第二章 话题8 经历波折 收获哲理-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　读后续写——练讲测 话题八　经历波折　收获哲理 EXERCISE LECTURE QUIZ 目录 CONTENTS 1 2 ３ EXERCISE 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Edun did not want to go on a hike. She especially did not want to go on a long hike in the mountains that led to a tiny cabin with no electricity and no running water. She wanted to stay home reading a book instead while wrapped in a warm blanket. “Ready？” Mom asked cheerfully after breakfast. Edun looked out of the window and only saw rain, lots of it. “We should go another day，” Edun suggested. “Maybe a hundred years from now.” She worried she would get tired on the hike. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. Mom said it was time to stop worrying and get into the car. EXERCISE Edun's brother, Will, was waiting in the garage, who wore a camera around his neck. Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He'd started hiking when he was two and loved it. Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didn't like how it felt against her skin. After about half an hour's drive, they parked at a trailhead (登山口). The rain had stopped but the ground was still dripping wet. “We'll be there by afternoon！” Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away. EXERCISE Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch—“Fox sparrow！”—then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight. Edun rested under a pine tree. “You can't force me to walk，” Edun said. “You're right，” said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too. “But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 EXERCISE Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ EXERCISE LECTURE Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when a rainy day what Edun did not want to go on a hike. But with her mother's encouragement, she agreed. However, she still didn't feel good. LECTURE who Edun(不愿徒步旅行，担心会累，犹豫不前) ①Edun did not want to go on a hike. ②She worried she would ____________________________. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. ③Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. ④Edun __________ under a pine tree. Mother(耐心鼓励，积极引导) ①“Ready？” Mom ________________________ after breakfast. ② “You're right，” said her mom smilingly. “But you will never know ________________________ and amaze us.” Will(喜欢徒步旅行，树立正面榜样) ①Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He'd started hiking when __________________and loved it. ②Will identified _________________________________________—“Fox sparrow！”—then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight. get tired on the hike rested asked cheerfully what may lie ahead he was two a bird sitting on a nearby branch LECTURE Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 Edun (艾顿)不想去山里远足，但还是和家人一起出发了。天下着雨，穿着雨衣的Edun感觉不舒适。Edun在树下休息不想走，妈妈告诉Edun，如果不向前走，就永远不会知道前方有什么惊喜。Edun听了妈妈的建议，一路上会见到什么？到达小木屋后，Edun 又会收获什么？ LECTURE Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：Edun不想去山里远足，且在旅途中遇到一些困难，她能坚持下去吗？ 合理的解决办法：在妈妈的不断鼓励下，Edun完成了远足，并悟出哲理。 2．情节发展 第一段：继续前行→看到了美丽的风景→完成了大部分攀登 第二段：看到了小屋→晚上看星星→感谢妈妈 3．主旨升华 作者看星星后感悟到只有行动起来，才能够体验到生活中的美。 LECTURE Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 ①可以通过一些环境描写，使读者身临其境，同时烘托出作者的心情。例如：“To her amazement, as they walked on, there was always something to look for in the wet green woods: animal tracks, wildflowers, little creeks.”。 ②利用人物之间质朴而简单的对话，鲜活地表现人物心理，使文章更加生动真实。例如： “Radiant with a smile, Edun approached Mom and hugged her, whispering, ‘Mom, thank you for having me come！’”。 2．结构衔接 通过时间的转换，使文章过渡自然，让故事情节更加饱满，引人入胜。例如：“That night, everybody stayed up late to see the stars.”。 LECTURE 3．高分范文赏读 Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. They passed a waterfall, tiny yet clear. The trickling of water made Edun feel better. To her amazement, as they walked on, there was always something to look for in the wet green woods: animal tracks, wildflowers, little creeks. Soon they caught up with Will. Together they went on, climbing over gray rocks and hiking through dwarf trees. Unknowingly they had already done most of the climb. LECTURE Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. Through its window, Edun saw faraway meadows and lakes, and many more mountains, a whole new world emerging before her eyes. That night, everybody stayed up late to see the stars. Edun proposed, “I need to take a picture of them.” “Click！” The camera froze the moment. Radiant with a smile, Edun approached Mom and hugged her, whispering, “Mom, thank you for having me come！” 写在最后的话： 生活当中，总有一些事需要亲身经历，特别是一些看似曲折或是不太愉快的事情，这样才能悟出其中的哲理，从而受益匪浅。 LECTURE QUIZ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 There once lived a rich businessman who had a lazy and fun－loving son. The businessman wanted his son to be hard－working and responsible. He wanted him to realize the value of hard work and take over his business. One day he said to him, “Today, I want you to go out and earn something, failing which you won't have your meals today.” QUIZ 17 The son was not used to any kind of work. This demand by his father scared him and he went crying straight to his mother. Seeing tears in her son's eyes, his mother grew restless. To help him, she gave him a gold coin. “Go to your father and tell him that you earned it.” In the evening when the father asked his son what he had earned, the son immediately presented him the gold coin. The father then asked him to throw it into a well and the son did as he was told. QUIZ 18 The father was a wise man and guessed that the gold coin was given to him by his mother. The next day he sent his wife to her parents' town and asked his son to go and earn something, telling him he would not have night meal if he failed again. This time he went crying to his sister who sympathized with him and gave him a gold coin out of her own savings. When his father asked him what he had earned, he showed the coin to him. The father again asked him to throw it into a well. The son did it quite readily. QUIZ 19 Again the father's wisdom told him that the coin was not earned by his son. He then sent his daughter to her husband's house. He asked his son to go out and earn some money with the threat that he shall not have anything for dinner that night. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 QUIZ 20 This time since no one could help him out, the son was forced to go to the market in search of work. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Hearing this, the businessman smiled.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了一个商人希望自己的儿子能够努力工作并学会有责任心，就让他出去赚钱。儿子却十分不情愿，不想去工作。最终，儿子找到工作了吗？他又能收获到什么呢？ 写前导读 QUIZ [精彩范文] This time since no one could help him out, the son was forced to go to the market in search of work. A shopkeeper there told him to carry his goods to his house for one coin. The son had no choice but to do it. By the time he finished the work, the sweat was pouring off him. His feet were trembling and his back was aching. As he returned home and produced the coin before his father, he was asked to throw it into the well. The horrified son cried, “Father! My entire body is aching and you are asking me to throw the money into the well！” He couldn't imagine throwing his hard－earned money like this. 精彩范文 QUIZ Hearing this, the businessman smiled. He told his son that one feels the pain only when the fruits of labor are wasted. “You never knew how hard it was to earn the money since your mother and sister had been helping you all the time.” The son had now realized the value of hard work and vowed never to be lazy. The father happily handed over his business to his son and promised to guide him through the rest of his life. 精彩范文 QUIZ 1．Seeing tears in her son’s eyes, his mother grew restless. 译文：___________________________________________________________ 亮点：①Seeing是非谓语动词作_______，与其逻辑主语his mother之间是_______关系；②restless意为“______________”。 2．He asked his son to go out and earn some money with the threat that he shall not have anything for dinner that night. 译文：___________________________________________________________ 亮点：that he shall not ... 是that引导的________从句，解释说明________ 。 看着儿子眼中的泪水，他的母亲变得焦躁起来。 状语 主动 坐立不安的 他让他的儿子出去挣些钱，并以他那天晚上不能吃晚饭作为威胁。 同位语 the threat QUIZ 24 R $$