考点43 应用文写作之活动报道&观点议论文（ 核心考点精讲精练）- 备战2025年高考英语一轮复习考点帮（新高考通用）

考点43应用文写作之活动报道&观点议论文（核心考点精讲精练） 1. 高考真题考点分布 年份 试卷 体裁 话题 题材内容 2024 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 告知信 学校生活 介绍美术课的个人作品和感想 全国甲卷 演讲稿 社会科技 中国交通发展 天津卷 演讲稿 社会生活 低碳生活 浙江卷 征文投稿 学校生活 课间开展的运动 2023 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 建议信 学校生活 给外教提建议 全国甲卷 征文投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物 全国乙卷 征文投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能 天津卷 申请信 社会生活 “中国工坊”活动 浙江卷 活动报道 学校生活 认识我们身边的植物 2022 全国卷乙卷 征文投稿 调查结果 学习英语的状况 全国卷甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日 保护海洋 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 邀请信 文化生活 学校的电台访谈 浙江卷 邀请信 学校生活 图书馆开设了一个小组学习室 天津卷 视频文字稿 学校生活 社团活动 2. 命题规律及备考策略 【命题规律】 近3年命题规律： 1. 对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查； 2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合； 3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文； 4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意 【备考策略】 1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架； 2. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句； 3. 背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达； 4. 加强审题（主题、时态）训练； 5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。 【命题预测】 预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。 必备基础知识： 考点一、活动报道 活动报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性，语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。 【思路点拨】   ★第一段：事件发生的时间、地点、目的以及参与者。 ★第二段：详细叙述调查或活动的经过和意义。 ★第三段：对事件的评价或自己的感悟或事件的意义。 【必备词块】 1. encourage sb. to do 2. take an active part in 3. be required to do 4.be good at 5.have a better understanding of 6.attend 7.witness 8.draw one’s attention 9. manage to do sth. 10.measure 12.speak highly of 13. provide sth. for sb. 14.competition→contest 15.have a good command of → have a good knowledge of 【万能句式】 第一段：事件的目的、时间、地点和参与者。 1. In order to enrich our school life， our school organized.... 2. Nowadays, more and more people realize/are aware of the importance of.... 3. Recently the issue/problem of.........has been brought into focus/brought to public attention/concern. 4、Last Friday there was a big painting exhibition in our school, which is to help us learn more about t---- and improve our awareness of protecting ---. 5. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 6. Last week witnessed the first Culture Festival themed “the Beauty of Chinese Traditional Culture” held by our school. 7. Last Saturday, our school held the English Classic Recitation Competition at the lecture hall to encourage us students to appreciate English culture. 第二段：叙述事件的经过。 1.As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours. 2.It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end. 3.The activity was so popular with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them. 4.After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates. 5. The competition started at 7 p.m. and lasted two hours.→ The competition which started at 7 p.m. lasted two hours. 6. After the heated competition, the student who gave superb performance was presented an award by our head teacher. 7. Looking at these pictures, all people realized the importance of ---protection and they all said they would do whatever they can to protect --- and to make the oceans cleaner. 8. The class meeting, which is composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother. 9. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply. 10.Representatives of each class took an active part in the competition. 11. Participants were required to prepare an English classic poem to recite within 5 minutes. 12. At last, competitors who were good at both voice control and emotional expression reached the final. 13. The students selected from every class took part in the competition. 14. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. 15. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finishing line, receiving cheers from all the directions. 16、Every runner was trying their best, with their classmates giving them help and encouragement all the way. 第三段：自己的感悟或评价或事情的意义。 1.The activity was indeed extremely successful, and the students involved realized that even small acts could make a difference to the earth. 2.In my opinion, the activity relieved our mental pressure. More importantly, it is a good chance to strengthen our will, which is beneficial to our life and study in the future. 3.Undoubtedly, this event can not only enrich our school life, but offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills! 4、The activity was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life but also developed our feeling of love for English language. 5. The competition offered a wonderful opportunity for us to have a better understanding of English classics, evoking our love for English culture. 6. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. 8. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but makes us more cohesive. 9、Not only did it offer us chance to exercise but also promoted the friendship among us. 【写作模板】 （一）、活动报道模板1 In order to______________(目的)，Our school organized_______________________(活动时间、地点)。 As scheduled，________lasts_______________,(活动延续时间),__________________(参与者)。First of all,____________(活动内容一)。Besides, ___________________(活动内容二)。At last __________________(活动内容三)。___________________________(结果).__________________(活动意义)。 Undoubtedly， this ____________ not only_________________, but also________________(评价或自己的感悟)。 （二）、活动报道模板2 In order to encourage the students to 活动目的,our school organized a 活动项目 on 活动时间. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8: 00 a.m. ,we gathered at 集合地点 and set out for the 目的地 in high spirits. 路上发生的事情About 2 hours later, we all arrived. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only好处一 but 好处二. What a wonderful time! （三）调查报道模板 In order to _____________(调查目的), I have recently made a survey among_______________(调查对象). In this survey, _____________(被采访人物)were interviewed. They were asked _________________(调查内容)。 Here are the results./That chart shows that________________(调查结果). There are some reasons for it.________________( 陈述原因)。 To conclude/In conclusions,__________________( 结论)。 【2023年浙江1月卷】上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25高三上·江苏扬州·开学考试）假设你是李华，上周你校组织了一场线上音乐会。请你为校学生会写一篇新闻报道。内容包括： 1. 音乐会特点； 2. 观看感受； 3. 活动意义。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右。 2. 可作适当添加，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点二、观点议论文 议论文要求学生要通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来确定某一观点正确与否，肯定或否定某种观点或主张。正反观点对比类议论文是从正反两个方面说明某个观点，进而表达自己的看法。 【思路点拨】 议论文(1)——正反观点型 一、文章结构 1．开头：提出问题； 2．主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由； 3．结尾：说明自己的观点。 二、段落框架 1．第一段 开门见山，提出主题(1－2句) (1)We had a heated discussion about/on... (2)Different people hold different opinions. (3)Opinions are divided... (4)People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards... (5)People have different opinions on this problem. (6)People take different views on this question. 2．第二段 表达不同观点 (1)．..of them hold the opinion that... (2)．..of them are in favor of the idea that... (3)People who are for/against the idea think that... (4)Some people believe that...Others argue that... (5)However，...of them hold a different view./...of them hold the opposite opinion. (6)However，each coin has two sides. (7)Different from those...，people think... (8)On the other hand，people object that... 3．第三段 说明自己的观点 (1)As far as I am concerned... (2)In my opinion... (3)It’s my opinion that... (4)In a word，only through...can we have a bright future. 议论文(2)——利弊对比型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。 1．说明事物现状； 2．事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)； 3．你对现状(或前景)的看法。 议论文(3)——解决问题型 一、段落框架 第一段：引出现象，并指出这种现象的后果 常用句型： (1) Recently the rise in problem of/phenomenon of...has caused/aroused/captured public/popular/wide/worldwide concern. (2) Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus/has been brought into public attention. (3)Nowadays，there is a growing concern about the problem/phenomenon that... (4)Nowadays，an increasing number of people come to realize/be aware of the importance of... (5)Nowadays，more and more people are concerned about the problem of... 第二段：提出解决的办法 常用句型： (1) We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing，___________________________________  (解决方法一)．For another， ________________________   (解决方法二)．Finally，________________________ (解决方法三)． (2)It is essential that proper action/effective measures should be taken to reverse this situation/stop the trend. (3)It is hoped/suggested that considerable/great efforts should be made to... (4)There is no easy/immediate solution/approach to the issue of...but...might be beneficial/helpful. 第三段：总结这样做的好处 常用句型：Only in this way can we... 【万能句式】 1）开头句： It goes without saying that...不言而喻 It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地说 As the proverb says,...正如谚语所说 It has to be noticed that... It's generally recognised that...人们普遍认为 It's likely that...很可能 It's hardly ... that ... ...并不... It's hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸张地说 2）衔接句： A case in point is ...一个典型的例子是... As is often the case,...情况经常是... As stated in the previous paragraph,... 如前段所述，... But the problem is not so simple. Therefore, we should take more details into consideration. But it's pity that... In spite of the fact that... Further, we hold the opinion that...此外，我们认为... However, the difficulty lies in... What calls for special attention is that... Similarly, we should pay attention to this from the very beginning. 3）引出观点句： There are several reasons for ..., but in general, they come down to three major ones. There are many factors that may account for ..., but the following are the most typical ones. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. The reasons are as follows. 4）结尾句： I will conclude by saying that...最后我要说 I can reach a conclusion that... Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...我们有理由相信 All things considered, it may be safely said that...可以有把握地说 Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisible for us to do ...更可取的是 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that... The figures/statistics lead us to the conclusion that... It can be concluded from the discussion that... From my point of view, it would be better if... To a certain/some extent, ... 5）灵活句式： sb. cannot emphasize the importance if ... too much There is no need for sb. to do sth. On no account can we do sth. What will happen to sb. if ...? For the past+一段时间，sb. have (done sth./been doing sth.) It pays to do sth. 做...是值得的 sth. is closely related to ... ...与...息息相关 do one's utmost to do= spare no effort to do sth. have a great influence on sb. Nothing can prevent us from doing Upon doing sth, ... 一...就... Hardly had sb. done sth. when sb. did No sooner had sb. done sth. than sb. did Only then could...直到那时 Nothing is more ... than to do sth. There is no denying that... There is no doubt that... It is universally acknowledged that... As is known to us,... It is no wonder that ... No wonder that... So +adj. be sb./sth. that ... 如此...以至于... adj. as sb./sth. be,... 虽然...但是... The+比较级, the +比较级 It's time +主语+动词过去式 It's time for sth. It's time for sb. to do sth. 【写作模板】 模板一 不同观点列举型（选择型） There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. 模板二 利弊型议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___. 模板三 答辩型议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____. Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____. 模板四 谚语警句型议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____. With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job. （24-25高三上·江苏南通·开学考试）现在人工智能越来越影响我们日常生活中的方方面面。请围绕这一话题写一篇文章。 应包含以下要点： 1. 人工智能带来的便利，例如在交通、家电和通信方面。 2. 它可能引发的潜在问题或挑战，如工作岗位被取代和隐私担忧。 3. 您对于如何充分利用人工智能并避免其负面影响的观点。 4. 80词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （最新模拟试题演练） Writing 1 （24-25高三上·河南焦作·开学考试）假定你是李华，你加入了一个名为“Volunteer Community”的国际志愿者组织，上周日你和组员完成了一次志愿活动，你受邀为此次活动写一篇报道。内容包括： 1. 前往的地方； 2. 完成的活动； 3. 你的感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 2 （24-25高三上·黑龙江·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校举办的为期一个月的羽毛球赛刚刚落下帷幕。请你以“A Campus Badminton Match”为题给校英文报Campus Life 写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动准备及过程； 3. 活动反响。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Campus Badminton Match _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 3 （24-25高三上·湖南·开学考试）上周末，你参加了学校文化艺术节的“Amazing Heritage Sites(神奇的文化遗产)”的主题活动。请你写一篇报道投稿到学校英文报，内容包括： 1.活动过程； 2.收获和感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Exploring Amazing Heritage Sites ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 4 （24-25高三上·广东·开学考试）假定你是校英文报的记者李华，上周五你校学生会在操场举办了一场跳蚤市场（a flea market）活动。请你为此写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的和过程； 2. 活动反响和意义。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Flea market ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 5 （2024·四川成都·模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周六你们全班参观了市博物馆。请你以“A visit to the city museum”为题，为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1. 活动过程； 2. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 6 （2024·浙江·模拟预测）假定你是校学生会主席李华。上周末学生会组织了一次户外拓展活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的目的；2.活动的过程和意义。 注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An Unforgettable Outdoor Team-building Activity _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 7 （24-25高三上·安徽·开学考试）假如你是李华，你班上周就“学生是否有必要购买品牌服饰”的话题展开了激烈的讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论结果并发表个人观点。 1. 支持的观点； 2. 反对的观点； 3. 你的观点。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 首句已给出，但不计入总词数； 3. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Last week, our class held a heated discussion on whether students should buy branded clothing. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 8 （2024·四川成都·模拟预测）目前越来越多的人使用移动支付(mobile payment)，移动支付改变了人们的生活。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： 1. 移动支付的优缺点； 2. 你的看法。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：微信 WeChat   支付宝 Alipay  二维码 QR code ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 考点43应用文写作之活动报道&观点议论文（核心考点精讲精练） 1. 高考真题考点分布 年份 试卷 体裁 话题 题材内容 2024 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 告知信 学校生活 介绍美术课的个人作品和感想 全国甲卷 演讲稿 社会科技 中国交通发展 天津卷 演讲稿 社会生活 低碳生活 浙江卷 征文投稿 学校生活 课间开展的运动 2023 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 建议信 学校生活 给外教提建议 全国甲卷 征文投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物 全国乙卷 征文投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能 天津卷 申请信 社会生活 “中国工坊”活动 浙江卷 活动报道 学校生活 认识我们身边的植物 2022 全国卷乙卷 征文投稿 调查结果 学习英语的状况 全国卷甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日 保护海洋 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 邀请信 文化生活 学校的电台访谈 浙江卷 邀请信 学校生活 图书馆开设了一个小组学习室 天津卷 视频文字稿 学校生活 社团活动 2. 命题规律及备考策略 【命题规律】 近3年命题规律： 1. 对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查； 2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合； 3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文； 4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意 【备考策略】 1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架； 2. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句； 3. 背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达； 4. 加强审题（主题、时态）训练； 5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。 【命题预测】 预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。 必备基础知识： 考点一、活动报道 活动报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性，语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。 【思路点拨】   ★第一段：事件发生的时间、地点、目的以及参与者。 ★第二段：详细叙述调查或活动的经过和意义。 ★第三段：对事件的评价或自己的感悟或事件的意义。 【必备词块】 1. encourage sb. to do 2. take an active part in 3. be required to do 4.be good at 5.have a better understanding of 6.attend 7.witness 8.draw one’s attention 9. manage to do sth. 10.measure 12.speak highly of 13. provide sth. for sb. 14.competition→contest 15.have a good command of → have a good knowledge of 【万能句式】 第一段：事件的目的、时间、地点和参与者。 1. In order to enrich our school life， our school organized.... 2. Nowadays, more and more people realize/are aware of the importance of.... 3. Recently the issue/problem of.........has been brought into focus/brought to public attention/concern. 4、Last Friday there was a big painting exhibition in our school, which is to help us learn more about t---- and improve our awareness of protecting ---. 5. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 6. Last week witnessed the first Culture Festival themed “the Beauty of Chinese Traditional Culture” held by our school. 7. Last Saturday, our school held the English Classic Recitation Competition at the lecture hall to encourage us students to appreciate English culture. 第二段：叙述事件的经过。 1.As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours. 2.It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end. 3.The activity was so popular with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them. 4.After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates. 5. The competition started at 7 p.m. and lasted two hours.→ The competition which started at 7 p.m. lasted two hours. 6. After the heated competition, the student who gave superb performance was presented an award by our head teacher. 7. Looking at these pictures, all people realized the importance of ---protection and they all said they would do whatever they can to protect --- and to make the oceans cleaner. 8. The class meeting, which is composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother. 9. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply. 10.Representatives of each class took an active part in the competition. 11. Participants were required to prepare an English classic poem to recite within 5 minutes. 12. At last, competitors who were good at both voice control and emotional expression reached the final. 13. The students selected from every class took part in the competition. 14. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. 15. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finishing line, receiving cheers from all the directions. 16、Every runner was trying their best, with their classmates giving them help and encouragement all the way. 第三段：自己的感悟或评价或事情的意义。 1.The activity was indeed extremely successful, and the students involved realized that even small acts could make a difference to the earth. 2.In my opinion, the activity relieved our mental pressure. More importantly, it is a good chance to strengthen our will, which is beneficial to our life and study in the future. 3.Undoubtedly, this event can not only enrich our school life, but offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills! 4、The activity was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life but also developed our feeling of love for English language. 5. The competition offered a wonderful opportunity for us to have a better understanding of English classics, evoking our love for English culture. 6. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. 8. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but makes us more cohesive. 9、Not only did it offer us chance to exercise but also promoted the friendship among us. 【写作模板】 （一）、活动报道模板1 In order to______________(目的)，Our school organized_______________________(活动时间、地点)。 As scheduled，________lasts_______________,(活动延续时间),__________________(参与者)。First of all,____________(活动内容一)。Besides, ___________________(活动内容二)。At last __________________(活动内容三)。___________________________(结果).__________________(活动意义)。 Undoubtedly， this ____________ not only_________________, but also________________(评价或自己的感悟)。 （二）、活动报道模板2 In order to encourage the students to 活动目的,our school organized a 活动项目 on 活动时间. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8: 00 a.m. ,we gathered at 集合地点 and set out for the 目的地 in high spirits. 路上发生的事情About 2 hours later, we all arrived. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only好处一 but 好处二. What a wonderful time! （三）调查报道模板 In order to _____________(调查目的), I have recently made a survey among_______________(调查对象). In this survey, _____________(被采访人物)were interviewed. They were asked _________________(调查内容)。 Here are the results./That chart shows that________________(调查结果). There are some reasons for it.________________( 陈述原因)。 To conclude/In conclusions,__________________( 结论)。 【2023年浙江1月卷】上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                     Getting to Know the Plants Around Us    Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.    The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.     Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参与：participate in → attend 开始：begin → start 观察，调查：observe → survey 震惊：strike → astonish/surprise 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union. 拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句） （24-25高三上·江苏扬州·开学考试）假设你是李华，上周你校组织了一场线上音乐会。请你为校学生会写一篇新闻报道。内容包括： 1. 音乐会特点； 2. 观看感受； 3. 活动意义。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右。 2. 可作适当添加，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Last week witnessed an extraordinary online concert organized by our school, in which the performers gave their best shot at entertaining the audience with one song after another. The performances were undoubtedly of high quality, which made the concert almost no different from a live one. The performers demonstrated music in a way that touched the depths of the audience’s soul, giving them a feeling of connection. Fascinated by the remarkable performances, audience present enjoyed every second of the concert and responded with thunderous applause.    The concert was thought highly of. Not only did it offer the students a platform to showcase their talents in music, but it also enabled us to be deeply immersed in the charm of music. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周学校组织了一场线上音乐会，要求考生按照要求为校学生会写一篇新闻报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非凡的： extraordinary→ remarkable 使快乐：entertain→ delight 无疑：undoubtedly→ without doubt 高度评价：think highly of→ speak highly of 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：The performers demonstrated music in a way that touched the depths of the audience’s soul, giving them a feeling of connection. 拓展句：The performers demonstrated music in a way that touched the depths of the audience’s soul, which gave them a feeling of connection. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week witnessed an extraordinary online concert organized by our school, in which the performers gave their best shot at entertaining the audience with one song after another.（运用了过去分词organized作后置定语，“介词in+which”引导的非限制性定语从句和动名词entertaining作宾语） 【高分句型2】The performances were undoubtedly of high quality, which made the concert almost no different from a live one. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 考点二、观点议论文 议论文要求学生要通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来确定某一观点正确与否，肯定或否定某种观点或主张。正反观点对比类议论文是从正反两个方面说明某个观点，进而表达自己的看法。 【思路点拨】 议论文(1)——正反观点型 一、文章结构 1．开头：提出问题； 2．主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由； 3．结尾：说明自己的观点。 二、段落框架 1．第一段 开门见山，提出主题(1－2句) (1)We had a heated discussion about/on... (2)Different people hold different opinions. (3)Opinions are divided... (4)People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards... (5)People have different opinions on this problem. (6)People take different views on this question. 2．第二段 表达不同观点 (1)．..of them hold the opinion that... (2)．..of them are in favor of the idea that... (3)People who are for/against the idea think that... (4)Some people believe that...Others argue that... (5)However，...of them hold a different view./...of them hold the opposite opinion. (6)However，each coin has two sides. (7)Different from those...，people think... (8)On the other hand，people object that... 3．第三段 说明自己的观点 (1)As far as I am concerned... (2)In my opinion... (3)It’s my opinion that... (4)In a word，only through...can we have a bright future. 议论文(2)——利弊对比型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。 1．说明事物现状； 2．事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)； 3．你对现状(或前景)的看法。 议论文(3)——解决问题型 一、段落框架 第一段：引出现象，并指出这种现象的后果 常用句型： (1) Recently the rise in problem of/phenomenon of...has caused/aroused/captured public/popular/wide/worldwide concern. (2) Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus/has been brought into public attention. (3)Nowadays，there is a growing concern about the problem/phenomenon that... (4)Nowadays，an increasing number of people come to realize/be aware of the importance of... (5)Nowadays，more and more people are concerned about the problem of... 第二段：提出解决的办法 常用句型： (1) We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing，___________________________________  (解决方法一)．For another， ________________________   (解决方法二)．Finally，________________________ (解决方法三)． (2)It is essential that proper action/effective measures should be taken to reverse this situation/stop the trend. (3)It is hoped/suggested that considerable/great efforts should be made to... (4)There is no easy/immediate solution/approach to the issue of...but...might be beneficial/helpful. 第三段：总结这样做的好处 常用句型：Only in this way can we... 【万能句式】 1）开头句： It goes without saying that...不言而喻 It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地说 As the proverb says,...正如谚语所说 It has to be noticed that... It's generally recognised that...人们普遍认为 It's likely that...很可能 It's hardly ... that ... ...并不... It's hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸张地说 2）衔接句： A case in point is ...一个典型的例子是... As is often the case,...情况经常是... As stated in the previous paragraph,... 如前段所述，... But the problem is not so simple. Therefore, we should take more details into consideration. But it's pity that... In spite of the fact that... Further, we hold the opinion that...此外，我们认为... However, the difficulty lies in... What calls for special attention is that... Similarly, we should pay attention to this from the very beginning. 3）引出观点句： There are several reasons for ..., but in general, they come down to three major ones. There are many factors that may account for ..., but the following are the most typical ones. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. The reasons are as follows. 4）结尾句： I will conclude by saying that...最后我要说 I can reach a conclusion that... Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...我们有理由相信 All things considered, it may be safely said that...可以有把握地说 Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisible for us to do ...更可取的是 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that... The figures/statistics lead us to the conclusion that... It can be concluded from the discussion that... From my point of view, it would be better if... To a certain/some extent, ... 5）灵活句式： sb. cannot emphasize the importance if ... too much There is no need for sb. to do sth. On no account can we do sth. What will happen to sb. if ...? For the past+一段时间，sb. have (done sth./been doing sth.) It pays to do sth. 做...是值得的 sth. is closely related to ... ...与...息息相关 do one's utmost to do= spare no effort to do sth. have a great influence on sb. Nothing can prevent us from doing Upon doing sth, ... 一...就... Hardly had sb. done sth. when sb. did No sooner had sb. done sth. than sb. did Only then could...直到那时 Nothing is more ... than to do sth. There is no denying that... There is no doubt that... It is universally acknowledged that... As is known to us,... It is no wonder that ... No wonder that... So +adj. be sb./sth. that ... 如此...以至于... adj. as sb./sth. be,... 虽然...但是... The+比较级, the +比较级 It's time +主语+动词过去式 It's time for sth. It's time for sb. to do sth. 【写作模板】 模板一 不同观点列举型（选择型） There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. 模板二 利弊型议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___. 模板三 答辩型议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____. Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____. 模板四 谚语警句型议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____. With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job. （24-25高三上·江苏南通·开学考试）现在人工智能越来越影响我们日常生活中的方方面面。请围绕这一话题写一篇文章。 应包含以下要点： 1. 人工智能带来的便利，例如在交通、家电和通信方面。 2. 它可能引发的潜在问题或挑战，如工作岗位被取代和隐私担忧。 3. 您对于如何充分利用人工智能并避免其负面影响的观点。 4. 80词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                           The Influence of Artificial Intelligence on Our Daily Life Artificial intelligence has greatly impacted our lives. It offers conveniences in transportation, making it more efficient. In home appliances, it simplifies our tasks. In communication, it enhances connections. However, it also brings problems. Jobs may be replaced, and privacy could be at risk. To make the best of it, we should develop it with regulations to avoid negative effects and train people for new jobs. 【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求考生围绕人工智能越来越影响我们日常生活中的方方面面这一话题写一篇文章。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 影响：impact→have an impact/influence/effect on 提供：offer→provide 简化：simplify→make…simple/easy 加强：enhance→strengthen/improve 2.句式拓展： 同义句替换 原句：However, it also brings problems. 拓展句：Despite its all advantages, it also brings problems. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It offers conveniences in transportation, making it more efficient.(运用了现在分词作状语。) 【高分句型2】To make the best of it, we should develop it with regulations to avoid negative effects and train people for new jobs.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语。) （最新模拟试题演练） Writing 1 （24-25高三上·河南焦作·开学考试）假定你是李华，你加入了一个名为“Volunteer Community”的国际志愿者组织，上周日你和组员完成了一次志愿活动，你受邀为此次活动写一篇报道。内容包括： 1. 前往的地方； 2. 完成的活动； 3. 你的感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer activity with the “Volunteer Community” organization. We went to a local orphanage where there were many children waiting for our company to spend time with them. Our activities included playing games, reading stories, and helping with their homework. The children, who were longing for care and attention, were very happy and excited to see us. I felt a deep sense of fulfillment and joy, knowing that our efforts brought smiles to their faces. This experience has strengthened my resolve to continue participating in volunteer work and making a positive impact on the community. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就上周在名为“Volunteer Community”的国际志愿者组织完成的志愿活动写一篇报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参与：participated in →took part in 包括：included→contained 兴奋：excited→thrilled 积极的：positive→optimistic 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Our activities included playing games, reading stories, and helping with their homework. 同义句：Playing games, reading stories and helping with their homework were part of our activities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We went to a local orphanage where there were many children waiting for our company to spend time with them. (运用了where引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I felt a deep sense of fulfillment and joy, knowing that our efforts brought smiles to their faces. (运用了现在分词作状语) Writing 2 （24-25高三上·黑龙江·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校举办的为期一个月的羽毛球赛刚刚落下帷幕。请你以“A Campus Badminton Match”为题给校英文报Campus Life 写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动准备及过程； 3. 活动反响。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Campus Badminton Match _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 A Campus Badminton Match To enrich students’ campus life and enable us to develop in an all-round way, our school held a badminton match last month. After class, the campus was alive with students practicing badminton skills excitedly in pairs. Some were devoted to serving the ball while others tried smashes and other high-quality returns. After 4 weeks of competitions in singles, doubles and mixed doubles, 5 gold medals were claimed. To our delight, most of the students were involved in this “campus badminton” activity, which not only raises our interest in ball games, but also builds up our bodies and characters. According to the survey, many students say that the passion for badminton has turned into an inner motive to achieve academic success. 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你校举办的为期一个月的羽毛球赛刚刚落下帷幕，要求考生以“A Campus Badminton Match”为题给校英文报Campus Life 写一篇报道。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 练习：practice→exercise 高兴：delight→pleasure 活动：activity→event 提高：raise→increase 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To enrich students’ campus life and enable us to develop in an all-round way, our school held a badminton match last month. 拓展句：Our school held a badminton match last month, which was aimed at enriching students’ campus life and enabling us to develop in an all-round way. 【点睛】[高分句型1]To our delight, most of the students were involved in this “campus badminton” activity, which not only raises our interest in ball games, but also builds up our bodies and characters.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]According to the survey, many students say that the passion for badminton has turned into an inner motive to achieve academic success.(that引导的宾语从句) Writing 3 （24-25高三上·湖南·开学考试）上周末，你参加了学校文化艺术节的“Amazing Heritage Sites(神奇的文化遗产)”的主题活动。请你写一篇报道投稿到学校英文报，内容包括： 1.活动过程； 2.收获和感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Exploring Amazing Heritage Sites ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                        Exploring Amazing Heritage Sites Aiming to explore and appreciate cultural treasures globally, our school club held an event themed “Amazing Heritage Sites”. We began with a presentation on UNESCO World Heritage Sites, emphasizing their significance in preserving our shared history. Interactive discussions followed, where participants shared insights about their favorite heritage sites and their cultural importance. A highlight of the event was a virtual tour of Dunhuang Caves, guided by a knowledgeable speaker. Through vivid images and descriptions, we immersed ourselves in the history of this ancient wonder. This experience was truly enriching, broadening my understanding of diverse cultural landscapes worldwide and reinforcing the importance of preserving them for future generations. In conclusion, the “Amazing Heritage Sites” event deepened my appreciation for our global heritage. I look forward to more enlightening experiences organized by our school club. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇学校文化艺术节“Amazing Heritage Sites(神奇的文化遗产)”的主题活动报道。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 欣赏：appreciate→enjoy 举办：hold→throw 主题是：themed→with the theme 观点：insight→opinion 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We began with a presentation on UNESCO World Heritage Sites, emphasizing their significance in preserving our shared history. 拓展句：We began with a presentation on UNESCO World Heritage Sites, which emphasized their significance in preserving our shared history. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Interactive discussions followed, where participants shared insights about their favorite heritage sites and their cultural importance.（运用了where引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】This experience was truly enriching, broadening my understanding of diverse cultural landscapes worldwide and reinforcing the importance of preserving them for future generations.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） Writing 4 （24-25高三上·广东·开学考试）假定你是校英文报的记者李华，上周五你校学生会在操场举办了一场跳蚤市场（a flea market）活动。请你为此写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的和过程； 2. 活动反响和意义。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Flea market ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Flea Market Last Friday, the Students’ Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground, aiming to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs. The event featured students selling various items, from books to handmade crafts, creating a lively marketplace atmosphere. The flea market gained enthusiastic participation from both sellers and buyers. Many students took the opportunity to clear their possessions while earning some extra income. Buyers found unique treasures and eco-friendly alternatives to new products, contributing to a greener lifestyle among students. Overall, the event was a success, which not only provided a platform for students to exchange goods but also promoted a sense of environmental awareness. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，介绍上周五学校学生会在操场举办的跳蚤市场活动的相关情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 鼓励：encourage→ inspire 各种各样的：various→ a variety of 机会：opportunity→ chance 促进： promote→ facilitate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last Friday, the Students’ Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground, aiming to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs. 拓展句：Last Friday, the Students’ Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground, which aimed to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Friday, the Students’ Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground, aiming to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs.（运用了现在分词aiming作状语） 【高分句型2】Overall, the event was a success, which not only provided a platform for students to exchange goods but also promoted a sense of environmental awareness.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Writing 5 （2024·四川成都·模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周六你们全班参观了市博物馆。请你以“A visit to the city museum”为题，为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1. 活动过程； 2. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： A visit to the city museum Last Saturday, all the students in our class paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey. Here are the relevant details. As soon as we arrived, with the guidance of the museum staff, we walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest. And then, we were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where we practiced some traditional crafts. This absorbing experience was highly spoken of by every student, who gained a deeper insight into the magnificent Chinese culture and consequently took more pride in our time-honored civilization. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周六你们全班参观了市博物馆。要求考生以“A visit to the city museum”为题，为校英文报写一篇新闻报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 有意义的：rewarding→meaningful 欣赏：appreciate → admire 浓厚的兴趣：keen interest→deep interest 结果：consequently→ as a result 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Here are the relevant details. 拓展句：Here are the relevant details I am eager to share. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As soon as we arrived, with the guidance of the museum staff, we walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest. （运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句以及现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】This absorbing experience was highly spoken of by every student, who gained a deeper insight into the magnificent Chinese culture and consequently took more pride in our time-honored civilization.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） Writing 6 （2024·浙江·模拟预测）假定你是校学生会主席李华。上周末学生会组织了一次户外拓展活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的目的；2.活动的过程和意义。 注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An Unforgettable Outdoor Team-building Activity _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】An Unforgettable Outdoor Team-building Activity Last weekend, our student union organized an outdoor team-building activity. The aim of this activity was to help us build team spirit and develop our communication skills. During the activity, we participated in a series of challenging games and tasks, which required us to work closely with each other. Through these activities, we not only had a lot of fun but also learned how to cooperate and support each other. This activity was really meaningful and unforgettable, as it allowed us to build closer relationships with our classmates and develop important life skills. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的报道。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，报道上周末学生会组织的一次户外拓展活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 培养：develop→ cultivate 目的：aim→ purpose 参加：participate in→ take part in 确实：really→ actually 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last weekend, our student union organized an outdoor team-building activity. The aim of this activity was to help us build team spirit and develop our communication skills. 拓展句：Last weekend, our student union organized an outdoor team-building activity, the aim of which was to help us build team spirit and develop our communication skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】During the activity, we participated in a series of challenging games and tasks, which required us to work closely with each other.（运用了which引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】This activity was really meaningful and unforgettable, as it allowed us to build closer relationships with our classmates and develop important life skills.（运用了as引导的状语从句） Writing 7 （24-25高三上·安徽·开学考试）假如你是李华，你班上周就“学生是否有必要购买品牌服饰”的话题展开了激烈的讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论结果并发表个人观点。 1. 支持的观点； 2. 反对的观点； 3. 你的观点。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 首句已给出，但不计入总词数； 3. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Last week, our class held a heated discussion on whether students should buy branded clothing. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Last week, our class held a heated discussion on whether students should buy branded clothing. The debate was intense with strong arguments from both sides. On one hand, some students believe that branded clothing is a symbol of social status and can boost their confidence. They argue that wearing popular and expensive brands can help them get more respect from their peers. On the other hand, there are those who oppose the idea of buying branded clothing. They argue that it’s a waste of money and that students can look just as good in cheaper alternatives.   As for me, it’s not necessary to spend a lot of money on a brand to look good. As long as we choose clothes that fit well and match our personal style, we can still feel confident and comfortable. 【导语】本书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就“学生是否有必要购买品牌服饰”的话题展开讨论并陈述自己的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 强有力的：strong→powerful 相信：believe→be convinced 增强：boost→improve 就我而言：as for me→as far as I’m concerned 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As for me, it’s not necessary to spend a lot of money on a brand to look good. 拓展句：As for me, it’s not necessary that we spend a lot of money on a brand to look good. 【点睛】【高分句型1】They argue that wearing popular and expensive brands can help them get more respect from their peers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】On the other hand, there are those who oppose the idea of buying branded clothing.（运用了who引导的定语从句） Writing 8 （2024·四川成都·模拟预测）目前越来越多的人使用移动支付(mobile payment)，移动支付改变了人们的生活。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： 1. 移动支付的优缺点； 2. 你的看法。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：微信 WeChat   支付宝 Alipay  二维码 QR code ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   Nowadays, the mobile phone is becoming increasingly popular, with most of us accustomed to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy - books, clothes, and electronic devices, to name a few. However, like any technological innovation, it comes with both advantages and disadvantages.    One of the most significant benefits of mobile payments is convenience. With just a few taps on your smartphone, you can complete transactions anytime, anywhere. Besides, mobile payments are lightning-fast compared to traditional payment methods. You can pay for your purchases swiftly, reducing waiting times at checkout counters. What’s more, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. On the contrary, some people hold a negative attitude toward it, arguing that phones can be stolen or hacked easily, which will make our personal information unsafe.    Personally, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. It is actually highly secure as payment platforms are utilizing identification methods to safeguard users’ financial information. Therefore, under proper monitor, mobile payment would be more popular in the years to come. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于移动支付优缺点的短文并发表个人的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 与……相比：compared to→compared with 极其；非常：highly→extremely 因此：therefore→hence 重要的：significant→remarkable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：One of the most significant benefits of mobile payments is convenience. 拓展句：As we all know, one of the most significant benefits of mobile payments is convenience. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On the contrary, some people hold a negative attitude toward it, arguing that phones can be stolen or hacked easily, which will make our personal information unsafe.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.(运用了部分倒装结构) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$