第二章 话题12 耍小伎俩 被人揭穿-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　读后续写——练讲测 话题十二　耍小伎俩　被人揭穿 EXERCISE LECTURE QUIZ 目录 CONTENTS 1 2 ３ EXERCISE 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was Christmas Eve when my sister and I decided to open our presents before our mom got home from work. She usually came home about an hour after we got home from school, which we thought was plenty of time to sneak a peek (偷看) at the gifts under the tree. Since my sister was older, and that put her in charge, she opened the first gift while I was ordered to stand guard at the big picture window in our front room. I was to report any suspicious (可疑的) activity or persons, namely our mother. EXERCISE Finally, when my sister's curiosity was satisfied and she had finished wrapping her last present back up, we changed places. My heart beat so fast that it felt like my chest was moving in and out. My sister reminded me to be careful so I wouldn't tear the paper, and to wrap the present back up the same way that I had found it. After unwrapping a few presents, I found it faster to open one end of a present and peek inside. Cool! Mom and Dad got me headphones for my stereo! I pulled the headphones out of the box and was about to put them on when my sister shouted, “Quick! Wrap it back up! Mom's coming！” EXERCISE My heart hit the floor along with the headphones. My body was as frozen as a snowman. I shoved the headphones back in the box but my hands were shaking so much that I tore the paper trying to wrap it back up. My sister was yelling at me, which only made my hands shake more. I heard the door opened. I thought I was going to wet my pants! I had just finished burying the package with my headphones in it when my mother came into the front room. I jumped up and said, “Hi, Mom！” She smiled at me and said “Hi，” back, but didn't appear to suspect a thing. My heart began to slow as I took a deep breath. That was close. Too close! 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 EXERCISE On Christmas morning, my sister and I gave award－winning performances when we opened our presents—again.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Looking at each other, my sister and I laughed—Mum had actually found out our secret.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ EXERCISE LECTURE Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 secretly when during Christmas what On Christmas Eve, out of curiosity, my sister and I opened the Christmas presents in advance and _________. We thought we successfully escaped being found by our mother. LECTURE who I(决定提前打开礼物，轮流打开礼物，心跳加快，惊险完成) ①It was ___________________when my sister and I decided to open our presents before our mom got home from work. ②When my sister had finished wrapping her last present back up, we changed places. ③My heart beat so fast that it felt like my chest was moving _____________. ④I had just finished burying the package with my headphones in it when my mother came into the front room. My sister(打开礼物，紧急提醒) ①She opened the first gift while I was ordered to stand guard. ②My sister shouted, “Quick! Wrap it back up! Mom's coming！” My mother(没有怀疑) She smiled at me and said “Hi，” back, but didn't appear to ___________a thing. Christmas Eve in and out suspect LECTURE Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 在圣诞节前夜，出于好奇和急切的心情，作者和姐姐在妈妈还没回来的时候，偷偷打开圣诞节礼物，并且觉得彼此配合得天衣无缝，没有被妈妈发现。那么，妈妈到底有没有发现他们的小伎俩呢？作者又会收获什么样的道理呢？ LECTURE Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：作者和姐姐耍小伎俩提前偷看圣诞礼物，以为没被发现。 合理的解决办法：妈妈发现真相，作者和姐姐承认错误，感悟做人要诚实。 2．情节发展 第一段：打开礼物→假装兴奋→被妈妈发现 第二段：妈妈发现真相→向妈妈道歉→妈妈打断道歉→领悟 3．主旨升华 作者和姐姐提前偷看圣诞礼物，以为不会被发现，结果妈妈一眼就看穿孩子们的小伎俩。说明不能耍小聪明，要诚实地做人做事。 LECTURE Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 ①通过人物的语言描写来塑造人物形象，将人物内心活动反映得淋漓尽致。例如：“Headphones！”“Thanks, it's just what I wanted.”。 ②通过使用非谓语动词(短语)，使得文章的动作描写更加准确、细致，增强语言的表达效果。例如：“Gathering up enough courage, we went up to her, murmuring ‘I'm sorry, Mum.’”。 2．结构衔接 通过使用有衔接含义的介词短语或连词达到自然衔接的目的。例如：“After a moment, when both of us were quiet, Mum said smilingly, ...” “But before we could go on, Mum interrupted us ...”。 LECTURE 3．高分范文赏读 On Christmas morning, my sister and I gave award－winning performances when we opened our presents—again. “Headphones！” I shouted excitedly. “Thanks, it's just what I wanted.” After everything had been opened, my sister and I looked at each other, and our eyes met. Our secret was safe. After a moment, when both of us were quiet, Mum said smilingly, looking into our eyes, “Honey, seeing you happy with the presents makes me happy. Anyhow, I've sensed that you show no sign of surprise, since you've looked into the presents beforehand.” LECTURE Looking at each other, my sister and I laughed—Mum had actually found out our secret. Gathering up enough courage, we went up to her, murmuring “I'm sorry, Mum.” But before we could go on, Mum interrupted us and said, “This is no time to say sorry. Go and enjoy yourselves.” I don't remember how we spent that day happily with our Christmas gifts, but I remember one thing clearly. That is, we should learn to be honest, even if we've done something wrong or improper. 写在最后的话： 生活当中，有时出于某种原因，我们可能会想出一些“小聪明”来达到某种目的。但诚实才是一个人的立身之本。只有诚实的人才能活得光明磊落，堂堂正正地行走于天地间。 LECTURE QUIZ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Houses are very different. Some are huge and have gold swimming pools. Pop stars live in those. Some are in rows with a brick wall at one end and overlook a pie factory. Franklin Gates lives in one of those. Number Three, Stanley Street, to be exact. He loved living on Stanley Street. Everyone was friendly. All his mates were there and the smells from the pie factory, Mmm, delicious! There was just one problem. Franklin's mum and dad wanted to move. His mum was expecting twins and they needed another bedroom. “This house is too small，” said his mum. Next day, there was a “For Sale” sign stuck by Franklin's door. QUIZ 17 Franklin and his best friend Josh stared at the words of doom. “What am I going to do, Josh？” said Franklin. Josh frowned. “Has your house got problems? Number forty's got problems and no one wants to buy it.” Franklin stared at number forty. It looked all right to him. “What kind of problems？” he asked. “Oh, mice and damp and really horrible wallpaper，” Franklin sighed. His house was warm and friendly and it had just been painted, worse luck. Mrs Cox lived next door to Franklin in a big house that had once been the corner shop. Just then, she came out, followed by her dog Zack. “I'm sorry you're moving，” Mrs Cox said. “So am I，” Franklin grumbled. Mrs Cox patted Franklin on the arm. “Never mind. Your house might take months to sell. QUIZ 18 However, a few days later, Franklin came home from school to find a man in the kitchen. His name was Mr Bragg and was interested in buying the house. He glared at Franklin and trod on his toes, without saying sorry. Franklin's heart sank when Mr Bragg said he wanted to come back for a second visit on Saturday morning. At school, Franklin asked, “Josh. Does your elder sister still work in the fish shop？” Josh nodded. “Good. Listen, I've got a job for you.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 QUIZ 19 Franklin cupped his hand over Josh's ear and began whispering his plan. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Mr and Mrs Gates were very angry. “You'd better explain what's going on！” ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Franklin (富兰克林)的父母决定把房子卖了，Mr Bragg (布拉格先生)很有可能购买他家房子，然而Franklin舍不得离开。于是Franklin决定想办法破坏Mr Bragg的购房计划。Franklin想出了什么计划？最终会成功吗？ 写前导读 QUIZ [精彩范文] Franklin cupped his hand over Josh's ear and began whispering his plan. When Josh heard what Franklin wanted, his mouth opened wide enough to swallow a dentist. He cried, “I'll get into trouble！” “It's my only chance，” Franklin begged. On Saturday morning, Mr and Mrs Gates were still outside when Mr Bragg rang the doorbell. Entering the house, Mr Bragg stopped and sniffed the air, asking curiously “What's that disgusting smell？” Franklin told him the factory does fish pie on Saturdays, which made Mr Bragg frowned. He pulled a face and ran out of the door. 精彩范文 QUIZ Mr and Mrs Gates were very angry. “You'd better explain what's going on！” Franklin knew he was in big trouble. He cleared up all smelly fishes in their house which had been brought by Josh. At last, he said sorry to his mum and dad. Mrs Cox arrived and came up with a good idea that she would like to swap her house with Franklin's. “So we had one big house，” grinned Franklin. 精彩范文 QUIZ 1．Just then, she came out, followed by her dog Zack. 译文：___________________________________________________________ 亮点：①Just then作___________，意为“__________”；②followed为非谓语动词，句子主语she与follow之间为__________；③ ______ 为her dog 的同位语。 2．Franklin's heart sank when Mr Bragg said he wanted to come back for a second visit on Saturday morning. 译文：___________________________________________________________ 亮点：①one's heart sinks意为“_______________”；②when引导__________从句；③短语for a second visit意为“_______________”。 就在那时，她走了出来，后面跟着她的小狗扎克。 时间状语 就在那时 被动关系 Zack 当布拉格先生说他周六早上要再看一次房子时，富兰克林的心一沉。 某人的心一沉 时间状语 再参观一次 QUIZ 23 R $$