第二章 七 求助信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，学校将举行英语名人演讲模仿比赛，你有意参加。请你给外教Mr Johnson 写一封电子邮件，希望得到他的指导。内容包括： 1．比赛介绍； 2．希望得到哪些指导。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：英语名人演讲模仿比赛English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest Dear Mr Johnson， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。求助信要开门见山，直截了当地说明自己遇到的难题或困惑，并真诚向对方求助，语气应比较委婉和礼貌。 时态分析：求助信的时态以____________为主，有时候也会用一般将来时。 第一段：开门见山，请求帮助； 第二段：_________________ __________________； 第三段：希望对方提供帮助并致谢。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 求助的原因、具体的需要帮助的内容 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用原因和背景拓展要点 我写信请求你的实践指导，因为我们学校下个月将举行英语名人演讲模仿比赛。 I am writing to ask for your practical guidance, because ___________________ ______an English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month. our school is going to hold 2．用活动拓展要点 (1)参赛者应该模仿名人的演讲。 Contestants should _________________________． (2)评委将根据他们的内容、模仿技巧和语言技巧来评判他们的表现。 Judges ____________________________by their contents, imitation skills and language skills. imitate a celebrity’s speech will judge their performances 3．用结果拓展要点 我的发音需要改进。我想知道你能不能帮助我正音。 My pronunciation needs to be improved. ________________________________ with my pronunciation. 4．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)如果你能给我建议，我将不胜感激。 _________________________________________________ (2)期盼你尽快回信。 ________________________________________ I am wondering if you could help me I would be grateful if you could give me your suggestions. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply. 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我写信请求你的实践指导，因为我们学校下个月将举行英语名人演讲模仿比赛。 I am writing to ask for your practical guidance, because our school is going to hold an English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month. →I am writing to _______(寻求) for your practical guidance, because our school is going to ________________ (筹办/发起) an English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month. seek organize/launch (2)你能提供一些鼓舞人心的演讲吗？ Could you please provide some inspiring speeches? →Could you please ____________(推荐) some inspiring speeches? 2．精准用词 (1)我不清楚如何选择一个好的演讲。 I don't know how I choose a good speech. →I don't know how I choose an _________________________(吸引人的) speech. recommend attractive/appealing/absorbing (2)我想知道你能否给我一些建议，帮助我改进发音。 I am wondering if you could give me some advice and help me with my pronunciation. →I am wondering if you could give me some advice and help me ______________ (改进) my pronunciation. 3．词块优先 参赛者应该模仿名人的演讲。 Contestants should imitate a celebrity's speech. →Contestants _______________ (suppose短语) imitate a celebrity's speech. better/improve are supposed to 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)我们学校下个月将举行英语名人演讲模仿比赛，因此我写信请求你的实践指导。 I am writing to ask for your practical guidance, because our school is going to hold an English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month. →Our school is going to hold an English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month, __________I am writing to seek for your practical guidance.(定语从句) for which (2)参赛者应该模仿演讲。演讲是由一位名人发表的。 Contestants are supposed to imitate a speech. The speech is delivered by a celebrity. →Contestants are supposed to imitate a speech, _______is delivered by a celebrity. (定语从句) (3)我不太清楚如何选择一个好的演讲。 I don't know how I choose an appealing speech. →_____________________________ an appealing speech.(同位语从句) which I have no clear idea how I choose 2．非谓语动词 (1)参赛者应该模仿演讲。演讲是由一位名人发表的。 Contestants are supposed to imitate a speech. The speech is delivered by a celebrity. →Contestants are supposed to imitate a speech __________(deliver) by a celebrity. (非谓语动词作定语) (2)我的发音需要改进。 My pronunciation needs to be improved. →My pronunciation needs __________(improve)．(主动表示被动) delivered improving 3．被动语态 (1)评委将根据他们的内容、模仿技巧和语言技巧来评判他们的表现。 Judges will judge their performances by their contents, imitation skills and language skills. →Their performances ________________(judge) by their contents, imitation skills and language skills. (2)我们学校下个月将举行英语名人演讲模仿比赛。 Our school will hold an English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month. →An English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest ________________(hold) by our school next month. will be judged will be held 4．特殊句式 我的发音需要改进。 My pronunciation needs improving. →________________________ needs improving. (强调主语) 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．___________ (然而), I have no clear idea how I choose an appealing speech, like what aspects should be included. 2．________ (此外), it is my pronunciation that needs improving. It is my pronunciation that However Besides 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Our school is going to hold a English Celebrity Speech Imitation Contest next month, which I am writing to seek for your practical guidance. 错误改正：________;_____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ __________________ a→an which前加for English的发音以元音音素开头；why=for which引导非限制性定语从句，表示原因。 ②I am wondering if you could give me some advices and help me better my pronunciations. 错误改正：___________________; ____________________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________ ③I would grateful if you could give me you suggestions. 错误改正：______________;_________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________________________________ advices→advice pronunciations→pronunciation advice为不可数名词；pronunciation意为“（某人的）发音”时用单数。 would后加be 第二个you→your grateful为形容词，其前应用be动词构成系表结构；应用形容词性物主代词修饰名词suggestions。 2．文海拾贝 ①寻求 seek for ②模仿演讲 imitate a speech ③选择一个吸引人的演讲 choose an appealing/absorbing/attractive speech ④鼓舞人心的 inspiring ⑤改进发音 better/improve one's pronunciation (一) (2024·福建省莆田第七中学、第十一中学、第十五中学等校高一期末联考)假定你是李华，刚升入高中，你在生活和学习方面遇到了一些困难和挑战，请给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信。要点如下： 1．自我介绍； 2．遇到的困难； 3．希望得到帮助。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor, ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Editor， I am Li Hua, a new student of senior high school. I have some trouble in the study and life. I hope you can give me some useful advice. The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have plenty of new knowledge to learn, so I have no time to do sports. I don't know how to make good plans for my study and how to make use of time reasonably. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. Besides, I find it difficult to get on well with new classmates. Could you help me, please? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.plenty of 大量的　2.make use of time reasonably 合理地利用时间　3.fall behind 落后 4．eventually adv. 最终，结果　 5.prevent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事 ◆亮句： I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. 句式解析：that引导宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句。 (二) (2024·黑龙江省大庆市大庆中学高二阶段检测)假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节，急需一些美国杂志。请你给美国笔友Jimmy写一封求助信，让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来，并告知会承担相关费用。内容包括： 1．求助的原因； 2．对杂志的要求； 3．费用。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Dear Jimmy， I'm writing to ask for a favor from you. To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture, the Student Union is organizing an American Culture Festival. We're now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society. So, could you please help select and buy some and send them to us? We will cover all the relevant costs. Also, we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students. Thanks a lot! Please reply at your earliest convenience! Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.ask for a favor 请求帮助　 2.gain a glimpse into American culture 了解一下美国文化 3．in urgent need of ... 急需……　4.content n. 内容　 5.see to it that ... 确保……　6.be suitable for 适合 ◆亮句： Also, we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students. 句式解析：if引导条件状语从句；that引导宾语从句，it为形式宾语。 (三) (2024·辽宁省重点高中沈阳市郊联体高一期末考试)假定你是张明，期末考试即将来临，目前你正在紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习，于是你给你的笔友Smith写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1．作业多，没有时间运动； 2．压力大，难以入睡。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Smith， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Sincerely yours， Zhang Ming [精彩范文] Dear Smith， Recently, I've been busy preparing for my final exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I'm writing to turn to you for help. I'm encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First of all, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I can hardly spare any time to do sports. In addition, with the high expectations from the teachers and my parents, I'm always under great stress, which makes it difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Could you please offer me some advice on how to deal with these problems? Looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours， Zhang Ming 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.prepare for 准备　2.unfortunately adv. 不幸地，遗憾地　3.concentrate on 专注于，全神贯注于　4.turn to sb for help 向某人求助 5．encounter v. 遭遇，遇到　6.deal with problems 处理问题 ◆亮句：In addition, with the high expectations from the teachers and my parents, I'm always under great stress, which makes it difficult for me to fall asleep every night. 句式解析：which引导非限制性定语从句；it为形式宾语，真正的宾语是to fall asleep。 R $$