Week 10 应用文写作(发言稿)&读后续写-新高中英语写作满分素材

新高中英语写作满分素材 100 Monday 晨读晚练 Week 10 应用文写作（发言稿）& 读后续写 A great speech is capable of changing the world, or at least sparking an audience’s imagination, bringing your business into success, earning an A+ on your assignment. Know the purpose: What are you trying to accomplish with your speech? Educate, inspire, entertain or argue a point? Your goals will determine the tone and structure, and result in dramatically different speeches. Know your audience: Your speech should be tailored for your audience, both in terms of ideas and languages. If you’re speaking at a sound healer convention, you won’t need to explain the concept of energetic blocks. And if you’re speaking to the senior, you probably should attend to your words and expressions. Know the length: You don’t w a n t t o u n d e r w h e l m o r overwhelm your audience. Ten minutes may be too short for your keynote address, but it’s too long for your best man speech. Don’t leave things up to chance. Your writing process will be much easier if you focus on your target length. Write, revise, practice, revise, practice…: Martin Luther King’s “I Have a Dream” speech wasn’t written in a day. Give yourself the time you need to practice your material and work through multiple drafts. Don’t expect to nail everything on the first try. Sample Speech My Experience of English Vocabulary Learning Dear classmates, Glad to share my experience of English vocabulary learning with you. As we see, English vocabulary is basic for us to have a good master of the language. Only when we have enough vocabulary can we use the language with great facility. Thus, I attach great importance to enlarging my vocabulary. Besides the textbooks, I’ll spare time to read short novels, watch English videos, or listen to radio programs, trying to learn English in authentic environments. Hope what I am doing can help you a lot. Thanks for your listening. 美文晨读 一周之计 ▷（成大原创） How to Write an Effective Speech 美文撷英 ① I’m delighted/pleased to have the opportunity to present/of making this presentation... ② I’m going to be speaking about something that is important to all of us. ③ The subject of my presentation is.../I shall be speaking today about... ④ There are five main aspects to this topic (...the first, ...the second, ...a third, ...another, ...the final) 101 Week 10 应用文写作（发言稿）&读后续写 仿写借鉴 范文晚练 满分范文 亮点解析 (2021 年全国乙卷 ) 你校将举办英语演讲 比 赛。 请 你 以 Be Smart Online Learners 为题写一 篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 分析优势与不足； 2. 提出学习建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目和首句已为你 写好。 Be Smart Online Learners ( 明确观点)Online learning has become an important way to study. However, it has both advantages and disadvantages. ( 分析优劣 ) On the one hand, it is convenient and time-saving, allowing us to learn anytime and anywhere we like. 非谓语动词作状语 Besides, it provides us with a wide range of learning resources and flexible learning ways. On the other hand, there is a greater chance of us being drawn to social media and other sites. There be 句型中使用了非谓语动词作宾语 We may also develop physical problems as a result of sitting in front of the screen for a long time. ( 给出建议 ) To avoid these problems, we should try our best to concentrate on our study and take enough breaks from the screen to refresh our mind and body. 不定式作目的状语 (2020 年天津卷 ) 假设你是晨光中学的 李津；下周你校将与英国 友好校举办一场在线会议， 探讨如何利用网络学习英 语，请你根据以下提示撰 写一篇发言稿： 1. 介绍你是如何利用 网络学习英语的 ( 至少写出 两点 )； 2. 简单谈谈你对利用 网络学习英语的看法； 3. 请友好校的学生分 享他们的经验。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相 应位置作答。 Good morning, my friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. I regularly attend online classes ① ( 由专家教师来 上的 ), where I can not only learn new knowledge such as new grammar rules but also ② ( 和我的线上同学交流 ). Besides, I like to watch movies in English, ③ ( 在学习上帮助了我很多 ) about the western culture as well as improving my listening and speaking. In addition, there are rich resources on the Internet, ④ ( 从网上我能 选择 ) what I think is the most useful for my English learning. In a word, I find online learning is ⑤ ( 一种学习英语的有效方式 ). I believe that you have your ideas about learning English on the Internet and we would like to hear about them. Thank you. 发言稿 一般现在时，一般将来时 通常以第一人称为主 观点鲜明有说服力 振奋精神有鼓动性 结构清楚层次简明 语言流畅深刻风趣 Para. 1：自我介绍说明身份，提出要谈的问题 Para. 2：介绍活动要强调目的、原因和评价 Para. 3：总结全文，谈谈自己的感想或期望 时态 人称 特点 结构 发言稿 新高中英语写作满分素材 102 Tuesday 满分素材 满分语料 重在积累 满分词汇 单词： ① honor/pleasure 荣耀 / 快乐 ② point/view/idea 观点 / 想法 ③ organizer/host 组织者 / 主持人 短语： ① on behalf of... 代表 ② have a chance to... /have the opportunity to... 有机会做某事 ③ be aware of... 意识到…… ④ To sum up... /To summarize... /In conclusion... 总之 ⑤ Briefly speaking... /In short... 简而言之 ⑥ from the bottom of my heart 从我心底 吸睛开头句 ① I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. It’s my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to... 我是 李华，来自高三 1 班的学生，很荣幸有机 会与大家分享我对如何……的看法。 ② Ladies and gentlemen, today on behalf of all the students, I’d like to deliver a lecture on stressing the importance of... 女士们，先生 们，今天我代表所有的学生做一场演讲， 强调……的重要性。 ③ On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of... 我 代表我们学校向您表示热烈的欢迎。我们 很幸运地请到您参与我们的……活动。 高光篇中句 ① The first thing I want to stress is that they deserve our respect due to their efforts in...我 想强调的第一件事就是，他们在……付出 的努力是值得我们尊敬的。 ② At present, ... is playing a very important role in..., ... indeed have brought me a lot of surprises and benefits. 目前，……在……中 起着非常重要的作用，……确实给我带来 了很多惊喜和好处。 ③ However, everything has its two sides. While..., it’s difficult for me to..., which means some problems can’t be solved in time. 然而，任 何事情都有两面性。在……的时候，我 很难……，这意味着有些问题不能及时 解决。 ④ As we all know, ... is of great importance. 众 所周知，……是非常重要的。 ⑤ If we are..., for one thing, we can win other’s trust; for another, we will leave a good impression on others. 如果我们……，一方 面，我们可以赢得别人的信任；另一方面， 我们会给别人留下好印象。 精彩结尾句 ① At last, on behalf of all the students, I hope all of you will study better and keep in good health, and hope we can meet again. 最后， 我代表全体同学希望大家能好好学习，身 体健康，希望我们能再见面。 ② Last but not least, I sincerely hope that everyone can achieve a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best. 最后，我衷心希望每个人都能取得巨 大的成功，希望每个参赛者都能发挥出自 己最好的水平。 ③ Here I truly hope that you will come to China again in the future and then we’ll hold more cultural activities for all of you. 我真诚地希 望你们今后会再来中国，那时我们将为你 们举办更多的文化活动。 ④ That’s all about my speech. Thank you for your attention. 这就是我的演讲。谢谢大家。 103 Week 10 应用文写作（发言稿）&读后续写 Wednesday 考场作文 读后续写微技能 10：人物情绪情感 (2020 年 7 月浙江卷改编） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使 之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws( 爪子 ). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter( 相遇 ), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar ( 吼 叫 ), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已 为你写好。 Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. 好题探究 最佳素材 人物的情感细节包括人物的情感情绪 , 是续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。一般有以 下 3 种途径来表达人物的情绪情感 : ① 直 接 利 用 恰 当 的 表 情 感 的 形 容 词 ( 如 delighted，shocked 等 )、 副 词 ( 如 amazingly)、 名 词 ( 如 excitement) 或介词短语 ( 如 in relief) 等来表达人物的情绪情感。 ② 利用具体的动作或神态描写来反映人物的情绪情感变化。 ③ 利用环境景物的描写，“融情于景”来衬托人物，渲染气氛。 新高中英语写作满分素材 104 完美续写 天衣无缝 第一步：读懂原文明确大意 总结三个基础 原文大意 我和妻子到加拿大拍北极熊，这是一项艰苦而且危险的工作。有一次我们在做饭的时候 或许是面包的香味招引来了一只雄性北极熊。真的近距离接触时我们反而害怕了，还好救援 飞机半小时之后会到。 STEP S Setting (Para. 1—2) Elli and I were photographing polar bears in Canada; it was a hard job. P Plot (Para. 6—7) We were told a helicopter would arrive in 30 minutes and we took some pictures. T Theme (Para. 3) A young male polar approached us because he smelt our bread. E Emotion (Para. 4—5) We were terrified and tried to frighten him away but failed. 三个基础（SUM） ★语篇类型：记叙文 ★人称：第一人称、 第三人称 ★时态：一般过去时 ★主题：“人与自然”—— 安全常识与自我保护 ★主 角：Elli and I, a male polar bear ★Elli and I prepared to take photos in Canada and we were hoping for success. ★A male polar bear appeared and we were almost frightened to death. ★Figure out what would happen before the helicopter arrived! Structure Underline Mission 第二步：根据续写段提示句 确定续写方向 构思 第一段 第二段 确定提示句关键词 情节发展有理有据 确定提示句关键词 首尾呼应水到渠成 锋利的牙齿，怒目以对，试图靠近我们 (要点�) 猛地站立似要折断栅栏 吓得半死明白必须反击 (要点�) 再用胡椒喷雾但是失败 (要点�) 直升机降落在营地附近 巨大噪音吓坏生气的熊 (要点�) 登上飞机发现熊吃面包 (要点�) 安全之后领悟应该帮熊 (要点�) bear headed back to our camp the helicopter arrived 105 Week 10 应用文写作（发言稿）&读后续写 第三步：结合框架添加细节 完美表达浑然一体 ① 使用了拟人手法生 动描述了北极熊怒 火中烧的样子。 ② 现在分词作状语 描述北极熊想要 跨过篱笆的样子， 句 中 的 monster 使用了夸张手法。 ③ 作 者 的 感 受 是 害 怕， 但 是“c o l d n e s s flooding from my back”的描述 使人感同身受。 ④ 使用“with + 名 词 + 形容词”作 状语表示状态。 ⑤ 本句与第二段段 首句衔接紧密， 尝试反击却失败 时飞机到了。 ⑥ 本句与段首句顺 承自然，也合乎 情理。 ⑦ 两个人快速反应 共同脱险。 ⑧ 脱离险境后如释 重负。 ⑨ 在飞机上发现熊 在吃面包。 ⑩ 升华主题：人与动 物应该和谐共处。 Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. He exposed his sharp teeth, aglaring at us as he ran forward. And again the bear stood on his back legs, bwanting to snap at the fence like a monster. It seemed that his mouth was full of blood and his eyes were red with anger. cSeeing such terrible sight, I could feel a coldness flooding from my back. dElli was stunned there, with the mouth widely open. I had to take action, so eI picked up my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray, but finally failed. Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. fIt landed near our camp and its loud noises scared the bear. He looked irritated and charged at us again. I cried out, “Watch out!” gWe instantly stepped away and ran as fast as we could to the helicopter. Thank God! We succeeded in hclimbing onto to the helicopter, gasping with relief. iLooking down at the bear, we found that he was eating the bread we just made. Several hours later, we arrived at home safe and sound, but we realized that jwe should do something to help the bears. (183 words) 新高中英语写作满分素材 106 Thursday 实战演练（Ⅰ） 应用文写作 发言稿 Writing 1 (2023 届山东德州三模 ) 假设你校英语社团举办中英文诗词朗诵大赛，你将在开幕式上主持发言。请你写一个发 言稿，内容包括： 1. 大赛目的； 2. 规则和奖励； 3. 表示祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Ladies and gentlemen, （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） Writing 2 (2023 届浙江 5 月模拟 ) 假定你是李华，你班将举行一场关于人类未来生活的讨论会。请用英语写一篇发言稿， 内容包括： 1. 健康方面； 2. 环境方面； 3. 日常生活。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Life in the Future （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） 107 Week 10 应用文写作（发言稿）&读后续写 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） 读后续写 Writing 1 (2023 届广东阳江一模 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One morning, Ann’s neighbor Tracy found a lost dog wandering around the local elementary school. She asked Ann if she could keep an eye on the dog and she planned to find its owner. Ann agreed, but she said that she could watch it only for the day because she needed to take care of her son. At the time, her son Thomas was 10 years old, who was recovering from a heart operation. Later, Tracy took photos of the dog, printed off 400 FOUND fliers, put them in mailboxes and began to find the dog’s owner. Meanwhile, Ann bought some pet supplies, warning her son not to fall in love with the dog. However, her son was filled with excitement as he knew that his mother got a dog back home. He planned to provide the dog with some food everyday. Four days later, Ann and her son were still looking after the dog, whom they had started to call Riley. During the four days, they took care of the dog carefully, provided some food, took a shower and played with it, and they had already become the best friends. The evening of the fifth day, when Ann arrived home from work, the dog threw itself against the door and barked madly at her. As soon as she opened the door, Riley dashed into the boys’ room where Ann found Thomas suffering from a heart attack. Riley ran over to Thomas, but as soon as Ann bent over to help him, the dog went silent. The doctor said if it hadn’t come to get his mother in time, Thomas would have died. Luckily, with the doctor’s help, Thomas could go home tomorrow morning. “Mum, can we keep it if we can’t find its owner? Even we can ask for permission if we find the owner,” Thomas asked his mother when they came back home. “Well, since no one has called to claim it, we decide to keep it,” his mother replied. Hearing that, Thomas was excited. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右 ; 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: However, the next day, Ann was told a man named Peter recognized his lost dog. Paragraph 2: Peter’s car came and Thomas stood silently beside his car. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 新高中英语写作满分素材 108 Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） 读后续写 Writing 2 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I looked around the crowded waiting room at the hospital and sighed. Would the doctor be able to see my eight-year-old son next? I couldn’t stop shaking as the wound in his forehead was deep. We were at the hospital because another child had thrown a rock at Luke during the break as he was running around the corner. Luke received four stitches( 缝 针 ). I fought back the urge to cry. For the next two days, his eye was swollen shut and black and blue. I felt like I’d had a mini nervous breakdown. Every time I tried to sleep or tend to do some housework, horrible thoughts crept into my mind. What if he’d lost his eye? What if he’d had brain damage? His doctor assured me he was going to be fine, but the what-ifs kept coming. Fear had taken over, and then the fear turned to anger. I was angry with the child who’d thrown the rock. I just couldn’t shake it. What was she thinking? She should have known better. Several days later, Luke’s teacher called me that evening to see how he was feeling, telling me Katie felt terrible and heartbroken over what had happened. I asked the teacher to make Katie understand she couldn’t do that and remind her of the dangers of throwing rocks. The teacher agreed, which made me feel better. I noticed that as Luke started to heal physically, I wasn’t as angry. I thought about Katie and Luke. I wanted to stand up for my son, protect him, but I didn’t want to mistreat Katie because I learned from the teacher that Katie really was a nice kid and that she was just trying to remove the rock so no other children would trip on it. Last night, Luke’s teacher stopped by and dropped off a get-well card that Katie had made. Luck and I read it several times, and I couldn’t help but feel a little choked up. It was a sincere apology. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: I wanted this to be a teachable moment for Luke to learn about forgiveness. Paragraph 2: The next morning, Luke and I waited for Katie with the letter at the school gate. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 109 Week 10 应用文写作（发言稿）&读后续写 Sunday 语篇提升 提分技法 妙招锦囊 三大从句 一、定语从句 As the old saying goes, ...“老话说得好，……” Just as the old saying goes, “One tree doesn’t make a forest.” Our success is based on cooperating with others. 老话说得好，独木难成林。我们的成功是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。 二、名词性从句 I sincerely hope that...“我真诚地希望……” I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 如果方便的话，我真诚地希望您能接受我们的邀请。 三、状语从句 as/so long as“只要”(=on condition that) I believe that our environment will be improved as long as we keep working together. 我相信，只要我们共同努力，我们的环境一定会得到改善。 (2023 届河北邯郸一模 ) 假定你是校英语俱乐部的负责人李华。近期俱乐部将召开纳新大会，请根据提示写一份 发言稿，内容包括： 1. 俱乐部的宗旨；2. 往昔活动；3. 寄语。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone, Let me extend a warm welcome to all the new members on behalf of the club. Our club is aimed at developing students’ interest in learning English and enriching our school life. In the past years ① ( 自从建立俱乐部以来 ), we have organized a variety of activities, such as English speech contest, English essay collection and communication with international students. I hope that ② ( 所有俱乐部新成员都会积极参 与 ) the activities organized by the club, ③ ( 这会加深我们的理解 ) and friendship. ④ ( 只要每个人有团队精神 ) well, our club will be better and better. That’s all. Thanks. 提分臻题 妙法巧用 新高中英语写作满分素材 110 动作描写（6）：“鼓掌”的动作 鼓掌是一种表达赞赏和喜爱的方式，也是一种庆祝和欢呼的方式。在续写时使用到“鼓 掌”的动作，可以表达故事人物的情感和态度，也可表达续写作者对故事人物的认可。 第一组：全班爆发出热烈的掌声和欢呼声。 ☆概括描写： The whole class clapped and cheered. ▷细节描述： ① The whole class warm applause and cheers. ( 动词短语 ) ② The whole class burst out . ( 非谓语动词 ) ③ The whole class thunderous applause and cheers. ( 使用 fill) 第二组：选举的宣布赢得了一阵热烈的掌声。 ☆概括描写： People applauded at the announcement of the election. ▷细节描述： ① The announcement of the election gained long and warm . ( 名词 ) ② The announcement of the election won long and warm applause. ( 量词 ) 技能小练 增色续写 模板背诵 内化所学 ▪ 知晓发言稿的本 质是在公众场合 向公众传播自己 的观点。 ▪ 与书面用语不同， 发言稿要注意口 语化。 ▪ 表述生动感人，将 枯燥的观点变得 有趣以吸引观众。 ▪ 文章通常以第一 人称为主。 ▪ 时态以一般现在 时和一般将来时 为主。 (2023 届广东广州三模 ) The Fruit of Labor Is Sweetest Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Today, I’m so honored to be here and ( 发表演讲 ) titled “The Fruit of Labor Is Sweetest”. Since labor creates ( 健康和财富 ), Chinese people place a high value on it. For us students, labor can also help ( 增强体质 ), cultivate our awareness of independence and even ( 加强联系 ) with our peers and families. I believe everybody present will never forget the time ( 我们一起度过的 ) doing the laborious work on the farm. Worn out as we were, we felt ( 很强的成就感 ) after the work was accomplished. In my daily life, I often do some housework that I can afford, such as cleaning the rooms, washing the dishes. I’m proud to be able to help my parents and happy to enjoy “the fruit of labor grown by myself”. The fruit of labor is sweetest! I’m ( 呼吁你的付出 ) to labor and let’s ( 承担责任 ). Thanks for listening! 新高中英语写作满分素材 28 ⑤ I’d appreciate it if 模板背诵 Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going? I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Looking forward to your early reply. Best regards! Yours truly, Li Hua 技能小练 第一组： ① Obviously ② It was clear that ③ slipped his mind 第二组： ① run ② race ③ running/racing Week 10 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 Good morning, my friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. I regularly attend online classes agiven by expert teachers, where I can not only learn new knowledge such as new grammar rules but also bcommunicate with my online classmates. Besides, I like to watch movies in English, chelping me a lot in learning about the western culture as well as improving my listening and speaking. In addition, there are rich resources on the Internet, dfrom which I can choose what I think is the most useful for my English learning. In a word, I find online learning is ean effective way of learning English. I believe that you have your ideas about learning English on the Internet and we would like to hear about them. Thank you. Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语料亮点 Ladies and gentlemen, On behalf of the English club, ait’s my great honor to introduce the Chinese and English Poetry Recitation Contest to all of you. bIn order to arouse students’ passion for poetry and enrich our school life, the students cwho take part in the contest will recite an English or a Chinese poem and show their feelings dthey want to convey in the poems. After a hot competition, ethe first ten winners will be chosen and given prizes at different levels. The competition will offer a wonderful chance for us fto have a better understanding of Chinese and English classics, stirring up our further love for Chinese and English culture. Hope you would perform yourself well and get a good result. ① 礼貌表达且呈现了发言稿的主题——介绍一场 比赛。 ② 介绍这场比赛的目的，不定式作目的状语置于 句首能突出强调。 答案全解全析 29 ③ 主句中含有定语从句以解释主语。 ④ 本句包含定语从句，关系代词省略。 ⑤ 使用一般将来时的被动语态。 ⑥ 使用不定式作后置定语解释名词 chance。 Writing 2 审题谋篇 语篇类型 发言稿 人称 第三人称、第二人称 时态 一般将来时 三段式结构 ①首段：明确主题是“未来生活” ②主体段落：3 个要点、3 个角度 ③尾段：表达对未来生活的向往 语料亮点 Life in the Future In the future, aman’s life will be very different from that of today. First, with the development of medicine, bpeople will live longer and healthier. Second, because of the discovery of new energy, cthe environmental pollution will be under control. Third, people’s daily life will change greatly, too. For example, robots will do most of the housework for you; dyou can take your video mobile phone with you and see the smart machine while speaking. The most exciting thing is ethat man will have more free time and each city will have its own spaceport, so you can even go into space for your holidays! I really look forward to life in the future. ① 首先明确未来生活与现在生活相比会大相径庭， 展示主题。 ②从健康角度解释原因，完成内容 1。 ③从环境角度解释原因，完成内容 2。 ④从日常生活角度解释，完成内容 3。 ⑤ 展开对未来的具体想象。 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） Writing 1 思路点拨 文章主题 人与动物 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段介绍小狗的原主 人找到了，并决定接狗回家，这让 Thomas 很 难过。 ②根据第二段首句可知，Thomas 为小狗送行 时的依依不舍打动了 Peter，最终让 Thomas 留下了狗。 叙事线索 认出狗→打算接狗回家→ Thomas 不舍→ Peter 决定留下狗→ Thomas 开心 高分范文 Paragraph 1: However, the next day, Ann was told a man named Peter recognized his lost dog. Tracy said Peter called the number on the flier. Ann told Tracy what had happened during these days and even started crying. At the same time, Ann showed great gratitude to the dog. And Tracy told Ann that Peter would drive to her house to pick up his dog this afternoon. Later, Ann told Thomas the owner had called to claim Riley, they needed to return it to the owner. Hearing that news, Thomas put his hands over his mouth. His eyes were wide open for he couldn’t believe what had happened. However, he had to face the truth. Paragraph 2: Peter’s car came and Thomas stood silently beside his car. Ann took Riley from her home. Seeing that, Thomas’ tears were rolling down his cheeks. Riley sat beside Thomas, sometimes ran around him and shouted: woof woof, which clearly showed that Riley didn’t want to leave his friend, Thomas. At last, Thomas asked Peter, “Can we keep Riley?” Knowing this point, Peter thought about it for a moment, and then said, “Maybe my dog was supposed to find you, maybe you should keep it.” Hearing that, Thomas ran around after Riley. Obviously, they were full of joy. (186 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① start crying 开始哭起来 ② show great gratitude to 表达感恩 ③ put... hands over... mouth 双手捂住嘴巴 ④ eyes wide open 眼睛睁得大大的 ⑤ tears rolling down 眼泪流下来 ⑥ be full of joy 满心欢喜 满分句式 ① His eyes were wide open for he couldn’t believe what had happened. (for 作连词引导从句表示 新高中英语写作满分素材 30 原因 ) ② Riley sat beside Thomas, sometimes ran around him and shouted: woof woof, which clearly showed that Riley didn’t want to leave his friend, Thomas. (which 引导非限制性定语从句 ) Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） Writing 2 思路点拨 文章主题 人际关系 原文大意 作者的儿子 Luke 因为被 Katie 扔石头而受伤 入院，作者非常愤怒。老师打电话来说 Katie 非常伤心。老师来拜访时带来了 Katie 做的康 复卡片，Luke 和作者看后都很感动。 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段描写作者和 Luke 沟通是否原谅 Katie，然后两人给 Katie 写信表示原谅。 ②根据第二段首句可知，本段描写两个孩子 见面后 Luke 原谅了 Katie，Katie 终于感到轻 松，作者对此有所感悟。 叙事线索 教 Luke 学会宽恕→与 Luke 沟通→ Luke 写 信 表 示 原 谅 → 拿 信 等 Katie → Luke 原 谅 Katie →感悟 构思 第一段 我也想放下愤怒 询问 Luke 他同意原谅 孩子不心怀怨恨 母子写信原谅 Katie 第二段 Katie 到来较尴尬 Luke 递信女孩看信 两孩子和好拥抱 我明白宽恕的力量 高分范文 Paragraph 1: I wanted this to be a teachable moment for Luke to learn about forgiveness. I wanted to let go of my own anger, too. I asked Luke if he was ready to forgive her. After all, his opinion counted the most. He thought about it for a moment, smiled and said, “Yes.” He knew she hadn’t done it on purpose. Children are so resilient and so honest. They don’t hold onto resentment as adults do sometimes. Their hearts are pure, so we wrote Katie a letter together, reading, “We know it was an unfortunate accident. We forgive you, and we hope you forgive yourself.” Paragraph 2: The next morning, Luke and I waited for Katie with the letter at the school gate. Finally came Katie. When she spotted us, she paused and forced a smile. Luke trotted beside her with wild little hops, handing her the letter. No sooner had she unfolded it than a relieved and happy smile bloomed on her face, which made Luke feel much better. She skipped to give me a big hug. I hugged her back. We didn’t have to say anything else; we all knew it was forgiveness that was the most important step in healing. (170 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① let go of my own anger 放下我的愤怒 ② force a smile 强颜欢笑 ③ a relieved and happy smile 轻松快乐的微笑 满分句式 ① No sooner had she unfolded it than a relieved and happy smile bloomed on her face, which made Luke feel much better.(no sooner... than... 引导时 间状语从句，并引起主句部分倒装 ) ② We didn’t have to say anything else; we all knew it was forgiveness that was the most important step in healing.(it was... that... 是强调句型 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① since the club was founded ② all the new club members will actively participate in ③ which will deepen our understanding ④ As long as everyone plays team spirit 模板背诵 The Fruit of Labor Is Sweetest Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Today, I’m so honored to be here and deliver the speech titled “The Fruit of Labor Is Sweetest”. Since labor creates health and wealth, Chinese people place a high value on it. For us students, labor can also help build up our body, cultivate our awareness of independence and even strengthen the bond with our peers and families. I believe everybody present will never forget the time that/which we spent together doing the laborious work on the farm. Worn out as we were, we felt a strong sense of achievement 答案全解全析 31 after the work was accomplished. In my daily life, I often do some housework that I can afford, such as cleaning the rooms, washing the dishes. I’m proud to be able to help my parents and happy to enjoy “the fruit of labor grown by myself”. The fruit of labor is sweetest! I’m calling for your devotion to labor and let’s shoulder the responsibility. Thanks for listening! 技能小练 第一组： ① broke into ② clapping and cheering ③ was filled with 第二组： ① applause ② a burst of Week 11 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 Dear David, I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday aas scheduled. Recently, I’m not feeling well and brequired to rest more according to the doctor. However, I am very fond of your classes and would like to cmake up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson dto be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and ereview through the video. Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to funderstand my situation and accept my apology. Yours, Li Hua Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语篇类型 道歉信 人称 第一人称、第三人称 时态 一般现在时、一般将来时 结构 首段：表明不能赴约的歉意 主体段落：解释原因给出弥补措施 尾段：再次表达歉意 语料亮点 Dear Sarah, I’m indeed very sorry athat I won’t attend your birthday party as I was planned before. bAs for the sudden change, I have to admit it has an unavoidable reason. My little brother are being sick for days. So it is necessary for him to be cared. cI am responsible for looking after him while my parents are working. Therefore, I have to stay to accompany him that day. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive my absence. dIs it possible for you and me to have a private meeting at this weekend? I do long for a pleasant chat with you and give the present to you. eIt is much to my regret that I miss the chance of such a happy get-together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Yours, Li Hua ① 使用主从复合句介绍道歉的原因。 ② 首先坦然承认关于突然的变故是有不可避免的 原因的。 ③ 解释自己不能赴约的原因，使用的 be responsible for 属于高级词汇。 ④ 委婉向对方提出补救措施，希望对方能够再给 一次机会。 ⑤ 再次表达歉意显得自己诚意满满，句中的“It is much to my regret that...”句式属于高级句式。 Writing 2 审题谋篇 语篇类型 道歉信 人称 第一人称、第二人称 时态 一般将来时、一般现在时 三段式结构 ①首段：开门见山说明道歉原因 ②主体段落：具体的道歉 ③尾段：表达希望 语料亮点 Dear Mike, aHaving signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday. Therefore, I’m writing to