第二章 话题7 快乐时刻 节日温情-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计课件PPT（基础版）

WELCOME UNIT 第二章　读后续写——练讲测 话题七　快乐时刻　节日温情 EXERCISE LECTURE QUIZ 目录 CONTENTS 1 2 ３ EXERCISE 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024· 河南省南阳市高一联考)My husband and I recently made a cross­country move to Florida with our young child Dave. It was a quiet street with few people living there. Our neighbor was an old couple, Mr Smith and Mrs Smith, both over seventy years old and energetic. They were kind enough to help us clean our house and yard, for our new home was in a mess. Weeks before Thanksgiving arrived, my anxiety about it increased. “We should start thinking about plans for Thanksgiving dinner，” I suggested. “Don't worry about it，” my husband said, “heat up some hot dogs, maybe some cheese, and the kid will be happy.” That sounded great. I was in relief! EXERCISE In the past holidays, I had never been responsible for cooking a full Thanksgiving dinner. My job was always to bring drinks or a side dish and help clean up after the meal. But one day my son Dave happily showed his newly－created turkey crafts. “Let's go on a walk and try to find a rock that looks like turkey！” Dave shouted to me, “Take me on a walk, Mommy！” The excitement was building, and I had a feeling that hot dogs were not going to be enough for my child on Thanksgiving. “I'm going to try and prepare Thanksgiving food, Leonard，” I said to my husband late one night. He eyed me incredibly. “Are you sure？” Then he said, “Okay, then, if you think you can do it.” EXERCISE I went to the grocery store early Thanksgiving morning. Unfortunately, only a huge turkey remained, so I had no choice but to buy a thirty－pound turkey. I dragged the bagged turkey home. When my family saw it, they got a big surprise at its size. Seeing the surprise on their faces, I realized there was no way we could finish the turkey. It's too big for my family. “There was only one turkey left in the store，” I explained. “But how could we finish the turkey？” I asked my husband and Dave. Dave said we could invite our neighbor, Mr and Mrs Smith, to share with us. It seemed a good idea. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 EXERCISE We reached the agreement on inviting the couple.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Seeing my husband and I were clumsy at preparing dinner, the couple offered to give us a hand. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ EXERCISE LECTURE when on Thanksgiving Day what On Thanksgiving, I bought _____________________________ for our family and decided to _________________ Mr and Mrs Smith to share with us. Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 a turkey of much bigger size invite our neighbor LECTURE Who I(计划感恩节，买了一只大火鸡) ①“We should start ________________________ for Thanksgiving dinner，” I suggested. ②I had a feeling that hot dogs were ______________________________for my child on Thanksgiving. ③“I'm going to try and prepare Thanksgiving food, Leonard，” I said to my husband late one night. ④I went to the grocery store and dragged __________________________ home. ⑤“How could we____________________ ？” I asked. Leonard(支持作者做火鸡) ①Heat up some hot dogs, maybe some cheese, and the kid will be __________. ②He eyed me ____________. “Are you sure？” Then he said, “Okay, then, if you think you can do it.” Dave(想寻找火鸡形状的石头，建议邀请邻居分享火鸡) ①“Let's go on a walk and try to find a rock that looks like turkey！” Dave shouted, “Take me on a walk, Mommy！” ②Dave said we could invite our neighbor, Mr and Mrs Smith, to ___________us. thinking about plans not going to be enough the huge bagged turkey finish the turkey happy incredibly share with LECTURE Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 作者为感恩节准备了一只大火鸡，作者一家最终决定邀请邻居分享，他们会接受邀请吗？邻居夫妇前来帮忙准备感恩节晚餐，这个感恩节会怎么样呢？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：邻居夫妇是否接受邀请，作者能否准备好感恩节晚餐。 合理的解决办法：邻居接受邀请，大家一起准备感恩节晚餐。 LECTURE 2．情节发展 第一段：决定邀请邻居夫妇→邻居夫妇到达 第二段：邻居帮忙准备晚餐→度过难忘的感恩节 3．主旨升华 感恩节邀请帮助过自己的邻居共度节日，邻居接受邀请，这一互动让感恩节的节日主题更显丰富，为刚刚迁居新环境的作者一家添加暖意。 LECTURE Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 运用with复合结构丰富和充实句子内容，生动地营造画面，使得表达更深刻。例如：“Soon, Mr and Mrs Smith came to my house with a big smile on their faces.” 2．结构衔接 运用感叹句来表达作者的情感，点明主题。例如：“What an unforgettable Thanksgiving Day！” LECTURE 3．高分范文赏读 We reached the agreement on inviting the couple. Dave was responsible for the invitation and my husband and I were in charge of preparing dinner. Realizing it would take hours to cook, we busied ourselves making an entire dinner. Soon, Mr and Mrs Smith came to my house with a big smile on their faces. They greeted us with a full bag of groceries, including some vegetables, fruits, a bottle of wine and a gift for my son. LECTURE Seeing my husband and I were clumsy at preparing dinner, the couple offered to give us a hand. With the help of them, a fancy dinner was done in no time. Obviously Mrs Smith had a great talent for cooking. As a special treat, I laid out a beautiful red table cloth, candles and our best china. We gathered around the table, eating delicious Thanksgiving dinner and proposed a toast to each other's good health. What an unforgettable Thanksgiving Day! 写在最后的话： 节日会给人带来快乐和幸福，也是人与人之间巩固感情的纽带。度过节日的形式并不重要，重要的是节日带来的温情以及快乐时刻。 LECTURE QUIZ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024· 安徽省阜阳市县中联盟高一月考)Last year, I traveled from the US to my childhood village in Zimbabwe for the Christmas holiday. The whole village feels very much like one happy family get­together when people from nearby cities or neighboring countries celebrate the festive season in their childhood homes. QUIZ 17 On Christmas Day, I woke up to the familiar sound of my mother calling my name and knocking on my door. As is morning tradition on that day, everyone was preparing gifts for the festival. I quickly put on my favourite clothes. Along with my parents and two brothers, we walked a little more than a mile to the small village store. On our way there, my brother wisely advised me to ask for drinks as goods were likely to run out because of high need from the holiday. When I stepped into that small familiar store that still smells of childhood, it looked as if it were frozen in time. The shelves were stocked with the same village basics—cooking oil, salt, bread, candy, milk, stationery, matches, candles ... QUIZ 18 As I was placing my drink orders, two young boys about 5 and 8 years old walked in with big smiles. Their clothes were oversized, old and tattered (破烂的)． The older brother emptied his pockets, and placing a handful of coins on the counter (柜台), cheerfully explained they had been sent to buy food for Christmas. He asked for “two loaves of bread, cooking oil, milk and ...” Before he could finish, the younger brother added, “Our mother said we could buy candy with the change.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 QUIZ 19 “It is only 24 cents change left. What would you like to buy？” said the shopkeeper. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ The two boys clapped hands, a traditional way of saying thanks to me.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者在圣诞节和家人去购物，遇到了两个小男孩在买圣诞食品。被店主询问要用剩下的零钱买什么时，男孩会怎么回答？男孩拍手向作者表示感谢，作者有什么感想？ 写前导读 QUIZ [精彩范文] “It is only 24 cents change left. What would you like to buy？” said the shopkeeper. The shopkeeper was slightly annoyed that the kids had stopped my conversation with him. They pointed at different candies behind the glass display. “Five of those！” the younger brother said. “And five of the yellow ones, too. My sister likes them.” The shopkeeper said, “That is more than plenty for the change.” “It's OK, they can have whatever they want，” I said with a smile. “It's Christmas Day today, and you can add it to my order.” 精彩范文 QUIZ The two boys clapped hands, a traditional way of saying thanks to me. I told them to get whatever they wanted. “Can we add five candles, for Mum, Dad, my sister, my brother and me, too？” the older brother politely asked me. I nodded and the two brothers started dancing with joy. In all, their order cost me less than $5. But I could tell from their grinning faces that I might as well have been their Santa. With my drinks, I walked to my parents and brothers. We all smiled, seeing those happy figures gradually disappear from our vision. 精彩范文 QUIZ 1．On our way there, my brother wisely advised me to ask for drinks as goods were likely to run out because of high need from the holiday. 译文：___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 亮点：①on one’s way (to ...)意为“在某人去……的路上”；②advise sb to do sth意为“_______________”；③as引导_________从句，表示“因为，由于……”；④be likely to do sth意为“可能做某事”；⑤run out意为“_____________”。 在去那里的路上，我哥哥明智地建议我买点饮料，因为假期的需求很高，货物可能会卖完。 建议某人做某事 原因状语 用完，耗尽 QUIZ 23 2．When I stepped into that small familiar store that still smells of childhood, it looked as if it were frozen in time. 译文：___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 亮点：①When引导___________从句；②第二个that引导__________从句；③as if引导__________从句。 当我走进那家熟悉的小商店时，童年的气息还在，仿佛时光凝固了一般。 时间状语 定语 表语 QUIZ 24 R $$