第二章 六 告知信 介绍信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假如你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Rob给你发了一封电子邮件，请你介绍一下你们学校课外活动的开展状况。请你写一封回复邮件，内容如下： 1．学校开展课外活动的总体情况； 2．你最喜欢的课外活动项目及其原因(至少两个原因)； 3．希望Rob介绍一下美国的课外活动状况。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Rob， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：告知信/介绍信的内容比较广泛：如安排计划类、课外活动类、广告信息类、个人情况类、旅游介绍类等。告知信/介绍信的语言要简单明了，在信中一般应告知写信目的，然后再讲述其他事情。 时态分析：告知信/介绍信的时态主要是__________和___________。 第一段：简要写明要告知/介绍的事情； 第二段：_________________； 第三段：询问对方是否要了解其他信息，并表达期待。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 一般将来时 告知/介绍的具体信息 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．首段两句拓展要点 (1)我听说你对我们学校学生的课外活动很好奇。 I have learnt that you ____________________________________among students in our school. (2)我写信是为你介绍我的校园生活。 I am writing to ___________________________________． are curious about the after-class activities introduce my campus life to you 2．用原因和背景拓展要点 (1)我们学校为我们的全面发展组织了各种各样的活动。 Our school have organized different kinds of activities for ___________________． (2)我最喜欢它，因为我们可以独唱或组队演唱，我们中的一些人甚至创作自己的音乐。 I like it best, because we can ____________________________________________ ____________． our all\|round development sing solo or in teams and some of us even create their own music 3．用影响和感受拓展要点 所有这些都对我们的性格产生了深远的影响。 All these have ________________________on our character. 4．用反应和评价拓展要点 歌唱比赛在学生中很受欢迎。 The singing competition _______________among students. had a great influence is very popular 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我们学校与众不同，组织各种活动以促进我们的全面发展。 Our school makes itself different for organizing different kinds of activities for our all－round development. →Our school _____________(使与众不同) itself for organizing different kinds of activities for our all－round development. distinguishes (2)所有这些都对我们的性格产生了深远的影响。 All these have had a great influence on our character. →All these have had a _________________________________(深远的影响) on our character. (3)我想知道你们学校的学生在从事什么活动。 I wonder what activities the students in your school are taking part in. →I wonder what activities the students in your school are ________(参加) in. profound/far\|reaching impact/effect engaged 2．精准用词 我写信是为了让你了解我美好的校园生活。 And I'm writing to introduce my beautiful campus life to you. →And I'm writing to introduce my __________________(丰富多彩的) campus life to you. 3．词块优先 (1)歌唱比赛是我最喜欢的。 The singing competition is my favorite. →The singing competition ____________(stand短语) as my favorite. rich and colorful stands out (2)我们学校与众不同，组织各种活动以促进我们的全面发展。 Our school distinguishes itself for organizing different kinds of activities for our all－round development. →Our school _________________(apart短语) for organizing __________________ (variety短语) activities for our all－round development. (3)歌唱比赛在学生中很受欢迎。 The singing competition is very popular among students. →The singing competition ___________________________(popularity短语) among students. sets itself apart a wide variety of enjoys/gains wide popularity 第四步　　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)歌唱比赛是我的最爱，在学生中广受欢迎。 The singing competition stands out as my favorite. It enjoys wide popularity among students. →The singing competition stands out as my favorite, ________enjoys wide popularity among students.(定语从句) which (2)我最喜欢它的原因是我们可以单独演唱，也可以组队演唱，我们中的一些人甚至可以创作自己的音乐。 I like it best, because we can sing solo or in teams and some of us even create their own music. →The reason ________I like it best is _______we can sing solo or in teams and some of us even create their own music. (定语从句；表语从句) why that 2．非谓语动词 (1)我们学校与众不同，组织各种各样的活动以促进我们的全面发展。活动范围从体育、音乐到科学等。 Our school distinguishes itself for organizing a wide variety of activities for our all－round development. The activities range from sports, music, art to science, etc. →Our school distinguishes itself for organizing a wide variety of activities for our all－round development, ________(range) from sports, music, art to science, etc.(非谓语动词作状语) ranging (2)我最喜欢它的原因是我们可以单独演唱，也可以组队演唱，我们中的一些人甚至可以创作自己的音乐。 The reason why I like it best is that we can sing solo or in teams and some of us even create their own music. →The reason why I like it best is that we can sing solo or in teams, some of us even __________ (create) their own music.(独立主格结构) creating 3．被动语态 The competition has included many traditional Chinese elements. →Many traditional Chinese elements __________________(include) in the competition. have been included 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．__________ (实际上), our school distinguishes itself for organizing a wide variety of activities for our all­round development, ranging from sports, music, art to science, etc. 2．____________ (在他们当中), the singing competition stands out as my favorite, which enjoys wide popularity among students. 3．___________ (此外；另外), many traditional Chinese elements have been included in the competition. Actually Among them What’s more 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Actually, our school distinguish itself for organizing a wide variety of activities for our all­round development, ranging from sports, music, art and science, etc. 错误改正：________________________;____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________________________ distinguish→distinguishes and→to 主语our school为单数；range from[JP6] ... [JP]to[JP6] ... [JP]“范围从……到……” ②Among them, the singing competition stands out as me favorite, which enjoy wide popularity among students. 错误改正：___________;_____________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ______________________________ me→my enjoy→enjoys 用形容词性物主代词修饰名词favorite；which指代the singing competition，为单数。 ③The reason why I like it best is because we can sing solo or in teams, some of us even create their own music. 错误改正：_______________;________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ because→that create→creating the reason why ... is that ... “……的原因是……”；独立主格结构：名词+分词，creat与前面代词some of us的关系为主动关系，应用现在分词。 2．文海拾贝 ①使与众不同 distinguish oneself/set oneself apart ②各种各样的 a wide variety of ③脱颖而出 stand out ④广受欢迎 enjoy/gain wide popularity ⑤参加；参与 be engaged in (一) (2024·江苏省苏州市吴江高级中学高二月考)假定你是李华，你的笔友Frank询问你最近的情况。你校在教育部提倡的劳动教育中，开展了“Let's do housework”活动，请你给他回一封邮件，告诉他相关信息。内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．活动内容； 3．你的感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇： 劳动教育 education on the hard－working spirit Dear Frank， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Frank， I am so glad to hear from you and I am writing to tell you about my life. To strengthen education on the hard－working spirit among students, our school has launched a campaign called “Let's do housework”. Students are supposed to acquire basic working capability and form good working habits through it. 答案 We do whatever we can after study like washing the dishes, tidying the room and doing the laundry. Doing housework not only helps reduce parents' burden but also helps us to develop a sense of responsibility. What about you? Do you have anything new to share? Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.hard－working spirit 吃苦耐劳的精神　 2.launch a campaign 发起一场活动/运动 3．acquire basic working capability 获得基本的工作能力　 4.form good working habits 养成良好的工作习惯　 5.reduce parents' burden 减轻父母的负担　 6.develop a sense of responsibility 培养责任感 ◆亮句：We do whatever we can after study like washing the dishes, tidying the room and doing the laundry. 句式解析：whatever引导宾语从句；like在此处为介词，意为“例如”，其后应用动名词。 (二) (2024·江苏省盐城市亭湖高级中学高一期末考试)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国传统节日非常感兴趣，他写信向你询问。请你给他写一封回信，向他介绍一个你最喜爱的节日。内容包括： 1．节日的名称、时间； 2．节日的庆祝方式； 3．邀请他来体验。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Tom， I'm delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. You may have never heard of Chong Yang Festival, but it is actually my favorite. It falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month and is viewed as Senior Citizens' Day. People often do activities like going hiking and admiring flowers on this day. 答案 After I learned about the festival at school, for the first time in my life, I washed my grandma's feet. I'll never forget the sweet smile she wore and the happiness I felt. You see, I like Chong Yang Festival not just because of the popular activities. I sincerely invite you to come to experience it by yourself. Looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.be delighted to do sth 很高兴做某事　 2.lunar month 农历月　3.view ... as ... 将……视为……；将……视作……　 4.go hiking 去远足 5．admire flowers 赏花　6.for the first time 第一次 ◆亮句：I'll never forget the sweet smile she wore and the happiness I felt. 句式解析：she wore和I felt均为省略了that/which的定语从句，and连接两个并列成分the sweet smile she wore和the happiness I felt。 (三) (2024·山东省威海市第一中学高二模块考试)假如你是某英文网站负责人李华，你们网站近期将举办以“海洋保护”为主题的海报设计大赛，在华交换生Freddie对此很感兴趣并写信咨询比赛的相关信息。请你给他回一封信，内容包括： 1．大赛目的； 2．作品要求； 3．参赛方式。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Freddie， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Freddie， Exceedingly delighted to know that you intend to participate in the poster design contest themed on Ocean Protection, I'm writing to inform you of some detailed information. In a bid to arouse the awareness of marine conservation, the Student Union organizes this contest, where all the students are welcome to submit their entries. Originality, by all means, is the first requirement. 答案 Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought－provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of the ocean and the urgency to protect it. Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive. If you are interested, submit your entry before November 10th to English club@163.com. Looking forward to your participation. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.exceedingly adv. 非常，极其　2.intend to do sth 打算做某事　 3.in a bid to 为了　 4.arouse the awareness of marine conservation 唤起人们保护海洋的意识　 5.by all means 无论如何，一定 ◆亮句：In a bid to arouse the awareness of marine conservation, the Student Union organizes this contest, where all the students are welcome to submit their entries. 句式解析：In a bid to ... 介词短语作目的状语；where引导非限制性定语从句，解释说明contest。 R $$