第二章 八 道歉信-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语应用文写作高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　应用文写作——练讲测 假设你是李华，已与留学生Mark约好周六讨论身边的低碳生活的情况，现你因故需要推迟，请给Mark写一封邮件说明情况。内容包括： 1．表达歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mark， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua 文体解读 谋篇布局 文体说明：我们在工作或生活中难免会犯一些错误，写封道歉信就显得很有必要。道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。 时态分析：道歉信的时态主要涉及____________和一般现在时。 第一段：表示歉意； 第二段：_____________ _____________________ 第三段：再次致歉；希望获得谅解。 第一步 理顺篇章立框架 一般过去时 出错的原因和过程；改进或弥补的措施 第二步 拓展要点显思维 1．用原因和背景拓展要点 我昨晚在一场足球比赛中受了重伤。 I ____________________in a soccer game last night. 2．用评价和反应拓展要点 事故的发生出乎我的意料。 The accident happened ______________________． was seriously injured beyond my expectation 3．用结果拓展要点 (1)我不得不卧床至少一周。 I had to __________for at least one week. (2)我的情况不允许我去任何地方。 My condition ____________________________． 4．用影响和感受拓展要点 我很遗憾错过了这个我一直渴望的机会。 I ______________to miss this chance that I have been expecting. stay in bed doesn’t allow me to go anywhere feel regretful 第三步 美化词汇增亮点 1．高级词汇 (1)我昨晚在一场足球比赛中受了重伤。 I was seriously injured in a soccer game last night. →I was __________(严重地) injured in a soccer game last night. (2)医生仔细检查了我，告诉我至少要卧床一周。 The doctor examined me carefully and told me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week. →The doctor examined me carefully and _________ (告知我) me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week. severely informed 2．精准用词 我问他我是否有可能恢复得更快。 I asked him whether there was any possibility that I could become better faster. →I asked him whether there was any possibility that I could ________(康复) faster. 3．词块优先 (1)我们计划在周六讨论我们周围的低碳生活。 We have planned to discuss the low­carbon life around us on Saturday. →We have planned to _______________ (discussion短语) on the low­carbon life around us on Saturday. recover have a discussion (2)恐怕我做不到了。 I am afraid I couldn't do that. →I am afraid I couldn't ___________(make短语)． (3)我很遗憾错过了这个我一直渴望的机会。 I feel regretful to miss this chance that I have been expecting. →I feel regretful to miss this chance that I have been _______________(long/eager短语)． make it longing/eager for 第四步　升级句式显能力 1．主从复合句 (1)我昨晚在一场足球比赛中受了重伤。事故的发生出乎我的意料。 I was severely injured in a soccer game last night. The accident happened beyond my expectation. →I was severely injured in a soccer game last night, ________happened beyond my expectation.(定语从句) which (2)我的情况不允许我去任何地方。直到我的腿完全恢复了。 My condition doesn't allow me to go anywhere. My legs are not fully recovered. →My condition doesn't allow me to go anywhere ___________my legs are fully recovered. (时间状语从句) 2．非谓语动词 医生仔细检查了我，告诉我至少要卧床一周。 The doctor examined me carefully and informed me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week. →The doctor examined me carefully, __________ (inform) me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week.(非谓语动词作状语) until/before informing 3．特殊句式 I feel regretful to miss this chance that I have been longing for. →________________________ to miss this chance that I have been longing for. (it作形式主语) 第五步　添加衔接更流畅 1．_______________ (事实证明), I was severely injured in a soccer game last night, which happened beyond my expectation. 2．__________ (结果), my condition doesn't allow me to go anywhere until my legs are fully recovered. It is a pity/regret for me As it turned out As a result 第六步 完美书写成佳作[灰度印刷　书写临摹] 1．找出下列句子中的语言错误，每句两处，改正并分析错因。 ①We have planned to discuss the low­carbon life around us in Saturday, however I am afraid I couldn't make it. 错误改正：_________;__________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ in→on however→but/yet 星期前用介词on；however表示转折时为副词，用逗号隔开，but/yet为连词，表示转折时不用逗号隔开。 ②I asked him whether there was any possible that I could recover faster, yet the answer is negative. 错误改正：____________________;___________ 分析错因：______________________________________ ③Shall we put it up until next weekend if my condition permit? 错误改正：__________; ________________ 分析错因：__________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ ipossible→possibility is→was any修饰限定名词；时态为一般过去时。 up→off permit→permits put off “推迟；延后”，put up “建造；举起；张贴”；主语condition为单数，谓语动词应用单数。 2．文海拾贝 ①低碳生活 the low­carbon life ②成功；达到预期目标 make it ③严重受伤 be severely injured ④卧床 stay in bed ⑤推迟 put off (一) (2024·青海省西宁市高二期末联考)假定你是李华，你和好友Peter原定本周六去参观你市的名胜古迹，因故你不能赴约。请你用英文给Peter写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．解释原因； 3．提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Dear Peter， I'm sorry to inform you that I can't show you around the places of interest of my city this Saturday. Just now, I got a notice, saying that on behalf of my school I would take part in a Chinese calligraphy competition, which will be held this Saturday. However, I'd like to ask my friend Wang Lin to go with you if you are willing. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.inform v. 通知，告知　2.places of interest 名胜古迹　 3.notice n. 通知；注意　v. 注意到，意识到　4.on behalf of 代表　 5.take part in 参加　6.Chinese calligraphy competition 中国书法比赛 ◆亮句：Just now, I got a notice, saying that on behalf of my school I would take part in a Chinese calligraphy competition, which will be held this Saturday. 句式解析：saying ... 为现在分词短语作伴随状语，与其逻辑主语notice是主动关系；that 引导宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句。 (二) (2024·四川省射洪中学高一月考)假定你是李华，你与爱尔兰交换生Philip原定本周日上午一起修改英文演讲稿，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．表达歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Philip， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Philip， I'm really sorry for not being able to meet up with you this Sunday morning as planned to revise the English speech draft. Recently, I was given an unexpected opportunity to interview runners as a reporter for the upcoming Hangzhou Marathon. It's a great honor for me, and I believe it will be a valuable experience for my future career. However, the interview is scheduled for the same time as our meeting, and I cannot reschedule it. I would appreciate it if you allow me to rearrange our meeting to next Sunday morning. If you are available at that time, please let me know. 答案 I apologize for any inconvenience caused and appreciate your understanding. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词： 1.unexpected adj. 想不到的，意外的　2.upcoming adj. 即将来临的　3.a great honor 极大的荣誉　4.a valuable experience 宝贵的经历 5．schedule v. 安排，预定　6.available adj. 有空的；可用的，可获得的 ◆亮句：I apologize for any inconvenience caused and appreciate your understanding. 句式解析：caused为过去分词作后置定语，修饰inconvenience; and连接两个并列的谓语动词apologize和appreciate。 (三) (2024·辽宁省沈阳市省重点高中五校协作体高一期末考试)假定你是红星中学高一学生李华，你和你校外教Chris原定去徒步，但是你因为突然染上流感，身体不适，不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．表达歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．期望再约。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris， ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Yours sincerely， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Chris， I'm writing to inform you that I am not able to go hiking with you due to my illness, for which I really feel regretful. Honestly speaking, I have been looking forward to going hiking with you for a long time. Unfortunately, I was unexpectedly infected with flu, which caused me to have a high fever and suffer a lot. So I'm afraid I can't keep the appointment as scheduled with you. Hopefully we can make another appointment after I have fully recovered. Please accept my heartfelt apology. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 答案 [日积月累] ◆好词：1.due to 因为　2.regretful adj. 遗憾的 3．honestly speaking 说实话　4.be infected with ... 染上……　 5.keep the appointment 遵守约定 6．heartfelt apology 诚挚的歉意 ◆亮句：I'm writing to inform you that I am not able to go hiking with you due to my illness, for which I really feel regretful. 句式解析：that引导宾语从句；固定搭配be able to do sth意为“有能力做某事”；for which是“介词＋关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句。 R $$