第二章 九 祝贺信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的杂志Global English即将庆祝创刊五周年。请你给主编写一封信，内容包括： 1．表达祝贺； 2．你的阅读经历； 3．提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor­in­Chief， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、升迁、被录取等给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。 时态分析：祝贺信的时态主要是__________，有时候也会涉及一般过去时和一般将来时。 第一段：祝贺事由； 第二段：______________ ____________________； 第三段：再次祝贺并表达美好祝愿。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 祝贺的具体内容，并赞扬对方的努力 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．首段两句拓展要点 (1)我是你们杂志的一名忠实读者。 I'm _______________of your magazine. (2)时光飞逝！ How____________ 2．用原因和背景拓展要点 我写信的目的是向Global English创刊五周年表示衷心的祝贺。 I'm writing to ______________________________on the 5th anniversary of Global English. a regular reader time flies offer my warmest congratulations 3．用影响和感受拓展要点 (1)当我第一次在书店遇见Global English时，我爱上了它。 When I met it in a bookstore for the first time, I ________________Global English. (2)多亏了Global English，我变得知识渊博，思想开放。 Thanks to Global English, I’m ______________________________． fell in love with knowledgeable and open-minded 4．用结果拓展要点 (1)它一直在培养我对英语的兴趣，拓宽我的视野，与我分享国内外的最新消息。 It has been ____________________in English,_______________________, and ____________with me the updated news __________________． (2)它伴随着我度过了许多灰暗的日子。 It _____________________________________． developing my interest broadening my horizons sharing at home and abroad stays with me through many gray/dark days 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我写信的目的是向Global English创刊五周年表示衷心的祝贺。 I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global English. →I'm writing to ______________________(表达) my ___________________(衷心的) congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global English. (2)多亏了Global English，我变得知识渊博，思想开放。 Thanks to Global English, I'm knowledgeable and open­minded. →Thanks to Global English, I'm _______________(知识渊博的) and open­minded. convey/express/extend heartfelt/hearty/utmost well-informed (3)它一直在培养我对英语的兴趣，拓宽我的视野，与我分享国内外的最新消息。 It has been developing my interest in English, broadening my horizons, and sharing with me the updated news at home and abroad. →It has been _________________________________________________(激发；培养) my interest in English, broadening my horizons, and sharing with me the updated news at home and abroad. sparking/inspiring/fueling/arousing/stimulating/cultivating 2．精准用词 祝Global English未来美好！ Wish Global English a good future! →Wish Global English a _____________ (美好的) future! 3．词块优先 (1)它伴随着我度过了许多灰暗的日子。 It stays with me through many gray/dark days. →It __________________ (company短语) through many gray/dark days. rosy/brilliant keeps me company (2)当我第一次在书店遇见Global English时，我爱上了它。 When I met it in a bookstore for the first time, I fell in love with Global English. →When I ____________ (come短语) it in a bookstore for the first time, I fell in love with Global English. came across 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)当我第一次在书店遇见Global English时，我爱上了它。 When I came across it in a bookstore for the first time, I fell in love with Global English. →I fell in love with Global English ____________I came across it in a bookstore.(the first time引导时间状语从句) the first time (2)我想知道你是否可以添加一个新栏目。我们青少年可以在这个新的专栏中发表我们的新观点。 I'm wondering whether you can add a new column. We teenagers can voice our fresh opinions in it. →I'm wondering whether you can add a new column ________________we teenagers can voice our fresh opinions. (定语从句) where/in which 2．非谓语动词 它一直在培养我对英语的兴趣，拓宽我的视野，与我分享国内外的最新消息。它伴随着我度过了许多灰暗的日子。 It has been sparking my interest in English, broadening my horizons, and sharing with me the updated news at home and abroad. It keeps me company through many gray/dark days. →It has been sparking my interest in English, broadening my horizons, and sharing with me the updated news at home and abroad, ______________(accompany) me through many gray/dark days.(非谓语动词作状语) accompanying 3．同位语 我写信的目的是向Global English创刊五周年表示衷心的祝贺。我(李华)是你们杂志的一名忠实读者。 I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global English. I'm a regular reader of your magazine. →Hearty congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global English from Li Hua, _____________________________． a regular reader of your magazine 4．特殊句式 那些文章一直向我介绍迷人的外国文化。 Those articles introduce me to charming foreign cultures. →Those articles ____________ (fail双重否定结构) introduce me to charming foreign cultures. never fail to 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_________ (实际上), I fell in love with Global English the first time I came across it in a bookstore. 2．___________ (从那之后) it has been sparking my interest in English, broadening my horizons, and sharing with me the updated news at home and abroad, ______________ (更不必说) accompanying me through the many gray days. 3．____________ (毫无疑问), of all the columns, I like Western World best. Those articles never fail to introduce me to charming foreign cultures. 4．__________ (多亏；幸亏) Global English, I'm well­informed and open­minded. Actually Since then not to mention Undoubtedly Thanks to 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①Hearty congratulation on the 5th anniversary of Global English from Li Hua, a regularly reader of your magazine. 错误改正：____________________________;___________________ 分析错因：_______________________________________________________ congratulation→congratulations regularly→regular congratulations on “祝贺；恭喜”；应用形容词修饰名词reader。 ②Since then it has been sparking my interest in English, broadening my horizon, and sharing with me the updated news at home and abroad, not to mention accompany me through many gray days. 错误改正：__________________;________________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _________________________ ③As devoted reader, I'm wondering whether you can add a new column which we teenagers can voice our fresh opinions. 错误改正：_____________;___________________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _________________________ horizon→horizons accompany→accompanying horizon意为“眼界，范围”时，通常用复数；not to mention后加动名词。 devoted前加a which→where或which前加in 应用冠词a修饰reader表示泛指；where/in which引导定语从句，在从句中作状语。 2．文海拾贝 ①祝贺某事 congratulations on sth ②一名忠实读者 a regular/devoted reader ③在国内外 at home and abroad ④更不用说 not to mention ⑤发表某人的观点 voice one's opinions (一) (2024·甘肃省酒泉市高一期末考试)假定你是李华，你获悉你的美国笔友Alice在前天举行的校运动会上获得长跑比赛第一名。你打算给Alice写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．表示祝贺； 2．对于她的成功给予高度评价； 3．说明Alice获胜的原因； 4．希望Alice在各个方面继续努力，取得更大的成就。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alice， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Alice， I am writing to send my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the championship in the long－distance running race at the school's sports meeting held the day before yesterday! As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am to hear about your success and I would like to sing high praise for your success. 答案 As I know, you are really talented in long－distance running, but undoubtedly, you couldn't have made such remarkable achievements without your continuous effort. More importantly, you showed persistence in the competition, which contributed to your final success. I hope you will continue to work hard in all aspects and make greater achievements. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.sing high praise for one's success 高度赞扬某人的成功　 2.talented adj. 有天资的，有才能的　 3.make remarkable achievements 取得令人瞩目的成就　 4.persistence n. 坚持不懈 5．contribute to 促成；有助于　 6.work hard in all aspects 各方面都很努力 ◆亮句：As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am to hear about your success and I would like to sing high praise for your success. 句式解析：As your friend是介词短语作状语； how引导宾语从句；and连接两个并列句I just want ... about your success和I would like ... for your success。 (二) (2024·广东省广州市花都区广雅中学高二阶段测试)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex已提前被香港大学生物医学专业录取，你对此专业也很感兴趣。请你给Alex写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．祝贺他成功被录取； 2．请教申请成功经验； 3．祝愿他一切顺利。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：香港大学University of Hong Kong; 生物医学 Biomedicine Dear Alex， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Alex， Congratulations on your early acceptance into the Bachelor of Biomedicine program at the University of Hong Kong! I am writing to you because I am also quite interested in the field of biomedicine and I am hoping you could share some insights into your application process. Could you tell me something about any particular experiences or qualifications that you think helped strengthen your application? Additionally, what advice would you offer to a student thinking of applying for HKU's biomedicine course? 答案 Lastly, I wish you all the best as you embark on this new academic journey. May your time at HKU be filled with discovery, growth and success. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.share some insights 分享一些见解 2．particular experiences or qualifications 特殊的经历或资历　 3.additionally adv. 另外　4.embark on 开始　5.be filled with 充满 ◆亮句：I am writing to you because I am also quite interested in the field of biomedicine and I am hoping you could share some insights into your application process. 句式解析：because引导原因状语从句；and连接两个并列句I am also ... of biomedicine和I am hoping ... your application process；you could ... application process为省略了引导词that的宾语从句。 (三) (2024·安徽省宿州市泗县第一中学高二阶段性考试)假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong Learner”为主题的演讲比赛，你的朋友David获得了一等奖。请你写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺，内容包括： 1．祝贺获奖； 2．表达你对该主题的理解。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Dear David， I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”． As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success. I'm deeply impressed by your speech. Lifelong learning is the best education. For one thing, it helps us adapt to changes. We are supposed to embrace new technology and learn new knowledge. For another, learning is a good way to remain curious and stay young. 答案 Your success has greatly encouraged me to be a lifelong learner. Hope we can both continue to study to improve ourselves. Congratulations again! Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.entitle v. 给……命名，给……题名　 2.be deeply impressed by ... 被……深深地感动 3．lifelong learning 终身学习　 4.for one thing ... for another ... 一方面……另一方面……　 5.be supposed to 理应　6.embrace new technology 接受新技术　 7.remain curious and stay young 保持好奇，保持年轻 ◆亮句：I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”． 句式解析：entitled为过去分词作后置定语，修饰the speech contest。 R $$