专题10 英语作文（精选名校试卷12题）【考题猜想】-2024-2025学年高二英语上学期期中考点大串讲（上海）

2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考点大串讲（上海） 专题10 英语作文精选12题 （解析版） 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below. 【来源】上海市曹杨二中2023-2024学年高二上学期期中试卷英语试题 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，最近你校计划选出一个学生社团（student club）并对其提供年度资金帮助，正在全校范围内征求意见。两个备选社团分别为“残疾儿童帮助社(Activities for Disabled Children Club)”和“流浪动物关爱社(Stray Animals Care Club)”。作为学校的一员，你决定写出自己的想法和建议，内容须包括： 1) 明确你的选择； 2) 有逻辑地阐述你做出该选择的几点理由并辅以支撑。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市建平中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷 假如你是明启中学的高二学生王磊，学校计划在期中考试之后组织学生秋游，有两个目的地可以选择：上海博物馆或世纪公园。学校委托学生会就秋游的目的地选择征询全年级学生的意见，请你写一封信，表达自己的想法，你的信中应包括： 1．你的选择； 2．你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宝山行知中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题 名启高中由于在学校所属社区内开展丰富的志愿者活动而广受称赞。假设你是该校小记者王磊，请撰文宣传介绍你们学校的志愿者团体。具体内容包括： 1.学生做志愿者的意义(可从自身成长或社会需要层面阐述) 2.详细介绍一个志愿者项目 3.总结学生在志愿者活动中的收获 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市徐汇中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生王磊。你校拟开设上海话选修课 (Optional Course of Shanghai Dialect)，并在校园网上公布了该消息，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给负责的李老师，内容包括： 1. 你是否赞成开设此课程； 2. 你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海外国语大学附属大境中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试英语试卷 近期，某社区正在开展“让家园更美好”的活动。希望大家献言献计，为社区发展出谋划策。请你提出一个社区中存在的问题或需要改进的方面，并说出你的建议和理由。 内容包括：1. 存在的问题和不足；2. 你的建议和理由 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese 【来源】上海市松江二中2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试英语试卷 假设你是李红，你的学校即将迎来100 周年的校庆，校长就如何举行校庆活动向在校学生广泛征求建议。请你用李红的名义给校长写一封信，就校庆活动提出你的建议，并陈述理由。信的内容需包括： 1. 校庆的形式。内容和参加对象 2. 你的理由 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市大同中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题 假如你是明启中学高中学生李明，最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇关于青少年心理状态的文章。文中提出与20年前的青少年相比，如今的青少年更加不快乐。你对此话题很感兴趣，请写一封信给该报社的编辑，表达你的想法，内容须包括： 1. 导致该现象的原因 2. 相应的建议 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市2022-2023学年嘉定一中高二上学期英语期中练习卷 你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼。请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿。文章需包括： 1. 你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼并简要介绍； 2. 你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9． Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 【来源】上海市七宝中学2021-2022学年高二上期中英语试题 .每一个人都会被自己阅读过的一本书或看过的一部电影所感动并难以忘怀，请以A Most Influential Book (Or Film)为题写一篇短文。 1. 描述你的书或电影的主要内容； 2. 其令你感到或难忘的原因； 3. 谈谈它对你产生的影响或带来的思考。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】2021-2022学年上学期上海市格致中学期中英语试题 随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：Wechat，Taobao，E-dictionary，Glory of Kings (mobile game)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市南洋模范中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中试卷英语试题 假设你是明启中学的王华，你校学生会将举办主题为“Looking for the Chinese Spirit”的英语演讲比赛， 请你作为参赛者写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 描述生活中最感动你的一个人或一件事，并说明其体现了怎样的中国精神； 2. 你获得的启发及感受 （注意：请勿出现真实的姓名与学校） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市育才中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中试卷英语试题 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容： ·你是否会参加比赛 ·你做出该决定的具体理由 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考点大串讲（上海） 专题10 英语作文精选12题 （解析版） 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below. 【来源】上海市曹杨二中2023-2024学年高二上学期期中试卷英语试题 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，最近你校计划选出一个学生社团（student club）并对其提供年度资金帮助，正在全校范围内征求意见。两个备选社团分别为“残疾儿童帮助社(Activities for Disabled Children Club)”和“流浪动物关爱社(Stray Animals Care Club)”。作为学校的一员，你决定写出自己的想法和建议，内容须包括： 1) 明确你的选择； 2) 有逻辑地阐述你做出该选择的几点理由并辅以支撑。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, Hearing that you are calling on students to give opinions on choosing a student association, I am so interested in it and decide to write a letter to suggest selecting the Activities for Disabled Children Club. In my opinion, with your fund, the Activities for Disabled Children Club can do some important things to help disabled children, such as regular medical examinations, which can improve the rehabilitation of disabled children and promote the all-round development of disabled children. With the fund, the club can organize some public activities, so that disabled children and normal children can have some social activities together, which can help disabled children better integrate into society, reduce their psychological pressure and let them feel the care of society. I think it significant to set up the Activities for Disabled Children Club. I hope you can take my suggestion seriously. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给学校某负责人写封信，写出自己关于学校要选的社团的想法和建议，需明确说明自己的选择，并有逻辑地阐述做出该选择的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：opinion→viewpoint 重要的：important→significant 帮助：help→assist 压力：pressure→stress 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I think it significant to set up the Activities for Disabled Children Club. 拓展句：I hold the belief that it is significant to set up the Activities for Disabled Children Club. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are calling on students to give opinions on choosing a student association, I am so interested in it and decide to write a letter to suggest selecting the Activities for Disabled Children Club. (运用了现在分词短语Hearing…作状语、that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] In my opinion, with your fund, the Activities for Disabled Children Club can do some important things to help disabled children, such as regular medical examinations, which can improve the rehabilitation of disabled children and promote the all-round development of disabled children. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市建平中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷 假如你是明启中学的高二学生王磊，学校计划在期中考试之后组织学生秋游，有两个目的地可以选择：上海博物馆或世纪公园。学校委托学生会就秋游的目的地选择征询全年级学生的意见，请你写一封信，表达自己的想法，你的信中应包括： 1．你的选择； 2．你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Student Council, I am writing to express my opinion on the upcoming school trip after the mid-term exams. I believe that our destination should be the Shanghai Museum. Firstly, as a history buff, I am excited about the opportunity to explore the rich cultural heritage of China at the museum. The exhibits and artifacts on display are not only informative but also visually stunning. It would be a great chance for us to learn more about our country’s past and present. Secondly, visiting the museum would be a more educational experience compared to going to the Century Park. While the park is undoubtedly beautiful, it does not offer much in terms of learning opportunities. On the other hand, the museum provides a wealth of knowledge and insights into Chinese culture and history. In conclusion, I strongly recommend that we visit the Shanghai Museum for our school trip. Thank you for considering my opinion. Sincerely, Wang Lei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是明启中学的高二学生王磊，学校计划在期中考试之后组织学生秋游，有两个目的地可以选择：上海博物馆或世纪公园。学校委托学生会就秋游的目的地选择征询全年级学生的意见，请你写一封信，表达自己的想法，你的信中应包括：1.你的选择；2.你的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：recommend→advise 展示：display→show 提供：offer→supply 虽然：while =although 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for considering my opinion. 拓展句：I would appreciate it if you consider my opinion. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe that our destination should be the Shanghai Museum.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Secondly, visiting the museum would be a more educational experience compared to going to the Century Park. (运用了动名词作主语和宾语) 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宝山行知中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题 名启高中由于在学校所属社区内开展丰富的志愿者活动而广受称赞。假设你是该校小记者王磊，请撰文宣传介绍你们学校的志愿者团体。具体内容包括： 1.学生做志愿者的意义(可从自身成长或社会需要层面阐述) 2.详细介绍一个志愿者项目 3.总结学生在志愿者活动中的收获 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As one of the junior journalists of Mingqi High School, I am delighted to introduce our school's volunteer group to you. Firstly, volunteer service can enable students to persevere, help others and develop comprehensive qualities such as confidence and responsibility. Secondly, I would like to introduce a volunteer project called “Enlightening the Soul”. This project aims to help children from disadvantaged families by providing them with support and companionship, so that they can have happiness, confidence and future hope. Overall, students have gained a lot from volunteering activities. Volunteer service not only makes us pay attention to community problems and social needs, but also helps us to better understand ourselves, exercise ourselves, and expand our social network. All of these will play an important role in our future growth and development. Let us become volunteers serving the community with soul! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。名启高中由于在学校所属社区内开展丰富的志愿者活动而广受称赞。假设你是该校小记者王磊，题目要求考生撰文宣传介绍你们学校的志愿者团体。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：firstly→ first of all 第二点：secondly → what’s more 快乐：happiness→delight 提供：provide→ offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, volunteer service can enable students to persevere, help others and develop comprehensive qualities such as confidence and responsibility. 拓展句：Firstly, volunteer service can enable students to persevere, which can also help others and develop comprehensive qualities such as confidence and responsibility. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This project aims to help children from disadvantaged families by providing them with support and companionship, so that they can have happiness, confidence and future hope.（运用了so that引导的状语从句） 【高分句型2】Volunteer service not only makes us pay attention to community problems and social needs, but also helps us to better understand ourselves, exercise ourselves, and expand our social network.（运用了not only…but also…的固定结构） 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市徐汇中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生王磊。你校拟开设上海话选修课 (Optional Course of Shanghai Dialect)，并在校园网上公布了该消息，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给负责的李老师，内容包括： 1. 你是否赞成开设此课程； 2. 你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Teacher, How are things going? What a surprise it is to hear that you’ll develop an optional course next term! Therefore, our school is seeking suggestions from us students. As far as I’m concerned, most classmates really expect you to offer Optional Course of Shanghai Dialect. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, it enables us to know local culture well, through which we can have a better understanding of our roots. Secondly, learning Shanghai dialect provides us ready access to rich, fresh and practical language, which should further arouse our sense of belonging. In addition, we will learn what we can’t learn from the textbooks such as different cultures and customs. In this way, it will help to broaden our horizon and open our views. All in all, we will certainly benefit from this course greatly. We would be very grateful if our humble suggestion received your favorable consideration. Yours, WangLei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件给负责的李老师就你校拟开设上海话选修课发表意见。其内容包括：你是否赞成开设此课程以及你的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 惊讶：surprise →astonishment 因此：therefore→hence 期待：expect →anticipate 能：can→be able to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： All in all, we will certainly benefit from this course greatly. 拓展句：All in all, there is no doubt that we will certainly benefit from this course greatly. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 What a surprise it is to hear that you’ll develop an optional course next term!（运用了what引导的感叹句和that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 Secondly, learning Shanghai dialect provides us ready access to rich, fresh and practical language, which should further arouse our sense of belonging. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海外国语大学附属大境中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试英语试卷 近期，某社区正在开展“让家园更美好”的活动。希望大家献言献计，为社区发展出谋划策。请你提出一个社区中存在的问题或需要改进的方面，并说出你的建议和理由。 内容包括：1. 存在的问题和不足；2. 你的建议和理由 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I’m glad that the activity of “Making Our Home Better” is being carried out and suggestions for community development are called for. As we can see, the last few years has witnessed great improvement in the neighborhood.   However, there still exist some problems. The crucial one is that there is a shortage of places for cultural activities in the community, which fails to meet the needs of residents’ leisure and entertainment. The lack of entertainment facilities leads to dull spare time life of residents. Therefore, it is hoped that the government will strengthen the construction of urban cultural facilities, ensuring enough funds for infrastructure. By doing so, not only can residents enrich their daily life but also get a sense of belonging.   I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. Hopefully, our community will be better and better. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为社区发展出谋划策，提出一个社区中存在的问题或需要改进的方面，并说出建议和理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 需要：call for→need 见证：witness→ see 缺乏：shortage→lack 导致：lead to→ result in 2.句式拓展 倒装句变陈述句 原句：By doing so, not only can residents enrich their daily life but also get a sense of belonging. 拓展句：By doing so, residents can not only enrich their daily life but also get a sense of belonging. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The crucial one is that there is a shortage of places for cultural activities in the community, which fails to meet the needs of residents’ leisure and entertainment.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。） 【高分句型2】Therefore, it is hoped that the government will strengthen the construction of urban cultural facilities, ensuring enough funds for infrastructure.（运用了that引导主语从句和现在分词作状语。） 【高分句型3】By doing so, not only can residents enrich their daily life but also get a sense of belonging.（运用了not only...but also…和倒装句型） 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese 【来源】上海市松江二中2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试英语试卷 假设你是李红，你的学校即将迎来100 周年的校庆，校长就如何举行校庆活动向在校学生广泛征求建议。请你用李红的名义给校长写一封信，就校庆活动提出你的建议，并陈述理由。信的内容需包括： 1. 校庆的形式。内容和参加对象 2. 你的理由 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Principal， I am a student of the school whose name is Li Hong. Knowing that our school is celebrating its 100th anniversary soon, you have asked a wide range of students for advice on how to hold the celebration. I would like to make two suggestions to you for your adoption. First, I think our school should invite the well-known alumni to attend the 100th anniversary of our school to witness the 100th birthday of our school. Secondly, I think our school should make the same short sleeves for the 100th anniversary of our school for all the staff and students to celebrate this together.   Finally, the 100th anniversary of our school is held, which is something worth looking forward to. Yours, Li Hong 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给用李红的名义给校长写一封信，就校庆活动提出你的建议，并陈述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 庆祝：celebrate→observe 全体员工：staff → what’s more 出名的： well-known →famous 采纳：adoption→ acception 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I would like to make two suggestions to you for your adoption. 拓展句：I want to give you two suggestions, which I hope to adopt. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I am a student of the school whose name is Li Hong.（运用了whose引导的限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]Finally, the 100th anniversary of our school is held, which is something worth looking forward to.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市大同中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题 假如你是明启中学高中学生李明，最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇关于青少年心理状态的文章。文中提出与20年前的青少年相比，如今的青少年更加不快乐。你对此话题很感兴趣，请写一封信给该报社的编辑，表达你的想法，内容须包括： 1. 导致该现象的原因 2. 相应的建议 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor, I am Li Ming, a student in Ming qi Middle School. Recently, I read an article about the mental state of teenagers which mentioned that compared to the teenagers 20 years ago, today’s teenagers are unhappier. I am writing to express my opinion about this phenomenon. Many people think today’s teenagers should be happier than before. However, that’s not the case. First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. It makes them feel lonely. Secondly, nowadays, teenagers suffer from too much pressure of study, which makes them easier to be depressed. Therefore, action must be taken to improve it. To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take many activities to form harmonious interpersonal relationship. Besides, parents also need to pay more attention to their children’s mental health. As we all know, good listening can always show respect, promote understanding and make things better. I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved. Yours sincerely , Li Ming 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某英语杂志的编辑写封信，表达你对青少年不开心这一现象的看法以及建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 鼓励：encourage→inspire/motivate 此外：besides → what’s more 采取措施：take action→ take measures 关注：pay attention to →focus on 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. It makes them feel lonely. 拓展句：First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others, which makes them feel lonely. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I read an article about the mental state of teenagers which mentioned that compared to the teenagers 20 years ago, today’s teenagers are unhappier.（运用了which引导的定语从句和非谓语动词作状语） 【高分句型2】I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.（运用了that引导宾语从句） 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市2022-2023学年嘉定一中高二上学期英语期中练习卷 你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼。请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿。文章需包括： 1. 你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼并简要介绍； 2. 你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Guided Writing Recently, with the phenomenon of chasing celebrities becoming more and more common in our class, we felt it a necessity to hold a class meeting to talk about this. Yesterday we had one. Everybody was involved in the discussion and it reached a heated point. Let’s take a good look at how students’ opinions vary from person to person. Some students are crazy about celebrities for the following reasons. To begin with, they gain quite a lot of fun by listening to music or watching movies. They regard it as a way to relax from a heavy study burden on them. Music or movies about celebrities can bring them extraordinary happiness. What’s more, some works of celebrities are educational. They really enjoy them a great deal. In addition, they are inclined to beauties. After all, they are adolescents who are fond of whatever or whoever looks nice. Nevertheless, others argue that it’s bad for the general development of the students who are in adolescence. As far as I’m concerned, I’m for the latter one. Adolescence is a time for them to develop their character, fall into the good habit and prepare for their future. They should spend too much time not chasing or imitating others, but learning knowledge so that they can have a bright future. Besides, some celebrities aren’t what they appear to be, which in some way, may lead fans of celebrities to the wrong direction of life. Taking the above into consideration, I do believe we’d better off chasing celebrities. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿。文章内容包括：在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼并简要介绍；应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参与：be involved in→take part in 认为：regard→consider 赞成：be for→be in favor of 喜欢：be fond of→like 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：What’s more, some works of celebrities are educational. They really enjoy them a great deal. 拓展句：What’s more, some works of celebrities are educational, which students really enjoy a great deal. 【点睛】[高分句型1]After all, they are adolescents who are fond of whatever or whoever looks nice.(运用了who引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]Besides, some celebrities aren’t what they appear to be, which in some way, may lead fans of celebrities to the wrong direction of life.(运用了what引导表语从句和which引导的非限定性定语从句) 9． Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 【来源】上海市七宝中学2021-2022学年高二上期中英语试题 .每一个人都会被自己阅读过的一本书或看过的一部电影所感动并难以忘怀，请以A Most Influential Book (Or Film)为题写一篇短文。 1. 描述你的书或电影的主要内容； 2. 其令你感到或难忘的原因； 3. 谈谈它对你产生的影响或带来的思考。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A Most Influential Film As a film enthusiast, I have watched a great many classic films, but the most impressive one is Shawshank Redemption, which tells the story of Andy, a wronged banker, who successfully escapes from prison after 20 years in prison with his perseverance. This film not only reveals the darkness of the American justice system, but also conveys us such a message that we couldn’t lose hope at any time. It is the uncrowned king—although it hasn’t won any Oscars, it is regarded as the best film in the world. This film has a great influence on me. Whenever I run into difficulties in my life and want to give up, I will think about Andy in the film, and then I regain hope and strength. Now I am a person full of hope and never give up. Undoubtedly, it is this film that makes me who I am now. 【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求介绍对自己有影响的一本书或一部电影。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求介绍对自己有影响的一本书或一部电影：每一个人都会被自己阅读过的一本书或看过的一部电影所感动并难以忘怀，请以A Most Influential Book (Or Film)为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 描述你的书或电影的主要内容；2. 其令你感到或难忘的原因；3. 谈谈它对你产生的影响或带来的思考。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； impressive（给人以深刻印象的），enthusiast（发烧友），perseverance（坚持不懈），reveal（揭露）， regain（重新获得）及undoubtedly（毫无疑问地）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有give up（放弃），at any time（在任何时候），run into（遇到），be full of（充满），be regarded as（被认为是）以及have a great influence on（对……有很大的影响），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“I have watched a great many classic films, but the most impressive one is Shawshank Redemption, which tells the story of Andy, a wronged banker, who successfully escapes from prison after 20 years in prison with his perseverance.”，同位语从句“This film not only reveals the darkness of the American justice system, but also conveys us such a message that we couldn’t lose hope at any time.”，状语从句“It is the uncrowned king—although it hasn’t won any Oscars, it is regarded as the best film in the world.”及“Whenever I run into difficulties in my life and want to give up, I will think about Andy in the film, and then I regain hope and strength.”，强调句型“Undoubtedly, it is this film that makes me who I am now.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】2021-2022学年上学期上海市格致中学期中英语试题 随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：Wechat，Taobao，E-dictionary，Glory of Kings (mobile game)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】With the development of mobile network, various kinds of mobile apps come into being, which brings great convenience to our life, but many students are addicted to the network, for example, some students are keen to use mobile Taobao for online shopping, while others are addicted to an online game called Glory of Kings. As for me, I think app should not only let us contact with others, but also serve as a learning tool, so I choose Wechat, which allows me  to communicate with my family and friends. In addition, I also think E-dictionary is a useful app, through which I can look up unfamiliar new words and increase my English vocabulary. In view of the reasons above, I think Wechat and E-dictionary are the two kinds of apps that do good to us students. 【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求选择两个APP并说明理由。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求选择两个APP并说明理由：随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：Wechat，Taobao，E-dictionary，Glory of Kings (mobile game)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； mobile network（移动网络），development（发展），convenience（便利），useful（有用的）， unfamiliar（不熟悉的）及various（不同的）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有come into being（应运而生），be addicted to（沉溺于），serve as（充当），contact with (与……联系)，look up（查阅），be keen to（热衷于）以及do good to(有利于），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“With the development of mobile network, various kinds of mobile apps come into being, which brings great convenience to our life”，“so I choose Wechat, which allows me  to communicate with my family and friends.”及“I also think E-dictionary is a useful app, through which I can look up unfamiliar new words and increase my English vocabulary.”，定语从句“In view of the reasons above, I think Wechat and E-dictionary are the two kinds of apps that do good to us students.”，宾语从句“As for me, I think app should not only let us contact with others, but also serve as a learning tool”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 11．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市南洋模范中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中试卷英语试题 假设你是明启中学的王华，你校学生会将举办主题为“Looking for the Chinese Spirit”的英语演讲比赛， 请你作为参赛者写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 描述生活中最感动你的一个人或一件事，并说明其体现了怎样的中国精神； 2. 你获得的启发及感受 （注意：请勿出现真实的姓名与学校） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today, the Chinese spirit is reflected in all aspects of life. A few days ago, the local news reported a real story that a young man donated bone marrow to a stranger. A few months ago, after completing a series of strict blood tests, he completed the collection of hematopoietic stem cells. A month later, he received the exciting news that his stem cells were successfully matched with those of an out-of-town patient who is in need of a bone marrow transplant, so he decided to donate hematopoietic stem cells without hesitation. Due to the long recovery process after the operation, he had to give up his current job. Speaking of his economic loss, he said that compared with saving a person's life, this loss is nothing. Till now, I still have been deeply moved by what this young man had done, as his deed embodies the Chinese spirit of selfless dedication. 【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇演讲稿。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇演讲稿：假设你是明启中学的王华，你校学生会将举办主题为“Looking for the Chinese Spirit”的英语演讲比赛， 请你作为参赛者写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 描述生活中最感动你的一个人或一件事，并说明其体现了怎样的中国精神；2. 你获得的启发及感受。时态应为一般过去时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； Chinese Spirit（中国精神），reflect（反映），embody（体现），move（感动）， donate（捐献）及selfless dedication（无私奉献）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be matched with（与……相匹配），speak of（谈到），compare with (与……相比)，in need of（需要），without hesitation（毫不犹豫）以及give up（放弃），而且还使用了同位语从句“A few days ago, the local news reported a real story that a young man donated bone marrow to a stranger.”，定语从句“A month later, he received the exciting news that his stem cells were successfully matched with those of an out-of-town patient who is in need of a bone marrow transplant, ”，宾语从句“Till now, I still have been deeply moved by what this young man had done, as his deed embodies the Chinese spirit of selfless dedication.”，原因状语从句“Due to the long recovery process after the operation, he had to give up his current job.”，非谓语动词“Speaking of his economic loss, he said that compared with saving a person's life, this loss is nothing.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 12．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市育才中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中试卷英语试题 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容： ·你是否会参加比赛 ·你做出该决定的具体理由 【答案】A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure. Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be  a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition. 【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。 【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容： ·你是否会参加比赛 ·你做出该决定的具体理由。 第二，人称以第一人称为主，兼用第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。 第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，说明你是否会参加比赛。第二段，你做出该决定的具体理由。第三段，总结自己的理由。 第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: enthusiasm, opportunity group dancing competition, calls on, take an active part in , enable me to study more efficiently, show my dancing skills, make some contributions。 第四步：确定较为高级的句子: while 引导的让步状语从句While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure. Which引导的非限制性定语从句First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently . 动名词作主语Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class。 第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Generally speaking, First， Besides。 第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。 【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: while 引导的让步状语从句While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure. Which引导的非限制性定语从句First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently . 动名词作主语Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class。 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$