第二章 三 感谢信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假如你是李华，你的英语老师 Peter在你生病住院期间经常在线辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．表示感谢； 2．回顾帮助； 3．邀请来中国游玩。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：感谢信是向对方表达谢意的书信，语言可以比较正式，也可以比较口语化，依双方关系而定；可借助谈对方的帮助来进一步表达感激之情。言辞应真挚、得体，切不可给对方草率的印象。 时态分析：感谢信的时态主要为__________、_____________和一般将来时。 第一段：写信背景和表达感谢的目的； 第二段：_________________________ ________； 第三段：再次感谢并表示回报。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 一般过去时 细述对方给予的帮助并高度赞赏 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用原因和背景拓展要点 我写信的目的是感谢你在我住院期间给予的帮助和鼓励。 I'm writing to express my thanks _______________________________________ ______________． 2．用结果拓展要点 你每天在线辅导我学习英语，因此我的英语很好。 You help me with my English online every day, ___________________________． for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital so my English is very good 3．用影响和感受拓展要点 你的帮助指引我走出了低落的情绪。 Your help _________________________． 4．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)再次感谢你的善意。 _________________________________ (2)我真的希望你来中国能玩得愉快。 _________________________________________________ guides me out of low spirits Thank you for your kindness again. I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip. 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 我写信的目的是感谢你在我住院期间给予的帮助和鼓励。 I'm writing to express my thanks for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital. →I'm writing to express my _____________________ (感谢) for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital. appreciation/gratitude 2．精准用词 (1)你的帮助引导我走出了低落的情绪。 Your help guides me out of low spirits. →Your _______________________________________(频繁的鼓励和积极的态度) guide me out of low spirits. (2)我真的希望你来中国能玩得愉快。 I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip. →I do hope you will come to China to have a ______________________ (有意义的) trip. frequent encouragement and positive attitude rewarding/meaningful 3．词块优先 (1)你每天在线辅导我学习英语，因此我的英语很好。 You help me with my English online every day, so my English is very good. →You help me with my English online every day, so I have ___________________ (progress短语) in English. →You help me with my English online every day, so my English ____________________(along短语)． (2)我真的希望你来中国能玩得愉快。 I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip. →I do hope you will ______________ (visit短语) China to have a nice trip. made great progress goes along quite well pay a visit to 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)你每天在线辅导我学习英语。我的英语进步很大。 You help me with my English online every day. I have made great progress in English. →You help me with my English online every day, _________I have made great progress in English. (结果状语从句) so that (2)我真的希望你来中国能玩得愉快。在这里你可以亲眼看见文化与自然的完美结合。 I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip. You can witness in person the perfect combination of culture and nature in China. →_____________________ you will come to China to have a nice trip, _________ you can witness in person the perfect combination of culture and nature.(主语从句；定语从句) It is my great hope that where 2．非谓语动词 (1)你每天在线辅导我学习英语。我的英语进步很大。 You help me with my English online every day. I have made great progress in English. →You help me with my English online every day, __________(enable) me to make great progress in English.(非谓语动词作结果状语) enabling (2)你频繁的鼓励和对生活的积极态度，引导我走出了低落的情绪，这让我以健康的方式应对疾病、学习和生活。 Your frequent encouragement and positive attitude towards life guide me out of low spirits. They help me deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way. →Your frequent encouragement and positive attitude towards life guide me out of low spirits ________(deal) with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.(非谓语动词作目的状语) to deal 3．特殊句式 正是你频繁的鼓励和对生活的积极态度引导我走出了低落的情绪。 Your frequent encouragement and positive attitude towards life guide me out of low spirits. →______ your frequent encouragement and positive attitude towards life ____guide me out of low spirits. (强调主语) It’s that 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．____________ (毫无疑问), you help me with my English online every day, so that I have made great progress in English. 2．______________________ (此外), it's your frequent encouragement and positive attitude towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way. Undoubtedly In addition/Additionally 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①I'm writing to express my gratitude for your help and encourage during my stay in the hospital. 错误改正：__________________________;_____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ___________________________ encourage→encouragement 去掉the 名词encouragement作for的宾语；in the hospital “在这个医院”，in hospital “住院”。去掉the ②Undoubted, you help me with my English online every day, so that I have made a great progress in English. 错误改正：________________________;_______ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________________________________ ③I do hope you will pay visit to China to have a nice trip, where you can witness by person the perfect combination of culture and nature. 错误改正：____________;_________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ Undoubted→Undoubtedly 去掉a 副词undoubtedly修饰整个句子；progress为不可数名词，make progress in “在……中取得进步”。 visit 前加a by→in visit作名词时可数，pay a visit to “参观，拜访”；in person “亲自”。 2．文海拾贝 ①表达某人的感谢 express one's appreciation/gratitude ②毫无疑问 undoubtedly ③取得巨大的进步 make great progress ④频繁的鼓励 frequent encouragement ⑤参观 pay a visit to ⑥亲自 in person (一) (2024·四川省兴文第二中学高二阶段检测)假定你是李华，你收到了笔友Peter寄来的生日礼物。请你给他写一封信，表示感谢。内容包括： 1．收到的生日礼物：一本《现代英汉词典》； 2．向他表示感谢，作为回报，决心更努力学习； 3．向他表示祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：《现代英汉词典》 Modern English－Chinese Dictionary Dear Peter， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Peter， Long time no see! How are you recently? I'm more than happy and thankful to receive your gift for my birthday, a Modern English－Chinese Dictionary. It is very helpful for me to study English. Especially when I can't understand the meaning of some words, I can refer to it and grasp the ideas of the whole passage. In return for your help, I have determined to study harder, and I'm sure I will make great progress in my English. Thanks again and hope everything goes well! Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.refer to 查阅　2.grasp the ideas of 理解……的思想　 3.in return for 为回报……；作为对……的回报　 4.determine to do sth 下决心做某事　5.make great progress 取得巨大进步 ◆亮句：It is very helpful for me to study English. Especially when I can't understand the meaning of some words, I can refer to it and grasp the ideas of the whole passage. 句式解析：固定句式it is＋adj.＋for sb to do sth表示“做某事对某人来说是……的”；when引导时间状语从句。 (二) (2024·四川省泸县第一中学高一期末考试)假如你是李华，现在刚初中毕业，高中生活即将开始。请你给一直关心、帮助你的初中班主任(Ms Wang)写一封感谢信。内容包括： 1．感谢老师三年来，特别是初三一年无微不至的关怀和帮助； 2．自己近期学习一直十分刻苦，进步不小，中考很顺利，发挥出了自己的水平，希望老师放心； 3．虽然高中学习和生活肯定会有困难和挑战，但是自己一定会尽快适应，并努力考上心仪的大学，不辜负老师的期望。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：中考 senior high school entrance examination Dear Ms Wang, ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Ms Wang， Thank you for the love and care that you have shown for me over the past three years, especially the third year of middle school. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my senior high school entrance examination. Although there will certainly be difficulties and challenges in high school, I will certainly live up to your expectations, adapt to it as soon as possible and strive to be admitted to my favorite university. Everything is going on well with me. Don't worry! Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.get along well 进展顺利　2.live up to 不辜负　3.adapt to 适应　 4.as soon as possible 尽快　5.strive to do sth 努力做某事　 6.be admitted to 被……录取 ◆亮句：Although there will certainly be difficulties and challenges in high school, I will certainly live up to your expectations, adapt to it as soon as possible and strive to be admitted to my favorite university. 句式解析：Although 引导让步状语从句；live up to, adapt to, strive为三个并列谓语。 (三) (2024·安徽省阜阳第一中学高二月考)假如你是李华，作为交换生在美国一所中学学习，在入学报到当天得到了学校志愿者 Jones 的帮助。请根据以下要点，写一封感谢信。 1．表达感谢； 2．描述至少两个帮助的细节； 3．请 Jones看电影作为答谢。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jones， How is everything going？﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours sincerely， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Jones， How is everything going? It's been a while since I started my academic life here as an exchange student, but I'm still in great appreciation of what you have done for me on the very first day of my enrollment. As a freshman in a totally alien environment, I had to carry luggage loaded with bedding stuff as well as a bag full of daily supplies. Then came your timely assistance, 答案 which saved me a lot of energy. What's more, on the way to the dormitory, but for your accurate guidance and precise introduction to different areas around, I would have already been lost in such a vast campus. Again, I'd like to extend my heartfelt gratitude and desire to treat you to a movie. Hope to receive your reply soon. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.enrollment n. 入学　2.alien environment 陌生的环境　 3.daily supplies 日用品　4.timely assistance 及时的帮助　 5.accurate guidance 准确的指导　6.precise introduction 精确的介绍 ◆亮句：It's been a while since I started my academic life here as an exchange student, but I'm still in great appreciation of what you have done for me on the very first day of my enrollment. 句式解析：since 引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句。 R $$