第二章 话题16 人与动物 心有灵犀-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　读后续写——练讲测 话题十六　人与动物 心有灵犀 EXERCISE LECTURE QUIZ 目录 CONTENTS 1 2 ３ EXERCISE 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was hit on my back as I walked down the hall. I turned around angrily, only to discover a lovely cat. His name was Oscar and he was born at the shelter I was visiting. The volunteer let me know that the mother was abandoned by her owner. She and the rest of the litter (幼崽) had been adopted quickly, but Oscar remained. I could tell he was just what we needed. We were just married, full of love and hope, but we were also facing a few unexpected trials. Just weeks after our wedding, my husband was injured in an accident at work, which not only broke his body but his spirit. Hours of physical treatment led to sleepless nights. I hoped that this little cat would cheer up my husband. EXERCISE When I brought Oscar home, I asked my husband to shut his eyes and open his hands. I handed him the cat, who reached up and rubbed his paws against my husband's face. It had been months since I saw my husband smile like this, and Oscar himself couldn't stop purring (发出呼噜声)． Years passed, and our sweet Oscar continued to bring us comfort. He had an ability to know if someone was having an emotional moment; he would always try to help. EXERCISE One day, I received a phone call from my mother telling me that my father had cancer. I swore to do everything I could to help him. Feeling upset, I took a bath to try to collect my thoughts. Oscar reached up, opened the closed door, and jumped directly into the bathtub with me. Hearing the loud noise, my husband ran into the bathroom to find Oscar all wet just inches from my face. That little guy was all heart. Fortunately, my father beat cancer and recovered fully. Following his final treatment, he was given two weeks of rest at home. He asked if he and my mother could “babysit” Oscar for those weeks. We were more than happy to share. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 EXERCISE On the final day of Oscar's visit, my father decided to bake cookies for me and my husband to thank us for “lending” him our cat.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ “Did you add these paw prints on the cookies？” I asked my father surprisingly.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ EXERCISE LECTURE when I was visiting the shelter. what When I adopted Oscar and bought it home, my husband__________. After many years, the lovely Oscar continued to comfort the families. Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 smiled LECTURE who I (好心收养猫，陪伴家人) ①My husband and I were just married, full of love and hope, but we were also facing ___________________________________. ②I adopted the Oscar who we were needed. ③I knew my father had cancer and swore to do everything I could to help him. Oscar (一只会安慰人的猫) ①Oscar remained in the shelter. ②Oscar _______________ by the author. ③Oscar reached up and rubbed his paws against the author's husband's face. ④Oscar brought the author and her families comfort. ⑤Oscar had an ability to know__________________________. ⑥Oscar comforted the author. My husband (工作事故中受伤) ①My husband was injured in an accident at work. ②After seeing the Oscar, he ___________________. My father (被查出患有癌症，最终康复) ①My father had cancer. ②Fortunately, my father beat cancer and___________________. ③He wanted to “babysit” Oscar for those weeks with my mother. a few unexpected trials was adopted how to comfort others smiled recovered fully LECTURE Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 作者在收容所收养了一只叫Oscar (奥斯卡)的小猫，它带给作者和丈夫安慰，作者的父亲在癌症痊愈后，向作者提出“照看”Oscar的请求，作者欣然同意。一家人在吃饼干时发现了什么？饼干上的脚印是怎么回事？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：作者发现了饼干上的爪印，它是怎么来的？ 合理的解决办法：作者发现关于爪印的真相。 LECTURE 2．情节发展 第一段：父亲烤了一些饼干→作者吃饼干的情形→作者发现饼干上有爪印 第二段：询问饼干上的爪印是怎么回事→发现关于爪印的真相→一家人喝茶聊天→和谐画面 3．主旨升华 猫不仅在饼干上留下了爪印，还在作者一家人的心里留下了爪印，展现了人与动物和谐相处的温馨画面。 LECTURE Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 强调句的使用可增强文章的感情色彩，使要表达的论点更加有力，个人情感更加强烈。例如：“It was only when I was on my third cookie that I noticed an adorable detail.”。 2．结构衔接 形式多样的连接词的使用，使文章层次分明、逻辑结构紧凑，阅读起来顺畅自然，一气呵成，更加富于感染力及表达效果。例如：“The moment we entered the house ...”“when I was on my third cookie that I noticed an adorable detail”“... while Oscar nestled softly on my husband's chest.”。 LECTURE 3．高分范文赏读 On the final day of Oscar's visit, my father decided to bake cookies for me and my husband to thank us for “lending” him our cat. I was so grateful since cookies were my favourite dessert. The moment we entered the house, the familiar smell of warm chocolate cookies hung heavily in the air. Father was engaged in placing them on the delicate silver plates one by one. “You are so sweet, Dad.” I stepped forward, grabbing one plate and digging in. It was only when I was on my third cookie that I noticed an adorable detail. There was a paw print on each of the cookies. LECTURE “Did you add these paw prints on the cookies？” I asked my father surprisingly. “What do you mean？” he leaned forward in wonder. So did my husband. For a split second, realizing what had happened, we three erupted into laughter. It was Oscar that had added his own touch as usual. That afternoon, I sat leisurely in the sofa, sipping tea and talking merrily with my father while Oscar nestled softly on my husband's chest. He shared his love and joy with everyone. Not only had he left paw prints on the cookies, but he also left paw prints on our hearts. 写在最后的话： 动物是人类亲密的朋友，它们也会给我们的生活带来许多温暖，所以我们要爱护动物，珍惜与它们相处的美好时光。 LECTURE QUIZ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Every year, Vargas and her dad go hiking. This summer's trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tentons in early December. Vargas was just below the 11，000­foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail when she met an injured English springer spaniel (史宾格猎犬). She couldn't find the dog's owner and she figured it would be easier for her to carry the dog to safety. QUIZ 17 “I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders，” said Vargas, a single mother of three children from Idaho. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Her dad, Ted Kasper, who took some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. Dad laughed and said, “Isn't this hike hard enough? You must carry a dog too？” Vargas recalled. “My dad made me laugh. He is such a great man.” QUIZ 18 That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the difficulty of carrying the heavy dog down the trail. The hiking was hard and nearly unbearable at times. Every time Vargas put him down so she could rest, it was difficult. And every time she got down on her knees to put her head under his belly and tried to use neck and body strength to lift him, she was painful and it was hard. “I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to help. But that wasn't the case，” she said. Kasper offered to run down the trail and try to find help, but Vargas didn't want to be left alone. QUIZ 19 About halfway down the trail, Vargas thought she might not be able to continue. At the time, it started to rain. “The thought of stopping crossed my mind once. My legs hurt and were shaking. My dad's jokes made me laugh and it gave me energy. And feeling the dog's breath growing faint was what encouraged me to continue，” she said. Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 QUIZ 20 Vargas called the number immediately. 　 ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ However, Boomer's owner was in another city far away and couldn't take him back. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Vargas (瓦格斯)在和爸爸远足时遇到了一只受伤的狗，并发现了写着狗狗名字和电话号码的纸条。Vargas联系到这只狗的主人了吗？狗的主人将它带回家了吗？ 写前导读 QUIZ [精彩范文] Vargas called the number immediately. It was the owner of the injured dog, who thought for sure Boomer was dead. She had gone hiking the day before and Boomer had fallen off a 100­foot cliff and rolled 200 feet. When the owner rushed down to find him, he disappeared. She looked for him until dark but without luck, and had to leave, which meant Boomer had spent one night out there, alone and injured. However, Boomer's owner was in another city far away and couldn't take him back. Vargas couldn't leave the injured dog in the rain and decided to adopt him. She sent Boomer to the vet immediately. When Kasper asked her why she wanted to adopt the dog, she said, “I never thought I would have a dog though my kids begged me for one, because I knew it would take a lot of time and work to keep a puppy. Then suddenly Boomer showed up, happy and adorable. What's even better is that he was trained. There was no better gift than him.” 精彩范文 QUIZ 1．She couldn‘t find the dog’s owner and she figured it would be easier for her to carry the dog to safety. 译文：___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 亮点：①figured后为省略that的__________从句；②it is/was＋adj.＋for sb to do sth意为“” _______________________________ 。 她找不到狗的主人，(比起找到狗的主人)她觉得把狗带到安全的地方会更容易。 宾语 对某人来说做某事是……的 QUIZ 23 2．Her dad, Ted Kasper, who took some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. 译文：___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 亮点：①who引导定语从句，修饰__________；②when引导__________从句；③从句中see sb doing sth意为“___________________”。 她的父亲泰德·卡斯帕看到他的女儿肩上扛着一只狗从小路上下来时，拍了一些照片。 Her dad 看到某人正在做某事 时间状语 QUIZ 24 R $$