Week 8 应用文写作(推荐信)&读后续写-新高中英语写作满分素材

新高中英语写作满分素材 78 Monday 晨读晚练 Week 8 应用文写作（推荐信）& 读后续写 ▷ Customize your letter to the job at hand. Customize your l e t t e r o f recommendation to the job at hand. If you send off a general letter without mentioning what job the candidate is applying for, it will look weak compared t o o n e t h a t w a s w r i t t e n specifically for the role. ▷ Use 2—3 specific examples. While calling the candidate motivated or creative is all well and good, you want to back up these descriptors with actual examples. Let’s say you’re talking about how the candidate is great at creative problem-solving. Choose a specific time when a problem came along and talk about how the candidate solved it. By providing two to three specific anecdotes , you can prove the candidate really has the qualities you say they do. ▷ Speak to the candidate before you write. Before you sit down to write, speak with the job seeker about their plans. Let them tell you what the new role is and why they’re excited about it. They might even share their cover letter and application materials, so you can make sure your letter complements the story they’re presenting in their application. ▷ Explain why your opinion matters. In the beginning of your letter, explain who you are and what makes you qualified to recommend this person. That way, your reader will unders tand where you’ re coming from and know to take your opinion seriously. ▷ Start with enthusiasm. Another good way to grab your reader’s attention is to start your letter with a strong statement of support, such as “It’s my great pleasure to recommend Laura for the position of…” ▷ Format your letter correctly. It’s important to format your letter in an official manner. Use official letterhead if possible, making sure to include your name, position, workplace, and contact information. 美文晨读 一周之计 ▷（成大原创） 6 Ways to Make Your Letter of Recommendation Effective 美文撷英 ① Having known that..., I take/have the pleasure in recommending to you... I hope you will be interested in... ② The reasons why... is highly recommended are as follows. ③ I recommend... mainly for the following reasons. ④ I would be most grateful if you would like to take my recommendation into account. ⑤ Hope my recommendation will be of some help to you. 79 Week 8 应用文写作（推荐信）&读后续写 仿写借鉴 范文晚练 满分范文 亮点解析 (2021 年 6 月浙江卷改编 ) 昨天你参观了学校举 办的学生国画作品展。请 给校英文报写一篇宣传， 内容包括： 1. 展览时间、地点； 2. 观展感受； 3. 推荐观展。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 ( 首段明确要推荐和介绍的对象 ) I am honored to introduce an exhibition of students’ traditional Chinese paintings to you. ( 详细介绍该展览信息 ) In order to enrich students’ after-school life, the exhibition is being held by our school, 不定式作目的状语 which sparks a growing love for traditional art. The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school library. Most of the students think highly of this exhibition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art. 非 限制性定语从句 ( 观展感受和乐于推荐 ) Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. 平 行 结 构 凸 显 重 要 性 The exhibition will last for two weeks, and every student is welcome to visit. (2021 年 3 月天津卷改编 ) 假设你是晨光中学的 李津。我市为外国友人提 供生活信息的某英文网站 新增了 《最美中华》栏目， 请你给该栏目投稿，介绍 一个国内你喜欢或去过的 地方。内容包括： 1. 该地方的基本情况 ( 如名称、地理位置等 )； 2. 该地方的特色 ( 如 文化、景点等 )； 3. 你对该地方的印象 和感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相 应位置作答。 A Beautiful Place in China Sichuan Province ① ( 位于 ) southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous ② ( 名胜 ), such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. ③ ( 给我印象最深的是 ) is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more, walking in the nature reserve, you ④ ( 有机会见证 ) rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It ⑤ ( 可以追溯到 ) over 2,000 years ago. However, it ⑥ ( 正仍 然起着重要作用 ) in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 推荐信 一般现在时，一般将来时 通常以第三人称为主，兼用第一、二人称 内容肯定且乐观 正面评价被推荐方 语言简洁且明确 理由充足有说服力 Para. 1： 说明写信目的及要推荐的对象 ( 熟人使用寒暄语，陌生人需 进行自我介绍 ) Para. 2：逐一阐述推荐理由 Para. 3：期待推荐能让对方满意 时态 人称 特点 结构 推荐信 新高中英语写作满分素材 80 Tuesday 满分素材 满分语料 重在积累 满分词汇 单词： ① recommendation/recommend 推荐 ② excellent/outstanding 优秀的 ③ all-around/potential/competent 全 能 型 的 / 有潜能的 / 有能力的 ④ outgoing/quiet 外向的 / 文静的 ⑤ application/CV/recruit 申请 / 简历 / 招募 短语： ① take the pleasure in recommending 很 高 兴 推荐 ② be skillful at/show great skill at sth. 精通 ③ have a gift/talent for=be gifted/talented for 有某事的天赋 ④ be an expert in/be expert in/at 是某方面的 专家 ⑤ take initiative to do sth. 采取主动性做某事 ⑥ be given/awarded the title of 被授予……称号 吸睛开头句 ① It makes me thrilled that you are keen on... So delighted am I that I heartily recommend... to you. 我很高兴你对……感兴趣，我衷心地 向你推荐…… ② Overjoyed to receive your letter where you mention that you are an enthusiast for..., so I am writing to heartily recommend... to you. 非常高兴收到你的来信，你提到你是…… 的爱好者，所以我写信向你强烈推荐…… ③ Having learned that your company is in need of some part-time salesman, I am both honored and pleased to recommend Li Ming, one of my schoolmates to you. 得 知 你 公 司需要兼职销售人员，我荣幸地推荐李 明——我的一个同学，给你们。 ④ It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give... a recommendation. 我 很荣幸地抓住这次机会给推荐…… 高光篇中句 ① Awarded with the title of the Excellent Gradua te , he i s an en thus ias t i c and progressive young man with high potentiality. 他获得了优秀毕业生的称号，是一位热情、 积极向上的年轻人，具有很大的潜力。 ② Her academic record was constant ly maintained at the top level, which resulted from her devotion to study and intelligent nature. 她的学习成绩始终保持在最高水 平，这是她对学习的热爱和聪明的天性所 决定的。 ③ If he can join the company, he will give full play to his potential/talent. And your company will be greatly benefited. So I strongly recommend... to you. 如 果 他 能 加 入公司，他将充分发挥他的潜力 / 才能。 而你的公司将会受益匪浅。所以我强烈推 荐……给你。 ④ Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration, it would be highly appreciated. 如果这个推荐能得到您的认 可，我们将不胜感激。 精彩结尾句 ① Hope my recommendation wil l be of assistance to you. Wish you a good time/ journey. 希望我的推荐能对你有所帮助。 祝你玩得愉快 / 旅途愉快。 ② I do guarantee that my recommendation will never fail to amaze you. Earnestly anticipating your prompt reply. 我保证我的 推荐一定会让您大吃一惊。热切期待您的 及时回复。 ③ I sincerely hope that my recommendation will trigger your enthusiasm for... Best wishes. 我真诚地希望我的建议能激发你 对……的热情。献上最好的祝福！ 81 Week 8 应用文写作（推荐信）&读后续写 Wednesday 考场作文 读后续写微技能 8：设计故事结构 (2021 年 1 月浙江卷改编） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使 之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin( 南 瓜 ) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage—I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork( 软木塞 ) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为 你写好。 Paragraph 1: It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Paragraph 2: The video was posted the Monday before Halloween. 好题探究 最佳素材 故事的结构是以“事件”为中心，包含了人物、事件、环境、矛盾冲突这四个要素， 还有由这四个要素生发出来的节奏、详略、过渡、线索、悬念、开头、结尾等等，这些都 和故事整体结构的设计有关，设计故事结构的方法如下： 1. 运用 5W+H 梳理文本故事的基本信息 读后续写的选材往往都是记叙文，我们可以运用记 叙文的六个要素 5W+H (when、where、who、what、 why、how) 来梳理材料信息，厘清故事的脉络。 2. 运用语篇分析把握故事情节的发展 故事情节的发展有开端 ( 起因 )、发展、高潮、低谷和 结局这样几个阶段。 3. 运用语篇分析感受人物情感的变化，把握人物情感 发展变化的基调 4. 运用语篇分析寻求材料上下文中的伏笔和暗示去构 建读后续写的写作框架 新高中英语写作满分素材 82 完美续写 天衣无缝 第一步：读懂原文明确大意 总结三个基础 原文大意 作者家有在万圣节雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤 地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了， 无论如何也无法挣脱出来。 STEP S Setting (Para. 1) It was a tradition to carry the biggest pumpkin back home at Halloween. P Plot (Para. 3) I was shot when I put my head into the pumpkin with efforts. T Theme (Para. 2) To prove my pumpkin was the biggest, I decided to force my head inside it. E Emotion (Para. 4) I was happy at first but soon got into a panic because I couldn’t get it out. 三个基础（SUM） ★语篇类型：记叙文 ★人称：第一人称 ★时态：一般过去时 ★主题：“人与自我”—— 家庭生活 ★主角：my family, I ★My family would choose the biggest pumpkin at Halloween. ★I put my head inside a pumpkin but I couldn’t get it out. ★Figure out what would happen after my head was trapped! Structure Underline Mission 第二步：根据续写段提示句 确定续写方向 构思 第一段 第二段 确定提示句关键词 情节发展有理有据 确定提示句关键词 首尾呼应水到渠成 爸爸被喊来解难题 (要点�) 他提议向消防求助 妈妈全程将视频拍 (要点�) 我被救后剪辑视频 (要点�) 浏览量令人太意外 (要点�) 脸书油管都很热门 突然我就成了名人 (要点�) 时不时会被人认出 (要点�) five or six minutes video was posted 83 Week 8 应用文写作（推荐信）&读后续写 第三步：结合框架添加细节 完美表达浑然一体 ① 用诙谐的语气说 爸爸与其是帮忙 不如说是看热闹。 ② 但是终究是爸爸 给 出 了 合 理 建 议， 本 句 中 使 用 了“hear sb. doing”， 其 中 doing 是 宾 语 补 足语。 ③ 使用强调句式突 出作者突然想起 来 妈 妈 一 直 在 拍摄。 ④ 属于细节描写， 合理想象当时的 尴尬场景，搞笑 样子会成为日后 点击量高的伏笔。 ⑤ 紧密承接段首句， 没有多久就出名 了；句中使用了 过去完成时。 ⑥ 合理想象网络的 力量有多大，作 者视频的点击量 短 时 间 内 迅 速 增加。 ⑦ 使用例子说明自 己的视频的影响 力之大，到了在 街上被人认出的 境地。 ⑧ 使用幽默的语气 再次强调了该视 频 产 生 的 巨 大 影响。 Paragraph 1: It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Dad was summoned — less, it seemed, ain expectation of practical help than to make sure he didn’t miss out on the spectacle. bI heard him proposing the fire department. “Stay tuned,” said Mom. She’d mentioned she was going to upload the video to Facebook, cbut it was only then that I realized she’d been filming the whole time. The video cuts before my rescue —Dad got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so that Mom could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. dI emerged with squash- conditioned hair, a sore chin and my nose plugged with pulp. Paragraph 2: The video was posted the Monday before Halloween. eBy the end of that day, it had got over 1,000 views. People asked Mom to put it on YouTube, and by Wednesday morning we were getting 5:00 a.m. calls from TV breakfast shows and then the international media — fthe video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. gWhen I went on a youth camp, I was recognized by children I’d never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. hPassers-by and trick- or-treaters would knock and ask, “Which is Rachel’s pumpkin?” before taking selfies with it. (190 words) 新高中英语写作满分素材 84 Thursday 实战演练（Ⅰ） 应用文写作 推荐信 Writing 1 (2023 届陕西安康模拟预测 ) 假定你是李华，中国青年志愿者网 (China Youth Volunteers) 计划在暑假面向高三毕业生 招募 1000 名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自 我推荐信。要点如下： 1. 个人情况； 2. 个人优势； 3. 申请目的。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua, a boy aged 18. Yours truly, Li Hua （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） Writing 2 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 发来邮件，请你推荐一部中国电影。请回复该邮件， 内容包括： 1．电影介绍； 2．推荐理由。 注意：1．词数 80 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, Yours, Li Hua （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） 85 Week 8 应用文写作（推荐信）&读后续写 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） 读后续写 Writing 1 (2023 届山东聊城三模 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Sara, my neighbor, and I were sitting in our yard, chatting, and frowning at the wooden house across the street. Nobody in the neighborhood had met these two young men there yet. The two men had long hair and beards and dressed strangely. They kept to themselves. When they came outside, they never made eye contact with anyone. “They sure don’t fit into the neighborhood,” Sara said, the corners of her mouth turning down as she stared at that house. Sara said, “What about our street parties? We’ve always included everyone. Should we invite them?” I sighed, “Try being nice, Sara.” Suddenly, Sara sat up straight and her eyes grew wide with curiosity when a government car pulled up before Mrs. Swain’s house next door. We hurried over. Mrs. Swain was recovering from cancer and lived alone. Sara and I tried to keep an eye on her. The man from the car put a piece of paper on Mrs. Swain’s door and hurriedly left. Mrs. Swain looked old, thin, and very tired when she opened the door. We three looked at the paper. It read: “Someone complained your grass’ length is against city rules. Please cut it in five days, or you’ll be fined.” It was a shame that nobody had cut her grass for her. However, Sara and I lived alone, and we were both pregnant. What was worse, we were on a tight budget, and the other families here were on vacation. Sara and I comforted Mrs. Swain, telling her we’d figure out a way. Mrs. Swain blinked in confusion, “Who would complain? Everyone knows that my old lawn mower is broken. And I’ve been sick too.” “It may be those two guys across the street,” Sara whispered, angrily staring at that wooden house. Just then, a voice that seemed too gentle to be coming from the strange young man behind me said, “What is going on? Is she alright?” He nodded toward Mrs. Swain. Sara looked at him coldly and said, “Some guys reported her because her grass is too high.” Her eyes ran over him disapprovingly, but he didn’t seem to notice. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: The young man and his friend quickly made eye contact and nodded seriously. Paragraph 2: After they finished the work, Sara and I walked in shame to apologize for judging them. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 新高中英语写作满分素材 86 Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） 读后续写 Writing 2 (2023 届广东惠州二模 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 When I was eight or nine years old, I wrote my first poem. My mother read the little poem and began to cry. “Buddy, you didn’t really write this beautiful, beautiful poem!” My mother poured out her praise. I glowed. “What time will Father be home?” I asked. I could hardly wait to show him what I had accomplished. My mother said she hoped he would be home around seven. I spent the best part of that afternoon preparing for his arrival. First, I wrote the poem out in my finest flourish( 花 体 字 ). Then I used colored crayon( 蜡 笔 ) to draw an elaborate border around it that would do justice to its brilliant content. Then I waited. As 7 o’clock drew near, I confidently placed it right on my father’s plate on the dining room table. But my father did not return at seven. I admired my father. He was head of Paramount Studios in Hollywood but he had begun his motion picture career as a writer. He would be able to appreciate this wonderful poem of mine even more than my mother. This evening it was almost 8 o’clock when my father burst in. He was an hour late for dinner. His mood seemed thunderous. He could not sit down but circled the long dining room table with a drink in his hand, calling down terrible oath( 诅咒 ) on his employees. Suddenly, he paused and stared at his plate. There was a suspenseful silence. “What is this?” He was reaching for my poem. I lowered my head and stared down into my plate. I was full of anxious daydreams. How wonderful it would be if this very first work of mine drove away the angry clouds that now darkened my important father’s face. “Ben, a wonderful thing has happened,” my mother began. “Buddy has written his first poem! And it’s beautiful.” “If you don’t mind, I’d like to decide for myself.” Father said. I kept my face lowered to my plate as he read that poem. It couldn’t have taken very long to read that poem. It was only ten lines. But it seemed to take hours. I could hear him dropping the poem back on the table. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Now came the moment of decision. Paragraph 2: A few years later I took a second look at the first poem, and I had to agree with my father’s judgment. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 87 Week 8 应用文写作（推荐信）&读后续写 Sunday 语篇提升 提分技法 妙招锦囊 高级短语 attach/place great importance to 重视 lead to/give rise to/contribute to/result in 导致 / 引起 sense of responsibility/sense of achievement 责任感 / 成就感 sense of competition and cooperation 竞争与合作精神 widen one’s horizons/broaden one’s vision 开阔眼界 acquire knowledge and skills 学习知识和技能 develop your interest in 培养……兴趣的 take many factors into account/consideration 考虑到诸多因素 from another perspective 从另一个角度 make joint efforts 做出共同努力 be beneficial to.../be of great benefit to... 对……有益 satisfy/meet the needs of... 满足……的需求 in all aspects of human life 在人类生活的方方面面 a wide variety of/ a range of 各种各样的 假设你叫李华，你和几位英语爱好者在互联网上建了一个叫 easyenglish 的网站。请用英 语写一篇推荐信，向你校学生介绍这个网站。要点如下： 1．创立网站的目的； 2．网站内容及功能 ( 英语材料、聊天、展示交流等 )； 3．感谢关注，号召使用。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, My name is Li Hua and I’d like to introduce you a new website — easyenglish.com. It is common that most of us ① ( 重视 ) learning English. We have set up this website aiming to ② ( 培养兴趣 ) learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for you. ③ ( 各种各样的 ) English materials are available in this website, such as English exercises, foreign cultures, English short stories, etc. And you can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your spoken and written English. Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and ④ ( 与他人交流 经验 ), this website is your best choice. Meanwhile, your English can ⑤ ( 得到提高 ) by being corrected by others. Thank you so much for your concern. Hopefully our website can ⑥ ( 对……有益 处 ) you in your English study. Welcome to visit it frequently and your advice for any improvement will be greatly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 提分臻题 妙法巧用 新高中英语写作满分素材 88 动作描写（4）：“拥抱”的动作 拥抱是一种温暖而亲密的身体接触方式，它可以表达出深厚的情感。拥抱方式不同， 感受也会有所不同，具体的情形需要根据情景和人物来进行刻画。朋友的拥抱代表贴心信 任，师生的拥抱代表的是关爱和鼓励，父母的拥抱代表的是幸福和温暖，吵架后的拥抱代 表妥协和原谅，相逢后的拥抱代表思念和激动，离别前的拥抱代表不舍和期待。 第一组：说不出话来，她灿烂地笑着，把儿子抱在怀里。 ☆概括描写： She couldn’t speak. She hugged her son with a big smile. ▷细节描述： ① She her son with a big smile, finding no words to say. ( 同义词 ) ② Unable to speak, she smiled brightly and her son in her arms. ( 同义词 ) ③ Speechless, she smiled radiantly and her son into her arms. ( 同义词 ) 第二组：我站起来，用一种尴尬的方式，惊讶地拥抱了她。 ☆概括描写： I stood up and hugged her with surprise, in an awkward way. ▷细节描述： ① Shocked, I stood up and gave her . ( 名词 ) ② Stunned, I stood up and her in an awkward way. ( 同义词 ) ③ Shocked, I stood up, her in an awkward way. ( 非谓语动词 ) 技能小练 增色续写 模板背诵 内化所学 ▪ 知晓推荐信的本 质是向别人推荐 某人某物，希望 对方能接受推荐。 ▪ 推荐理由使用了 非谓语动词，句 子简短但是属于 难句。 ▪ 推荐理由充足，有 合理性和说服力。 ▪ 文章通常以第一 人称为主，兼顾 第三人称。 ▪ 时态以一般现在 时和一般将来时 为主。 Dear Mike, ( 获悉 ) that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to ( 推荐一门网络课程 ), Festivals in China. ( 定 于 ) take place every Saturday afternoon this term, the course covers ( 不同话题 ) of traditional Chinese festivals, ( 范 围 从 …… 到 ……) their origins to distinct features. I’m sure that you will find the course ( 非 常 有 趣 ). To attend it, you have to register at our school’s website. The teachers will ( 联系 ) you in 24 hours. Wish you good luck! Yours, Li Hua 新高中英语写作满分素材 22 bicycle.” ( 现在分词作状语表示原因 ) ② Deeply touched, I felt tears of gratitude filling my eyes. ( 形容词作状语表示原因 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① Actually ② employed/applied ③ represents ④ mankind ⑤ crucial 模板背诵 Dear Jerry, Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to recommend to you our school’s online course Appreciation of Traditional Chinese Opera. The course, which aims to bring authentic traditional Chinese opera for students both at home and abroad, is scheduled to be available in September on our school website, which will get updated every Monday morning. In this course, you will get to know the history and various types of Chinese opera, which are all of unique characteristics. Kunqu Opera, for example, is well-known for its poetic language and delicate movements. Moreover, it will introduce the music in opera, which is usually accompanied by traditional Chinese instruments like erhu. The most attractive part, in my opinion, is the fancy costumes and makeup. In a word, the course is a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of traditional Chinese culture. I do hope my recommendation can be of help. Yours, Li Hua 技能小练 第一组： ① so strong that ② Seeing (that) the man; ran away ③ At the sight of/On seeing; fled away 第二组： ① enjoy wandering; which makes ② Wandering Week 8 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 A Beautiful Place in China Sichuan Province ais located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous bplaces of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. cWhat is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more, walking in the nature reserve, you dhave a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It edates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it fis still playing an important part in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语料亮点 Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua, a boy aged 18. aI feel honored to apply for a position to be a volunteer, getting across the common sense of first aid. Firstly, I bhave a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors. They once taught 答案全解全析 23 me how to perform first aid. cWhat’s more, I am easy-going and good at communicating with others, which guarantees me to be of help. Last but not least, dthanks to the constant exercise and body building, I am in good condition. On the whole, I am qualified to be a volunteer. eI hope to help out people in need and reward our society as soon as possible. Looking forward to your earliest reply. Yours truly, Li Hua ① 表达推荐自己的目的是能够成为一名志愿者。 ② 第一条理由虽然简短，但是使用了短语 have a good knowledge of...。 ③ 进一步解释自己的性格适合这份工作，这里是 内因，且非限制性定语从句语气也很坚定。 ④ 第三条理由中的 in good condition 比 healthy 更 高级。 ⑤ 再次强调自己想当志愿者的原因，主题得到了 升华。 Writing 2 审题谋篇 语篇类型 推荐信 人称 第三人称、第一人称 时态 一般现在时 结构 ①首段：明确推荐电影名称 ②主体段落：详细解释电影及推荐理由 ③尾段：希望推荐能被接受 语料亮点 Dear Peter, aLearning you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites. The Wandering Earth Ⅱ, bwhich was released during the Spring Festival, is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu and Andy Lau. cWhat appeals to me are the grand scenes and touching plots. dFaced with the solar crisis, the Chinese government and scientists shoulder the responsibility of protecting the earth, making joint efforts to keep human civilization alive. The presented advanced technologies also impressed me and filled me with pride. eI strongly recommend you to enjoy the film which won’t let you down. Yours, Li Hua ① 现在分词作状语表示原因，本句也点明主题是 分享最喜欢的电影。 ② 使用非限制性定语从句解释电影，句中的 release 也是高难词汇。 ③ 使用“What appeals to me are”解释原因使语言 更有层次感。 ④ 使用形容词作状语表示让步，句中的“crisis”、 “responsibility”和“civilization”都是高难词汇。 ⑤ 再次表达推荐的原因和意愿。 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） Writing 1 思路点拨 文章主题 人际关系 原文大意 作者和邻居萨拉一开始对附近来的两个年轻 人感到排斥和轻视，直到后来见到他们主动 帮助斯温太太割草，这改变了作者和邻居对 他们的看法，并且明白了永远不要因为别人 的外表、穿着或声音不同而对他们进行评判。 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段描写两个年轻 人帮斯温太太割草的经过。 ②根据第二段首句可知，本段描写萨拉和作 者向他们道歉以及年轻人给出的回复。 叙事线索 认真地点了点头→转身向房子走去→拿出割 草机帮忙割草→后悔误解了那两位好心的人 →向他们道歉→感悟 高分范文 Paragraph 1: The young man and his friend quickly made eye contact and nodded seriously. Then they turned and walked back toward the house. Just then, Mrs. Swain’s eyes widened in surprise, and we followed her gaze. The two young men were hurrying across the street, one pushing an old lawn mower and the other carrying a weed eater. Without a word, they worked to cut Mrs. Swain’s grass. In silence, we knew we’d made a big, embarrassing, and silly mistake. We regretted misunderstanding the two kind men, and just stood there awkwardly. 新高中英语写作满分素材 24 Paragraph 2: After they finished the work, Sara and I walked in shame to apologize for judging them. “Forgive us for being rude,” we said. They just humorously replied with a joke to get us out of our guilt. Later, Mrs. Swain carried juice and homemade cookies to the tired men. Mrs. Swain thanked them and offered to pay them. But one man smiled, “We’ll keep your grass cut if you keep making juice and cookies for us.” That day, we learned a lesson. Never pass judgment on people because they don’t look, dress, or sound like you. They may be much better people than you are. (167 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① then/and then/just then 然后 / 就在那时 ② widen their eyes in surprise/feel surprised 惊得瞪 大眼睛 / 感觉吃惊 ③ make a big/an embarrassing/a silly mistake 犯了大 的 / 尴尬的 / 愚蠢的错误 ④ later/soon/after that 后来 / 很快 / 在那之后 ⑤ learn a lesson/understand/realize 得到了一个教训 / 理解 / 意识到 满分句式 ① The two young men were hurrying across the street, one pushing an old lawn mower and the other carrying a weed eater. ( 运用了独立主格结构 ) ② They just humorously replied with a joke to get us out of our guilt. ( 不定式作状语表示出乎意料的 结果 ) Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） Writing 2 思路点拨 文章主题 家庭生活 原文大意 作者八九岁的时候写了一首小诗，这首诗得 到了母亲的高度评价，作者也希望得到父亲 的赞扬。父亲回来后，花了很长时间来看这 首诗，作者甚至能听到父亲把诗扔回桌上的 声音。 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段描写父亲对作 者写的诗的评价以及作者对此的反应。 ②根据第二段首句可知，本段描作者对于写 诗这件事情的感悟。 叙事线索 父亲的评价→作者的反应→多年之后作者对 于父亲对自己诗的评价的认可→感悟 构思 第一段 爸爸说诗很糟糕 泪眼婆娑我很伤心 爸妈因我而争辩 我受不了失望痛哭 第二段 理解父亲的判断 我承认诗歌很糟糕 越挫越勇终成功 赞美怀疑原都是爱 高分范文 Paragraph 1: Now came the moment of decision. “I think it’s terrible,” he said. I couldn’t look up. My eyes were getting wet. “Ben, sometimes I don’t understand you,” my mother was saying. “This is just a little boy. These are the first lines of poetry he’s ever written. He needs encouragement.” “No one says Buddy has to become a poet,” my father held his ground. My father’s words hit me over the heart like a hard fist. I couldn’t stand it another second. I ran from the dining room up to my room, threw myself on the bed and cried the worst of the disappointment out of me. Paragraph 2: A few years later I took a second look at the first poem, and I had to agree with my father’s judgment. It was a pretty terrible poem. As I worked my way into other books and plays and films, it became clearer and clearer to me how fortunate I had been. I have an encouraging mother and a discouraging father. In fact, every one of us in life needs that mother force and father force. Between the two poles of praise and doubt, both in the name of love, I try to follow my true course. (178 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① get wet/get sad（眼睛）变得湿润 / 变得难过 ② hit sb. over the heart/make sb. discouraged 砸在某 人心口 / 使某人大受打击 ③ shake one’s head/disagree 摇头 / 不同意 ④ in the name of love/for love 以爱之名 满分句式 ① My father’s words hit me over the heart like a hard fist. ( 比喻的修辞手法） 答案全解全析 25 ② As I worked my way into other books and plays and films, it became clearer and clearer to me how fortunate I had been. (as 引导时间状语从句；it 作 形式主语，how 引导真正主语从句 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① attach great importance to ② develop/foster your interest in ③ A wide variety of ④ exchange your experiences with others ⑤ get improved ⑥ be of benefit to/be beneficial to 模板背诵 Dear Mike, Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to recommend an online course, Festivals in China. Scheduled to take place every Saturday afternoon this term, the course covers various topics of traditional Chinese festivals, ranging from their origins to distinct features. I’m sure that you will find the course more than entertaining. To attend it, you have to register at our school’s website. The teachers will get in touch with you in 24 hours. Wish you good luck! Yours, Li Hua 技能小练 第一组： ① embraced ② held ③ gathered 第二组： ① an awkward hug ② embraced ③ hugging Week 9 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 Dear Henry, How is everything going these days? aI’m writing to seek help from you. While preparing to attend MUN next week, I have some difficulty with concepts and expressions of the current affairs and speech skills. I’m wondering if I could borrow your Dictionary of English Media. bFurthermore, I’m at a loss how to make my speech convincing and persuasive. Could you be so kind as to offer me some advice? cI’d appreciate it if you could spare some time to give me face-to-face instructions. Yours, Li Hua Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语篇类型 求助信 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时、一般将来时 结构 首段：表明身份，解释求助原因 主体段落：由个人到现象，给出细节 尾段：感谢人类，表达愿望 语料亮点 Dear Humans, I’m a polar bear, your big and white friend in the north. aFaced with/Facing the challenge of losing precious ice land, I am writing to ask you for some ways out. bWith the development of industry and cities, climate has been worsening. cAs the planet warms, it becomes harder for us to get food. Thus, recent years have witnessed many of my peers’ death. The loss of our species is the loss of yours. dI sincerely beg for your immediate action to protect our common home — the Earth. eOnly if you take strong measures, can wild animals, like me, be preserved and it is not until then that we will make a better home together. Thanks for reading and looking forward to your giving me a hand! Your forever friend, a polar bear ① 使用非谓语动词结构作原因状语解释原因，使 用现在进行时强调正在等待人类的帮助。