第二章 话题48 不计前嫌 化敌为友-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　读后续写——练讲测 话题四十八 不计前嫌 化敌为友 EXERCISE LECTURE QUIZ 目录 CONTENTS 1 2 ３ EXERCISE 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Anna was the school's best dancer and this was what she told her parents everyday. “Mrs Kelly says I am very gifted，” she said, “She says maybe I will be the best dancer in our ballet team.” Mrs Kelly had said these things, but she had said so to a number of dancers in order to encourage them because she believed it's important to get students inspired. Anna was also inspired by her words to be a winner and beat everyone else. However, Mrs Kelly actually preferred that Anna just liked to dance on the stage. EXERCISE “Students! Students！”Mrs Kelly called to the small group of girls around Anna. “I'd like to introduce to you our new student, Sally. She loves dancing as you do. I hope you all take time to say hi to her nicely.” Anna looked at Sally with dancing shoes in her hands. Sally did not have a dancer's body: She was short, with legs that looked like they belonged to a frog instead of an eleven－year－old girl. Anna felt relaxed and was sure this girl would not dance well. In the following weeks, however, it turned out that Anna made a wrong guess about Sally's dancing performance. In fact, Sally was not jut a good dancer, but an amazingly gifted dancer. She danced in beautiful ways that Anna thought was impossible for such a short girl. EXERCISE What's more, Sally was a nice girl. She often helped girls with difficult dance moves. She was active. She was smart, and everyone liked her. It seemed that Sally was taking everything away from Anna. Anna was sad and mad. The school ballet team would pick out the best dancer in only two weeks. She worried that Sally would win the contest and become the best dancer. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 EXERCISE Anna felt upset and then she thought out a plan. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Sally put on her dancing shoes, feeling something wrong with them. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ EXERCISE LECTURE Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 a good and amazingly gifted dancer When The school ballet team would pick out the best dancer in two weeks. what Anna wanted to be the best dancer in the ballet team. However, she found that Sally was not only _______________________________, but also a nice girl. Anna was sad and mad. LECTURE who Anna(争强好胜，轻视Sally，错误判断，悲伤着急) ①Anna was also inspired by her words _______________ and beat everyone else. ②Anna felt relaxed and was sure this girl would not dance well. ③In the following weeks, however, it turned out that Anna ____________________ about Sally's dancing performance. ④Anna was sad and mad. Mrs Kelly(鼓励学生，介绍Sally) ①Mrs Kelly had said these things, but she had said so to a number of dancers in order to encourage them. ②Mrs Kelly called to _________________________ around Anna. “I'd like to introduce to you our new student, Sally.” Sally(富有天赋，心地善良) ①In fact, Sally was not jut a good dancer, but an amazingly gifted dancer. ②What's more, Sally was ______________. to be a winner made a wrong guess the small group of girls a nice girl LECTURE Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 自傲的芭蕾舞者Anna (安娜)接受不了优秀的舞蹈生Sally (莎莉)。得知学校要在两周内挑选出最好的舞者，Anna担心Sally会赢得比赛。Anna会想出什么样的“计划”？Sally又会如何回应？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：Anna 争强好胜，担心Sally会赢得比赛，而想出一个恶作剧。 合理的解决办法：Sally坚持比赛，化解了恶作剧，并原谅Anna，最后成为朋友。 LECTURE 2．情节发展 第一段：想出“计划”→实施“计划”→鞋里放沙 第二段：觉察问题→坚持表演→Anna感到内疚→Sally安慰→Anna感动 3．主旨升华 面对Anna的恶作剧，Sally坚持完成表演，化解了危机，也感动了对方。正是不计前嫌的大度，化“敌人”为朋友，这才是最好的结局。 LECTURE Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 使用省略句型让文章语言简洁凝练，丰富文章句式，并增加语言的表现形式。例如：“Somehow, she even was a little excited about the plan when thinking that maybe she would be the best dancer.”。 2．结构衔接 运用副词和介词短语，衔接上下文，实现自然过渡，让文章更具逻辑性。例如： “Firstly” “Therefore” “As a result”等。 LECTURE 3．高分范文赏读 Anna felt upset and then she thought out a plan. Somehow, she even was a little excited about the plan when thinking that maybe she would be the best dancer. She began to think of the plan carefully. Firstly, she thought Sally must perform badly and leave a terrible impression on audience on the stage. Therefore, she decided to put something that couldn't be found in Sally's shoes. An idea hit her: sand, which seemed to be the most suitable thing for this plan. As a result, Anna put some sand in Sally's shoes secretly. LECTURE Sally put on her dancing shoes, feeling something wrong with them. However, she insisted on dancing with the smiling expression to present the perfect condition. All these things were caught by Anna who was standing on the wing. Looking at her insistence with pain, Anna felt a sense of guilt instead of the pleasure from success of the plan. So, Anna told the truth in shame and chose to withdraw from the competition after Sally limped painfully off the stage. To her surprise, Sally smiled and said, “it's the friendship rather than the best dancer that matters.” Anna was moved deeply and headed for the stage. 写在最后的话： 生活中，面对别人的挑衅，我们不妨大度一些，自己的大度会感化对方，将“敌人”变成朋友，这才是正确的处理方式。 LECTURE QUIZ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Farah was checking the party list with her mother. The exams were over and Farah wanted to invite her special friends for a party. “Farah, aren't you going to invite Hafsa？” her mother asked. Hafsa had been her best friend who lived across the street but now Farah had made new friends. “Mother, I am now a part of Purple Girls Club and we have rules about friends，” Farah answered hesitantly. “What rules？” her mother asked sarcastically (讽刺地)． QUIZ 17 “Only very pretty girls can be in our group. Hafsa is ... dark. I can't be seen with her. It's bad for my image.” “Farah, I can't believe you base your friendship on appearance rather than character. I had expected better judgment from you than this nonsense，” her mother retorted (反驳) angrily. Farah sank into silence. In her heart she knew her mother was right. Sometimes she too felt uncomfortable with her “cool” friends. Just then, her father called, “Farah, come here.” Farah went and paled when she saw the report card in his hands. QUIZ 18 “Farah, how come you failed each subject? You were my pride，” her father questioned. She hated to see such look of disappointment in his eyes. The truth was that the Club left her with little time for studies and the girls got together almost daily for movies, shopping, and partying. It had seemed like so much fun but now it left a bitter taste in her mouth. “Farah？” her father asked again, but Farah just hung her head in shame and did not answer. “Farah, you shall take supplementary (补考) papers next month.” QUIZ 19 Knowing how strict her father could be, Farah went to her room and opened her copies. Seeing her homework filled with red crosses, Farah felt awfully terrible. How could she have neglected (忽视) her studies so much? She called Gina, the leader of the Club. “Gina, can you lend me your copies? I need them to complete my notes for the exams.” Gina erupted into laughter. “Exams? Who cares? Farah. There are other ways of passing them.” Farah replaced the phone quickly. Even in desperation, she could never cheat. One by one, she called her so－called friends but no one was willing to help. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 QUIZ 20 Farah sat dejected on her bed, searching hard in her mind for other names she could turn to. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Next Monday, as the two old friends entered the school together, Gina saw them and called out haughtily (傲慢地)．﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Farah (法拉)因为结交了一群不爱学习，只喜欢吃喝玩乐的朋友而和老朋友Hafsa (哈法萨)绝交，并且导致未能通过考试，她不得不参加下个月的补考。但当她需要帮助时， 那群“朋友”没有一个能帮忙。Farah很着急， 她该向谁求助呢？Hafsa会帮助她吗？ 写前导读 QUIZ [精彩范文] Farah sat dejected on her bed, searching hard in her mind for other names she could turn to. “If only I hadn't joined Purple Girls Club! How could I be so foolish as to base my friendship on appearance？” Farah sighed with regret. It was at that very moment that she remembered the happy days with her old friend Hafsa. Instantly Farah jumped to her feet and stormed out, knowing what to do next. On the way to Hafsa's house across the street, Farah thought about ways to apologize. However, just as Hafsa opened the door, words failed her and tears ran down her face. Knowing what the matter was, Hafsa took out all her notes and promised to help her prepare for the supplementary exams. 精彩范文 QUIZ Next Monday, as the two old friends entered the school together, Gina saw them and called out haughtily (傲慢地). “Farah, don't you remember our rules? You can't be friends with those not belonging to our club.” “Sorry, Gina. I have a new rule about friendship now. It is that a friend in need is a friend indeed.” Farah replied confidently and proudly. Without giving Gina a second look, Farah took hold of Hafsa's hand firmly and strode toward their classroom. 精彩范文 QUIZ 1．Hafsa had been her best friend who lived across the street but now Farah had made new friends. 译文：___________________________________________________________ 亮点：①who引导______从句，先行词是______________，指人；②but连接两个________。 住在街对面的哈法萨曾经是她最好的朋友，但现在法拉结交了新朋友。 定语 her best friend 并列句 QUIZ 24 2．The truth was that the Club left her with little time for studies and the girls got together almost daily for movies, shopping, and partying. 译文： __________________________________________________________ ________________________ 亮点：①that引导______从句；②固定短语get together意为“___________”。 事实是，俱乐部让她几乎没有时间学习，女孩们几乎每天都聚在一起看电影、购物和聚会。 表语 聚在一起 QUIZ 25 R $$