Week 7 应用文写作(回复信)&读后续写-新高中英语写作满分素材

67 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）&读后续写 Monday 晨读晚练 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）& 读后续写 A response letter is written as an answer to a previous message. It could follow a payment request, complaint, customer review, job offer, and many more. Generally, the nature of the letter will depend on the initial message. Before writing a response letter, you should analyze the situation. Answer all the questions, address any concerns, and offer solutions to problems raised in the first letter. To ensure your response letter is appropriate, here are some steps: ▷ Identify your recipient: Include the full name and address of the recipient of the letter. This is a way of acknowledging that you received their inquiry. ▷ Answer the question: Mention the nature of the recipient’s query. Was it a question, comment, request, or complaint? Depending on the answer, address the matter at hand. ▷ Provide specific information: Outline details that’ll help solve the reader’s problem. Be short and to the point. If you’re addressing several topics, use bullet points, and organize your data. ▷Provide contact information: Invite the reader to ask any further questions or reach out to you in the future. Include your phone number or email address. ▷Close the letter: End your message with a positive and formal emotion. Include your full name, job title, and signature at the bottom. 美文晨读 一周之计 ▷（成大原创） How to Write a Response Letter 美文撷英 ① Now I want to tell you something about my College Entrance Examination. ② As you know, in order to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese, you should... Sample: A Response Letter Dear..., I’m pleased to hear that you’re interested in our school’s psychology club. As the president of the club, I’d like to provide you with some information. Our club aims to promote mental health awareness among students and provide support to those struggling with mental health issues. Recently, we organized a workshop on stress management, which was attended by over 60 students. Facilitated by a professional psychologist who provided practical tips and techniques for managing stress, the workshop lasted for two hours. The workshop had a positive impact on the participants, as many of them reported feeling more equipped to handle stress after the session. I hope the information is helpful to you. Sincerely, Li Hua 新高中英语写作满分素材 68 仿写借鉴 范文晚练 满分范文 亮点解析 (2021 年天津卷改编 ) 假如你是晨光中学的 李津。你在英国游学期间曾 寄宿在英国学生 Chris 家， 他母亲 Nancy 通过电子邮件 祝贺你顺利完成高中学业， 并询问你将如何安排高中 最后一个假期。请你用英 语回复，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢并问候； 2. 计划与家人一起做 的事情； 3. 你决定选择哪个专 业，为学好该专业做何准备。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 Dear Nancy, ( 完成第一个要点 ) I am very glad to receive your e-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. 动 词 -ing 形式作宾语 And wish you all the best. ( 详 细 解 释 第 二、 三 个 要 点 ) Now that I have finished my high school studies, 原因状语从句 my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I’m going to Tian’anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. 不 定式作目的状语 I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal will we succeed. 倒装句 Yours, Li Jin 假定你是李华，你的 英国笔友 Margaux 写信向你 询问如何平衡学习和摄影 爱好之间的关系。请你给 他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 告知收到来信，得 知情况； 2. 给出合理建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相 应位置作答。 Dear Margaux, I heard that you love photography but ① ( 一直在努力 ) balance your study with pursuing your interests. I’m glad to ② ( 提供我的建议 )! First of all, you’d better prioritize your time. ③ ( 列清 单 ) all the things that you need to do, assign each task ④ ( 按 照 重 要 性 的 顺 序 ). Additionally, schedule blocks of time for study and photography. Lastly, take a good rest. ⑤ ( 有了这些小贴 士 ), you can find a balance which will allow you time for your classes, hobbies and rest. I wish my suggestions would ⑥ ( 会很有帮助 ) you. Yours, Li Hua 回复信 一般现在时，一般将来时 第一人称为主，第二人称为辅 正式回复：用字遣词要雕琢，表达委婉重礼仪 非正式回复：言简意赅要效率，无须担心说错话 首段：写信背景，活动目的 主体：活动内容，逐步介绍 尾段：活动感受，期待回复 时态 人称 特点 结构 回复信 69 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）&读后续写 Tuesday 满分素材 满分语料 重在积累 满分词汇 单词： ① concern/worry/anxiety 担心 / 焦虑 ② relaxed/relieved 放松的 ③ inform/remind 通知 / 提醒 ④ hesitate/wonder 犹豫 / 疑惑 短语： ① in response to/respond to 回应 ② as for/as to 关于 / 至于 ③ contact/get in touch with 联系 ④ hear from sb./receive a letter from sb. 收 到 某人来信 ⑤ share sth. with sb. 与某人分享 吸睛开头句 ① Learning you are enthusiastic about..., I’m delighted to share with you some details. 得 知你对……很感兴趣，我很高兴告诉你一 些细节。 ② As for your last letter asking about the... program, I’d like to share with you the arrangements in detail. 对于你上封信中问 及的……项目的事情，我想告诉你一些具 体的安排。 ③ Delighted to have received your letter, in which you are deeply fascinated by..., I’m writing to give you a brief introduction. 很高 兴收到你的来信，在信中你对……有浓厚 的兴趣，我写信向你简单介绍。 ④ I’m more than pleased to have received your email, saying what appeals to you most is... Now I can’t wait to share what I know about it with you. 很高兴收到你的邮件，你说你 最喜欢的是……现在我迫不及待地想和你 讲述我了解的情况。 ⑤ Here is some relevant information that you are deeply concerned about. 下面是你非常 关心的相关信息。 高光篇中句 ① Aimed at promoting..., the exhibition was held in the local museum last Sunday. 为 了 弘扬……，该展览于上周日在当地博物馆 举行。 ② At 10 a.m. we were shown around the art center, where we appreciated various artworks created by famous artists. 上 午 10 点我们参观了艺术中心，在那里我们欣赏 了著名艺术家创造的各种艺术作品。 ③ Books on this topic are available online, w h i c h m a y g i v e y o u m o r e s p e c i f i c explanation. 关于这个主题的书籍网上有， 也许会给你一个更具体的解释。 ④ Not only was the activity a fabulous feast for the eyes but it also inspired us to work harder. 这次活动不仅是一场视觉盛宴，也 激励我们更加努力地工作。 ⑤ The activity did offer us a golden opportunity to have a taste of the most advanced technology. 这次活动确实给我们提供了一 次体验最先进技术的绝佳机会。 精彩结尾句 ① If you want to know anything else please don’t hesitate to contact me. 你如果想知道 其他事情，请尽管联系我。 ② Hope what is said above can give you a better understanding of traditional... 希望以上内容 能让你更好地了解传统的…… 新高中英语写作满分素材 70 Wednesday 考场作文 读后续写微技能 7：设计故事情节 (2021 年浙江卷改编 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使 之构成一个完整的故事。 My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses. I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass( 超 过 ) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation. Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone( 长 号 ). The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to. At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished. My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为 你写好。 Paragraph 1: The pay arrived at last. Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. 好题探究 最佳素材 合理的故事情节决定着读后续写作文质量的高低。如何准确解读文本，构思出合理的 情节，续写出与原文逻辑衔接合理、融洽度高的情节呢？ 可以按照以下步骤： 1. 先读懂，后动笔： 理解原文是表达自我的前提，必须理清已知条件和隐 藏信息后再动笔。 2. 先想好故事主题，后创造情节内容： 主题是故事的灵魂，是控制故事情节发展的大方向。 3. 先描述故事的主角，后补充配角的内容： 动笔前先确定叙述的故事主角，接下来的内容都是围绕 主角展开。除非提示句增加了人物，否则不要自己乱加。 4. 先想好故事结局，后反向设置过程： 从故事终点倒推，反向设计故事情节，是保障故事内 容不脱轨的有效方法。 5. 先保障行文通畅，后考虑高级表达： 讲故事是续写的核心任务。生僻的高级表达往往造成 理解障碍，要注意避免使用连阅卷教师都不熟悉的细 节描写。 6. 先保障故事情节的合情合理，后考虑“天马行空” 的创新思维： 合情，就是符合人之常情。合理，就是有行文逻辑， 前后呼应。续写要讲究“铺平垫稳”，草蛇灰线，伏 脉千里。 71 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）&读后续写 完美续写 天衣无缝 第一步：读懂原文明确大意 总结三个基础 原文大意 作者爸爸 14 岁就开始工作挣钱了，但作者相信自己会超越他。那年夏天作者被雇去农 场干活，爸爸的话让作者很担心，自己的收入可能要上交家庭，作者觉得非常不公平。 STEP S Setting (Para. 1—2) Dad earned money at 14 but I believed I would surpass him without understanding him fully. P Plot (Para. 6) Extra work meant more income but I felt unfair to work for my family. T Theme (Para. 3—4) That summer was busy because I was employed to work on a farm. E Emotion (Para. 5) Dad’s words made me worried because my income may not belong to me. 三个基础（SUM） ★语篇类型：记叙文 ★人称：第一人称 ★时态：一般过去时 ★主题：“人与自我”—— 家庭生活 ★主角：Dad, I ★I couldn’t understand Dad who just knew work for the family. ★I had a chance to work but I felt unfair to contribute my money. ★Figure out what would happen after I got paid! Structure Underline Mission 第二步：根据续写段提示句 确定续写方向 构思 第一段 第二段 确定提示句关键词 情节发展有理有据 确定提示句关键词 首尾呼应水到渠成 起初高兴有付出有回报 (要点�) 忘记辛苦计划如何花钱 爸爸询问收入我拒绝说 (要点�) 见父亲开车我心有所想 (要点�) understood parents worried about 理解父母担心我变得自私 (要点�) 理解我的劳动和父母的辛勤劳作相比不可同日而语 理解成长来自父母的无私 (要点�) 爸爸回来我把收入递给他 (要点�) pay arrived 新高中英语写作满分素材 72 第三步：结合框架添加细节 完美表达浑然一体 ① 解释虽然感觉辛 苦但是还是很高 兴， 句 中 for 是 连词，起到补充 说明的作用。 ② 此处是心理活动， 解 释 自 己 的 小 九九，强调自己 支配收入。 ③ 对父亲的问题不 情愿回答，与父 亲年轻时主动养 家形成巨大的反 差。 ④ 结合第二段首句 可知本段尾句强 调某件事触动了 作者。 ⑤ 本句完美衔接本 段段首句，作者 明白了什么道理。 ⑥ 进一步解释父母 为家庭的付出。 ⑦ 强调父亲的不抱 怨，和自己形成 鲜明对比。 ⑧ 从开始的不情愿 到情愿上交收入， 说明作者真正长 大了。 Paragraph 1: The pay arrived at last. Although the job was very tiring, aI was very happy in my heart for I got something from my work. The tiredness of labor was forgotten for the time being. I thought bI should have my own money and planned how to spend it. “How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. cI was surprised, reluctant to say my income. The next morning, my dad’s livestock truck started running. dI saw my father’s hard-working figure and thought of his words “A job’s a big step to growing up”. Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. eThey were worried that I was too selfish to give. I realized that my labor was very hard, fbut my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! gDad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to think that was fair. I thought, “I’ve only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, Dad came back. hI proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad. (170 words) 73 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）&读后续写 Thursday 实战演练（Ⅰ） 应用文写作 回复信 Writing 1 (2023 届湖北名校联考 ) 假定你是中学生李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 给你发来邮件。请你根据邮件内容给他写一封 回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m interested in your school’s online course on Chinese folk music. I just want to know more about it. How long does it last and how much do I need to pay? What about the teachers? How can I apply for it? And do you have any other suggestions? Thank you! Jim 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） Writing 2 (2023 届重庆三模 ) 假定你是学生李华，你的南非朋友 Louis 对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣，希望你能给他 推荐其中的一部。请你用英语给 Louis 回信，内容包括： 1. 简要介绍一本名著； 2. 说明你推荐的理由。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms 《水浒传》Water Margin 《西游记》Journey to the West 《红楼梦》A Dream of Red Mansions Dear Louis, Yours, Li Hua （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） 新高中英语写作满分素材 74 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） 读后续写 Writing 1 (2023 届福建厦门三模 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was the longest heatwave anyone could remember, and Sebastian couldn’t wait to cool off at the beach with his dad. Before heading out of town, they stopped at the library and dropped off a few books. Sebastian noticed a crew working on the library roof. He asked Dad what they were doing. Dad explained that they were repairing the roof, a difficult job he had done himself for a few years. It was then that an idea flashed into Sebastian’s head: I bet they could use some water. But the idea disappeared just as quickly as the scenery passing by his window, and his thoughts turned to swimming. The waves were perfect for bodyboarding, and a sea breeze cooled the air. But all too soon they were headed home, back to the heat. Sebastian was half listening to the radio when the DJ gave the weather report, “The record-breaking heat will continue throughout the afternoon,” she said. “If you have to be outside, remember to hydrate( 补水 ) and stay in the shade.” When they drove by the library, the roofers were still working and the sun was beating down on them. Sebastian wondered whether they had enough water. Sebastian had just finished two weeks of soccer camp, and even with frequent water breaks, it had been miserably hot. It made him think again about taking some water to the roofers. So he shared the idea with his brother, Marcos. Marcos shrugged. “You don’t even know those guys. They’ve probably gone home already anyway.” Maybe Marcos was right. Sebastian walked to the end of his driveway, where he could get a view of the library. But the roofers were still there, and the sun was still broiling( 酷热 ). Sebastian didn’t see any coolers or jugs anywhere. Then he told Dad, “I really think they need some water.” A look of concern came over Dad’s face. He picked up his car keys, saying “I think you’re right. It’s only going to get hotter.” 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右 ; 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Sebastian stuffed a bag with water bottles and got into the car with his dad. Paragraph 2: “It was all his idea,” Dad smiled, nodding at Sebastian. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 75 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）&读后续写 Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） 读后续写 Writing 2 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 The Bicycle When I was nine I needed to earn some money, so I asked Mr. Miceli, the newspaper publisher in my Chicago neighborhood, about an after-school paper route. He agreed only if I had a bicycle. My dad bought me a used bike, but right after that he fell ill and couldn’t teach me to ride. Mr. Miceli, however, merely asked to see the bike. So I walked to his garage, showed it to him and got the job. At first, I filled my delivery bag with rolled papers over the handlebars and walked my bike down the sidewalks. But pushing a bike with a load of papers was awkward; after a few days I borrowed Mom’s two-wheeled shopping cart. It took me longer to make my deliveries by cart, but I didn’t mind. I sent each paper to its proper destination. In rain or snow, I put Dad’s old raincoat over the cart to keep the papers dry. I got to meet everyone in the neighborhood — working-class people of Italian, German or Polish origins who were invariably kind to me. When Dad returned from the hospital, he was too weak to resume his original job. Now we needed every penny we could raise to pay bills, so we sold the bike. Mr. Miceli must have known I wasn’t using a bike, but he said nothing about it to me. On the Thursday evening before Christmas, 1951, I rang my first customer’s doorbell. Even though the lights were on, nobody answered, so I went on to the next house. No answer, nor did anyone respond at the next family on my route, or the one after. I was very worried; I had to pay for my papers every Friday. And while it was almost Christmas, I never thought that everyone would be out shopping. So I was very happy when, going up the walkway to Mr. Gordon’s house, I heard music and voices. I rang the bell. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: The door flew open, and Mr. Gordon dragged me inside. Paragraph 2: After walking the bicycle home, I opened those envelopes. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 新高中英语写作满分素材 76 Sunday 语篇提升 提分技法 妙招锦囊 高级词汇 ☆形容词： ①贫穷的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken ②富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off ③优秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding ④明显的：obvious = apparent = evident = manifest ⑤惊人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous ☆动词： ①提高；加强：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize ②解决：solve = resolve = address = tackle ③培养：develop = cultivate = foster = nurture ④激发；鼓励：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur ⑤完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish = achieve ☆名词： ①幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being ②责任：responsibility = obligation = duty = liability ③优点：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue ④娱乐：enjoyment = pastimes = recreation = entertainment ⑤能力：ability = capacity = power = skill (2023 届广东江门模拟 ) 假定你是李华，你的笔友 Tom 来信和你讨论他对太空探索的看法，他认为花巨资探索 太空是没有必要的，请你据此给他写一封回信。内容包括： 1. 你对他的观点的看法； 2. 你对太空探索的看法和理由。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I have known your ideas about exploring space. I didn’t agree that exploring space is a waste of time and money. ① ( 事实上 ), it’s more important than you can imagine. The space technology can help to improve the techniques in other fields. With the help of satellites, GPS is widely ② ( 应 用 ) all over the world. Besides, space technology ③ ( 代表 ) a country’s scientific and technological level. Last but not least, exploring space helps us to think the future of ④ ( 人类 ). In short, exploring space is so ⑤ ( 至关重要 ) that we should continue this great project. Yours, Li Hua 提分臻题 妙法巧用 77 Week 7 应用文写作（回复信）&读后续写 动作描写（3）：“走”的动作 “走”是人司空见惯的动作。“走”是一个常用的动词，它可以表示人或物体的移动， 也可以表示某种行为的实施。悠闲的“走”表达的是从容；大步流星稳健的“走”表达的 是自信；急促的“走”表达的是迫切；徘徊的“走”表达的是犹疑不决；蹒跚的“走”除 了暗示年龄，也能透露人物的内心摇摆不定。 第一组：看到面前的男士那么强壮，那个老人惊慌失措地逃走了。 ☆概括描写： The elderly man saw the strong man in front. He escaped with great panic. ▷细节描述： ① The elderly man saw that the man in front was he escaped with great panic. ( 结果状语从句 ) ② in front of him was so strong, the elderly man with great panic. ( 非谓语动词；动词短语 ) ③ the strong man in front, the elderly man with great panic. ( 介词 短语；动词短语 ) 第二组：他们喜欢在乡间漫步，这让他们放松也让他们更健康。 ☆概括描写： They like walking over the countryside. It makes them relaxed and healthier. ▷细节描述： ① They over the countryside, them relaxed and healthier. ( 同义动词；非限制性定语从句 ) ② over the countryside makes them feel relaxed and healthier, so they like it. ( 动词 -ing 形式作主语 ) 技能小练 增色续写 模板背诵 内化所学 ▪ 知晓回复信的本 质是对已知信息 的回应和对未知 信息的解释。 ▪ 已知对方提出的 要求，回复对方 想知道的主题的 关键信息时要详 略得当，尤其是 根据对方的身份 和与自己之间关 系选择措辞。 ▪ 回复解释详细， 娓娓道来，让对 方有了解更多的 欲望。 ▪ 文章以第三人称 为主。 ▪ 时态以一般现在 时为主。 Dear Jerry, Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to ( 推 荐 给 你 ) our school’s online course Appreciation of Traditional Chinese Opera. The course, which ( 旨在带来 ) authentic traditional Chinese opera for students both at home and abroad, ( 按 计 划 ) be available in September on our school website, which will ( 更 新 ) every Monday morning. In this course, you will get to know the history and various types of Chinese opera, which are all ( 各具风 格 ). Kunqu Opera, for example, is well-known for its poetic language and delicate movements. Moreover, it will introduce the music in opera, which is usually ( 伴奏 ) traditional Chinese instruments like erhu. The most attractive part, in my opinion, is the fancy costumes and makeup. ( 总之 ), the course is a good chance for you to ( 加深理解 ) of traditional Chinese culture. I do hope my recommendation can be of help. Yours, Li Hua 答案全解全析 19 considerate Renae took her new Chloe to the vet to be scanned. Sure enough, she also had a microchip. The numbers were a match. So Renae felt like she’d won the lottery. After years of thinking she would never see her dog again, Renae is overjoyed to have her back and promised to be responsible for her future. She got so excited to come home. As for Chloe, she’s made herself right at home. She knows that she’ll be with Renae forever. (171 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① be loyal/faithful/committed/devoted to 对……忠诚 ② caring/sympathetic/compassionate 有同情心的 ③ be confident in 对……自信 ④ considerate/understanding/thoughtful 考虑周到的 ⑤ be responsible for/take responsibility for 对……负 责任 满分句式 ① She ran up to Renae and started licking her face. (连 续动词 ) ② Chloe reminded Renae so much of her old dog that the emotion overwhelmed her. (so... that... 引导结 果状语从句 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① next Friday afternoon ② To start with ③ Following ④ end with 模板背诵 Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now? I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. Yours, Li Hua 技能小练： 第一组： ① with eager eyes ② was staring eagerly at ③ fixed/concentrated/focused on 第二组： ① widened with horror ② Seeing what she did ③ with eyes widely open Week 7 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 Dear Margaux, I heard that you love photography but ahave been struggling to balance your study with pursuing your interests. I’m glad to boffer my advice! First of all, you’d better prioritize your time. cMake a list of all the things that you need to do, assign each task din order of importance. Additionally, schedule blocks of time for study and photography. Lastly, take a good rest. eWith these tips, you can find a balance which will allow you time for your classes, hobbies and rest. I wish my suggestions would fbe of some help to you. Yours, Li Hua Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语料亮点 Dear Jim, I am glad to ahear that you’re interested in our 新高中英语写作满分素材 20 school’s online course on Chinese folk music! The course bwhich offers a series of classes from July 10 to July 25 lasts for 12 weeks. The teachers are all professional musicians cwith rich experience in teaching. They are dso willing to help that if you have any difficulty, you can consult them via the Internet. The fee of the course is 2,000 yuan. Is it suitable for you? eTo apply for the course, you need to fill in an online application form on our school’s website. Hope this information helps! fIf you have any further questions, don’t hesitate to ask. Yours, Li Hua ① 礼貌表达已经了解对方感兴趣的话题。 ② 使用定语从句解释课程的时间信息。 ③ 使用介词短语作定语解释参与音乐课程的专业 人士的优势。 ④ 使用“so... that...”介绍这些专家们的热情指导； 使用条件状语从句假设可能发生的情况会得到 及时解决。 ⑤ 使用不定式作目的状语强调对方应该如何申请。 ⑥乐于帮助对方的表达热情而不失礼貌。 Writing 2 审题谋篇 语篇类型 回复信 ( 推荐信 ) 人称 第一人称、第三人称 时态 一般现在时 结构 ①首段：知道对方兴趣，给出推荐图书 ②主体段落：详细解释图书并做评价 ③尾段：得出结论值得一读，表达希望 语料亮点 Dear Louis, I’m glad you’re fond of our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels. aI will recommend Journey to the West to you at your request. Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples bwho go to India for Buddhist scriptures. During their journey, they cbravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters. This book is dnot only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage. In our daily life, ewe’re bound to meet with all kinds of challenges and we should be brave and never give up, too. fThe book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it. Yours, Li Hua ① 首段给出所推荐的图书数目，尤其强调“根据 你的要求”，以与题目吻合。 ② 使用定语从句解释师徒四人的任务。 ③ 使用简单的表达解释了“降妖除魔”这四个汉字， 且副词的使用使得描述更加生动。 ④ 使用“not only... but also...”评价该书的特点， 尤其是从精神方面给予强调。 ⑤ 将图书与现实结合更具说服力。 ⑥ 得出结论该书值得一读。 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） Writing 1 思路点拨 文章主题 优秀品质 原文大意 大热天 Sebastian 和爸爸一起去海滩上避暑， 途径图书馆时 Sebastian 注意到有工人在图书 馆屋顶上工作，他认为天气很热，工人们会需 要一些水。回来的路上，他看到工人仍在工作， 他想给他们送一些水，爸爸同意他的想法。 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段可描写 Sebastian 给工人们送水的过程及工人们的反应。 ②根据第二段首句可知，本段可描写经过这 件事后，Sebastian 的感受。 叙事线索 给工人们送水→工人们的反应→工人们表示 感谢→ Sebastian 和父亲离开→ Sebastian 的 感受 高分范文 Paragraph 1: Sebastian stuffed a bag with water bottles and got into the car with his dad. As they drove to the library, Sebastian nervously approached the roofers and offered the water. A man got down the ladder and held the bag open for the others to see, signaling them to come into the shade for a water break. The hardworking roofers looked surprised but grateful. As they passed around the bottles and opened them, one sensible crew member asked, “How do you guys know 答案全解全析 21 we have run out of water?” Paragraph 2: “It was all his idea,” Dad smiled, nodding at Sebastian. Selfless Sebastian didn’t know how to respond. But the crew’s smiles said it all. Having finished their water, the roofers put the empty bottles back into the bag. They thanked Sebastian and his dad again and waved them goodbye as they drove away. Arriving home, Dad praised Sebastian for his kindheartedness. A simple act made generous Sebastian feel good. He tossed the empties into the recycling bin. Then he poured two big glasses of cold water, one for himself and one for his dad. (158 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① hardworking/diligent/painstaking 勤奋的 ② sensible/reasonable 通情达理的 ③ unselfish/selfless 无私的 ④ kindheartedness/kindness 善良 ⑤ generous/handsome 慷慨的 满分句式 ① A man got down the ladder and held the bag open for the others to see, signaling them to come into the shade for a water break. ( 现在分词作状语表示 伴随 ) ② Having finished their water, the roofers put the empty bottles back into the bag. ( 现在分词的完成 形式表示动作先发生 ) Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） Writing 2 思路点拨 文章主题 家庭生活 原文大意 作者儿时通过送报纸来挣钱补贴家用，但由 于父亲突发疾病，不得不卖掉了作者送报纸 用的自行车。后来邻居们自发为他买了一辆 自行车作为圣诞节的礼物来感谢作者每日送 报纸的辛劳。 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段描写作者进去 之后看到的景象及感想。 ②根据第二段首句可知，本段描写信件的具 体内容及作者的感悟。 叙事线索 被戈登先生拖进去→邻居们送自行车→感动 →回家看信→邻居的善意继续→感悟 构思 第一段 屋里全是我的订户，正中是辆新自行 车 戈登解释是礼物，我被感动泪流满面 第二段 信封里面满是爱，贺卡订阅费和小费 Miceli 教我骑车，还给增加送报线路 高分范文 Paragraph 1: The door flew open, and Mr. Gordon dragged me inside. Jammed in his living room were all my reliable subscribers! In the center of the room, I saw a new bicycle, a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar. “A Christmas present for our most strong-willed paperboy!” Mr. Gordon said. Sensing my confusion, he continued, “We’ve all seen you in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart, so we suppose you ought to have a bicycle.” Deeply touched, I felt tears of gratitude filling my eyes. Paragraph 2: After walking the bicycle home, I opened those envelopes. They held Christmas cards from every subscriber, along with their subscription fees and tips. Kindness did not end there, though. The next day, when I got to Mr. Miceli’s garage, the energetic man was waiting outside. “Bring your bike tomorrow morning, and I’ll teach you to ride,” he offered. When I felt comfortable on a bike, Mr. Miceli asked me to deliver a second route. Delivering both routes on my new bike, I really appreciated the kind Chicagoans’ love and support. (161 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① reliable/dependable 可靠的 ② strong/strong-willed 意志坚强的 ③ energetic/dynamic 精力充沛的 满分句式 ① Sensing my confusion, he continued, “We’ve all seen you in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart, so we suppose you ought to have a 新高中英语写作满分素材 22 bicycle.” ( 现在分词作状语表示原因 ) ② Deeply touched, I felt tears of gratitude filling my eyes. ( 形容词作状语表示原因 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① Actually ② employed/applied ③ represents ④ mankind ⑤ crucial 模板背诵 Dear Jerry, Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to recommend to you our school’s online course Appreciation of Traditional Chinese Opera. The course, which aims to bring authentic traditional Chinese opera for students both at home and abroad, is scheduled to be available in September on our school website, which will get updated every Monday morning. In this course, you will get to know the history and various types of Chinese opera, which are all of unique characteristics. Kunqu Opera, for example, is well-known for its poetic language and delicate movements. Moreover, it will introduce the music in opera, which is usually accompanied by traditional Chinese instruments like erhu. The most attractive part, in my opinion, is the fancy costumes and makeup. In a word, the course is a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of traditional Chinese culture. I do hope my recommendation can be of help. Yours, Li Hua 技能小练 第一组： ① so strong that ② Seeing (that) the man; ran away ③ At the sight of/On seeing; fled away 第二组： ① enjoy wandering; which makes ② Wandering Week 8 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 A Beautiful Place in China Sichuan Province ais located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous bplaces of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. cWhat is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more, walking in the nature reserve, you dhave a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It edates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it fis still playing an important part in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语料亮点 Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua, a boy aged 18. aI feel honored to apply for a position to be a volunteer, getting across the common sense of first aid. Firstly, I bhave a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors. They once taught