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专题10 书面表达16篇
天津市西青区南片2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中联考英语试题
66.自2000年开始,团中央设立了“中国青年志愿者服务日 (3月5日)”。作为新时代的青少年,应培养自己回馈社会、服务社会的意识。本周末,校学生会将组织志愿者去“天津市社会福利院”(Tianjin Social Welfare Home) 为社区老人提供一次志愿者 (volunteer) 服务。假设你是学校的学生会主席,负责这次志愿者活动,请你写一篇发言稿,号召更多的同学参加。
内容包括:
(1)周六上午8点,学校门口集合,尽力为社区老人服务,让他们感到快乐和有希望;
(2)活动分小组完成,如:打扫卫生,与老人们一起玩游戏,请补充1-2 项活动内容;
(3)发出号召。
参考词汇: 新时代 new era;服务社会的责任感responsibilities of serving society;志愿者 volunteer
要求:
(1)词数90个左右。
(2)不得在文中出现真实姓名。
(3)要点齐全,可适当发挥,作文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everybody. Our Student Union is planning a volunteer service activity in Tianjin Social Welfare Home this weekend.
Thank you!
天津市红桥区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假如你是某中学学生李华,最近你在电视里看到英国作家、旅行者威廉·林赛保护长城的令人感动事迹报道。请根据以下提示,给你的英国好友Peter写一封信,与他分享你的感动。
(1) 11岁时,他第一次在地图上看见长城。
(2)30岁时,他来到中国,登上长城。
(3)1998年的一天他去长城拍照,看到垃圾,感到伤心。
(4) 他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾,现已坚持20多年。
(5) 你认为……
要求:
1. 词数:80~100。
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:组织 organize 垃圾 litter 登上长城 walk on the Great Wall
Dear Peter,
How are you? I have watched a report about William Lindesay, a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hue
天津市和平区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.每个时代都有自己的偶像,青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如:航天英雄杨利伟,奥运冠军苏炳添,抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实,只要用心观察,平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长,指引我们前行,给予我们力量。
请根据以下提示,以“My hero”为题,讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。
(1)偶像:妈妈 年龄:40多岁 职业: 医生 爱好:读书
(2) 生活中照顾我;遇到困难给我建议;
(3)经常花很多时间工作,目的是帮助更多的人;
(4)两年前,去贫困地区当志愿者,培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院;
(5) 我认为……。
写作要求:
(1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚。
(4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
My hero
My hero is my mother and
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天津市河西区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假如你是Dave,昨天收到了好朋友Jim的邮件,他在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题,用英语回一封邮件,给他提出一些建议。以下是 Jim提出的烦恼:
(l) 父母不了解自己,偷看自己的日记;
(2) 自己喜欢踢足球,但花费太多时间导致成绩下降,感到非常苦恼;
(3) 晚上熬夜写作业,第二天上课非常困。
要求:(l) 词数:80~100个;
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study.
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Good luck!
Yours,
Dave
天津市实验中学滨海学校2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.你邀请了几个外国朋友到合肥的博物馆来参观,请你用英语写一份入馆须知,汉语提示已经给出。
要求:80词左右,要点提示必须写上,其它可适当发挥。
注意:书写规范。
入馆须知:欢迎来到我市博物馆参观,请遵守以下规则:
1. 开放时间:8:00-16:00:周一到周五;
2. 禁止在展馆内吸烟;禁止拍照;
3. 保持展馆内安静,禁止大声喧哗;不得触摸展品;
4. 保持展馆内清洁卫生;
5. 如果想了解展品的详细情况,请咨询工作人员;
6. 你的想法……
exhibits 展品 ask the staff 询问职员
Welcome to our city museum
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Hope you have a good time in the city museum.
天津市河北区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假如你是李华,你父母上周出差,因此你独自在家一周,请给你的英国笔友Peter写封电子邮件,和他分享你上周的生活。
内容要点:
(1)这是你第一次独自在家,起初有点儿兴奋。
(2)每天照顾自己,按时起床,吃完早餐,骑车上学。
(3)放学到家,先写作业,然后收拾房间、照顾宠物。
(4)父母回家后,他们感到……
要求:
(1)词数:80~100词。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you.
Last week
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Yours
Li Hua
天津市东丽区华新共同体2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
96.假如你是天津的一名中学生李明,刚刚结东五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示,以“A Trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇短文,向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。
(1)5月1日天气晴朗,我和家人开始了两天的旅程。
(2)早上7:30我们乘京津城际铁路出发,车程大约半小时。
(3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院,学到了许多历史知识,并为朋友们购买了礼物。
(4)第二天清晨,我们登上了长城,雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一;下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。
(5)我的旅游感受……
参考词汇:京津城际铁路Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway
王府井大街Wangfujing Street
故宫the Palace Museum
北京烤鸭Peking Roast Duck
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
A Trip to Beijing
During the May Day Holiday,I______________________________________________________________
天津市北辰区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.英语课上,老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论,请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果,以“How to get on well with others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
(1) 要尊重他人,学会理解他人;
(2)要诚实,要礼貌待人;
(3)当他人处于困境时,要主动帮助;
(4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉;
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:尊重respect
要求:
(1)词数: 80~100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
How to get on well with others
As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
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天津市第七中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
86.假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者,请根据以下要点写一篇短文,描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历。
1. 李华在暑假期间去甘肃参加了文化交流活动,并向当地学生讲述了天津的历史和自然奇观。
2. 他分享了自己独自在家的经历,照顾好自己,做简单的饭菜,有麻烦时给家长发短信。
3. 他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。
4. 你认为……
参考词汇:文化交流活动 cultural exchange activities;名胜古迹 places of interest
要求:
1. 词数:80~100个。
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to...__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
天津市南开区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假设你是李平,要在本周班会课上发言,主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。
安全
在家和外出要锁好房门用火和用电时注意安全
饮食
学习做简单的饭菜
多喝水,吃新鲜的蔬菜水果
时间管理
按时起床,上学不迟到放学回家后先完成作业
其他
……(补充一点)
参考词汇:electricity 电
要求:
(1) 词数:80—100个。
(2) 短文的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear classmates,
When we are home alone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
天津市宁河区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中练习英语试题
86.根据下面的提示,以“Yuan Longping”为题目写一篇短文。
提示如下:
Fact box: Yuan Longping
Now
Is helping many countries of the world grow more rice than before
2004
Won World Food Prize
1980s
Travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice
1974
Developed a new kind of rice
1964
Made a special study of rice
1950-1953
Studied in Southwest Agricultural College
1930
Was born in Beijing
(1)词数:80-100;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Yuan Longing
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930.
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天津市西青区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.前段时间同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后,纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习,成为一名有理想,有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下内容提示,以“How to be a better teenager?”为题,在下周的主题班会上发言。
内容提示:
(1)努力学习,积极锻炼,养成健康的生活习惯;
(2)尊敬长辈,乐于助人;
(3)学会做家务;
(4)热爱中国文化,培养各种兴趣爱好;
(5)感想……
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:积极锻炼actively exercise 尊敬respect 乐于做be willing to 文化culture
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
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That’s all. Thank you!
天津市鉴开中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
66.几乎每个人的心目中都有自己喜欢和崇拜的榜样。假如你心目中的榜样是中国乒乓球运动员孙颖莎,请根据以下提示内容,写一篇短文来介绍一下孙颖莎。
1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄;
2. 5岁时为了锻炼身体开始练习乒乓球;
3. 对自己严格要求,刻苦训练,15岁时进入国家队;
4. 2021年参加东京奥运会,获得一枚金牌,一枚银牌,为人所熟知;
5. 现在她成为了一名成功的乒乓球运动员;
6. 我认为……
注意:1. 短文应包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the national team国家队;
the Tokyo Olympic Games东京奥运会;
be well-known to为……所熟知
My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player.
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天津市滨海新区汉沽第八中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
86.假如你是李华,请你给美国笔友David写一封信,讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事,并谈谈感受。
(1)上周五,一棵树被大风吹倒,挡住了道路。
(2)王红看到后,捡起地上的树枝,又去移动树干。
(3)树干太沉,她搬不动。
(4)人们过来帮忙。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:被吹倒be blown down 挡住block 树枝branch 树干trunk
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
天津市西青区当城中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
66.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
(1)父母规矩太多,不允许自己晚上和朋友出去……。
(2)父母过于关注分数,给自己太多压力,不理解自己。
(3)你应该尽力理解父母,他们是爱孩子的,希望孩子前程似锦。
(4)为了与父母保持良好关系,你应该努力学习,与父母多交流。
(5)……(至少一条)。
参考词汇:过多关注 pay too much attention to 压力 pressure 前程似锦 have a brighter future
要求:
(1)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
(2)词数:80~100个。
(3)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to get on well with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me
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天津市津南区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.英语课上,老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论,请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果,以“How to get on well with others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
(1) 要尊重他人,学会理解他人;
(2)要诚实,要礼貌待人;
(3)当他人处于困境时,要主动帮助;
(4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉;
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:尊重respect
要求:
(1)词数: 80~100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
How to get on well with others
As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
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专题10 书面表达16篇
天津市西青区南片2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中联考英语试题
66.自2000年开始,团中央设立了“中国青年志愿者服务日 (3月5日)”。作为新时代的青少年,应培养自己回馈社会、服务社会的意识。本周末,校学生会将组织志愿者去“天津市社会福利院”(Tianjin Social Welfare Home) 为社区老人提供一次志愿者 (volunteer) 服务。假设你是学校的学生会主席,负责这次志愿者活动,请你写一篇发言稿,号召更多的同学参加。
内容包括:
(1)周六上午8点,学校门口集合,尽力为社区老人服务,让他们感到快乐和有希望;
(2)活动分小组完成,如:打扫卫生,与老人们一起玩游戏,请补充1-2 项活动内容;
(3)发出号召。
参考词汇: 新时代 new era;服务社会的责任感responsibilities of serving society;志愿者 volunteer
要求:
(1)词数90个左右。
(2)不得在文中出现真实姓名。
(3)要点齐全,可适当发挥,作文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everybody. Our Student Union is planning a volunteer service activity in Tianjin Social Welfare Home this weekend.
Thank you!
【答案】Possible version:
Hello, everybody. Our Student Union is planning a volunteer service activity in Tianjin Social Welfare Home this weekend.
We will meet at 8:00 a. m. on Saturday at the school gate. All the members will be divided into groups. Some will do some cleaning for the elderly. Some will play games with them. Some will just have a good talk with them. I am sure all we do will make them happy and warm.
As teenagers in the new era, we should have certain responsibilities of serving society. By participating volunteering activities, we can learn how to work well in a team and how to improve our organizational ability.
So, take this chance to learn and to grow. Let us enjoy the time when serving as a volunteer.
Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文体。它是一篇讲稿。题目要求是根据提供的信息,请你以学生会主席的身份写一篇发言稿,号召更多的同学参加本周末校学生会组织的志愿者活动,去“天津市社会福利院”为社区老人提供一次志愿者服务。要点要齐全,可适当发挥;词数90个左右,作文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;不得在文中出现真实姓名。
2.写作指导:本文是一篇号召学生参加志愿活动的发言稿。文中要说明活动的具体时间、集合地点、活动的目的、活动的内容,时态使用一般将来时;号召同学参加志愿者活动,时态使用一般现在时;写作时要注意语句通顺,符合英文表达习惯,不要出现语法错误。
天津市红桥区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假如你是某中学学生李华,最近你在电视里看到英国作家、旅行者威廉·林赛保护长城的令人感动事迹报道。请根据以下提示,给你的英国好友Peter写一封信,与他分享你的感动。
(1) 11岁时,他第一次在地图上看见长城。
(2)30岁时,他来到中国,登上长城。
(3)1998年的一天他去长城拍照,看到垃圾,感到伤心。
(4) 他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾,现已坚持20多年。
(5) 你认为……
要求:
1. 词数:80~100。
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:组织 organize 垃圾 litter 登上长城 walk on the Great Wall
Dear Peter,
How are you? I have watched a report about William Lindesay, a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hue
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How are you? I have watched a report about William Lindesay, a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.
At the age of 11, he first saw the Great Wall on a map. At the age of 30, he came to China and climbed the Great Wall. One day in 1998, he went to the Great Wall to take photos. He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. So he began to organize volunteers to collect garbage in the Great Wall. Now he has insisted on it for more than 20 years.
I think that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero. We should take actions to love the Great Wall.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hue
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍英国作家、旅行者威廉·林赛保护长城的举动和行为;
第二步,表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②begin to do sth开始做某事
③insist on坚持
[高分句型]
①He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.(who引导的定语从句)
天津市和平区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.每个时代都有自己的偶像,青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如:航天英雄杨利伟,奥运冠军苏炳添,抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实,只要用心观察,平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长,指引我们前行,给予我们力量。
请根据以下提示,以“My hero”为题,讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。
(1)偶像:妈妈 年龄:40多岁 职业: 医生 爱好:读书
(2) 生活中照顾我;遇到困难给我建议;
(3)经常花很多时间工作,目的是帮助更多的人;
(4)两年前,去贫困地区当志愿者,培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院;
(5) 我认为……。
写作要求:
(1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚。
(4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
My hero
My hero is my mother and
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【答案】例文
My hero
My hero is my mother and she is forty years old. She is a doctor and enjoys reading. My mother takes care of me in life and gives me some advice whenever I meet difficulties. She often spends a lot of time working to help more people. Two years ago, she volunteered in poor areas, trained young doctors, and helped found hospitals. I believe that my mother is great. When I grow up, I also want to become someone like my mother and make contributions to the country and people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头提示,介绍妈妈的年龄、职业和爱好;
第二步,介绍妈妈在生活中照顾我;遇到困难给我建议;
第三步,介绍妈妈经常花很多时间工作,目的是帮助更多的人;
第四步,介绍两年前,去贫困地区当志愿者,培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院;
第五步,发表观点。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②take care of 关心
③grow up长大
④make contributions to为……作出贡献
[高分句型]
①My mother takes care of me in life and gives me some advice whenever I meet difficulties.(whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②She often spends a lot of time working to help more people.(spend time/money (in) doing sth. 花费时间(金钱)做某事)
③I believe that my mother is great.(that引导的宾语从句)
④When I grow up, I also want to become someone like my mother and make contributions to the country and people.(when引导的时间状语从句)
天津市河西区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假如你是Dave,昨天收到了好朋友Jim的邮件,他在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题,用英语回一封邮件,给他提出一些建议。以下是 Jim提出的烦恼:
(l) 父母不了解自己,偷看自己的日记;
(2) 自己喜欢踢足球,但花费太多时间导致成绩下降,感到非常苦恼;
(3) 晚上熬夜写作业,第二天上课非常困。
要求:(l) 词数:80~100个;
(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study.
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Good luck!
Yours,
Dave
【答案】例文:
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study.
As your best friend, I’d like to give you some advice. First, I think you’d better talk with your parents about your life and your feelings. They want to know more about you, so they read your diaries. They do this because they care about you. If you talk with them, they won’t worry about you. I know that you love to play football. However, don’t spend too much time on it, or you’ll have less energy to study. Finally, why not finish your homework as early as you can and make sure to go to bed before ten? I hope that my advice can help you.
Good luck!
Yours,
Dave
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:结合好友Jim邮件中提出的问题,给他恰当的建议,避免语法错误,确保行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步;关于父母偷看自己的日记,介绍你的观点;
第二步:因为踢足球,Jim成绩下降,为此提出你的建议;
第三步:由于熬夜写作业,导致Jim第二天上课犯困,为此给出帮助Jim的建议;
第四步:希望这些建议能给Jim带来帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with 与……交谈
②as early as you can 尽可能早……
③make sure 确保
[高分句型]
①They do this because they care about you. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I know that you love to play football. (宾语从句)
天津市实验中学滨海学校2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.你邀请了几个外国朋友到合肥的博物馆来参观,请你用英语写一份入馆须知,汉语提示已经给出。
要求:80词左右,要点提示必须写上,其它可适当发挥。
注意:书写规范。
入馆须知:欢迎来到我市博物馆参观,请遵守以下规则:
1. 开放时间:8:00-16:00:周一到周五;
2. 禁止在展馆内吸烟;禁止拍照;
3. 保持展馆内安静,禁止大声喧哗;不得触摸展品;
4. 保持展馆内清洁卫生;
5. 如果想了解展品的详细情况,请咨询工作人员;
6. 你的想法……
exhibits 展品 ask the staff 询问职员
Welcome to our city museum
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Hope you have a good time in the city museum.
【答案】例文
Welcome to our city museum. Here are some rules you need to follow:
First, the opening hours are from 8:00 to 16:00 from Monday to Friday. Second, smoking and taking photos are forbidden in the exhibition halls. Third, keep quiet in the museum. Don’t shout or make any noise. Also, don’t touch the exhibits. Fourth, please keep the museum clean and tidy. Fifth, if you want to know more details about the exhibits, you can ask the staff for help. Finally, I hope everyone can have a great time and learn something meaningful during the visit.
Hope you have a good time in the city museum.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是一份通知写作。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点要明确,需要按照要求列出了博物馆的开放时间、禁止事项、注意事项等,不要遗漏相关内容,并适当添加了希望大家能在参观中有所收获的内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头欢迎大家来到博物馆参观,并说明需要遵守相关规则。
第二步,具体阐述各项规则,包括开放时间、禁止吸烟和拍照、保持安静、不触摸展品、保持清洁、咨询工作人员等。
第三步,书写结语,希望大家能在博物馆度过愉快的时光。
[亮点词汇]
①follow the rules遵守规则
②make noise 制造噪音
[高分句型]
①If you want to know more details about the exhibits, you can ask the staff for help.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope everyone can have a great time and learn something meaningful during the visit.(宾语从句)
天津市河北区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假如你是李华,你父母上周出差,因此你独自在家一周,请给你的英国笔友Peter写封电子邮件,和他分享你上周的生活。
内容要点:
(1)这是你第一次独自在家,起初有点儿兴奋。
(2)每天照顾自己,按时起床,吃完早餐,骑车上学。
(3)放学到家,先写作业,然后收拾房间、照顾宠物。
(4)父母回家后,他们感到……
要求:
(1)词数:80~100词。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you.
Last week
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you.
Last week my parents were on a business trip, so I stayed at home alone for a week. It was my first time at home alone and I was a little excited at first. Because I could do what I like to do. I took care of myself every day. I got up on time, had breakfast and went to school by bike. When I got home from school, I did my homework first. Then I cleaned my room and took care of my pet. Although I was busy every day, I was very happy. When my parents came home, they felt very happy.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写邮件的目的;
第二步,具体阐述了自己独自在家的经历;
第三步,写了父母的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at first最初
②took care of照顾
③on time按时
[高分句型]
①When I got home from school, I did my homework first. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Although I was busy every day, I was very happy. (although引导的让步状语从句)
天津市东丽区华新共同体2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
96.假如你是天津的一名中学生李明,刚刚结东五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示,以“A Trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇短文,向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。
(1)5月1日天气晴朗,我和家人开始了两天的旅程。
(2)早上7:30我们乘京津城际铁路出发,车程大约半小时。
(3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院,学到了许多历史知识,并为朋友们购买了礼物。
(4)第二天清晨,我们登上了长城,雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一;下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。
(5)我的旅游感受……
参考词汇:京津城际铁路Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway
王府井大街Wangfujing Street
故宫the Palace Museum
北京烤鸭Peking Roast Duck
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
A Trip to Beijing
During the May Day Holiday,I______________________________________________________________
【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.
First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.
During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.
【详解】以“A Trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇短文,向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。
记叙自己的一次旅行,审题时注意本文使用一般过去时,叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体,同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。在发表你的看法的时候,写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖,不能有遗漏或省略,同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。 We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。
天津市北辰区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.英语课上,老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论,请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果,以“How to get on well with others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
(1) 要尊重他人,学会理解他人;
(2)要诚实,要礼貌待人;
(3)当他人处于困境时,要主动帮助;
(4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉;
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:尊重respect
要求:
(1)词数: 80~100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
How to get on well with others
As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
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【答案】例文
How to get on well with others
As we know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
First, we should respect others and try to understand them. Everyone has their own ideas and feelings, so we need to be considerate. Second, honesty is very important. We should always be honest and treat others politely. Third, we should offer to help others when they are in trouble. Helping others can not only make them feel good, but also make us feel happy. Fourth, when we make mistakes, we should take the initiative to apologize. This shows that we are responsible and can earn the trust of others.
In addition, I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others. We should learn to listen to others and try to see things from their perspective. Also, we should be willing to compromise and find solutions that are beneficial to everyone.
In a word, getting on well with others requires our efforts and sincerity. Only by treating others with kindness and respect can we build good relationships and live a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点要明确,需要按照题目要求,围绕“如何与人相处”展开论述,包括尊重他人、理解他人、诚实礼貌、帮助他人、主动道歉等方面,并适当添加自己的观点,不要遗漏相关内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头点明良好的人际关系能让人快乐舒适,进而引出如何与人相处的话题。
第二步,具体阐述与人相处的方法,如尊重他人、诚实礼貌、帮助有困难的人、犯错误时主动道歉等。
第三步,书写结语,总结与人相处需要努力和真诚,只有善待他人才能建立良好关系,过上幸福生活。
[亮点词汇]
①offer to help 主动帮助
②take the initiative 主动
③in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①We should offer to help others when they are in trouble.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others.(that引导的宾语从句)
天津市第七中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
86.假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者,请根据以下要点写一篇短文,描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历。
1. 李华在暑假期间去甘肃参加了文化交流活动,并向当地学生讲述了天津的历史和自然奇观。
2. 他分享了自己独自在家的经历,照顾好自己,做简单的饭菜,有麻烦时给家长发短信。
3. 他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。
4. 你认为……
参考词汇:文化交流活动 cultural exchange activities;名胜古迹 places of interest
要求:
1. 词数:80~100个。
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to...__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to take part in the cultural activities during the summer vacation. I’m glad to share his experiences with all of you.
First of all, he introduced both the history and natural wonders of Tianjin to the local students. Secondly, he shared his own experience of being alone at home with them. For example, he was able to look after himself well, and cooked simple meals on his own. It was also important to send a text message to parents when he got into trouble. At last, he made friends with quite a few students and they still kept in touch all the time.
In my opinion, it is a meaningful experience. It’s necessary for us to take part in all kinds of activities. We can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also make friends with others. Activity is a good way to open our mind and improve our skill.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,不要遗漏信息,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接书信开头,引出话题;
第二步,详细地介绍李华的经历;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②look after照顾
③got into trouble陷入麻烦
④all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①It was also important to send a text message to parents when he got into trouble. (when引导时间状语从句)
②We can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also make friends with others. (not only...but also连词)
天津市南开区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.假设你是李平,要在本周班会课上发言,主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。
安全
在家和外出要锁好房门用火和用电时注意安全
饮食
学习做简单的饭菜
多喝水,吃新鲜的蔬菜水果
时间管理
按时起床,上学不迟到放学回家后先完成作业
其他
……(补充一点)
参考词汇:electricity 电
要求:
(1) 词数:80—100个。
(2) 短文的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear classmates,
When we are home alone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
When we are home alone, we need to pay attention to many things.
First of all, we should pay attention to the safety. Don’t forget to lock the door when we go out. Pay attention to safety when using fire and electricity. Second, we also need to learn how to cook simple meals. We need to drink more water and eat fresh vegetables and fruit. Last but not least, we need to get up on time and can’t be late for school. After school, we need to finish our homework first. What’s more, when a stranger knocks at the door, we cannot open it. We need to know how to call the police.
In a word, we should keep ourselves healthy and safe when we are alone at home.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:用一般现在时;
③ 提示:阐述独自在家时的注意事项,需要遵照所给要求,要点涵盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,概括独自在家时的整体原则,为文章确定基调;
第二步,分条陈述需要注意的具体事项,要注意理由充分合理,价值观正确;
第三步,总结观点,得出结论。
[亮点调汇]
①pay attention to 注意
②last but not least 最后但并不是最不重要的
③in a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①When we are home alone, we need to pay attention to many things.(时间状语从句)
②Don’t forget to lock the door when we go out.(祈使句)
天津市宁河区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中练习英语试题
86.根据下面的提示,以“Yuan Longping”为题目写一篇短文。
提示如下:
Fact box: Yuan Longping
Now
Is helping many countries of the world grow more rice than before
2004
Won World Food Prize
1980s
Travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice
1974
Developed a new kind of rice
1964
Made a special study of rice
1950-1953
Studied in Southwest Agricultural College
1930
Was born in Beijing
(1)词数:80-100;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Yuan Longing
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930.
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【答案】例文
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. He studied in Southwest Agricultural College from 1950 to 1953. In 1964, he made a special study of rice. And ten years later, he developed a new kind of rice. He traveled around the world and gave advice about growing rice in the 1980s. He won World Food Prize in 2004. Yuan devoted himself to the agriculural research. Although he is 90 years old, he is still working hard. He is helping many countries of the world grow more rice than before now.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的提示要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按照时间顺序叙述,首先写袁隆平什么时候出生;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从求学和取得的具体成就等方面来介绍袁隆平;
第三步,书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②from…to…从……到……
③travel around the world周游世界
④give advice about给出关于……的建议
⑤help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Although he is 90 years old, he is still working hard.(Although引导的让步状语从句)
天津市西青区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.前段时间同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后,纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习,成为一名有理想,有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下内容提示,以“How to be a better teenager?”为题,在下周的主题班会上发言。
内容提示:
(1)努力学习,积极锻炼,养成健康的生活习惯;
(2)尊敬长辈,乐于助人;
(3)学会做家务;
(4)热爱中国文化,培养各种兴趣爱好;
(5)感想……
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:积极锻炼actively exercise 尊敬respect 乐于做be willing to 文化culture
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
How to a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should study hard and actively exercise to develop healthy living habits. A strong body and a sharp mind are necessary for achieving our goals. Secondly, we must respect the elderly and be willing to help others. Thirdly, learning to do housework is important. It helps us become more independent and responsible. Additionally, we should love Chinese culture and develop various hobbies. This can enrich our lives and broaden our horizons.
Although it is not easy to be a better teenager, we should always strive to improve ourselves. Only in this way can we contribute to a stronger and better country.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据所给内容提示具体描述如何成为一个更好的青少年;
第二步,表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
① develop healthy living habits养成健康的生活习惯
② be willing to do乐意做
③ strive to do尽力做
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, learning to do housework is important.(动名词作主语)
②Although it is not easy to be a better teenager, we should always strive to improve ourselves(让步状语从句)
③Only in this way can we contribute to a stronger and better country.(部分倒装)
天津市鉴开中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
66.几乎每个人的心目中都有自己喜欢和崇拜的榜样。假如你心目中的榜样是中国乒乓球运动员孙颖莎,请根据以下提示内容,写一篇短文来介绍一下孙颖莎。
1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄;
2. 5岁时为了锻炼身体开始练习乒乓球;
3. 对自己严格要求,刻苦训练,15岁时进入国家队;
4. 2021年参加东京奥运会,获得一枚金牌,一枚银牌,为人所熟知;
5. 现在她成为了一名成功的乒乓球运动员;
6. 我认为……
注意:1. 短文应包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the national team国家队;
the Tokyo Olympic Games东京奥运会;
be well-known to为……所熟知
My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player.
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【答案】 My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player.
She was born in 2000 in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province. She started playing table tennis for good health when she was 5. And she was strict with herself and trained hard. Ten years later, she went into the National Team. After so many years’ hard-working effort, she finally got her first gold medal and silver medal in the Tokyo Olympic Games in 2021, then she quickly became well-known to us all. Now, she became a successful table tennis player.
It’s amazing that she can do the best at such a young age and we are all proud of her. I think she was a good model for us. We should learn a lot from her and study hard enough to make our own dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,需要注意写作时包含提示的所有内容,可适当增加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先简单介绍孙颖莎的出生时间和出生地以引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、参赛经历、所获奖项”等方面重点介绍孙颖莎;
第三步,书写结语。总结孙颖莎的成就,简述对她的看法,谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……严格
②become well-known to被熟知
③at a young age在年轻时
[高分句型]
①She started playing table tennis for good health when she was 5.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It’s amazing that she can do the best at such a young age and we are all proud of her.(it作形式主语)
天津市滨海新区汉沽第八中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
86.假如你是李华,请你给美国笔友David写一封信,讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事,并谈谈感受。
(1)上周五,一棵树被大风吹倒,挡住了道路。
(2)王红看到后,捡起地上的树枝,又去移动树干。
(3)树干太沉,她搬不动。
(4)人们过来帮忙。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:被吹倒be blown down 挡住block 树枝branch 树干trunk
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事,并谈谈感受,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出,第二段具体描述她做好事的过程;第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
天津市西青区当城中学2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中考试英语试题
66.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
(1)父母规矩太多,不允许自己晚上和朋友出去……。
(2)父母过于关注分数,给自己太多压力,不理解自己。
(3)你应该尽力理解父母,他们是爱孩子的,希望孩子前程似锦。
(4)为了与父母保持良好关系,你应该努力学习,与父母多交流。
(5)……(至少一条)。
参考词汇:过多关注 pay too much attention to 压力 pressure 前程似锦 have a brighter future
要求:
(1)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
(2)词数:80~100个。
(3)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to get on well with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me
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【答案】例文
How to get on well with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my marks and give me too much pressure. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to get on well with my parents, I study hard and try to talk with them more. I think the most important thing for children is caring about their parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍父母对待我的态度;
第二步,介绍我对待父母的态度;
第三步,介绍应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①go out 外出
②pay too much attention to过于关注
③too much pressure压力太大
④have a brighter future前程似锦
⑤get on well with与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①I think my parents don’t quite understand me.(宾语从句)
②Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③I think the most important thing for children is caring about their parents.(宾语从句)
天津市津南区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
66.英语课上,老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论,请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果,以“How to get on well with others”为题,写一篇英语短文。
(1) 要尊重他人,学会理解他人;
(2)要诚实,要礼貌待人;
(3)当他人处于困境时,要主动帮助;
(4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉;
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:尊重respect
要求:
(1)词数: 80~100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
How to get on well with others
As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
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【答案】例文
How to get on well with others
As we know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
First, we should respect others and try to understand them. Everyone has their own ideas and feelings, so we need to be considerate. Second, honesty is very important. We should always be honest and treat others politely. Third, we should offer to help others when they are in trouble. Helping others can not only make them feel good, but also make us feel happy. Fourth, when we make mistakes, we should take the initiative to apologize. This shows that we are responsible and can earn the trust of others.
In addition, I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others. We should learn to listen to others and try to see things from their perspective. Also, we should be willing to compromise and find solutions that are beneficial to everyone.
In a word, getting on well with others requires our efforts and sincerity. Only by treating others with kindness and respect can we build good relationships and live a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点要明确,需要按照题目要求,围绕“如何与人相处”展开论述,包括尊重他人、理解他人、诚实礼貌、帮助他人、主动道歉等方面,并适当添加自己的观点,不要遗漏相关内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头点明良好的人际关系能让人快乐舒适,进而引出如何与人相处的话题。
第二步,具体阐述与人相处的方法,如尊重他人、诚实礼貌、帮助有困难的人、犯错误时主动道歉等。
第三步,书写结语,总结与人相处需要努力和真诚,只有善待他人才能建立良好关系,过上幸福生活。
[亮点词汇]
①offer to help 主动帮助
②take the initiative 主动
③in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①We should offer to help others when they are in trouble.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others.(that引导的宾语从句)
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