Week 4 应用文写作(邀请信)&读后续写-新高中英语写作满分素材

新高中英语写作满分素材 34 Monday 晨读晚练 Week 4 应用文写作（邀请信）& 读后续写 The le t t e r ’s body should i n c l u d e t h e i n v i t a t i o n ’s purpose, event details (date, time, and location), and any other relevant information. Be clear, concise, and polite. • Example for a team meeting I i nv i t e you to ou r t eam meeting on June 15, 2023, a t 1 0 : 0 0 a . m . T h e m a i n conference room will be used for the meeting in our office at 123 Main Street. During the meeting, we will discuss the progress of our current projects and bra ins torm ideas fo r future initiatives. Please come prepared with any updates or suggestions you have. K i n d l y c o n f i r m y o u r attendance by June 10, 2023, so we can make the necessary arrangements. • Example for an event We are glad to invite you to our annual fund-raising gala on July 10, 2023, at 7:00 p.m. The event will occur at the Grand Ballroom, 789 Grand Avenue. The evening will feature a three-course dinner, l ive enter ta inment , and a silent auction. All proceeds will support our community programs. Please RSVP by June 30, 2023, to reserve your seat. We look forward to your presence at this special event. Sample Invitation Letter (2022 年新高考Ⅰ & Ⅱ卷 ) Dear Caroline, This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program—Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available this Sunday, I, together with the whole Talk and Talk staff, am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 美文晨读 一周之计 ▷（成大原创） Examples of the Body of an Invitation Letter 美文撷英 ① I sincerely invite you to speak at our upcoming conference on... ② We believe your expertise and insights would be invaluable to our audience, and we are excited to have you on our panel. ③ The conference will focus on the latest trends and innovations in the workplace, and we would like you to share your perspectives on... ④ We believe your experience in... would provide our attendees with a unique and valuable perspective. ⑤ The panel discussion will take place from... to..., and we would appreciate it if you could speak for approximately... minutes. 35 Week 4 应用文写作（邀请信）&读后续写 仿写借鉴 范文晚练 满分范文 亮点解析 (2022 年北京卷 ) 假设你是红星中学高 三学生李华。你打算邀请英 国好友 Jim 为你们班做一次 关于英语写作的线上经验 交流。请你用英文给他写 一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 建议交流的具体内 容及其原因； 2. 交流时间和其他相 关事项。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, How’s everything? ( 直 接 呈 现 邀 请 原 因 ) I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. 不 定 式 作 目 的 状 语 Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay? “疑问词 + 不定式”作介词宾语 ( 介绍交流相关信息 ) The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk. 使用 it 作形式主语，if 引导主语从句句式 ( 表达期待回复的愿望 ) Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua (2022 年 6 月浙江卷 ) 假定你是李华，你校 图书馆新开设 “小组学习 室”，请你给你的留学生 同学 Michael 写一封信，邀 请他一同体验，内容包括： 1. 位置与开放时间； 2. 室内设施和功能。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相 应位置作答。 Dear Michael, Good news! Recently, a newly-furnished section, ① ( 由 8 个小组学习教室构成 ), has been open to us students in our school library. ② ( 位于三楼 ) beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 a.m. till 9 p.m. throughout the weekdays. Those rooms ③ ( 配备有 ) modern electronic facilities, ④ ( 所有都与……相连 ) the Internet. ⑤ ( 对我们真的方便 ) to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it? Early reply ⑥ ( 我们能预定一间 ) for our project. Yours, Li Hua 邀请信 一般现在时，一般将来时 第一人称为主，第二人称为辅 计划安排简洁明白 热情礼貌避免生硬 Para. 1 点明写信目的、活动的时间和地点 Para. 2 突出活动的主题并邀请他参加此次活动 Para. 3 再一次真诚地邀请 ( 必要时请对方确认时间 ) 时态 人称 特点 结构 邀请信 新高中英语写作满分素材 36 Tuesday 满分素材 满分语料 重在积累 满分词汇 单词： ① judge/director/host/ 评委 / 指导 / 主持人 ② honor/honorable 荣耀 / 光荣的 ③ upcoming/coming 即将举行的 / 即将到来的 ④ hold/launch 举办 / 发起 ⑤ arrange/manage 安排 / 管理 短语： ① on behalf of our school 代表我们学校 ② increase the awareness of... 提高……的意识 ③ attract people’s attention to... 引 起 …… 的 关注 ④ enrich one’s mind 丰富一个人的思想 ⑤ show one’s talent 显示一个人的才能 吸睛开头句 ① It’s my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to join us. 非常荣幸地邀请你加 入我们。 ② I wonder if I/we have the honor to invite you to the party. 我想知道我 / 我们是否能有幸 邀请你参加派对。 ③ Knowing that you are fond of..., I am writing to invite you to... 知道你喜欢……，我写信 邀请你去…… ④ On behalf of..., I have the honor to invite you to... 代表……，我很荣幸邀请您参加…… ⑤ I think it would be a good idea if you could participate in... 我想如果你能参加……，那 将是个好主意。 高光篇中句 ① The purpose of the activity is to... 举办活动 的目的是…… ② The activity is in honor of... 这次活动是为 了纪念…… ③ The activity is..., the theme of which is “...”, will be held in... from... to... on... 活动 是……，主题是 “……”，将从……到…… 在……举行。 ④ The following are some details about.../Here are some details about.../Some details about... are as follows. ……的细节如下。 精彩结尾句 ① I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you. 我真心希望你方便 的话能接受我们 / 我的邀请。 ② I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon. 我想在那里见 到你，请尽快告诉我你的决定。 ③ Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to... 你能给我写信告 诉我你是否可以来…… ④ I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early/earliest convenience. 如果你能尽早在你方便时确 认参加，我将不胜感激。 ⑤ I sincerely hope you could accept my invitation and I have the confidence that it will leave a wonderful impression on you. 我 真诚地希望你能接受我的邀请，我有信心 这会给你留下深刻的印象。 37 Week 4 应用文写作（邀请信）&读后续写 Wednesday 考场作文 读后续写微技能 4：营造故事冲突 (2022 年 6 月浙江卷改编 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使 之构成一个完整的故事。 I needed to do something in my community ( 社 区 ) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do. I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned( 分配 ) to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting. I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为 你写好。 Paragraph 1: As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. Paragraph 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. 好题探究 最佳素材 读后续写的大部分故事都是围绕 conflict ( 冲突 ) 和 solution ( 问题解决 ) 来运转的， 因此营造故事冲突在叙事类读后续写语篇中尤为重要。在学生营造故事冲突进行续写的过 程中，可以联系上文已有的矛盾冲突，提高故事的完整性和连贯性。那么，如何来营造故 事冲突呢？ 一、人与自我 1. 找到故事发展主线。 故事不一定非得是非常严重的事件，但它一定能够促 使故事主角发生改变。 2. 分析故事中的人物形象。 人物形象主要分为两类： ①圆形人物：性格复杂，随故事发展而成长，故事冲 突很可能会改变他（她）的三观。 ② 扁平人物：性格单一，行为模式固定，容易预测。 反面人物居多，往往是故事冲突的来源。 3. 设计最后危机，营造故事冲突结局。 ① 冲突双方的力量要均衡。力量可以体现为多种形式： 身体、知识、魅力、道德、财富、社会等级等。 ②冲突的解决要有冲击力（解决过程要有起伏）。 二、人与社会 故事冲突主要通过具有不同价值观的人与人之间的冲 突来实现。 三、人与自然 故事冲突主要通过洪水、飓风、野兽、丛林等大自然 的事物对人类的威胁来实现。 新高中英语写作满分素材 38 完美续写 天衣无缝 第一步：读懂原文明确大意 总结三个基础 原文大意 作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间去了施粥所，在准备过程中要做的事情很多。 作者以为自己看到无家可归的人靠近时会害怕，但是因为忙碌而没有时间去担心这些。 STEP S Setting (Para. 1) I needed to spend some time in a soup kitchen doing social work to graduate. P Plot (Para. 4) The homeless just needed a meal and a place to eat, which made me sad and sorry. T Theme (Para. 2) I had to do a lot of work ranging from preparing to serving the homeless. E Emotion (Para. 3) I felt scared at some people looking dangerous but a lady was friendly. 三个基础（SUM） ★语篇类型：记叙文 ★人称：第一人称 ★时态：一般过去时 ★主题：“人与社会”—— 公益事业与志愿服务 ★主角：I， the homeless ★I would do some social work in a soup kitchen with lots of work. ★Some people made me scared but this situation made me sorry. ★Figure out what would I do for them and what I got! Structure Underline Mission 第二步：根据续写段提示句 确定续写方向 构思 第一段 第二段 确定提示句关键词 情节发展有理有据 确定提示句关键词 情节发展有理有据 微笑表明我想帮助他们 (要点�) 他们礼貌微笑接受善意 (要点�) 理解他们不幸更想帮助 为他们盛饭尽微薄之力 (要点�) so happy earned my service hours 明白很多穷人需要帮助 (要点�) 明白小小善举温暖世人 (要点�) 难忘被帮助者感激目光 呼吁世人帮助有需要者 (要点�) they came smile I 39 Week 4 应用文写作（邀请信）&读后续写 第三步：结合框架添加细节 完美表达浑然一体 ① 与段首句衔接紧 密，我的微笑是 为了拉近与他们 之间的距离。 ② 我的微笑得到了 对方的回应，这 让我感到欣慰。 ③ 两个宾语从句是 作者的心理活动， 也说明作者是一 个善良的人。 ④ 具体的细节动作 表明作者已经不 再难过和害怕。 ⑤ 本 段 首 句 的 “happy”指代的 是自己在心理上 的成熟，因为自 己明白的道理更 多。 ⑥ 进一步表明和自 己一样做志愿者 活动的人带来的 力量。 ⑦ 呼应原文中自己 与需要帮助者之 间的互动。 ⑧ 升华主题，小爱 到大爱。 Paragraph 1: As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. aI wanted to make them know that I was really anxious to help them. bTo my relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile, and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes. cI wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do for them. They nodded gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and dtook a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls. Paragraph 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This experience emade me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. fIt also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them. gI will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. I am anxious to hurge the world to do everything possible to help those in need. (151 words) 新高中英语写作满分素材 40 Thursday 实战演练（Ⅰ） 应用文写作 邀请信 Writing 1 (2024 届浙江强基联盟适应性考试 ) 假定你是李华，你是学校文学社的社长。社团成立十周年，将举办一系列的活动。请你 给外教老师 David 写一封邮件邀请他参加，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 活动时间、地点和内容； 3. 你的期待。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：周年纪念日 anniversary Dear David, Yours, Li Hua （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） Writing 2 (2023 届浙江台州二模 ) 假定你是李华，你校将组织师生进行一次远足活动，请用英语给外教 Jason 写一封邮件 邀请他一起参加，内容包括： 1. 活动时间和地点； 2. 注意事项； 3. 表达期待。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jason, Yours sincerely, Li Hua （请参考 Monday 晨读晚练 & Tuesday 满分素材） 41 Week 4 应用文写作（邀请信）&读后续写 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） 读后续写 Writing 1 (2023 届湖南邵阳三模 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 “Wake up, Mom!” I felt a little hand on my face and reluctantly opened my eyes. There was my son, ready to start the day. I also heard my babies awake in the next room. Ready or not, the day had begun! I loved being home with my little ones, but I felt the weight of the world on my shoulders. My husband and I had just bought a house, and some unexpected expenses made our budget tighter than it had ever been. I was weary of spending more pennies. We weren’t foolish with our money. We worked hard. We were doing all the right things, but we had had one financial disappointment after another. I was going to pick up my kids’ photo portraits from the studio at the local mall. Despite our small budget, it was important to me to have pictures of my children as they were growing up. The previous week, I had found a coupon( 优惠券 ) and used some change from the car to buy a $7.99 portrait package, and today was the day I was to pick up the portraits. Since we were going to the mall, I decided to make it an outing and packed some sandwiches for us to eat at the food court. What’s more, there are many ride-on toy cars in the mall’s food court for fun and for free. After breakfast, we went off. After we parked, we walked into the portrait studio at the mall, and I approached the counter. The young woman smiled. “May I help you?” “Yes, I’m here to pick up our photos.” The woman asked my name and opened her drawer. “Ah, yes, here they are. Aren’t they just so adorable?” She took out the photos, and the smiling faces of my kids warmed my heart. “Yes, they are great. Thank you,” I said. She put the photos into an envelope. Then she spread out additional photos of my kids that I hadn’t ordered. I knew what that meant. The upsell pitch( 推销 ) was coming. “Would you like to purchase these extra portraits? They are only fifteen dollars a piece!” she smiled sweetly. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右 ; 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: My heart turned cold. “I don’t have fifteen dollars.” Paragraph 2: As we were having our lunch, the young woman came up and pressed something into my hand. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 新高中英语写作满分素材 42 Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） 读后续写 Writing 2 (2023 届山西联考 ) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A New Addition to the Family For the initial ten years of his life, Victor was the prince of the household. As he was an only child, his parents petted him and showered all their love and attention on him. Whatever toys his parents bought, they were always meant for him. Whatever food was in the refrigerator, there was no one to compete with him to polish it off first. Victor could leave his toys or books around the house with complete ease of mind, knowing that there was no one who would get their hands on his belongings and cause any damage. However, all that was to change overnight when Victor’s parents brought back his new baby sister, Lina, from the hospital. With her rosy cheeks, wide open eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts of her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyone focused their attention on the cute bunch of joy. Whenever she cried, her mother or father would rush to her bed. She simply cried because she wanted to be carried. There was little time left for Victor. Now that Victor’s mother had his baby sister to take care of, she expected Victor himself to do most of the chores he can do. Victor was asked to clean his own room, iron his own school uniform and clean his own shoes. Before Lina’s arrival, he had never lifted a finger to help out with these tasks. The whole family also went out less because it was unhealthy to expose Lina to the bacteria( 细菌 ) being in the outside world too often. Victor felt neglected by his parents. He felt that they loved Lina more than him. As a result, he tried to attract his parents’ attention by becoming resistant. One evening, Victor’s parents were called up by his teacher because Victor had got into a fight at school. His teacher had noticed Victor’s behaviour and work attitude changing downwards in the past two months. Before that, he had been a model student. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought. Paragraph 2: Victor realized that his parents still cared for him. （请参考 Wednesday 考场作文） 43 Week 4 应用文写作（邀请信）&读后续写 Sunday 语篇提升 提分技法 妙招锦囊 过渡衔接 ( 二 ) ▷表转折或比较关系 (expressions of contrast or comparison) ( 并列连接词 ) 但是：but ( 副词 ) 然而：(and) yet，while，whereas ( 副词 ) 然而：nevertheless，however ( 从属连接词 ) 尽管；虽然：though，although 相反；正相反；恰恰相反：to the contrary，on the contrary/contrary to...，quite the contrary 与……形成对比；与……截然不同：in contrast with/to 相反：(but) rather 反而；代替；而不是：instead，instead of 毕竟：after all 同样地：equally，likewise，similarly ▷表例证关系 (exemplification expressions) 也就是说：namely，that is，that is to say 例如：for example，for instance 举例来说：to illustrate 例如： such as，as a matter of fact，take... as an example，like，as follows，and so on 你校校长李建想邀请你校交换生 Peter 的父亲 Mr. Smith 作为颁奖嘉宾参加你校新学期的 开学典礼，现请你代他写一封邀请信，主要内容包括： 1. 发出邀请； 2. 活动安排；3. 你的看法； 4. 联系方式：fgvert.school@yahoo.org/010-34532225。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, I’m honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term ① ( 尽 管 ) I know you are always so busy. The ceremony is to be held at 8:00 on the morning of Sept. 1 (next Monday) in our school meeting hall. ② ( 而不是 ) being a parent, we expect you to work as a guest who presents awards to students. While being there, you will help us a lot. ③ ( 例如 ), you will not only get involved in our educational activities but also witness the growth of all students. ④ ( 同 样 ), I firmly believe it’s a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between our school and parents. Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance? For more information, please send an email to fgvert.school@yahoo.org or call at 010–34532225. Best wishes! Yours, Li Jian 提分臻题 妙法巧用 新高中英语写作满分素材 44 心理活动描写（4）：伤心难过 读后续写的文章选材文章最终传递的都是正能量，但是故事中的主角在获得幸福和成 功之前往往要历经艰辛。不论在原文中还是续写中，人物往往会经历“伤心难过”的心路 历程。引发“伤心难过”的原因不一而足。但是在经过他人的鼓励或者自发的努力之后， 往往会有圆满的结局。“伤心难过”往往是中间环节，“守得云开见月明”往往是结果。 第一组：眼泪顺着她的脸庞流下来，她一句话都说不出来。 ☆概括描写： Tears streamed down her face. Words failed her. ▷细节描述： ① Tears streamed down her face . ( 并列句 ) ② With tears , words failed her. (with 复合结构 ) ③ Tears , words failed her. ( 独立主格结构 ) 第二组：受到如此不公平的对待，她痛苦而愤怒地大哭起来。 ☆概括描写： She was treated so unfairly and she burst into tears in pain and anger. ▷细节描述： ① She was treated she burst into tears in pain and anger. (结果状语从句 ) ② , she burst into tears in pain and anger. ( 非谓语动词 ) ③ She was treated so unfairly; she burst into tears . ( 副词 ) 技能小练 增色续写 模板背诵 内化所学 ▪ 知晓邀请信的本 质是希望收信者 能够接受自己的 要求。 ▪ 让对方了解的相 关信息主要是时 间、 地 点 和 活 动内容，这些客 观信息要简明扼 要， 但 是 要 注 意 升 级 词 汇 和 句式。 ▪ 文章通常以第一 人称和第二人称 为主。 ▪ 时态以一般现在 时和一般将来时 为主。 Dear Allen, I am writing to tell you that a music festival ( 将 举 行 ) in our school. We can ( 参 加 音 乐 节 ) in the school hall next Friday afternoon. In the music festival, we invite some famous singers and pianists to perform, ( 他们也会上课 ) to the students. In addition, some students can ( 有 机 会 合 作 ) with these musicians. As a music fan, you are bound to participate in the festival. If possible, you ( 欢迎表演 ) in the festival, ( 这会 是很好的经历 ). Hopefully, you can take part in it and don’t miss the chance. Yours, Li Hua 新高中英语写作满分素材 10 Paragraph 2: So I told him about Nancy’s childhood. I passed the wisdom on to my son. Realizing my complex feelings, he smiled and comforted me instead. He took my advice to heart and returned to school with his head held high. By the end of the six-month waiting period, he decided that the scars did not matter. So he made the decision to give up any plastic surgery. We all have “scars” that we believe will keep people away from us. Put your imperfections out of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your beauty will shine through.(186 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① 想象：imagine/picture/think of ② 安慰：comfort/quiet/soothe ③ 克服：overcome/rise above/get over sth. ④ 微笑：smile/beam on ⑤ 珍惜：value/cherish 满分句式 ① Although I knew that there were going to be storms in life, it was hard for me to imagine that a handsome and sunny boy would return to his classmates with scars.( 由连接词 although 引导让 步状语从句 ) ② Put your imperfections out of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your beauty will shine through.( 运用祈使句以及 what 引导的宾语从句 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① and ② In addition/Besides/Furthermore/Moreover ③ Most importantly ④ not only ⑤ but also 模板背诵 A Survey on the Use of Mobile Phones Recently, our school newspaper carried out a survey on the use of mobile phones among students. The results show that students have different attitudes towards mobile phones. According to the survey, 45 percent of the students questioned say that they use mobile phones as a means of entertainment, with which they can surf the Internet and play small games. 30 percent prefer the function of contacting with family and friends at the right time. About 25 percent think that using mobile phones could affect their studies because they may spend too much time using it. In my opinion, it is OK for students to use mobile phones as a means of communication, as long as we do not spend too much time on it. 技能小练 第一组： ① Keep it up/Try it harder/Cheer up ② give up/lose heart/let us down ③ confident/motivated/persistent/inspired 第二组： ① Inspired ② Motivated ③ Stimulated Week 4 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 Dear Michael, Good news! Recently, a newly-furnished section, aconsisting of/made up of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. bLocated/Situated on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 a.m. till 9 p.m. throughout the weekdays. Those rooms care equipped with modern electronic facilities, dall of which are linked to the Internet. eIt’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it? Early reply fand we can reserve one room for 答案全解全析 11 our project. Yours, Li Hua Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语料亮点 Dear David, I am writing ato tell you that we intend to celebrate the tenth anniversary of our Chinese Literature Club and I sincerely invite you to attend. bThe celebration activity will be held next Wednesday in the lecture hall. cAs scheduled, various activities will be available dranging from an oral Chinese speech to Chinese song performances. eAdditionally, a Chinese play named Tea House will be also on show. Everything will foverflow with happiness then. gI hope we are lucky enough to have you here and expect to have a pleasant time with your presence and participation. Yours, Li Hua ① 开门见山呈现邀请对方的原因，使用 sincerely 表达真诚的态度。 ② 简洁表达活动的明确时间和地点。 ③ 使用状语从句的省略说明活动如期举行。 ④ 现在分词作状语彰显扎实的基本功。 ⑤ a Chinese play named Tea House 是合理想象。 ⑥ 使用高级词汇强调活动的受欢迎程度。 ⑦ 再次表达真诚邀请。 Writing 2 审题谋篇 语篇类型 邀请信 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时 三段式结构 ①首段：开门见山，表明写信意图 ②主体段落：具体的活动内容和要求 ③尾段：再次表达希望 语料亮点 Dear Jason, aThrilled to learn that a group hiking trip is scheduled by our school, I am writing to invite you, a nature lover, to join us. We’re to gather bat the school gate at 8 a.m. this Saturday and leave for our destination—South Mountain Park, a nature lover’s paradise. There we will hike through towering redwoods, camazed at the natural wonders. dTo make the 3-hour hike delightful, we all should prepare some essentials, such as snacks, drinks, and sunscreen. Also, eyou are supposed to wear comfortable and durable shoes to ensure your safety. fLooking forward to spending time with you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua ① 形容词作状语表示原因，也可以引起收信者的 关注，明确写信的目的。 ② 对时间、地点的介绍层次分明，使用同位语对 目的地的地位进行了强化。 ③ 使用形容词作状语的目的也是为了增加吸引力。 ④ 使用不定式作目的状语，也是为对方着想，强 调这次活动会带来快乐。 ⑤ 不忘给出温馨提示，be supposed to do sth. 属于 高级词汇。 ⑥再次表达愿望，态度真诚。 Friday 实战演练（Ⅱ） Writing 1 思路点拨 文章主题 人际关系 原文大意 作者和丈夫刚买了一套房子，这让他们在家 用上捉襟见肘。作者带孩子们去当地商场的 摄影棚里拿孩子们的照片。女士说一个孩子 再花 15 美元就可以得到额外的照片，作者意 识到她在搞推销。 续写思路 ① 根据第一段首句可知，本段描写作者没有 钱买多余的照片，带着孩子在商场玩耍的 过程。 ② 根据第二段首句可知，本段描写照相馆里 的女士给作者使用自己的方式来帮助作者 和她的孩子们。 新高中英语写作满分素材 12 叙事线索 拒绝购买多余照片→带着孩子离开→和孩子 们在商场玩→吃自带午餐→年轻女士出现→ 简短交流→给作者帮助→作者感悟善良无价 高分范文 Paragraph 1: My heart turned cold. “I don’t have fifteen dollars.” I took the photo envelope and walked away with a sigh, with my cheeks red after my reply. Next, we stopped at the ride-on toy cars in the mall’s food court. There weren’t any other kids there. My kids climbed on them enjoying themselves very much. After a while, we were tired so we unwrapped our lunches that I had brought from home. Although the mall’s food court was near, I didn’t have extra money. It was early for lunch, but we were hungry. I felt sad and even desperate. Paragraph 2: As we were having our lunch, the young woman came up and pressed something into my hand. She said, “Here. Take your family out for ice cream after lunch.” I was surprised. I managed to say “thank you” as she turned and walked away. Then I looked down at what she had given me. The bills totaled fifteen dollars. Tears rolled down my cheeks as I quietly finished my sandwich. The doubts in my heart melted away and my faith was renewed. Kindness can change someone’s dark moment into a bright one, which lit us up. (169 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① with a sigh 叹了口气 ② tired/sweatful 疲劳 / 劳累的 ③ feel sad/desperate 感觉难过 / 绝望 ④ roll down my cheeks 滚下面颊 ⑤ light up 让……高兴起来 满分句式 ① My kids climbed on them enjoying themselves very much. ( 现在分词作状语 ) ② Although the mall’s food court was near, I didn’t have extra money. (although 引导让步状语从句 ) ③ I managed to say “thank you” as she turned and walked away. (as 引导时间状语从句 ) Saturday 实战演练（Ⅲ） Writing 2 思路点拨 文章主题 家庭生活 原文大意 在妹妹 Linda 出生以后，Victor 的父母将全部 的注意力集中到她身上，这让他感到被忽略， 因此他用对抗来引起父母的注意。老师也注 意到他的变化， 把他的父母请到了学校。 续写思路 ①根据第一段首句可知，本段描写父母对自 己行为的反省。 ②根据第二段首句可知，本段描写 Victor 感 受到父母仍爱他后的改变。 叙事线索 父母反思→决定改变→付出努力→孩子变化 → 感受到爱→回报父母 构思 第一段 意识到确实忽略了儿子，难过后决定 改变现状 爸爸陪学习妈妈多关爱，Victor 越来 越爱全家人 第二段 Victor 领悟父母还爱自己，决定帮助 父母减轻压力 Victor 多做家务照顾妹妹，理解家庭 责任成男子汉 高分范文 Paragraph 1: Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought. It was a sad fact that they have neglected Victor’s feelings since Linda’s birth. So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally. Gradually, something changed in the family. When Victor did his homework, his father would accompany him, reading a book quietly, which made him comfortable and warm. After he finished his homework, his mother asked him to play with Linda. Seeing her sweet smile, he felt so happy. Paragraph 2: Victor realized that his parents still cared for him. So he was determined to help his parents take good care of his sister to relieve their pressure. Having finished his homework, he learned to clean their rooms and do all the chores that he could. While his mother was cooking, he played with his sister happily. He came to realize that he should take responsibility for the family because he had grown up. The family was 答案全解全析 13 filled with understanding and love because they all realized that everyone played an important role in the house. (159 words) 语料借鉴 微技能词汇 ① neglected one’s feelings 忽视某人的情感 ② accompany sb. 陪伴某人 ③ relieve one’s pressure 减轻某人的压力 ④ come to realize 逐渐意识到 满分句式 ① So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally. ( 同位语从句 ) ② When Victor did his homework, his father would accompany him, reading a book quietly, which made him comfortable and warm. (when 引导时间 状语从句；现在分词作状语；which 引导非限制 性定语从句 ) Sunday 语篇提升 提分臻题 ① although /though ② Instead of /Rather than ③ For example/For instance ④ Similarly 模板背诵 Dear Allen, I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school. We can take part in the music festival in the school hall next Friday afternoon. In the music festival, we invite some famous singers and pianists to perform, who will also give some lessons to the students. In addition, some students can have a chance to cooperate with these musicians. As a music fan, you are bound to participate in the festival. If possible, you are welcome to perform in the festival, which will be a great experience. Hopefully, you can take part in it and don’t miss the chance. Yours, Li Hua 技能小练 第一组： ① and words failed her ② streaming down her face ③ streaming down her face 第二组： ① so unfairly that ② Treated so unfairly ③ painfully and angrily Week 5 Monday 晨读晚练 仿写借鉴 My fellow students, Shortsightedness among Chinese students ais becoming more serious. bWith the National Eye Day approaching, it reminds us of the serious situation we are faced with. We ccan’t attach too much importance to the protection of our eyes. dThe situation can be improved if we get regular breaks throughout our busy study and take part in more outdoor activities in the sun instead of efixing our eyes on electronic devices. I firmly believe that as long as we fstrengthen our awareness to improve eye health, all of us will have a brighter vision. Li Hua Thursday 实战演练 ( Ⅰ ) Writing 1 审题谋篇 语料亮点 Exercise 60 Minutes Every Day aTo encourage us students to get into shape and enrich our school life, our school sports club has launched an activity bthemed “Exercise 60 Minutes