内容正文:
建议信
一、Structure
第一段 (Beginning): Background (事由)+Aim (提建议)
(如果双方不认识或下级对上级,必要时先做简单自我介绍)
第二段 (Body) : 具体建议+理由
第三段 (Ending):期望(希望自己的建议能有帮助/对方能采纳)
二、Useful and essential expressions:
1. have trouble/difficulties in (doing) sth. 做某事有困难
2. sth. troubles/upsets/disturbs sb. 使烦恼
3. feel rather annoyed 感到十分恼火
4. ask sb. for advice / suggestions / proposals / tips 向某人寻求建议
5. put forward /offer /give some advice/suggestions on how to 提关于…的建议
6. adopt one’s advice/take one’s advice into consideration 采纳/考虑某人的意见
7. take action/ take measures (to do) 采取行动/采取措施
8. spend time /money (in) doing sth./ on sth. 花时间/金钱做某事
9. join a club/ a group/ an organization 加入俱乐部/团体/组织
10. take an active part in after-school activities 积极参加课外活动
11. attend/take/sign up for a language course 参加一门语言课程
12. communicate with sb. 与交流
13. pay attention to sth. 关注
14. adapt (oneself) to sth./ adjust(oneself) to/ be adapted to 适应
15. express/convey one’s thoughts and feelings/ express oneself表达某人的思想和想法
16. be of benefit to /be beneficial to 对……有益
17. have a better understanding of 更好地理解
18. improve/sharpen one’s listening skills 提高听力技巧
19. broaden/expand one's horizons/vision/perspective 拓宽某人的视野/眼界
20. change for the better 有所好转
21. find…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
22. relieve one’s stress 释放某人的压力
23. might as well 不妨,倒不如
24. matter / count / make a difference 重要
三、Useful and essential sentences in each paragraph:
Paragraph 1:
1. I am more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很高兴收到你征求如何学好中文的建议的来信,可能下面的建议对你有帮助。
2. I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in adapting yourself to the new school, and I’d like to offer some suggestions to you as follows.
很遗憾听说你适应新学校有困难,我想给你提如下一些建议。
3. Learning that a social practice activity is to be organized by the Students’ Union for Senior Two, I’d like to make a proposal on it.
得知学生会将组织高二年级进行社会实践活动,我想提点建议。
Paragraph 2:
4. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to make the following suggestions.
谈及这个情况,我想提出如下建议
5. I would like to suggest that we should live a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce carbon dioxide in the air.
我建议过低碳生活,这意味着在我们日常生活中用较少的能源以便我们帮助减少空气中的二氧化碳。
6. It would be a good idea/choice to find a pen pal and chat in English on the Internet.
在互联网上找个笔友用英语聊天会是个不错的主意。
7.I think/consider that it would be of great benefit/be fairly beneficial if you could do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress.
我认为如果你在你业余时间多锻炼来释放压力, 你将会有极大的受益。
8.You had better find someone to help you practice listening and speaking.
你最好找人帮你练习听说。
9.If I were you, I would turn to my teacher or a friend for help.
如果我是你,我会向老师或朋友求助
10. Why not have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents? 为什么不和父母推心置腹地谈一谈呢?
11. You might as well ask your teacher or best friend to help you analyze the situation and give you some guidance.
你不妨请老师或最好的朋友帮你分析一下情形并给你一些指导。
Paragraph 3:
1. I will be delighted and grateful if you take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将非常高兴和感激。
2. I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be useful/helpful/beneficial/be of
great benefit to you. 我希望我的建议对你有用/有帮助/有益。
3.If there is more I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。
4. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account and reply to me at your earliest convenience.
(下级给上级提建议)
4、 范文:
假定你是李华,你的英国好友Fred来信说父母对他的期望太高,为此他感到压力很大,希望你能他一些建议,请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰和理解;2. 提出建议; 3. 表达祝福。
Dear Fred,
I’m sorry to know that you are under great pressure from your parents these days. Now I’d like to/ am writing to give you some advice.
Personally, the reason why parents push us hard is that they hope we can have a bright future, so their concern for us is understandable. And you feel stressed due to your parents’ high expectation, which is also understandable. In my opinion, you might as well have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents, expressing your feelings and thoughts to your parents, which may help them understand you and thus reduce your pressure. Besides, I consider that it would be of great benefit to you if you could take part in some after –school activities and do more exercise in your spare time, which I believe can relieve your stress.
Hopefully, my advice will be helpful to you. And I hope that you will understand your parents and have a good relationship with them.
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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