第二章 二 建议信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Sam刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，于是写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，内容包括： 1．不必过分焦虑； 2．制订合理的学习计划； 3．多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sam， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：建议信是应用文常见的文体，主要写作内容为对别人的学习、生活提出针对性或建设性的建议，以解决各种实际问题。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 时态分析：建议信的时态多用____________和一般将来时。 第一段：表示理解并表明写信目的； 第二段：____________； 第三段：祝愿与期待。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般现在时 具体建议 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用原因和背景拓展要点 不必过分焦虑，因为从初中升到高中确实很难。 Don't worry about it too much, ___________________________________________ ____________________________. 2．用结果拓展要点 你要制订一个好的学习计划，这样你很快就会习惯新的学习环境。 You should make a good study plan and ___________________________________ ___________________________________． because it is really hard to go from junior high school to senior high school you will get used to the new studying environment soon 3．用影响和感受拓展要点 你将不会感到孤独并且你的学校生活会变得更好。 You won't ___________and your school life _____________________． 4．尾段两句拓展要点 (1)希望我的建议有帮助。 __________________________________ (2)每天开心点，你很快就会适应新生活的。 _________________________________________________ feel lonely will become better Hopefully, my suggestions are helpful. Be happy every day and you’ ll adapt to the new life soon. 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 从初中升到高中确实很难。 It is really hard to go from junior high school to senior high school. →It is really ____________(具有挑战性的) to go from junior high school to senior high school. →It is really a big _____________(挑战；困难) to go from junior high school to senior high school. challenging challenge 2．精准用词 你将不会感到孤独并且你的学校生活会变得更好。 You won't feel lonely and your school life will become better. →You won’t feel lonely and your school life will become ___________________ (丰富多彩并且有趣的)． colourful and interesting 3．词块优先 (1)你无法适应高中生活。 You can't adapt to your high school life. →You're ____________________________(trouble/difficulty短语) adapting to your high school life. →You _________(fail短语) adapt to your high school life. having trouble/difficulty (in) fail to (2)很快你就会习惯新的学习环境。 You will get used to the new studying environment soon. →You will get used to the new studying environment _________________(in介词短语)． →You will get used to the new studying environment ___________________(soon短语)． (3)希望我的建议有帮助。 Hopefully, my suggestions are helpful. →Hopefully, my suggestions _________________ (be of＋抽象名词)． in a short time soon afterwards are of great help 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)不必过分焦虑。从初中升到高中确实很难。 Don't worry about it too much. It is really challenging to go from junior high school to senior high school. →Don't worry about it too much ___________it is really challenging to go from junior high school to senior high school.(原因状语从句) because (2)你要制订一个好的学习计划，这样你就会在短期内习惯新的学习环境。 You should make a good study plan and you will get used to the new studying environment in a short time. →You should make a good study plan, _______will help you get used to the new studying environment soon.(定语从句) which 2．非谓语动词 (1)不必过分焦虑。从初中升到高中确实很难。 Don't worry about it too much because it is really challenging to go from junior high school to senior high school. →Don't worry about it too much because _________(go) from junior high school to senior high school is really challenging/a big challenge.(动名词作主语) going (2)你要制订一个好的学习计划，这样你就会在短期内习惯新的学习环境。 You should make a good study plan and you will get used to the new studying environment in a short time. →____________ (make) a good plan for your studies will help you get used to the new studying environment in a short time. (动名词作主语) 3．复合结构 希望我的建议有帮助。 Hopefully, my suggestions are helpful. →Hopefully, you will__________________________. (find复合结构) Making find my suggestions helpful 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_______ (但是) don't worry about it too much because going from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challenge. I'm writing to offer you some useful advice. 2．_______ (首先), making a good plan for your studies will help you get used to the new studying environment in a short time. 3．_______ (其次), you'd better make some new friends and take an active part in extracurricular activities. But First Second 4．___________ (用这个办法), you won't feel lonely and your school life will become colourful and interesting. 5．__________ (希望), you'll find my suggestions helpful. 6．________ (不管怎样), be happy every day and you'll adapt to the new life soon. In this way Hopefully Anyway 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①First, make a good plan for your studies will help you get used the new studying environment in a short time. 错误改正：______________; ______________________ 分析错因：_______________________________________________ ②Second, you'd better make some new friend and take a active part in extracurricular activities. 错误改正：_______________;_______________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ make→making 动名词making作主语；get used to “习惯于……” friend→friends friend为可数名词，前有some修饰；active的发音以元音音素开头。 used后加to a→an ③Anyway, be happy everyday and you'll adapt the new life soon. 错误改正：___________________; ________________ 分析错因：_________________________________________________________ _____________________________ everyday→every day adapt后加to every day “每天”，everyday adj. “日常的；每天的”；adapt to “适应……” 2．文海拾贝 ①做某事有困难 have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth ②适应 adapt to ③提供一些有用的建议 offer some useful advice ④积极参加 take an active part in ⑤课外活动 extracurricular activities (一) (2024·江苏省苏州市南京航空航天大学苏州附属中学高一月考)假设你是高中学生李华，你的美国笔友 David来信向你求助，他最近在和妈妈闹矛盾，因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容要点如下： 1．表示理解，给予安慰； 2．提出建议，说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear David， I quite understand how you feel, as it is completely normal for teenagers to get annoyed with parents because of Internet addiction. To solve the conflict between you and your mother, try following the suggestions below. To begin with, you might as well have honest communication with your mother, which will help bridge the gap. Make sure she knows what you do on the Internet and address her concerns. What's more, you'd better put yourself in her shoes and reflect on why she does so, which will bring you closer to her. 答案 Hope my suggestions will be of great value to you. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.get annoyed with sb 生某人的气　2.Internet addiction 网瘾　 3.solve the conflict 解决冲突　4.to begin with 首先　 5.honest communication 诚实的沟通　6.bridge the gap 消除隔阂　 7.address v. 处理，设法解决　8.put oneself in one's shoes 设身处地　 9.reflect on 深思，反省　10.be of great value 很有价值 ◆亮句：What's more, you'd better put yourself in her shoes and reflect on why she does so, which will bring you closer to her. 句式解析：why引导宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句。 (二) (2024·河北省部分地区高二期末考试)假如你是明启中学高二三班的学生李华，你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动，拟从三种活动形式中选择一种：走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议。请你写一封信，内容包括： 1．你的建议； 2．你的理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 To whom it may concern， I'm Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 2,﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours sincerely， Li Hua [精彩范文] To whom it may concern， I'm Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 2, who is interested in the activity of “Entering History”. I prefer the activity of making short videos. The reasons are as follows. First, the short video is of great convenience that the other two forms do not have. It can be done with just a few electronic devices at your fingertips. Second, making short videos is more efficient. Every student can participate and tell about the heroes he/she admires. Students can watch a short video in a short break. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.short video 短视频　2.electronic device 电子设备　 3.efficient adj. 有效的，效率高的　4.admire v. 崇拜　 5.a short break 短暂休息 ◆亮句： First, the short video is of great convenience that the other two forms do not have. 句式解析：be of great convenience＝be greatly convenient；that引导定语从句。 (三) (2024·广东省深圳市龙华区统考高一期末考试)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Max最近发来邮件，谈到他学业压力大、饮食不规律的问题。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1．表示关心； 2．提出建议； 3．给予鼓励。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Max， I'm sorry to hear that you are experiencing academic stress and irregular eating habits.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Max， I'm sorry to hear that you are experiencing academic stress and irregular eating habits. As a friend who really cares about your well－being, I want to offer a few suggestions that may help you feel better. Firstly, create a balanced schedule. Set aside specific time for studying, resting and eating. Plan your meals in advance so that you can eat more regularly and healthily. In terms of studying, try breaking up your tasks into smaller parts to help prevent burnout. Additionally, don't hesitate to seek support from your teachers or classmates if you're struggling with any particular subjects. 答案 Max, remember you are strong. I'm convinced that you can overcome these challenges and succeed in your studies! Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.well－being n. 幸福，安康　2.balanced schedule 平衡的时间表　 3.set aside 留出　4.in advance 提前，预先　5.in terms of 在……方面　 6.break up 拆分　7.struggle with 努力/艰难应对 ◆亮句：As a friend who really cares about your well－being, I want to offer a few suggestions that may help you feel better. 句式解析：who引导定语从句，修饰friend；that引导定语从句，修饰suggestions。 R $$