 3．被动语态 我们学校上学期开设了一系列实践课程。 Our school launched a series of hands­on courses last term. →A series of hands­on courses ____________(launch) last term in our school. was launched 4．特殊句式 这无疑是一次有益而值得的经历。它丰富了我们的课余生活，帮助我们养成了劳动的好习惯。 It was surely a rewarding and worthy experience, enriching our after­school life and helping us form the good habit of labouring. →It was surely a rewarding and worthy experience, _________enriching our after­school life __________helping us form the good habit of labouring.(not only ... but also结构) not only but also 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．______________ (毫无疑问), sewing is one of my favourite courses, where I gained a fundamental glimpse of essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf. 2．______________________________ (说实话), it was surely a rewarding and worthy experience, not only enriching our after­school life but also helping us form the good habit of labouring. 3．___________ (因此), the hands­on courses have won wide popularity among the students. Undoubtedly To tell the truth/Honestly speaking As a result 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands­on courses was launching last term in our school, range from planting vegetables, making traditional handicrafts to repairing household appliances. 错误改正：___________________;_______________ 分析错因：___________________________________________________ launching→launched range→ranging be+过去分词构成被动语态；ranging为现在分词作定语。 ②Undoubtedly, it was surely rewarding and worthy experience, not only enriching our after­school life but also help us form the good habit of labouring. 错误改正：__________________;________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ③If possible, a exhibition could be held to demonstrate the student's well­designed works and display their creativity. 错误改正：________;______________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ __________________ rewarding前加a help→helping experience意为“经历”时，是可数名词；helping与enriching并列。 a→an Student’s→students’ exhibition的发音以元音音素开头；此处不止一个学生的作品，用students’ 。 2．文海拾贝 ①响应 in response to ②一系列的实践课程 a series of hands­on courses ③开设；创办 launch/set up ④对……有基本的了解 gain a fundamental glimpse of ⑤广受欢迎 gain/win wide popularity (一) (2024·广东省惠州市华罗庚中学高二月考)假定你是李华，在春节期间的家宴上，你发现很多人沉迷于手机，不与他人沟通。请你向校英文报社编辑投稿反映该情况，要点包括： 1．你遇到的情况； 2．你的想法； 3．你的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] When I spent the spring festival at home this year, I found many people addicted to their smartphones at the family feasts. When I told jokes, no one gave me a response. Though we sat just face to face, I felt the furthest distance. Smartphones indeed change the way of communication, but they also distance us from others. It's embarrassing that when people are sitting together, everyone looks down and focuses on playing their phones, ignoring others. As far as I'm concerned, we shouldn't let smartphones control our life. What we should do is put down the phone and cherish the people around us. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.be addicted to 沉迷于　2.face to face 面对面地　 3.embarrassing adj. 使人尴尬的，使人难堪的　4.ignore v. 忽视　 5.as far as I'm concerned 就我而言　6.cherish v. 珍惜 ◆亮句：It's embarrassing that when people are sitting together, everyone looks down and focuses on playing their phones, ignoring others. 句式解析：it＋be＋adj.＋that从句意为“……是……的”，其中it为形式主语，that从句为真正的主语；when 引导时间状语从句；ignoring others是现在分词短语作伴随状语。 (二) (2024·山东省青岛市高一期末考试)假定你是李华，近期，你发现同学们在英文写作中使用缩略语(abbreviation)的现象较为普遍。请你就此写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括： 1．陈述现象； 2．表达看法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Recently, I have observed a growing trend among students to use English abbreviations in their English writing. Abbreviations, however, are commonly used in informal communication, such as text messages and social media posts. In my opinion, while incorporating some abbreviations can enhance the efficiency of written communication, it is essential to strike a balance. Overusing abbreviations will possibly lead to misinterpretation and difficulties in comprehending the intended message. It is crucial for students to recognize that effective communication requires utilizing appropriate vocabulary and sentence structures. Let us strive towards maintaining the richness and elegance of the English language! 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.observe v. 注意到，观察到　2.a growing trend 一个不断增长的趋势　3.written communication 书面沟通　4.strike a balance 达到平衡　 5.overuse v. 过度使用　6.lead to 导致 7．crucial adj. 至关重要的，决定性的 ◆亮句：In my opinion, while incorporating some abbreviations can enhance the efficiency of written communication, it is essential to strike a balance. 句式解析：while引导让步状语从句；incorporating some abbreviations为动名词短语作主语；固定句式it is＋adj.＋to do sth意为“做某事是……的”。 (三) (2024·浙江高考1月) 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1.介绍这项运动； 2.说明推荐理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activities into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your chair, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. 答案 Firstly, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Secondly, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. Therefore, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small exercise but can make a big difference to you. 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.incorporate v. 包含，合并 2.daily routine 日常工作 3.stretch v. 伸展；延伸 4.take a deep breath 深呼吸 5.negative effects 负面影响 6.engage in 参加 7.make a big difference 产生重大影响 ◆亮句：It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. 句式解析：to get ... and mind为不定式短语作后置定语，修饰名词way，意为“做……的方式”。 R $$